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!!!Busted up worse den a piñata!!!

I gave up there was no way out! I tired busting threw the window but there were bars, I tried banging down the door but that only gave me a large bruise on my right shoulder, then after I couldn't take it anymore I started with my left, which only ended in the same painful consequences. I sighed in frustration an kicked the door.

"Stupid mother …" I mumble the rest with a few added fraises. Sliding down on to the floor I pulled my knees to my chest and rested a minute.

"You guys shoulda seen it. Der was dis kid wid a crutch and Pec's kicked it out from unda him den he fell to da floor like a helpless child, we was laughing at him den Crooks stepped in and started kickin da kid, it was great. He was busted up worse dan a piñata! Crooks told im ta tell Cowboy dat we'se got his Skank and if he ever wants ta see her again dey better stay outta da fight between da Bronx an Brooklyn!" A few cheers and hollers followed the kid's version of the story. I looked over to my right and saw a vent, I could hear the voices from downstairs I sat and listened as he went on. They beat up Crutchy! Those lousy BASTARDS! I'm gonna kill um, yea if ya ever get out a here that is! That annoying little voice reminded me.

"Hey Crooks." The kid yelled.

"Hey ya Ox! He voice was smooth as ice. I could almost see his golden eyes smiling.

"Come have a drink wit us."

"Naw I got some business to atten to…" He excused himself then I herd loud footsteps on the stairs the floorboards creakin beneath the heavy boots. He walked down the hall then stopped in front of the door I was sitting on. I moved to the corner and concealed my self in the shadows hoping I could get the advantage of surprise. He slowly turned the doorknob, as sweat beaded on my forehead. He walked in cautious as ever as he moved into the room. I waited a few seconds then leped from my corner and jumped on his back. I dug my nails in to his skin tearing at it like an animal.

"AHHH you little B****" He screamed at me. He fisted his hand in my hair and pulled me over his head onto the ground. Pain shot up my spine and my hand went to my scalp. Then it started he kicked me over and over again in the ribs the stomach and the back. He wouldn't stop it was relentless, what was probably only a few minuets seemed like hours of pain. Finally he stopped a few moments of piece or so I thought. He lifted me off the ground by my hair.

"You need ta be taught some respect!" He slapped me with the back of his hand, which he always thought was more demeaning cause I was a girl and wasn't worthy of a full on hit, he wanted to embarrass me. Again he hit me. I could feel the burning print on my face. Uncontrollable tears streamed down my face but I didn't make a sound, I wouldn't give him the satisfaction. Once he was finished he tossed me aside. I couldn't move anything, everything hurt I just laid on the hard ground and fell into a painful sleep filled with no dreams.