CHAPTER 1 - The Missing Chosen
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Digimon...if i did the series would have been A LOT different (and not suitable for children...lol)...but they don't seem to want these characters anymore ...so I'm gonna use them...
Thank You to everyone who reviewed!!
ShineyEye 02: Piemon is the Japanese name...but i made a typo your right that it is spelled Piedmon in the dub...thx
A/N: This is being reposted (it was posted yesterday...and this is replacing the original copy) because of a spelling error in the translations on the bottom (i spelled the name Kamiya wrong... I am changing the rating of this fic from R to PG-13...the prologue was borderline IMHO, and i was originally going to make the rest of the fic even "worse", but decided not to...if you think this should be rated something else...tell me in a review and ill consider it if you give a valid argument (not just um...it should be R you f**king idiot! or something like that)
Chapter 1 is up (obviously, if it weren't it would be hard for you to read thisÉunless you hacked into my computer, which would be meanÉplease don't!
If you give me your e-mail in a review (or e-mail me with itÉmy e-mail is XTowNaga@optonline.net) then I will add you to a mailing list for when this fic is updated. I wont notify anyone any other way, unless I really have to, and then i cant promise anything (Someone asked me to leave it in a review of his (her?) fic, and I just wanted to say that after this I wont do that anymoreÉbecause it is annoyingÉ) (Don't worry, I wont Spam you if you give me your e-mail)
I say againÉPLEASE REVIEW! (And thanks to everyone who reviewed my prologue! Every review I got was positive, or at least I am deluding myself into thinking they were ;)
Also, in the last chapter some people may have noticed the ^^ on one line and the \_____/ on the next, but not right above/beneath each other as had been planed, I BLAME the HTML converter in word! It looked fine in word, (it was supposed to be a smiley) but when I posted, the indentations got screwed up ):
Note: I will put the translate-o-matic at the end again, but I may stop after a few chapters, if I get tired of putting it inÉ
NOW THAT EVERYONE HAS HIT THE BACK BUTTON, OR RUN SCREAMING BECAUSE I HAVE CURSED FF.NET WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER (OR BOTH)ÉILL START THE FIC!
Chapter 1
"She's coming to," Jyou informed the other chosen, who all rushed over.
They had found Hikari a day earlier, lying unconcous in the deserted fortress which had served as the citadel for the Dark Masters during their reign of chaos. It had, of course, been occupied during their rule, not only by them but by various servant also. However as the Chosen had defeated their masters, they had left, leaving the fortress completely empty now.
Jyou had checked her out, as he knew at least a little medical practice, which was more then any of the other Chosen could say. As far as he could tell, one of her legs was badly broken, and they would need to keep her off the leg until she could see a real doctor. She had also hit her head on the ground, which had presumably knocked her unconscious. However, they really had no idea if she would survive, or even if she didn't die if she would ever regain conciseness. However, that question had just been answered.
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Piemon released his grasp on the swords, sending them flying at the small , helpless child, they were mere inches from her face, then suddenly a blinding light, then blackness. The next thing Hikari knew, she was lying on a cold stone, floor, her eyes slowly opening to a very cold, bright, blurry world.
She saw several of the chosen hovering over her, but instantly noticed that her brother wasn't there, she tried to open her mouth to ask where she was, why she was there, and where her brother was, but all that came out was coughing.
"Do you want some water?" Jyou asked, a second after she finished coughing.
She still couldn't talk, but nodded a little to Jyou.
He handed her some water, which she drank greedily, while she couldn't really gulp the water, she did empty the container given to her. When she was done drinking, she asked where Taichi and Tailmon were, causing the others a great deal of disappointment. The truth was they had no idea where Taichi, Agumon, Koushiro, Tentomon, or Tailmon were, or weather they were even alive or not.
"You don't know?" Sora's face changed instantly from anxious, even hopeful, to disappointment.
"No, the last thing I remember is defeating one of Piemon's henchmen, a Lady Devimon I think, then waking up here," Hikari confirmed.
Sora wondered how she could be so calm, her brother and her Digimon partner were both missing, probably dead, and she didn't even seem worried, then Sora realized that she was probably in shock, her mind refused to believe what was happening as real.
"SHH!" Gabumon suddenly ordered, as he heard a faint sound, like an engine of some kind on a mechanical digimon. As it slowly grew louder, Yamato motioned him to follow, while telling the others to stay here for a minute while he checked it out. "Gabumon, you'd better Digivice just in case," he added.
"GABUMON, Super Evolve," The small digimon quickly flashed through several forms, "METAL GRURUMON!"
-------------(¥)---(¥)-----------A few minutes later-----------------------------
Yamato, Gabumon, and Genni walked into the room in which they had found Hikari, and all of the other Chosen still resided. There was a semi-simultaneous gasp of "Genni," or something to that effect from all present.
"I'm afraid I have some bad news..." the old man informed the children, "You're not quite done here."
"WHAT?!?" demanded Sora, "How can you possibly ask up to keep fighting when TAICHI AND Koushiro ARE MISSING?!?" she was furious, mostly out of worry and anger over not knowing where her friends were. Of course she had no idea that Genni might not yet know this, as he had previously seemed to be fairly all knowing.
"What do you mean missing?" asked Genni, the old man starting to sound very worried, "How did you defeat Piemon without War Greymon, although that would explain my inability to reach Koushiro," the old man stopped talking to himself. One thing he was certain of however, this could very well mean the Chosen couldn't accomplish their final task, and the Digital would was doomed to a long period of Darkness...
A/N2: Ok...It was kind of short...and didn't cover much...and took a VERY long time ...but my excuse is that i rewrote it like 20 times to get it the way i wanted it...and I'm lazy...and Warcraft III came out in-between these parts...and really what od you expect of me?! I'll try to update this sooner this time...but i cant promise anything because next week im going to the beach, and then the week after that Space Camp...so don't expect anything for at least two and a half weeks
Remember to give me your e-mail address if you want to be told when the next update is (you can either say so in a review in which you include your e-mail, or e-mail me asking me to include you at XTowNaga@optonline.net). Also, I ask for a volunteer beta reader...currentally by Brother is betaing my fic, and i am betaing his (temporal bouncer), but I would like someone else to beta my fic as he isn't always the most reliable person...if your interested, e-mail me (or you could ask in a review...but I NEED your e-mail if you are going to do this...really...i do...
Lastly I am trying to decide weather or not to use the endings which the Japanese use for names (-kun, -san, -sama, -chan, exc.)...so tell me if i should...
TRANSLATE-O-MATIC
Yagami Taichi= Tai Kamiya
Yagami Hikari = Kari Kamiya
Ishida Yamato = Matt Ishida
Takenouchi Sora = Sora Takenouchi
Tachikawa Mimi = Mimi Tachikawa
Takaishi Takaru = TK Takaishi
KidoJyou = Joe Kido (Jyou is pronounced the same as Joe)
Izumi Koushiro = Izzy Izumi
Tailmon = Gatomon
Piemon = Piedmon
Digitama = Digi egg (as in what they hatch out of, not the 02 armor evolution enabling "Digimentals")
Evolution = Digivolution
Mugen Dramon = Machine Dramon
Pinocchimon = Puppetmon
Vamdemon = Myotismon
Altur Kabuterimon = Mega Kabuterimon
Holy Angemon = Magna Angemon
Child = Rookie
Adult = Champion
Perfection = Ultimate
Ultimate = Mega
Hikari= Light (as in the crest...i wont be using this...just think it's kinda weird that Hikari has the crest of Hikari)
(note: there is nothing above Ultimate/Mega...only more powerful Ultimates (for instance in 02 Impirialdramon (sp?) and Imperialdramon fighter mode, and Palidinmon (the jogress (DNA) of omegamon (Omnimon) and Imperialdramon fighter mode...seen in 4th movie) are all Ultimate level...even though they have power levels equivalent to higher levels
A/N3: I do know that most of the translations here aren't used/might never be (depending on how long I continue this for)...but this will give me the freedom to not have to make up separate translation lists for each chapter where someone new is introduced... If you want a good list of translations go to Lord Archive's Izumi Asks (chapter 2) the whole fic is useful to read as it gives a lot of information about the changes (Lord archive is on ff.net) AGAINÉPLEASE REVIEW!!!!!! (if you want to review by e-mail for some reason i have given you my address already and its in my profile...though i would prefer a ff.net rev for the stat numbers as well as being able to keep track of it more easily)
Made With Macintosh :)
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Digimon...if i did the series would have been A LOT different (and not suitable for children...lol)...but they don't seem to want these characters anymore ...so I'm gonna use them...
Thank You to everyone who reviewed!!
ShineyEye 02: Piemon is the Japanese name...but i made a typo your right that it is spelled Piedmon in the dub...thx
A/N: This is being reposted (it was posted yesterday...and this is replacing the original copy) because of a spelling error in the translations on the bottom (i spelled the name Kamiya wrong... I am changing the rating of this fic from R to PG-13...the prologue was borderline IMHO, and i was originally going to make the rest of the fic even "worse", but decided not to...if you think this should be rated something else...tell me in a review and ill consider it if you give a valid argument (not just um...it should be R you f**king idiot! or something like that)
Chapter 1 is up (obviously, if it weren't it would be hard for you to read thisÉunless you hacked into my computer, which would be meanÉplease don't!
If you give me your e-mail in a review (or e-mail me with itÉmy e-mail is XTowNaga@optonline.net) then I will add you to a mailing list for when this fic is updated. I wont notify anyone any other way, unless I really have to, and then i cant promise anything (Someone asked me to leave it in a review of his (her?) fic, and I just wanted to say that after this I wont do that anymoreÉbecause it is annoyingÉ) (Don't worry, I wont Spam you if you give me your e-mail)
I say againÉPLEASE REVIEW! (And thanks to everyone who reviewed my prologue! Every review I got was positive, or at least I am deluding myself into thinking they were ;)
Also, in the last chapter some people may have noticed the ^^ on one line and the \_____/ on the next, but not right above/beneath each other as had been planed, I BLAME the HTML converter in word! It looked fine in word, (it was supposed to be a smiley) but when I posted, the indentations got screwed up ):
Note: I will put the translate-o-matic at the end again, but I may stop after a few chapters, if I get tired of putting it inÉ
NOW THAT EVERYONE HAS HIT THE BACK BUTTON, OR RUN SCREAMING BECAUSE I HAVE CURSED FF.NET WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER (OR BOTH)ÉILL START THE FIC!
Chapter 1
"She's coming to," Jyou informed the other chosen, who all rushed over.
They had found Hikari a day earlier, lying unconcous in the deserted fortress which had served as the citadel for the Dark Masters during their reign of chaos. It had, of course, been occupied during their rule, not only by them but by various servant also. However as the Chosen had defeated their masters, they had left, leaving the fortress completely empty now.
Jyou had checked her out, as he knew at least a little medical practice, which was more then any of the other Chosen could say. As far as he could tell, one of her legs was badly broken, and they would need to keep her off the leg until she could see a real doctor. She had also hit her head on the ground, which had presumably knocked her unconscious. However, they really had no idea if she would survive, or even if she didn't die if she would ever regain conciseness. However, that question had just been answered.
------------------------------------(¥)-(¥)--------------------------------------
Piemon released his grasp on the swords, sending them flying at the small , helpless child, they were mere inches from her face, then suddenly a blinding light, then blackness. The next thing Hikari knew, she was lying on a cold stone, floor, her eyes slowly opening to a very cold, bright, blurry world.
She saw several of the chosen hovering over her, but instantly noticed that her brother wasn't there, she tried to open her mouth to ask where she was, why she was there, and where her brother was, but all that came out was coughing.
"Do you want some water?" Jyou asked, a second after she finished coughing.
She still couldn't talk, but nodded a little to Jyou.
He handed her some water, which she drank greedily, while she couldn't really gulp the water, she did empty the container given to her. When she was done drinking, she asked where Taichi and Tailmon were, causing the others a great deal of disappointment. The truth was they had no idea where Taichi, Agumon, Koushiro, Tentomon, or Tailmon were, or weather they were even alive or not.
"You don't know?" Sora's face changed instantly from anxious, even hopeful, to disappointment.
"No, the last thing I remember is defeating one of Piemon's henchmen, a Lady Devimon I think, then waking up here," Hikari confirmed.
Sora wondered how she could be so calm, her brother and her Digimon partner were both missing, probably dead, and she didn't even seem worried, then Sora realized that she was probably in shock, her mind refused to believe what was happening as real.
"SHH!" Gabumon suddenly ordered, as he heard a faint sound, like an engine of some kind on a mechanical digimon. As it slowly grew louder, Yamato motioned him to follow, while telling the others to stay here for a minute while he checked it out. "Gabumon, you'd better Digivice just in case," he added.
"GABUMON, Super Evolve," The small digimon quickly flashed through several forms, "METAL GRURUMON!"
-------------(¥)---(¥)-----------A few minutes later-----------------------------
Yamato, Gabumon, and Genni walked into the room in which they had found Hikari, and all of the other Chosen still resided. There was a semi-simultaneous gasp of "Genni," or something to that effect from all present.
"I'm afraid I have some bad news..." the old man informed the children, "You're not quite done here."
"WHAT?!?" demanded Sora, "How can you possibly ask up to keep fighting when TAICHI AND Koushiro ARE MISSING?!?" she was furious, mostly out of worry and anger over not knowing where her friends were. Of course she had no idea that Genni might not yet know this, as he had previously seemed to be fairly all knowing.
"What do you mean missing?" asked Genni, the old man starting to sound very worried, "How did you defeat Piemon without War Greymon, although that would explain my inability to reach Koushiro," the old man stopped talking to himself. One thing he was certain of however, this could very well mean the Chosen couldn't accomplish their final task, and the Digital would was doomed to a long period of Darkness...
A/N2: Ok...It was kind of short...and didn't cover much...and took a VERY long time ...but my excuse is that i rewrote it like 20 times to get it the way i wanted it...and I'm lazy...and Warcraft III came out in-between these parts...and really what od you expect of me?! I'll try to update this sooner this time...but i cant promise anything because next week im going to the beach, and then the week after that Space Camp...so don't expect anything for at least two and a half weeks
Remember to give me your e-mail address if you want to be told when the next update is (you can either say so in a review in which you include your e-mail, or e-mail me asking me to include you at XTowNaga@optonline.net). Also, I ask for a volunteer beta reader...currentally by Brother is betaing my fic, and i am betaing his (temporal bouncer), but I would like someone else to beta my fic as he isn't always the most reliable person...if your interested, e-mail me (or you could ask in a review...but I NEED your e-mail if you are going to do this...really...i do...
Lastly I am trying to decide weather or not to use the endings which the Japanese use for names (-kun, -san, -sama, -chan, exc.)...so tell me if i should...
TRANSLATE-O-MATIC
Yagami Taichi= Tai Kamiya
Yagami Hikari = Kari Kamiya
Ishida Yamato = Matt Ishida
Takenouchi Sora = Sora Takenouchi
Tachikawa Mimi = Mimi Tachikawa
Takaishi Takaru = TK Takaishi
KidoJyou = Joe Kido (Jyou is pronounced the same as Joe)
Izumi Koushiro = Izzy Izumi
Tailmon = Gatomon
Piemon = Piedmon
Digitama = Digi egg (as in what they hatch out of, not the 02 armor evolution enabling "Digimentals")
Evolution = Digivolution
Mugen Dramon = Machine Dramon
Pinocchimon = Puppetmon
Vamdemon = Myotismon
Altur Kabuterimon = Mega Kabuterimon
Holy Angemon = Magna Angemon
Child = Rookie
Adult = Champion
Perfection = Ultimate
Ultimate = Mega
Hikari= Light (as in the crest...i wont be using this...just think it's kinda weird that Hikari has the crest of Hikari)
(note: there is nothing above Ultimate/Mega...only more powerful Ultimates (for instance in 02 Impirialdramon (sp?) and Imperialdramon fighter mode, and Palidinmon (the jogress (DNA) of omegamon (Omnimon) and Imperialdramon fighter mode...seen in 4th movie) are all Ultimate level...even though they have power levels equivalent to higher levels
A/N3: I do know that most of the translations here aren't used/might never be (depending on how long I continue this for)...but this will give me the freedom to not have to make up separate translation lists for each chapter where someone new is introduced... If you want a good list of translations go to Lord Archive's Izumi Asks (chapter 2) the whole fic is useful to read as it gives a lot of information about the changes (Lord archive is on ff.net) AGAINÉPLEASE REVIEW!!!!!! (if you want to review by e-mail for some reason i have given you my address already and its in my profile...though i would prefer a ff.net rev for the stat numbers as well as being able to keep track of it more easily)
Made With Macintosh :)