Lily's Diary Chapter Five
Secrets Reviled
By: akaSailor Mars
Disclaimer: I do NOT own the characters in this story. The belong to the great
J.K Rowling! DO YOU HEAR ME?! THEY BELONG TO J.K. ROWLING!!!!!!
A/N: Hello Everyone! I'm sure you're itching to read this! Sorry it's took so long. I really am!
I've just had a REALLY bad case of writer's block and then I wanted to do these other
stories and METMA challenges and I lost track of time! Well I think this will be the
last chapter. Yep, yep! I want to apologize for putting a Thanksgiving feast in there, I just
needed another feast. We'll say Dumbledore wanted students to embrace the cultural
diversity of different wizards. On with the story! Oh, and this last chapter will be outside
the diary.
Lily had screamed at what she had seen. Tom Riddle was standing in the window
of the girl's dormitory. She sank back in horror as she quickly realized he was the one
behind the kidnappings.
She lept to her feet and ran down to the common room. James was asleep in
an armchair. She rushed to his side.
"James! James! Wake up! Please wake up!" Lily begged.
"Wha?" Lily had shaken him awake.
"Lily, what are you doing?" He asked groping the coffee table for his glasses.
He found them and put them on. He looked around and saw Tom Riddle exiting the girls
dormitory.
"Wha?! Who's that?!" James practically yelled. Lily grabbed his arm and
jerked him down to the floor.
"Shhh!" she hissed.
"It's Tom Riddle! He's the one behind the kidnappings I suspect. I think he's
trying to kidnap me!"
"Very good, Miss Evans," said a cold voice behind her. She whipped around
and looked up into the cold gray eyes of Tom Riddle. He had black hair and was wearing
a smirk on his face. (a/n Sounds like Draco kinda. Doesn't it? It's a Draco/Harry mix!
Ahhahaha! Not slash)
Lily froze. James sat up. He stared from Lily to Tom and back to Lily. He
was clearly confused. He opened his mouth to say something, but Tom cut him off.
"Yes, Potter. I am the one who took Peter. Now I've come for Lily. I guess
I'll have to take you, too. Don't worry. I would have gotten you sooner or later."
Then he turned to Lily. He was staring at her intently. It sent chills down her
spine.
"Lily, dear. I told you to forget the passage and notes and such. Tut, tut. You
should have listened, you silly girl. Now look at the mess you've gotten yourself and
your boyfriend into."
"He's not my..." Lily started but James cut her off.
"That's right. I'm her boyfriend and I'll put a stop to this!" James yelled. He
pulled Lily close and yanked his wand out of his pocket. He pointed it at Tom, who was
stunned at this act. He put his smirk back on and drew his wand. Lily had left hers in her
dormitory. She was so terrified that she passed out.
This distracted James. He shook her. Then he realized that she was
unconscious. Tom took this advantage.
"Stupify!" Tom yelled.
When James whipped around the spell barely missed him. It hid the armchair
and knocked it over. James quickly recovered from his shock.
"Patrificus Totalus!" James cried, but his hand was shaking and he missed.
Tom looked very surprised.
"That's it!" Tom gave out an exasperated cry. "I'm putting a stop to you now!
Avada Keda-"
He had nearly finished the spell when the door to the boys dorm opened.
Tom whipped around to see Sirius and Remus standing there rubbing their eyes.
"What's all the screaming for?" Sirius started. Then he saw Tom and James,
wands pointed at each other and Lily, unconscious on the floor next to James.
"Eep!" someone squeaked. They turned the other way and saw Sybill
Trelawney, a third year, standing in the doorway of the of the third year girl's dorm.
"I knew it! I knew it! One of us was going to be taken tonight! I saw it in
Divination! I'm a seer! I'm a seer!" she shrieked.
"Stupify! Stupify! Stupify! Stupify!" Tom cried. All four curses hit their targets.
All four victims fell to the floor. He first put a memory charm on James, whom was
closest. Then he walked across the room and put a charm on Sybill, and climbed the
stairs and quickly put another memory charm on Sirius and Remus.
He then bounded down the stairs and grabbed Lily. He was walking to the
portrait hole when he herd voices in the dormitories. He realized that the other
Gryffindor students had woken up. He laid Lily on the floor and quickly placed the
same memory charm on Lily that he had placed on James, Sirius, Remus, and Sybill. He
then hastily exited the portrait hole.
The students came out of their dorms to find Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, and
Sybill, all unconscious.
"They're dead!" squeaked a second year girl. "Oh, no! Gryffindor's been
attacked!"
Arthur Weasley, a sixth year prefect, walked over to James and started
inspecting him.
"They're not dead. Just knocked out. C'mon guys! Give them room!" he
shouted. Everyone backed away.
Then McGonagall burst through the portrait to find all of her students in the
common room. She was in such a rage she nearly tripped over Lily's lifeless body. She
looked down and saw her, and she gasped. She looked around and saw the other
unconscious students.
"Wood! Weasley! Johnson! Jordan!" she barked at four sixth and seventh year boys.
"Help me
take these students to Madame Welch. The rest of you, back to bed! Now!"
McGonagall conjured up five stretchers and the four boys helped her lift
Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, and Sybill onto the stretchers. They then took them to the
hospital wing, where the victims spent two weeks bedbound.
When they finally came around, they couldn't remember a thing. The
memory charm was very powerful, and for fear of hurting the victims further, Madame
Welch refused to let Dumbledore take the memory charms off.
After a couple of years the incident was forgotten completely. Partly because
of a dark wizard's, named Voldemort, upraise. And partly because other students were
attacked. The only house that wasn't attacked was Slytherin. Suspicion's rose, and when
Tom Riddle was long out of Hogwarts, they figured out it was he, who was Voldemort.
THE END
(Author's Note) Now to tie up some loose ends. Tom knew someone had found the
tunnel to the chamber, and he suspected Lily, so he took her locket and book. When she
took it he knew it was her. So then he attacked. I'll revise, but Tom was suppose to be in
his sixth year. I believe I said second year numerous times. I'll revise that. What else...
hmmm. Sorry about the dating between whoever and Remus or Peter or Sirius. I think I
changed it, but it wasn't part of the plot so I forgot. It's been almost a year since I've
posted another chapter! So sorry! When I wrote and typed this, fanfiction was in read
only mode, so it will be at least two weeks after I'd written it when you read it. Sorry
again! Thank you so much people who have reviewed! I luff you!
akaSailor Mars
P.S. Sorry if some things are spelled wrong. I don't have spell check. And sorry if some
of the curses and charms are wrong! And PLEASE REVIEW!!!
Secrets Reviled
By: akaSailor Mars
Disclaimer: I do NOT own the characters in this story. The belong to the great
J.K Rowling! DO YOU HEAR ME?! THEY BELONG TO J.K. ROWLING!!!!!!
A/N: Hello Everyone! I'm sure you're itching to read this! Sorry it's took so long. I really am!
I've just had a REALLY bad case of writer's block and then I wanted to do these other
stories and METMA challenges and I lost track of time! Well I think this will be the
last chapter. Yep, yep! I want to apologize for putting a Thanksgiving feast in there, I just
needed another feast. We'll say Dumbledore wanted students to embrace the cultural
diversity of different wizards. On with the story! Oh, and this last chapter will be outside
the diary.
Lily had screamed at what she had seen. Tom Riddle was standing in the window
of the girl's dormitory. She sank back in horror as she quickly realized he was the one
behind the kidnappings.
She lept to her feet and ran down to the common room. James was asleep in
an armchair. She rushed to his side.
"James! James! Wake up! Please wake up!" Lily begged.
"Wha?" Lily had shaken him awake.
"Lily, what are you doing?" He asked groping the coffee table for his glasses.
He found them and put them on. He looked around and saw Tom Riddle exiting the girls
dormitory.
"Wha?! Who's that?!" James practically yelled. Lily grabbed his arm and
jerked him down to the floor.
"Shhh!" she hissed.
"It's Tom Riddle! He's the one behind the kidnappings I suspect. I think he's
trying to kidnap me!"
"Very good, Miss Evans," said a cold voice behind her. She whipped around
and looked up into the cold gray eyes of Tom Riddle. He had black hair and was wearing
a smirk on his face. (a/n Sounds like Draco kinda. Doesn't it? It's a Draco/Harry mix!
Ahhahaha! Not slash)
Lily froze. James sat up. He stared from Lily to Tom and back to Lily. He
was clearly confused. He opened his mouth to say something, but Tom cut him off.
"Yes, Potter. I am the one who took Peter. Now I've come for Lily. I guess
I'll have to take you, too. Don't worry. I would have gotten you sooner or later."
Then he turned to Lily. He was staring at her intently. It sent chills down her
spine.
"Lily, dear. I told you to forget the passage and notes and such. Tut, tut. You
should have listened, you silly girl. Now look at the mess you've gotten yourself and
your boyfriend into."
"He's not my..." Lily started but James cut her off.
"That's right. I'm her boyfriend and I'll put a stop to this!" James yelled. He
pulled Lily close and yanked his wand out of his pocket. He pointed it at Tom, who was
stunned at this act. He put his smirk back on and drew his wand. Lily had left hers in her
dormitory. She was so terrified that she passed out.
This distracted James. He shook her. Then he realized that she was
unconscious. Tom took this advantage.
"Stupify!" Tom yelled.
When James whipped around the spell barely missed him. It hid the armchair
and knocked it over. James quickly recovered from his shock.
"Patrificus Totalus!" James cried, but his hand was shaking and he missed.
Tom looked very surprised.
"That's it!" Tom gave out an exasperated cry. "I'm putting a stop to you now!
Avada Keda-"
He had nearly finished the spell when the door to the boys dorm opened.
Tom whipped around to see Sirius and Remus standing there rubbing their eyes.
"What's all the screaming for?" Sirius started. Then he saw Tom and James,
wands pointed at each other and Lily, unconscious on the floor next to James.
"Eep!" someone squeaked. They turned the other way and saw Sybill
Trelawney, a third year, standing in the doorway of the of the third year girl's dorm.
"I knew it! I knew it! One of us was going to be taken tonight! I saw it in
Divination! I'm a seer! I'm a seer!" she shrieked.
"Stupify! Stupify! Stupify! Stupify!" Tom cried. All four curses hit their targets.
All four victims fell to the floor. He first put a memory charm on James, whom was
closest. Then he walked across the room and put a charm on Sybill, and climbed the
stairs and quickly put another memory charm on Sirius and Remus.
He then bounded down the stairs and grabbed Lily. He was walking to the
portrait hole when he herd voices in the dormitories. He realized that the other
Gryffindor students had woken up. He laid Lily on the floor and quickly placed the
same memory charm on Lily that he had placed on James, Sirius, Remus, and Sybill. He
then hastily exited the portrait hole.
The students came out of their dorms to find Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, and
Sybill, all unconscious.
"They're dead!" squeaked a second year girl. "Oh, no! Gryffindor's been
attacked!"
Arthur Weasley, a sixth year prefect, walked over to James and started
inspecting him.
"They're not dead. Just knocked out. C'mon guys! Give them room!" he
shouted. Everyone backed away.
Then McGonagall burst through the portrait to find all of her students in the
common room. She was in such a rage she nearly tripped over Lily's lifeless body. She
looked down and saw her, and she gasped. She looked around and saw the other
unconscious students.
"Wood! Weasley! Johnson! Jordan!" she barked at four sixth and seventh year boys.
"Help me
take these students to Madame Welch. The rest of you, back to bed! Now!"
McGonagall conjured up five stretchers and the four boys helped her lift
Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, and Sybill onto the stretchers. They then took them to the
hospital wing, where the victims spent two weeks bedbound.
When they finally came around, they couldn't remember a thing. The
memory charm was very powerful, and for fear of hurting the victims further, Madame
Welch refused to let Dumbledore take the memory charms off.
After a couple of years the incident was forgotten completely. Partly because
of a dark wizard's, named Voldemort, upraise. And partly because other students were
attacked. The only house that wasn't attacked was Slytherin. Suspicion's rose, and when
Tom Riddle was long out of Hogwarts, they figured out it was he, who was Voldemort.
THE END
(Author's Note) Now to tie up some loose ends. Tom knew someone had found the
tunnel to the chamber, and he suspected Lily, so he took her locket and book. When she
took it he knew it was her. So then he attacked. I'll revise, but Tom was suppose to be in
his sixth year. I believe I said second year numerous times. I'll revise that. What else...
hmmm. Sorry about the dating between whoever and Remus or Peter or Sirius. I think I
changed it, but it wasn't part of the plot so I forgot. It's been almost a year since I've
posted another chapter! So sorry! When I wrote and typed this, fanfiction was in read
only mode, so it will be at least two weeks after I'd written it when you read it. Sorry
again! Thank you so much people who have reviewed! I luff you!
akaSailor Mars
P.S. Sorry if some things are spelled wrong. I don't have spell check. And sorry if some
of the curses and charms are wrong! And PLEASE REVIEW!!!