Autumn
Chapter 6~~NO POSSIBLE ESCAPE-new and improved
Katz: Hey everybody, As you see I am re-writing this chapter. I thought I was just very bad at some places, the changes won't be big at all, I just wanted to make this sound a little better and take some advice from some of the reviews. (especially with the whole escaping part, I didn't write that well at all. And thanx to lil' Chi Chi for her advice, I hadn't even thought about that, I'll fix it)
(and lil' Chi Chi, I'm honoured you would want me to read your fic, sure you can mail it to me.)
Katz: So now I'm busy reading all of this, seeing what to improve and stuff, see what I go through for u people? And you better tell me what you think about these changes or else……
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The next days went by slowly for Bulma, she was constantly having the strange feeling about Vegeta being in trouble, at times more then others. Now she was sitting on the comfy couch in the living room, thinking things over. She had to do something about those feelings, what if Vegeta really was in trouble, but what if he wasn't. Was she just so concerned about him that she made up those things? She didn't even know she cared so much.
After thinking it over for a while, an idea sprung into her head. She raced towards her lab and vigorously started typing on her computer. A little later something appeared on her screen. She had been able to trace the gravity room and had activated the little camera on board. She couldn't see Vegeta anywhere and she was about to leave, thinking he was just not there anymore when the door to the ship opened. It where two aliens, she'd never seen them but she recognized the armours they where wearing, Saijin armours.
She watched as the aliens started looking around, they made their way towards the controls and started typing. Then the ship suddenly seemed to take off, there was quite some turbulence just before the screen went black and white. Now Bulma knew for sure Vegeta was in trouble. And she had to do something. She continued typing and ended up with a list of letters and numbers, the ship's coordinates.
Bulma got ready for her journey, she was going to have to find Vegeta on her own since Goku was still gone and all. She grabbed her scouter, she'd found it on the battle field after Goku and Vegeta's first fight. (I really wouldn't know whether Vegeta or Nappa's scouter survived everything but just work with me here) It wasn't completely fine but from the information she'd gotten out of Radditz's scouter, she had been able to fix it and translate it into English (Japanese, whatever) She climbed into the small spaceship she had built earlier, it wasn't much larger than a Saijin space pod and she had done her best to duplicate it. After the coordinates where entered, the ship took off.
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"It's mine, give it back!" a bear-like alien roared, trying to grab a bar of chocolate from another large pink alien who was avoiding his friend. "You cant have it, it's mine. I bought it." The third one called, grabbing it from the second. "No way, we all paid for it." The first one screamed again. A while late they finally decided to settle it once and for all since the chocolate was slowly started to melt. They stood in a circle and started playing rock-paper-scissors. They where so busy with the game, they never noticed the small dot on the radar, entering the planets atmosphere.
-(~~*~~)-
The ship jolted Bulma awake, she groaned, her neck and back where killing her. The ship continued shaking for a coupe of seconds before landing on the ground, creating a small crater. Bulma stayed in there for a while, listening if anyone was out there. She stepped out after hearing nothing at all. Gaping when she saw the planet, it's entire surface was covered with jagged rocks, ready to pierce anyone that made a wrong step and made the mistake of falling down. She looked over the horizon where she could see a large pink and white building. The scouter beeped a couple of times, indicating the prince was in there. Bulma sighed (see, sighed instead of sighted, I do read ur reviews and actually do what I say :P) how was she ever going to get there, she couldn't use her bike or anything, it would attract way too much attention. She groaned and prepared herself for a long and painful journey towards her goal.
The hours passed agonizingly slow as Bulma came closer and closer to the building. Finally, after receiving numerous cuts and scrapes from the jagged rocks, she reached the almost palace-like structure. She carefully sneaked up to the gate, how was she going to get in? There was a very scary looking guy guarding the entrance. It didn't took Bulma too tong to come up with an idea, it was probably the oldest trick in the book but she figured it would work. She looked around in her pocket and smiled when she found what she was looking for. She pressed the little button and threw the object away.
The guard had been staring straight ahead when a sudden noise and movement caught his attention. He looked over to his right and saw a small patch of smoke rising up from the ground. He rushed over to it and was surprised to see something he had never seen before. It seemed like some kind of box with four wheels. He approached it carefully and touched it. Suddenly there was a loud beeping, the car alarm had gone off.
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While the guard was distracted by her capsule, she sneaked into the building, sighing in relief when there was no one in sight. But she still had a long way to go and she knew it. She pushed the button on her scouter and followed the 'directions' it gave her towards Vegeta. (I don't know if a scouter can do that kinda thing but if it can't, Bulma advanced it) She carefully made her way through the long halls, every now and then hiding behind a corner when someone walked by, everything had been going great. It was easier then she'd thought. She guessed she had such a low ki-level, none of the men noticed her. She finally reached a big, heavy looking door. He must be somewhere behind that. She thought and walked up to it, surprised there where no guards in front of it.
There was a small box on the side of the door, it had some buttons on it, each had a different sign on it which she didn't know. She smirked, she was fully prepared for something like this. Suddenly there where heavy footsteps coming her way, the door was at the end of the hallway so there was no way she could go. She shrunk into the corner, hoping whoever it was hadn't planned on going into the hallway she was in now. The footsteps became louder, Bulma held her breath. A large, green man quickly walked past the entrance of the hall. The footsteps slowly faded away and Bulma let go of her breath. She stood up and began working on the lock, working as fast as she could before someone else walked past or even into the hall.
There was a slight click "Yesss." Bulma hissed slowly and pushed against the door, it opened pretty easy for such a big door. She peered around the corner. There was a very long hallway, it looked really disgusting. The air was musky and it smelled horrible. It was dark, there where no windows whatsoever. She slowly walked past all of the doors, they where from what seemed to be very hard material and there was only a small hole in them with a little door so that the guards could look in. They all had the same lock as the first door had, this shouldn't be too difficult, I only have to find Vegeta. Bulma thought and kept walking, trusting the scouter to show her the way.
Bulma could hardly believe how long the hall was, endless doors at each side. Suddenly the scouter beeped, indicating that the prince was in the door to her right. She stood on her toes and opened the little hole to see if she had the right cell. The cell was even darker than the hall and it took Bulma a while before she recognized a figure with Vegeta's hair. She knew she had the right one and started working on the lock.
She almost immediately broke through, this was too easy for someone like Bulma. Her heart seemed to stop beating when suddenly a loud wailing filled the air, some kind of alarm had gone off. "Shit!" Bulma exclaimed and rushed in, crouching down in front of Vegeta, he looked very bad. His hands where shackled above his head and he was slumped down onto the ground, not even reacting to her. She nudged him, he groaned and opened one eye. To say the least, he was surprised to see Bulma now working on the shackles on his hands. "We have to hurry, some kind of alarm went off." She said and helped Vegeta up after freeing him from his chains. She desperately wanted to help him the best she could, to take care of his wounds but there just wasn't any time for that. They had to concentrate solemnly on escaping right now.
Bulma threw Vegeta's arm around her shoulders to help him walk, Vegeta grunted, this was going to be a long and painfull way to freedom. They hurried down the hall as fast as they could, with Vegeta hardly being able to stay conscious, lets just say it didn't go very well. It seemed the guards where also slower then they expected, they actually made their way to the end of the long hall. Then they suddenly heard a horde of footsteps coming they way. Bulma did some quick thinking and started working on the lock of the cell closest to them. It took longer then it did before, it should have been open by now. Bulma started to panick, as a last resort she pounded on the thing, it always worked with her T.V. She didn't get time to gloat when the door finally opened as they rushed inside, quickly closing the door behind them. They stayed as quit as they could, both not even daring to breath.
The footsteps passed the cell, on their way to where Vegeta used to be. Bulma looked at him nervously, he smirked at her with nervousness in his eyes also. She had impressed him a lot. Bulma smiled back and as soon as the guards where gone, they where off again.
They reached the hangar of the base, Bulma immediately spotted her own ship. There was no one there, everybody had ran off towards the cells. Kind of strange, why would an entire building of soldiers go after one small alarm? Bulma shrugged it off, just one more meter and they where gone, safely home again. They ran into the ship and Bulma tore towards the controls after setting Vegeta down who closed his eyes, all of this had taken a lot out of him. Bulma didn't bother to set the coordinates, they just had to get out of there. She pressed the red button and waited anxiously.
Nothing happened.
Bulma was about to try again when suddenly her blood ran cold, she heard a chuckle outside the ship..
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Katz: So, the new and improved chapter 6….. Hope you all like it, PLEASE tell me what you think of it…
And one more thing: Why is everybody making such a big deal about me writing sighted instead os sighed, I already do it right now :(
I can't help that I'm Dutch and I don't speak english as good as someone from america or england.... +snif+
Alex: It's alright babe +hugs a devistated Katz+ It's not your fault. +startes angrily at who ever made his girl sad+
Chapter 6~~NO POSSIBLE ESCAPE-new and improved
Katz: Hey everybody, As you see I am re-writing this chapter. I thought I was just very bad at some places, the changes won't be big at all, I just wanted to make this sound a little better and take some advice from some of the reviews. (especially with the whole escaping part, I didn't write that well at all. And thanx to lil' Chi Chi for her advice, I hadn't even thought about that, I'll fix it)
(and lil' Chi Chi, I'm honoured you would want me to read your fic, sure you can mail it to me.)
Katz: So now I'm busy reading all of this, seeing what to improve and stuff, see what I go through for u people? And you better tell me what you think about these changes or else……
-(~~*~~)-
The next days went by slowly for Bulma, she was constantly having the strange feeling about Vegeta being in trouble, at times more then others. Now she was sitting on the comfy couch in the living room, thinking things over. She had to do something about those feelings, what if Vegeta really was in trouble, but what if he wasn't. Was she just so concerned about him that she made up those things? She didn't even know she cared so much.
After thinking it over for a while, an idea sprung into her head. She raced towards her lab and vigorously started typing on her computer. A little later something appeared on her screen. She had been able to trace the gravity room and had activated the little camera on board. She couldn't see Vegeta anywhere and she was about to leave, thinking he was just not there anymore when the door to the ship opened. It where two aliens, she'd never seen them but she recognized the armours they where wearing, Saijin armours.
She watched as the aliens started looking around, they made their way towards the controls and started typing. Then the ship suddenly seemed to take off, there was quite some turbulence just before the screen went black and white. Now Bulma knew for sure Vegeta was in trouble. And she had to do something. She continued typing and ended up with a list of letters and numbers, the ship's coordinates.
Bulma got ready for her journey, she was going to have to find Vegeta on her own since Goku was still gone and all. She grabbed her scouter, she'd found it on the battle field after Goku and Vegeta's first fight. (I really wouldn't know whether Vegeta or Nappa's scouter survived everything but just work with me here) It wasn't completely fine but from the information she'd gotten out of Radditz's scouter, she had been able to fix it and translate it into English (Japanese, whatever) She climbed into the small spaceship she had built earlier, it wasn't much larger than a Saijin space pod and she had done her best to duplicate it. After the coordinates where entered, the ship took off.
-(~~*~~)-
"It's mine, give it back!" a bear-like alien roared, trying to grab a bar of chocolate from another large pink alien who was avoiding his friend. "You cant have it, it's mine. I bought it." The third one called, grabbing it from the second. "No way, we all paid for it." The first one screamed again. A while late they finally decided to settle it once and for all since the chocolate was slowly started to melt. They stood in a circle and started playing rock-paper-scissors. They where so busy with the game, they never noticed the small dot on the radar, entering the planets atmosphere.
-(~~*~~)-
The ship jolted Bulma awake, she groaned, her neck and back where killing her. The ship continued shaking for a coupe of seconds before landing on the ground, creating a small crater. Bulma stayed in there for a while, listening if anyone was out there. She stepped out after hearing nothing at all. Gaping when she saw the planet, it's entire surface was covered with jagged rocks, ready to pierce anyone that made a wrong step and made the mistake of falling down. She looked over the horizon where she could see a large pink and white building. The scouter beeped a couple of times, indicating the prince was in there. Bulma sighed (see, sighed instead of sighted, I do read ur reviews and actually do what I say :P) how was she ever going to get there, she couldn't use her bike or anything, it would attract way too much attention. She groaned and prepared herself for a long and painful journey towards her goal.
The hours passed agonizingly slow as Bulma came closer and closer to the building. Finally, after receiving numerous cuts and scrapes from the jagged rocks, she reached the almost palace-like structure. She carefully sneaked up to the gate, how was she going to get in? There was a very scary looking guy guarding the entrance. It didn't took Bulma too tong to come up with an idea, it was probably the oldest trick in the book but she figured it would work. She looked around in her pocket and smiled when she found what she was looking for. She pressed the little button and threw the object away.
The guard had been staring straight ahead when a sudden noise and movement caught his attention. He looked over to his right and saw a small patch of smoke rising up from the ground. He rushed over to it and was surprised to see something he had never seen before. It seemed like some kind of box with four wheels. He approached it carefully and touched it. Suddenly there was a loud beeping, the car alarm had gone off.
-(~~*~~)-
While the guard was distracted by her capsule, she sneaked into the building, sighing in relief when there was no one in sight. But she still had a long way to go and she knew it. She pushed the button on her scouter and followed the 'directions' it gave her towards Vegeta. (I don't know if a scouter can do that kinda thing but if it can't, Bulma advanced it) She carefully made her way through the long halls, every now and then hiding behind a corner when someone walked by, everything had been going great. It was easier then she'd thought. She guessed she had such a low ki-level, none of the men noticed her. She finally reached a big, heavy looking door. He must be somewhere behind that. She thought and walked up to it, surprised there where no guards in front of it.
There was a small box on the side of the door, it had some buttons on it, each had a different sign on it which she didn't know. She smirked, she was fully prepared for something like this. Suddenly there where heavy footsteps coming her way, the door was at the end of the hallway so there was no way she could go. She shrunk into the corner, hoping whoever it was hadn't planned on going into the hallway she was in now. The footsteps became louder, Bulma held her breath. A large, green man quickly walked past the entrance of the hall. The footsteps slowly faded away and Bulma let go of her breath. She stood up and began working on the lock, working as fast as she could before someone else walked past or even into the hall.
There was a slight click "Yesss." Bulma hissed slowly and pushed against the door, it opened pretty easy for such a big door. She peered around the corner. There was a very long hallway, it looked really disgusting. The air was musky and it smelled horrible. It was dark, there where no windows whatsoever. She slowly walked past all of the doors, they where from what seemed to be very hard material and there was only a small hole in them with a little door so that the guards could look in. They all had the same lock as the first door had, this shouldn't be too difficult, I only have to find Vegeta. Bulma thought and kept walking, trusting the scouter to show her the way.
Bulma could hardly believe how long the hall was, endless doors at each side. Suddenly the scouter beeped, indicating that the prince was in the door to her right. She stood on her toes and opened the little hole to see if she had the right cell. The cell was even darker than the hall and it took Bulma a while before she recognized a figure with Vegeta's hair. She knew she had the right one and started working on the lock.
She almost immediately broke through, this was too easy for someone like Bulma. Her heart seemed to stop beating when suddenly a loud wailing filled the air, some kind of alarm had gone off. "Shit!" Bulma exclaimed and rushed in, crouching down in front of Vegeta, he looked very bad. His hands where shackled above his head and he was slumped down onto the ground, not even reacting to her. She nudged him, he groaned and opened one eye. To say the least, he was surprised to see Bulma now working on the shackles on his hands. "We have to hurry, some kind of alarm went off." She said and helped Vegeta up after freeing him from his chains. She desperately wanted to help him the best she could, to take care of his wounds but there just wasn't any time for that. They had to concentrate solemnly on escaping right now.
Bulma threw Vegeta's arm around her shoulders to help him walk, Vegeta grunted, this was going to be a long and painfull way to freedom. They hurried down the hall as fast as they could, with Vegeta hardly being able to stay conscious, lets just say it didn't go very well. It seemed the guards where also slower then they expected, they actually made their way to the end of the long hall. Then they suddenly heard a horde of footsteps coming they way. Bulma did some quick thinking and started working on the lock of the cell closest to them. It took longer then it did before, it should have been open by now. Bulma started to panick, as a last resort she pounded on the thing, it always worked with her T.V. She didn't get time to gloat when the door finally opened as they rushed inside, quickly closing the door behind them. They stayed as quit as they could, both not even daring to breath.
The footsteps passed the cell, on their way to where Vegeta used to be. Bulma looked at him nervously, he smirked at her with nervousness in his eyes also. She had impressed him a lot. Bulma smiled back and as soon as the guards where gone, they where off again.
They reached the hangar of the base, Bulma immediately spotted her own ship. There was no one there, everybody had ran off towards the cells. Kind of strange, why would an entire building of soldiers go after one small alarm? Bulma shrugged it off, just one more meter and they where gone, safely home again. They ran into the ship and Bulma tore towards the controls after setting Vegeta down who closed his eyes, all of this had taken a lot out of him. Bulma didn't bother to set the coordinates, they just had to get out of there. She pressed the red button and waited anxiously.
Nothing happened.
Bulma was about to try again when suddenly her blood ran cold, she heard a chuckle outside the ship..
-(~~*~~)--(~~*~~)-
Katz: So, the new and improved chapter 6….. Hope you all like it, PLEASE tell me what you think of it…
And one more thing: Why is everybody making such a big deal about me writing sighted instead os sighed, I already do it right now :(
I can't help that I'm Dutch and I don't speak english as good as someone from america or england.... +snif+
Alex: It's alright babe +hugs a devistated Katz+ It's not your fault. +startes angrily at who ever made his girl sad+