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Chapter 3 The makeover
Melfina woke up around noon on Saturday. ' It's to early.' Melfina thought drowsily. She rubbed her eyes and trudged into the kitchen, where Jim was already cooking pancakes.
"Hey Mel." Jim said cheerfully. Melfina almost always did the cooking, but pancakes were Jim's specialty. "Hi J-J-J-Jim" melfina said stifling a yawn as she did so.
"Today is your big date with gene starwind!" Jim cried happily. Melfina groaned. "Look Jim I know you're really excited I have a date with the most popular guy in school, but he's not my type."
"Oh he's not?" Jim said doubtfully. "No he's not," melfina said. "I'll just tell him I'm sick or something..."
"Whatever." Was Jim's response.
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Iris waited impatiently for Harry to pick up the phone. Iris was shopping for the perfect thing to wear to Hilda's party. She had swung by Harry's house yesterday, but he hadn't been home.
"Hello?" a sleepy voice answered.
"Harry? It's Iris. What is going on with Gene? Why is going out with some art whore???" Iris raged.
"Calm down iris. Good lord. It's nothing we just made a little." Harry paused to chuckle, "bet."
"Bet?" iris asked suspiciously.
"Yes. A bet. But I'm not telling you about it. God. You'd tell the whole damn school." Suddenly there was a female voice in the background, "look iris I've got to go. Later."
"Whatever." Iris said and hung up. So she went back to hunting for the perfect outfit.
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Gene stood confidently outside Melfina's house. He rang the doorbell. Melfina peeked her head outside and said, "yes? Oh...gene!"
"Are you ready?" gene asked.
"Well. Um you see I can't go... because my house is dirty." Melfina lied timidly. 'Oh man' melfina thought. 'I'm so bad at lying'
"Well that's ok. I brought the whole football team to clean your house for you." Gene said with a smile.
Melfina smiled thinking he was joking until she saw the whole football team, except for Harry, walk into her house and start cleaning.
"Uh... I don't really have anything to wear." Melfina said quietly.
"That's where I come in, Gene you owe me big for this!" came a voice from behind Gene. Aisha walked quickly over to melfina.
"Hi I'm aisha. I'm your wardrobe, hair and makeup. Well come on let's get going." Aisha grabbed melfina's hand and pulled her upstairs.
Melfina looked helplessly over at Jim, who had just entered the living room from the kitchen.
Jim looked a melfina then at Gene. "Uh...I'm Jim."
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"No, no, no, no. Your hair length doesn't frame your face nicely." Aisha said. "Hey do you have any scissors?"
Melfina gulped and pointed to the desk.
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It had been almost a half and hour later. 'We're going to be late.' Gene thought impatiently. Suddenly Aisha walked down the stairs in her new party dress, which was exactly like the old one, only it had slits up the side. "May I present the new melfina." Aisha smiled.
Melfina nervously walked down the stairs. Her long black hair had been cut to chin length except for two long sections that went past her shoulders. She was wearing a pale pink dress that was cut much like Aisha's; only it was a bit shorter. With strappy high-heeled sandals, the same color as her dress, melfina walked wobbly. With pale pink eye shadow and lipstick melfina felt silly. But she looked beautiful.
"You look beautiful." Gene said smiling.
"By daddy." Melfina called uncertainly. And the walked out the door, got in Gene's black mustang, and drove off to the party.
"Oh boy. I hope melfina doesn't get into trouble." Thought Jim, standing in the doorway a minute longer before coming inside.
Jim suddenly opened the door and let the football team out. Rolling his eyes Jim slammed the door.
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Melfina went to the bathroom, walking in happy bouncy steps. She had been at Hilda's house for an hour now, and she hated to admit it but she was having the time of her life. She quickly got out of the bathroom, eager to get back to gene, weaving in between the people talking. She found him out side by the pool.
"Hi gene!" she said happily brushing past two girls.
"Ugh. Make way for the trash." A voice came. Melfina turned to the girls she had brushed past, and recognized them as Iris Jennings and Valeria Miller (a/n I couldn't think of anything else!)
"Ya, some people are just so trashy." Valeria said. Both girls laughed.
Melfina glared at them (a/n she can glare! She can!) and said in a quiet voice, "what is your problem?"
Iris glared at melfina and suddenly threw her drink, which looked like punch, onto melfina. Suddenly it got very quiet, and everyone stopped talking. Everyone was staring at the three girls. Melfina looked down at her, actually Aisha's, dress, and felt her eyes well up.
"Aww. You gonna cry? Boo. Hoo." Iris sneered.
Melfina shook her head and pushed through the throng of people, with Iris and Valeria laughing at her. She ran through the house and outside. Melfina suddenly tripped on her high heels and fell. "Rule number one," she whispered to herself, "never let them see you cry."
"Melfina!" Gene called, running toward the girl on the ground. "Melfina I-" he started. But melfina cut him off.
"Just take me home." She sobbed. "Please."
Gene sighed and helped her up. Gene looked back to the party and saw Harry waving and laughing from the window. Gene rolled his eyes and got into the car.
They rode to melfina's house in silence. Once they arrived melfina quickly got out and ran to the door, going in side. Gene sighed and drove home.
"Mel? That you? How'd your date go?" Jim called from the kitchen.
"Uh...great! I'm just really tired. I'm going to bed now!" melfina called quickly not wanting Jim to see the state she was in. she ran upstairs to her room, threw herself onto her bed, and began to cry.
Awwwwww poor mel-chan! Evil Iris! Grrrr. Oh well.. Review review please!!!! I feel kind of bad when people don't review! (Starts sobbing uncontrollably, Jim comes along and hits me upside the head) oh....hehehehe I'm ok!!! Well I must goooooo bye!!! ^_________^!!
Oh an I don't own outlaw star or she's all that
THANK YOU SO MUCH NEKOSAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 3 The makeover
Melfina woke up around noon on Saturday. ' It's to early.' Melfina thought drowsily. She rubbed her eyes and trudged into the kitchen, where Jim was already cooking pancakes.
"Hey Mel." Jim said cheerfully. Melfina almost always did the cooking, but pancakes were Jim's specialty. "Hi J-J-J-Jim" melfina said stifling a yawn as she did so.
"Today is your big date with gene starwind!" Jim cried happily. Melfina groaned. "Look Jim I know you're really excited I have a date with the most popular guy in school, but he's not my type."
"Oh he's not?" Jim said doubtfully. "No he's not," melfina said. "I'll just tell him I'm sick or something..."
"Whatever." Was Jim's response.
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Iris waited impatiently for Harry to pick up the phone. Iris was shopping for the perfect thing to wear to Hilda's party. She had swung by Harry's house yesterday, but he hadn't been home.
"Hello?" a sleepy voice answered.
"Harry? It's Iris. What is going on with Gene? Why is going out with some art whore???" Iris raged.
"Calm down iris. Good lord. It's nothing we just made a little." Harry paused to chuckle, "bet."
"Bet?" iris asked suspiciously.
"Yes. A bet. But I'm not telling you about it. God. You'd tell the whole damn school." Suddenly there was a female voice in the background, "look iris I've got to go. Later."
"Whatever." Iris said and hung up. So she went back to hunting for the perfect outfit.
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Gene stood confidently outside Melfina's house. He rang the doorbell. Melfina peeked her head outside and said, "yes? Oh...gene!"
"Are you ready?" gene asked.
"Well. Um you see I can't go... because my house is dirty." Melfina lied timidly. 'Oh man' melfina thought. 'I'm so bad at lying'
"Well that's ok. I brought the whole football team to clean your house for you." Gene said with a smile.
Melfina smiled thinking he was joking until she saw the whole football team, except for Harry, walk into her house and start cleaning.
"Uh... I don't really have anything to wear." Melfina said quietly.
"That's where I come in, Gene you owe me big for this!" came a voice from behind Gene. Aisha walked quickly over to melfina.
"Hi I'm aisha. I'm your wardrobe, hair and makeup. Well come on let's get going." Aisha grabbed melfina's hand and pulled her upstairs.
Melfina looked helplessly over at Jim, who had just entered the living room from the kitchen.
Jim looked a melfina then at Gene. "Uh...I'm Jim."
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"No, no, no, no. Your hair length doesn't frame your face nicely." Aisha said. "Hey do you have any scissors?"
Melfina gulped and pointed to the desk.
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It had been almost a half and hour later. 'We're going to be late.' Gene thought impatiently. Suddenly Aisha walked down the stairs in her new party dress, which was exactly like the old one, only it had slits up the side. "May I present the new melfina." Aisha smiled.
Melfina nervously walked down the stairs. Her long black hair had been cut to chin length except for two long sections that went past her shoulders. She was wearing a pale pink dress that was cut much like Aisha's; only it was a bit shorter. With strappy high-heeled sandals, the same color as her dress, melfina walked wobbly. With pale pink eye shadow and lipstick melfina felt silly. But she looked beautiful.
"You look beautiful." Gene said smiling.
"By daddy." Melfina called uncertainly. And the walked out the door, got in Gene's black mustang, and drove off to the party.
"Oh boy. I hope melfina doesn't get into trouble." Thought Jim, standing in the doorway a minute longer before coming inside.
Jim suddenly opened the door and let the football team out. Rolling his eyes Jim slammed the door.
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Melfina went to the bathroom, walking in happy bouncy steps. She had been at Hilda's house for an hour now, and she hated to admit it but she was having the time of her life. She quickly got out of the bathroom, eager to get back to gene, weaving in between the people talking. She found him out side by the pool.
"Hi gene!" she said happily brushing past two girls.
"Ugh. Make way for the trash." A voice came. Melfina turned to the girls she had brushed past, and recognized them as Iris Jennings and Valeria Miller (a/n I couldn't think of anything else!)
"Ya, some people are just so trashy." Valeria said. Both girls laughed.
Melfina glared at them (a/n she can glare! She can!) and said in a quiet voice, "what is your problem?"
Iris glared at melfina and suddenly threw her drink, which looked like punch, onto melfina. Suddenly it got very quiet, and everyone stopped talking. Everyone was staring at the three girls. Melfina looked down at her, actually Aisha's, dress, and felt her eyes well up.
"Aww. You gonna cry? Boo. Hoo." Iris sneered.
Melfina shook her head and pushed through the throng of people, with Iris and Valeria laughing at her. She ran through the house and outside. Melfina suddenly tripped on her high heels and fell. "Rule number one," she whispered to herself, "never let them see you cry."
"Melfina!" Gene called, running toward the girl on the ground. "Melfina I-" he started. But melfina cut him off.
"Just take me home." She sobbed. "Please."
Gene sighed and helped her up. Gene looked back to the party and saw Harry waving and laughing from the window. Gene rolled his eyes and got into the car.
They rode to melfina's house in silence. Once they arrived melfina quickly got out and ran to the door, going in side. Gene sighed and drove home.
"Mel? That you? How'd your date go?" Jim called from the kitchen.
"Uh...great! I'm just really tired. I'm going to bed now!" melfina called quickly not wanting Jim to see the state she was in. she ran upstairs to her room, threw herself onto her bed, and began to cry.
Awwwwww poor mel-chan! Evil Iris! Grrrr. Oh well.. Review review please!!!! I feel kind of bad when people don't review! (Starts sobbing uncontrollably, Jim comes along and hits me upside the head) oh....hehehehe I'm ok!!! Well I must goooooo bye!!! ^_________^!!