Ok finally, a short ending. I am sooooo not gonna start from the beginning.
Just from the part where yu gi says that che can take the racelt and put ti
back on, and they can make Pegasus give his granpa's soul back. And she
says no its ok and stuff.
K well here it is:
"yugi...its all right...he wouldn't do it...if hs life depended...on it...I am really...gonna miss you all...you are the best...friends anyone...could have...and the best...cousin and...boyfriend...I hope....you'll never...forget me?...you wont...right?" hit seemed to be her biggest concern at the moment. "I couldn't forget you!" joey said, with tears welled up in his eyes. " you were family, you gave me the money that is gonna save Trinity's eyes, you had a good sense of humor too." "you were smart and great duelist." Said bakura. "yeah, and you would always make us laugh and life out spirits when we were down." Tea couldn't go on ,her voice was stuck in her throat. "you were so cool too. And so tough. Manly..I am just kidding! We couldn't do anything behind your back either, you'd always know." Tristan would've laughed if it was an appropriate time. "Lotus, you saved me..twice! You reunited me with my brother twice. You made me happy..more than twice!" "I will never forget you. Without you, I would've never gotten my grandpa back with out you. Even if I tried, I couldn't. your sacrifice will always be known to us and we'll always remember it and you." "lo-chan?" when Kaiba spoke, everyone left because they thought they might've wanted some alone time. "I am sorry. This is all my fault. If I hadn't brought you here, you never would have been in this state. You'd be at home waiting for me and totally safe. I want to say something before you...you...you know. I wanted to say- "
he was cut off, because just then Pegasus stormed into the room. "what is this nonsense I hear? Why are there people dying in here?please you'll get the floor.." he stopped when he saw WHO was dying. "LOTUS?!" he shoved Kaiba aside and it sort of made dominoes and they were all on top of each other (don't be sick-minded). "Lotus Blossom??whats wrong with you??why are you so pale?" they all stopped getting un-tangled because they wanted to hear what he was saying. They didn't quite believe it. "dad?...what are you...talking about?" "I..am so sorry! I didn't mean to leave you and your mother, its just this stupid milleniuem eye came with the desire for power. I ...I..am so stupid! Now you are here, you're gonna die, and it's all my fault. No Lotus Blossom, this time don't close your eyes. I wanna stay with you. I didn't mean it. if I could turn back time, I wuld go back, tell you how much I loved you, and your mother, and stay, stay to see your first bikeride, your first kiss, your first A, your first day of school, EVERYTHING!! I couldn't beat you in the duel. You had LOVE on your side. I understand now that is the most powerful thing in the world!!" "DAD!!! I don't wanna leave...you either...I finally got to...know who you...are and now that...you're here...and u care...then we could've...been a family again" "its my fault. All my fault!!what was I thinking?!" "no its not...it was destiny...its just the way...it is...fate did it." "oh what would I give if you could just breathe again?...I think I know..yes...i will!" "what are you...saying...daddy?" "I got it. here take this. But then after I'm gone, take it of and never put it on again." it was kind of sickening to see Pegasus take off his 'eye', then put it on his daughter, but as soon as he did. He was just as pale and sick as she had been. Byt the time she had gotten her stength. Pegasus was almost dead. "no dad!!!please we can save you! Its not too late, I'm all better see? That should save you!!! No dad!!!no I mean it! you can't leave me again!!I just found you!NOOOOO!!!" "I'm sorry...can u ever...forgive me?...tell your mother...everything....I still love her..." "before you go, I want you to know I love you too, and I forgive you!" "no matter what... you will always... be my Lotus Blossom...I love you." With his last breathe he kissed her hand, and his arm fell to the floor, and everything stopped. She couldn't belive it. she put the 'eye' in her pocket and they all went home. "by the waya kaiba. What were you gonna say before I 'expired'?" "huh?oh, I love you? And that.." "you'll always love me? That you'll never leave me?" "yup. That's exactly what I was going to say."he smiled. he kissed her for what seemed ages , and they all went onward to go back and rest. Lotus took one last look at the castle..one last look at the island. And then it all went away.
The end. Haha which is better? R&R. Laterz (tell your friends about this!!I think its an ok fic. For a beginner!)
"yugi...its all right...he wouldn't do it...if hs life depended...on it...I am really...gonna miss you all...you are the best...friends anyone...could have...and the best...cousin and...boyfriend...I hope....you'll never...forget me?...you wont...right?" hit seemed to be her biggest concern at the moment. "I couldn't forget you!" joey said, with tears welled up in his eyes. " you were family, you gave me the money that is gonna save Trinity's eyes, you had a good sense of humor too." "you were smart and great duelist." Said bakura. "yeah, and you would always make us laugh and life out spirits when we were down." Tea couldn't go on ,her voice was stuck in her throat. "you were so cool too. And so tough. Manly..I am just kidding! We couldn't do anything behind your back either, you'd always know." Tristan would've laughed if it was an appropriate time. "Lotus, you saved me..twice! You reunited me with my brother twice. You made me happy..more than twice!" "I will never forget you. Without you, I would've never gotten my grandpa back with out you. Even if I tried, I couldn't. your sacrifice will always be known to us and we'll always remember it and you." "lo-chan?" when Kaiba spoke, everyone left because they thought they might've wanted some alone time. "I am sorry. This is all my fault. If I hadn't brought you here, you never would have been in this state. You'd be at home waiting for me and totally safe. I want to say something before you...you...you know. I wanted to say- "
he was cut off, because just then Pegasus stormed into the room. "what is this nonsense I hear? Why are there people dying in here?please you'll get the floor.." he stopped when he saw WHO was dying. "LOTUS?!" he shoved Kaiba aside and it sort of made dominoes and they were all on top of each other (don't be sick-minded). "Lotus Blossom??whats wrong with you??why are you so pale?" they all stopped getting un-tangled because they wanted to hear what he was saying. They didn't quite believe it. "dad?...what are you...talking about?" "I..am so sorry! I didn't mean to leave you and your mother, its just this stupid milleniuem eye came with the desire for power. I ...I..am so stupid! Now you are here, you're gonna die, and it's all my fault. No Lotus Blossom, this time don't close your eyes. I wanna stay with you. I didn't mean it. if I could turn back time, I wuld go back, tell you how much I loved you, and your mother, and stay, stay to see your first bikeride, your first kiss, your first A, your first day of school, EVERYTHING!! I couldn't beat you in the duel. You had LOVE on your side. I understand now that is the most powerful thing in the world!!" "DAD!!! I don't wanna leave...you either...I finally got to...know who you...are and now that...you're here...and u care...then we could've...been a family again" "its my fault. All my fault!!what was I thinking?!" "no its not...it was destiny...its just the way...it is...fate did it." "oh what would I give if you could just breathe again?...I think I know..yes...i will!" "what are you...saying...daddy?" "I got it. here take this. But then after I'm gone, take it of and never put it on again." it was kind of sickening to see Pegasus take off his 'eye', then put it on his daughter, but as soon as he did. He was just as pale and sick as she had been. Byt the time she had gotten her stength. Pegasus was almost dead. "no dad!!!please we can save you! Its not too late, I'm all better see? That should save you!!! No dad!!!no I mean it! you can't leave me again!!I just found you!NOOOOO!!!" "I'm sorry...can u ever...forgive me?...tell your mother...everything....I still love her..." "before you go, I want you to know I love you too, and I forgive you!" "no matter what... you will always... be my Lotus Blossom...I love you." With his last breathe he kissed her hand, and his arm fell to the floor, and everything stopped. She couldn't belive it. she put the 'eye' in her pocket and they all went home. "by the waya kaiba. What were you gonna say before I 'expired'?" "huh?oh, I love you? And that.." "you'll always love me? That you'll never leave me?" "yup. That's exactly what I was going to say."he smiled. he kissed her for what seemed ages , and they all went onward to go back and rest. Lotus took one last look at the castle..one last look at the island. And then it all went away.
The end. Haha which is better? R&R. Laterz (tell your friends about this!!I think its an ok fic. For a beginner!)