A/N: Hey, hope you're enjoying the story.
Thanks to amaryllis, my number one supporter of this story. You'd better update your story soon, amaryllis! I'm looking forward to it!
And Enid has pointed out that it can get annoying with having to read the same scene twice in two different PoV's. Basically, if this annoys you, just read the PoV that you want and skip the other one. I'm trying to show how the different characters with different personalities react to the same situations. Enjoy!
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Susan's PoV:
"What is going on here?"
I looked up in surprise. Who dared to inturrupt the biggest moment of my life? But as soon as I looked up I gasped. Standing before me was my scariest teacher ever, Professor Snape.
"I asked you a question and I expect it to be answered. What exactly is going on here?"
Draco spoke. "I'm sorry, Professor."
"Yes, well," said Snape. "Twenty points from Hufflepuff for Public Display of Affection, Susan. And I will see you in Potions class next period. See me after class to arrange detention." And with that, he turned on his heel and left.
My mouth was hanging open. I couldn't believe it! I'd gotten into so much trouble, detention and house points taken off, and Draco was let off fine! This wasn't fair. I'm a good kid, and quiet too. I'd never gotten detention before. I just couldn't believe it.
"Don't say anything," said Draco. "You'll be okay. Trust me, you'll be fine. It's one detention with Snape, you'll live. But I guess we should be going now, it's almost time for our next class."
He was right. I wasn't looking forward to Potions, but I didn't want to get into more trouble than I was already in, so Draco and I went our separate ways.
As I walked into the dungeons, I noticed a lot of people looking at me and whispering. I prayed that Snape hadn't said anything to the class about what had happened between Draco and I. But maybe I was just being paranoid.
I endured the torture of Potions class, and went up to Snape after class to recieve my detention. He informed me that I would be put to work cleaning out all his empty potion bottles. I groaned. There had to be more than two hundred of them. But he told me I would be serving my detention along with Seamus Finnigan, a Gryffindor. So at least I'd have some help.
I left feeling dejected about everything. It didn't help when I passed two giggling Gryffindor girls, who I knew were pointing at me and laughing. What was going on?
Suddenly, Hannah came rushing up to me. "Susan, why didn't you tell me?"
"Tell you what?" I asked, genuinuely confused.
"That you've kissed Ernie MacMillian!"
"WHAT?!?" I screamed. Hannah looked taken aback. "That is totally not true. I would never... I mean... oh! It's making me so mad! I've never kissed him, I barely even know him. He's just one of Justin's friends."
"Really?" Hannah raised one eyebrow. "Well, that's not the story Justin's telling everyone. According to Justin, you broke up with him, and then had a short little thing with Ernie, and now you've dumped him and are after Draco Malfoy. He's made you seem like some sort of slut!"
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Draco's PoV:
"What is going up here?"
I groaned at the familiar tone of voice. Standing over me was none other than the head of Slytherin house, Professor Snape.
"I asked you a question and I expect it to be answered. What is going on here?"
I wasn't sure how to reply, but I tried to smooth things over. "I'm sorry, Professor," I said to him.
"Yes, well," he turned away from me and turned to Susan. "Twenty points from Hufflepuff for a Public Display of Affection, Susan. And see me for a detention after class." And then he swept out of the room.
Susan's mouth was hanging open. I doubt she'd even gotten detention before, being the good student she is. I know it was unfair, because Snape was the head of my house, but what could I do about it? I turned to Susan.
"Don't say anything. I know it's unfair, but it's just one detention. But we should get going now, it's almost time for class."
As much as I didn't want to leave, and I would have easily skipped Herbology to be here, I knew Susan had to get to Potions. She couldn't stand to be late or else she might be in even more trouble. So I started out towards the greenhouses.
When I arrived, Pansy immeadiately came up to me. "Draco," she purred, "Why don't you come back to me? I love you, baby, and that little slut you have for a girlfriend isn't...."
"She's not a slut!" I interrupted. "She's loving, caring and kind. She'd never do anything like that."
"Hmm, that's not what Justin Finch-Fletchy told me. And he should know. He went out with her for six months. According to him, she's kissed half the guys in the school. And then she leaves them. Her goal is to get every single one. And you're next. I'm waiting to see you fall, Draco Malfoy, because you're going to get crushed."
Thanks to amaryllis, my number one supporter of this story. You'd better update your story soon, amaryllis! I'm looking forward to it!
And Enid has pointed out that it can get annoying with having to read the same scene twice in two different PoV's. Basically, if this annoys you, just read the PoV that you want and skip the other one. I'm trying to show how the different characters with different personalities react to the same situations. Enjoy!
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Susan's PoV:
"What is going on here?"
I looked up in surprise. Who dared to inturrupt the biggest moment of my life? But as soon as I looked up I gasped. Standing before me was my scariest teacher ever, Professor Snape.
"I asked you a question and I expect it to be answered. What exactly is going on here?"
Draco spoke. "I'm sorry, Professor."
"Yes, well," said Snape. "Twenty points from Hufflepuff for Public Display of Affection, Susan. And I will see you in Potions class next period. See me after class to arrange detention." And with that, he turned on his heel and left.
My mouth was hanging open. I couldn't believe it! I'd gotten into so much trouble, detention and house points taken off, and Draco was let off fine! This wasn't fair. I'm a good kid, and quiet too. I'd never gotten detention before. I just couldn't believe it.
"Don't say anything," said Draco. "You'll be okay. Trust me, you'll be fine. It's one detention with Snape, you'll live. But I guess we should be going now, it's almost time for our next class."
He was right. I wasn't looking forward to Potions, but I didn't want to get into more trouble than I was already in, so Draco and I went our separate ways.
As I walked into the dungeons, I noticed a lot of people looking at me and whispering. I prayed that Snape hadn't said anything to the class about what had happened between Draco and I. But maybe I was just being paranoid.
I endured the torture of Potions class, and went up to Snape after class to recieve my detention. He informed me that I would be put to work cleaning out all his empty potion bottles. I groaned. There had to be more than two hundred of them. But he told me I would be serving my detention along with Seamus Finnigan, a Gryffindor. So at least I'd have some help.
I left feeling dejected about everything. It didn't help when I passed two giggling Gryffindor girls, who I knew were pointing at me and laughing. What was going on?
Suddenly, Hannah came rushing up to me. "Susan, why didn't you tell me?"
"Tell you what?" I asked, genuinuely confused.
"That you've kissed Ernie MacMillian!"
"WHAT?!?" I screamed. Hannah looked taken aback. "That is totally not true. I would never... I mean... oh! It's making me so mad! I've never kissed him, I barely even know him. He's just one of Justin's friends."
"Really?" Hannah raised one eyebrow. "Well, that's not the story Justin's telling everyone. According to Justin, you broke up with him, and then had a short little thing with Ernie, and now you've dumped him and are after Draco Malfoy. He's made you seem like some sort of slut!"
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Draco's PoV:
"What is going up here?"
I groaned at the familiar tone of voice. Standing over me was none other than the head of Slytherin house, Professor Snape.
"I asked you a question and I expect it to be answered. What is going on here?"
I wasn't sure how to reply, but I tried to smooth things over. "I'm sorry, Professor," I said to him.
"Yes, well," he turned away from me and turned to Susan. "Twenty points from Hufflepuff for a Public Display of Affection, Susan. And see me for a detention after class." And then he swept out of the room.
Susan's mouth was hanging open. I doubt she'd even gotten detention before, being the good student she is. I know it was unfair, because Snape was the head of my house, but what could I do about it? I turned to Susan.
"Don't say anything. I know it's unfair, but it's just one detention. But we should get going now, it's almost time for class."
As much as I didn't want to leave, and I would have easily skipped Herbology to be here, I knew Susan had to get to Potions. She couldn't stand to be late or else she might be in even more trouble. So I started out towards the greenhouses.
When I arrived, Pansy immeadiately came up to me. "Draco," she purred, "Why don't you come back to me? I love you, baby, and that little slut you have for a girlfriend isn't...."
"She's not a slut!" I interrupted. "She's loving, caring and kind. She'd never do anything like that."
"Hmm, that's not what Justin Finch-Fletchy told me. And he should know. He went out with her for six months. According to him, she's kissed half the guys in the school. And then she leaves them. Her goal is to get every single one. And you're next. I'm waiting to see you fall, Draco Malfoy, because you're going to get crushed."
