Replies to reviews.helen031996ben and supergirl a great coupleReply: They do have a lot in common.
ppssppWhy not try a new pairing Wonder Woman x Ben and not Ben x Supergirl or Zattana. There's lot of fanfics like that who has that pairing if you try Wonder Woman x Ben the fanfic will gain more views, Followers and Favourites
Reply: I personally don't like pairing Wonder Woman with anyone because of the massive age gap that she has with just about anyone who tries to date her.
Sakra95Why does every Ben 10 and JL crossover use this exact time for their story? It makes them look like a ripoff
Reply: To be fair it's an excellent time to introduce Ben. The Justice League at the time only had 7 members meaning the rest of the heroes aren't organized enough to throw off the invasion which let's Ben Jump in and save the day while also giving him a good measure of trust with the rest of League.
GuestI'm loving the story and the way you are able to make the characters interact with each other. Alot of stories with this episode are more likely the same.The fights kinda end too quickly and I feel like we are forced to use our imagination to make them longer but I really love how you utilize Ben's transformations in this chapterIt's superbReply:
Thanks I'll try to make the fights longer but I've always had a problem with making my fights quick.
GuestOh great another rip off of The Incredible Muffin's Ben 10 Unlimited. You could've stared at any point in the DCAU timeline and you picked Starcrossed.
Reply: To be fair it's an excellent time to introduce Ben. The Justice League at the time only had 7 members meaning the rest of the heroes aren't organized enough to throw off the invasion which let's Ben Jump in and save the day while also giving him a good measure of
Wahid Alam
a bit disappointing that you're going the incredible muffin route, but it's still pretty unique from his story. hope you try to be more different than him in the future. don't be incredible muffin, be better than him.
Reply: I'll see what I can do.
Chapter 3: Laying down roots.
" You promised to answer any questions I asked after the invasion was over. It's time to keep your promise." Batman said bluntly.
" A promise is a promise, shoot."
" Why are you here." Batman narrowed his eyes at Ben's face making sure to study his facial expressions to help him separate the truth from any possible lies.
That was going to be a hard one to explain. " To be honest I'm not sure either a friend of mine told me the multiverse was in danger and that I needed to help stop it."
" Who is this friend of yours?"
" His name is Professor Paradox I've gone on a few adventures with him but he's never left me stranded in another timeline before." Ben admitted, Paradox was acting strangely even showing fear when he made his offer and Ben didn't want to think about anything terrifying enough to scare Paradox.
" He abandoned you!" Wonder Woman exclaimed.
Seeing Diana's anger Ben did his best to placate her anger and defend his friend. " He didn't do it for no reason according to him there's going to be a threat to the multiverse in a few years that I need to stop."
" Did he tell you what you need to do to stop this threat?" Superman asked.
" No, Paradox is a time traveler he only tells me so much to keep the timeline intact." Ben admitted he was starting to get worried Paradox implied that it would take years for him to get back home he also implied that by the time he could go back to his dimension he might not want to stay there anymore.
" Do you have somewhere safe to sleep in?" Surprisingly it was Batman who asked that question.
" Uh... no." Ben said hesitantly.
" Then you can stay with me while we find you a place to stay." Bruce offered.
" Thanks, I promise I'll try to find a place of my own as soon as possible so that I won't bother you so much." Ben promised causing Batman to nod.
" One more question and then we're done."
" Go ahead."
" Would you like to join the Justice League?"
Ben smirked. " I'm not sure how long I'm going to be stuck in this timeline but if you ever need my help then I'm all in."
(Metropolis city, Three months later)
It was a beautiful day the sun was shining the birds were singing and business was booming for Ben. It had been three months since Ben had moved into this new dimension and he had decided that since this timeline didn't have a Mr.Smoothies then he would simply make his own version one that sold Chilli fries as well as smoothies, when Ben had first started planning to build his own fast food restaurant he wanted to build it in Gotham City but Bruce had told him that Gotham was not a good place for young businesses to thrive in and instead suggested Metropolis a much more peaceful and prosperous city.
Using Brainstorm's IQ of one nonillion Ben had crafted a plan that would turn his restaurant into a fast food juggernaut in just a few short years. Heck Superman had been helping him by frequently coming to his restaurant and drinking smoothies, the extra publicity was really helping him grow his business.
As his shift was coming to an end Ben made sure that his employees knew what to do in his absence and with that he left to go back to his apartment a small but comfortable home with a cheap rent to his surprise Clark Kent was waiting for him inside his house casually sitting on his sofa.
" How did you get in here?" Ben knew Bruce was the type to just break into people's houses but he never thought Clark would just waltz into his house without permission.
" Sorry but I needed to talk to you about something important."
" What's wrong? Another supervillain that needs their butt kicked." Ben guessed, in the past three months Ben had been helping Superman keep the peace in Metropolis heck most criminals were too scared to commit crimes in broad daylight thanks to the two of them.
" No it's about your Omnitrix."
" What about it?"
" You said it scanned my DNA, meaning you can turn into a Kryptonian right?"
That? To be honest Ben had forgotten that he could transform into a Kryptonian it just never seemed like he had the opportunity, so far there hadn't been a fight where he thought he needed that type of strength.
" Well I came here today to help you get handle on those powers."
" Dude I've been doing this since I was ten I don't need anyone's help to figure out how my aliens work."
Ben's words seemed to upset Superman. " Ben, Ive been working my whole life to surpress my powers to make sure I never hurt anyone on accident, even when I'm fighting for my life I make sure not to use my full strength just so that I don't break someone. Being a Kryptonian is like living in a world made of cardboard and if you don't want to take somene's life whenever you decide to turn into one then I suggest you listen to me."
Geez was it really that bad? " Alright then, If it means that much to you."
" J'onn were ready." With the two heroes were teleported to the newly rebuilt Watchtower. Though it would be a few weeks before they expanded the ranks of the Justice League Bruce and J'onn were still searching for other super heroes to join the League.
" Hey J'onn." Ben greeted the martian.
" Hello Ben it is good to see you again I hope you've been adapting to our dimension well."
" Yeah, things have been going pretty well so far anyway Superman here wants me in the training room asap." Ben pointed his thumb at Superman who was standing right next to him.
" I see, then I wish you good fortune."
" How are the preparations going? Did you find any more recruits?" The Man of Steel inquired.
J'onn nodded. " Batman and I believe that if all our candidates accept their invitation the Justice League will have a little over 60 members in total."
That many? Back on his earth there weren't many super heroes around not unless you counted the plumbers but they were more like space cops rather than anything else.
"Good, we need to strengthen the Justice League as soon as possible if another invasion happens we need to be ready to stop it."
With that Superman led Ben to the training room outside of the training room Wonder Woman, Flash, and Green Lantern were watching from a window.
The inside of the training room was a completely empty room at least until Green Lantern started started to use the console in the observers room. Slowly the room started to change as hardlight holograms were being created until the inside of the room resembled a city, Metropolis to be precise.
" Alright Ben turn into a Kryptonian."
Ben activated the Omnitrix and quickly began scrolling through all his options until he landed on his desired transformation and in a flash of light became a Kryptonian version of Ben though for some reason he had a full beard.
" Solarstorm!" At first Ben felt great as if he could do anything but one moment later Ben started hearing things all the way from Planet Eartth sounds and smells from all over the planet started assaulting his senses, the young hero fell to his knees.
" Ahhh!" Ben was vaguely aware of Green Lantern asking if he was alright but it was hard to separate from all the other voices. Ben scrambled to turn back to his human form and quickly undid his transformation.
Ben was on the floor panting when Superman helped him get back on his feet. " You live like that?"
" You get used to it." Clark replied with a bitter smile.
" How do you make it stop? I mean I could hear voices all the way from Earth... in space! That doesn't even make sense."
" You don't. The only thing I can teach you is how to focus on the sounds closest to you."
" That's crazy."
" Are you ready to take this seriously?" Superman asked.
" Yeah."
(Amanda Waller's residence.)
An overweight woman by the name of Amanda waller was taking a shower in her house and as she reached for her shampoo bottle she felt someone hand it too her causing the Government agent to do a double take.
She quickly took out the gun she kept hidden in the tiles of the shower floor set aside the shower curtains and pointed her weapon at the Intruder.
" Good to see I have your full attention." The intruder said cheerfully completely unconcerned about the gun pointed at her face.
" Who are you!?" Waller demanded.
" You can call me Gretchen Goodness and I'm here to help you with your little Justice League problem."
End chapter.
Gonna change this story from a Justice League Unlimited Ben 10 crossover to a Ben 10 x Justice League crossover in general realized that I wanna use a composite DC universe rather than just the DCAU.
