Great? Me?
Disclaimer: Yeah this whole thing is mine. (Sees dirty look from JKR) Okay, okay just Willow then. (Catches dirty look from JW). All right, all right just the plot is mine then. (Quickly looks around). Whew.
A/N: Hooray! It's Here! Chapter 4! I'm sorry; this is a short chapter. I'll post chapter five along with it. I have so many scenes and plots tumbling around in my head I need some time to sort them out. Thank you to all my reviewers (and flamers) the special part at the bottom is dedicated to you!
Ron stared in shock at the place where his cup used to be. Hermione stared at him, her eyes wide. Harry stared at the cup on the floor, which had ceased its rolling. Willow raised her hands before her, and began to clap. Soon the whole class was applauding for Ron. He began to grin madly, his face beet red. The bell to end class rang, and the students began to gather their things. (A/N do bells ring at Hogwarts? Couldn't remember that. Where's my beta reader??? WAHHH! Sorry. I'll continue now.) Ron was about to leave with Hermione and Harry when Willow held him back.
"Ron, could you hold on a second?" she asked him.
"Uh ,sure." he told her. "You guys go on without me!" he called to his friends.
"Listen, Ron, I really think you have some talent here. I don't think I've ever seen someone master telekinesis that quickly." Ron smiled. "I really think you could become great at this with a little more practice. I think you could really benefit with some private lessons." Wow, thought Ron. Great? Me? Finally I could be good at something! Won't Mom and Dad be proud? Suddenly, his face fell.
"Wait a minute...is this gonna cost a lot? I mean I don't have a lot of money..."
"Well," began Willow, "I thought we could start lessons during lunch hour. Don't worry about the money. I wasn't expecting you to pay me." Ron smiled again.
"Great!" he exclaimed brightly. "When can we start?"
"me"-I'm not going to grant your grammatically incorrect question a response. Oh silly me. There isn't a question mark! It's not a question after all!
Lady Norbert- Hey thanks to my first actual reviewer! Glad you like the story! More soon!
Mrs.Sakura Li- Yes Buffy Rules! Although, I am unhappy with the way this season is turning out.
~*Tinkerbell*~ -- Hmmm wand less magic in a HP book. Maybe. It would definitely add some defense against...oops shouldn't have let that slip.
:)-LOL you get your wish! More Willow coming up! Hooray!
davesmom-Three reviews?! Wow I feel so honored. I'm really glad you think Hermione is in character. I'm not really worried about her for the moment.
Adelaide--*sigh* I knew I'd get at least ONE flamer. Oh well. But what a wonderful flame that was! "That was bad." Oh yes that helps me soo much. Thank you for telling me exactly what was bad so I could fix it. (Yes, yes notice my dripping sarcasm). I, for one did not think it was a bad fic. Then again, having a bad or good fic is all in one's opinion. Everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion. It just does not help the author with these kinds of comments. See? The shortest review gets the longest response! My question back to you now is I suck what?
To everyone who didn't review but told me their opinion anyway (*cough* Yael and Katie*cough*) let me answer a few quick questions and comments.
Willow seems a bit OoC... Yes after reading this fic over and over again I have noticed that. At the present time it seems I have borrowed her name and magical abilities. Nothing else. I promise you her past (yes, Yael, and her sexual preferences) will appear later on in the fic. I think I'm going to change the rating to PG-13. Anyway as far as being out of character goes…did you notice how this season went? (Season 6). Willow was acting pretty out of character. I mean getting high off of magic and almost getting Dawny killed? This doesn't sound like the shy and quiet Willow we knew in Season 3 or 4. I figured since she got in trouble for using too much magic; why not go to a place where she could only use magic? Also, I figured traveling to a new continent and meeting all new people would change her attitude just a bit. Nobody knows about her past here, so she can act however she chooses. However, you might see the old Willow break through at some point. I don't know. Oh, and about her age. I wasn't really sure how old she was supposed to be. I didn't see her go back to college this season, but I don't think she's old enough to graduate either. I decided to make her 18 so she wouldn't seem too far out of Ron's reach.
You seem to have a few grammatical errors... Yes, I'm sorry grammar never was a strong subject for me. I type quickly and therefore make tons of mistakes. This is why I need a beta reader or an editor! Won't someone please be my beta reader? At the very least could you e-mail me any mistakes you find? Oh and indenting and paragraph spacing is not an error. I don't know how to indent or make the paragraphs stick together in HTML. If you do however, could you please tell me?
I appreciate all feedback. Flames, reviews, constructive criticism are all welcome (the flames make me laugh). Please e-mail me at hp_luver@hotmail.com.
I'm sorry that was a really boring chapter. I felt the need to write all of that though.
