Sorry this one took so long, I've been busy, and I also rediscovered the
game Final Fantasy VII. That is a great game. I originally had one fairly
long chapter, but then I really wanted to get something out for my 3
reviewers so they wouldn't lose interest, so I cut it up into 2 shorter
chapters. The drawing should be out fairly soon, in the meantime read
this, and review. This is my first fight scene, so I didn't really know
what to do, so be constructively critical, and give suggestions.
A/N- Whenever I use -text- it is someone thinking to themselves, and 'This is telepathic', okay?
Disclaimer:: Now why would I be doing this if I owned DBZ?
Chapter 2:: Junior finals
"Good thing Goten and Trunks were in opposite sides of the draw, otherwise we would've missed the only real fight in the junior tournament." Gohan was obviously happy he got to see his brother fight in a tournament.
"You mean they're that good? If they are as good as you say, then they might be almost as strong as I was when I won the junior division seven years ago!"
"Err, Videl, I think that may not be quite true"
"What do you mean?"
"Just watch, and you'll see."
"Wow! This is amazing! Both Goten and Trunks have made it to the finals without taking one punch! This is incredible! We can only imagine how intense this battle is going to be!" The announcer yelled this, and was met by an ecstatic crowd who couldn't wait to see these two little guys go at it. Little did they know, this fight would be much more amazing than any of them could imagine.
"Finally, a worthwhile fight to watch!" said Krillin as he yawned. He had almost fallen asleep in all of the previous matches, especially since the junior division has no qualifying round, so there were over twice as many participants, and only Trunks and Goten managed to put on a show.
-If Trunks doesn't manage to defeat that brat of Kakarot, he can expect some special one on one with me in the Gravity Room!- thought Vegeta
"Hey Goten! You ready to lose now!" Yelled Trunks
"No! I wanna buy my toys!!"
"You know, you can still buy toys with the two million"
Goten got the confused look on his face that seemed to run in his family, then all of a sudden, the announcer yelled "FIGHT!" and Trunks came rushing at him. In the time it took Videl to blink, Goten yelled "NO FAIR TRUNKS!" and turned super, rushing back at Trunks.
"What just happened? One second Trunks was rushing at an unexpecting Goten, then next, Goten is rushing at him with golden hair! Gohan, WHAT IS GOING ON?!" asked a very confused Videl
"Hold on, just watch this fight, it should be a good one" Gohan said, knowing very well that this would completely change Videl's view of a "good fight"
Once Trunks saw Goten go super, he did as well, understanding the pathetic time limit of 30 minutes. The clashed together, in a match of flying fists and feet that amazed ALL of the spectators, including the Z fighters, one pink man and a purple man, and even the usually uninterested redhead. The battle appeared to be a stalemate, then, to the astonishment of the crowd, the two boys started hovering up very slowly. "I thought that flying thing was a trick, that looks plenty real to me!" noted one baffled spectator. Realizing his current tactics weren't working, Trunks pulled away and fired a ki blast right at Goten, who just smiled and fired one of his own to meet it. They met with a bright light, causing the spectators to look away. When some of the light subsided, the blasts from Goten and Trunks were equal distances apart. Both young fighters flared up their kis even higher, but neither gained any ground. Meanwhile, all of the Z fighters were incredible impressed at the strength the boys had. Goten was finally starting to gain the upper hand when the announcer yelled "This has been a truly great battle, but unfortunately, if it does not end within 5 minutes, the winner will be determined by the judges, and at this rate, that will be one difficult decision!"
"Oh great, this lousy time limit is preventing us from having a good fight!" moaned Trunks
"I guess this means we should have one last go at it, huh Trunks?"
At this, they both jumped to opposite sides of the ring. Goku looked very excited, but somewhat concerned for his son, as he realized what Trunks and Goten were doing, knowing that if Trunks was anything like Vegeta, he would show no mercy if he started to gain the upper hand. -At least Goten did show he had something left with that last charge he did- thought Goku.
-I can't let my daddy down! He looks really worried, so I'll just have to beat Trunks to show my daddy that I'm really strong too!-
-Oh great, Goten is getting hyped up. My dad is going to KILL me if I don't beat him, but I just don't have anything left in me. Oh well, here goes.-
With all of his speed, Trunks charged at a waiting Goten, who managed to barely keep a step ahead of the desperate Trunks, who was now just being careless.
"What does that brat think he is doing out there?! He is being an embarrassment to himself, our family, and the whole Saiy-" At this, Gohan planted his hand over Vegeta's mouth, in order to not alert Videl to the existence of Saiyans. Of course, Vegeta was not at all happy with this, and jumped away, screaming "GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF ME YOU WORTHLESS BAKA!"
While this was going on, Goten decided to capitalize on Trunks' desperation, and kneed him in the gut when there was an opening. Trunks doubled over, and Goten continued his attack, all the while thinking -For daddy! For daddy!- Once Trunks got near the edge of the ring, he jumped out of the way of the furiously attacking Goten, who fell right off the ring. "HA Kakarot, your brat lost to a simple trick like that! That is pathetic!" taunted Vegeta, as he waited for the announcement.
Videl looked upset "Poor Goten, he almost won, too. There's always next time."
Gohan just smiled. "What are you smiling about, boy? Your precious little brother just lost!" "Oh did he?" Vegeta did not look happy at this comment, saying "just listen boy!"
The announcer started to run over to the other side of the ring where Goten fell, claiming "Trunks is the junior world champ.i.o.." His sentence drifted off, when he saw the sight before him. There was Goten, hovering millimeters off the ground, waiting impatiently. "I did not lose! I was waiting for you to come so I could show you where I stopped myself!"
*A/N Did anyone think that Goten lost right there?
"Oh my! My mistake folks! It appears that Goten is still in this, using some sort of martial arts trick to stay off the grass!" at this, the crowd started cheering madly, the fight of the century would continue!
"It's not a trick, it's flying!" pouted Goten "Can we get back to our fight now?"
"Oh, of course! But you only have 1 minute left!"
"HA!, even if your brat stayed in this time, there's no way he can finish this in one minute!" gloated Vegeta in his usually overconfident manner.
"Trunks, that was mean!"
"It's not MY fault you're such a dummy, let's fight!"
This insult was it. Goten was sick of Trunks and his daddy insult his family. Goten pushed his ki up ridiculously high for anyone, let alone a little boy, even a little demi-saiyan. He charged at a bewildered Trunks, attacking with relentless speed and precision, driving Trunks to the side of the ring. Trunks tried to run, but there would be no quick escapes this time, as Goten grabbed his leg with faster than eye speeds, and threw Trunks out of the ring. Trunks crashed into the wall, making a hole about ten feet deep. Horrified gasps came from the audience, as the announcer gravely said, "This was an incredible fight down to the end, but Goten must be disqualified for excessive force, and perhaps killing Trunks, after we pull him out of the rubble." As if on cue, Trunks crawled out of the hole, mumbling "I'm fine, I'm fine" The shocked announcer shouted, "It seems that Trunks is okay, so GOTEN IS THE NEW JUNIOR WORLD CHAMPION!" This was received by shouts and cheers, and a certain reaction from two off-colored strangers known as Shin and Kabito.
'If the children are capable of that much, we can only assume how much stronger the adults are!'
'I don't know Supreme Kai, I doubt we will find anyone capable of handling the likes of Majin Buu at this tournament, after all.'
'You might be surprised Kabito, don't underestimate them, especially the Saiyans.'
The Z-Fighters all congratulated Goten on his well-earned victory, especially Videl, who just couldn't believe what she saw. Vegeta, on the other hand, was giving Trunks and earful. "HOW COULD YOU LOSE TO THE CLOWN'S YOUNGEST BRAT?!" Vegeta was mad, to put it lightly. "YOU WERE MILLIMETERS AWAY FROM WINNING, BUT YOU PUT YOUR GUARD DOWN AND ASSUMED HE HAD FALLEN!"
"Umm Vegeta?" Gohan interjected.
"What do you want?" was his reply trying to sound as menacing as possible.
"Weren't you gloating that Trunks had won when Goten fell?"
"Shut up brat!"
"Oh well"
Once Gohan left Vegeta, Videl took this opportunity to once again drill Gohan about his family and friends. "GOHAN! How on earth did Trunks survive that? Never mind all that other stuff?"
"Umm..err...I think..I'll tell you.umm.after the tournament!" -That should be good, then she will have already seen plenty of things out of the ordinary for it not to be THAT hard to believe, including her father getting the beating he deserves.-
"You'd better, or you'll be in BIG TROUBLE Gohan"
"I know! I know!" he yelled defensively
"ATTENTION ALL QUALIFIED PARTICIPANTS, THE DRAWING WILL OCCUR IN THE SAME AREA AS THE QUALIFYING ROUND IN 15 MINUTES!"
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Oooh, Trunks lost! I'm sorry for all you Trunks fans, but Goten is just too cute! I had to have him win! And I mean, doing it to make his daddy proud of him, how could I not have him win? A second reason is that I wanted to give Vegeta's pride a punch in the gut. Oh well, review and all that stuff, and the next chapter should be out soon.
Next Chapter:: The drawing occurs, now the tournament is set up! Where will our heroes be, and most importantly, who gets the chance to beat the crap out of Hercule???
A/N- Whenever I use -text- it is someone thinking to themselves, and 'This is telepathic', okay?
Disclaimer:: Now why would I be doing this if I owned DBZ?
Chapter 2:: Junior finals
"Good thing Goten and Trunks were in opposite sides of the draw, otherwise we would've missed the only real fight in the junior tournament." Gohan was obviously happy he got to see his brother fight in a tournament.
"You mean they're that good? If they are as good as you say, then they might be almost as strong as I was when I won the junior division seven years ago!"
"Err, Videl, I think that may not be quite true"
"What do you mean?"
"Just watch, and you'll see."
"Wow! This is amazing! Both Goten and Trunks have made it to the finals without taking one punch! This is incredible! We can only imagine how intense this battle is going to be!" The announcer yelled this, and was met by an ecstatic crowd who couldn't wait to see these two little guys go at it. Little did they know, this fight would be much more amazing than any of them could imagine.
"Finally, a worthwhile fight to watch!" said Krillin as he yawned. He had almost fallen asleep in all of the previous matches, especially since the junior division has no qualifying round, so there were over twice as many participants, and only Trunks and Goten managed to put on a show.
-If Trunks doesn't manage to defeat that brat of Kakarot, he can expect some special one on one with me in the Gravity Room!- thought Vegeta
"Hey Goten! You ready to lose now!" Yelled Trunks
"No! I wanna buy my toys!!"
"You know, you can still buy toys with the two million"
Goten got the confused look on his face that seemed to run in his family, then all of a sudden, the announcer yelled "FIGHT!" and Trunks came rushing at him. In the time it took Videl to blink, Goten yelled "NO FAIR TRUNKS!" and turned super, rushing back at Trunks.
"What just happened? One second Trunks was rushing at an unexpecting Goten, then next, Goten is rushing at him with golden hair! Gohan, WHAT IS GOING ON?!" asked a very confused Videl
"Hold on, just watch this fight, it should be a good one" Gohan said, knowing very well that this would completely change Videl's view of a "good fight"
Once Trunks saw Goten go super, he did as well, understanding the pathetic time limit of 30 minutes. The clashed together, in a match of flying fists and feet that amazed ALL of the spectators, including the Z fighters, one pink man and a purple man, and even the usually uninterested redhead. The battle appeared to be a stalemate, then, to the astonishment of the crowd, the two boys started hovering up very slowly. "I thought that flying thing was a trick, that looks plenty real to me!" noted one baffled spectator. Realizing his current tactics weren't working, Trunks pulled away and fired a ki blast right at Goten, who just smiled and fired one of his own to meet it. They met with a bright light, causing the spectators to look away. When some of the light subsided, the blasts from Goten and Trunks were equal distances apart. Both young fighters flared up their kis even higher, but neither gained any ground. Meanwhile, all of the Z fighters were incredible impressed at the strength the boys had. Goten was finally starting to gain the upper hand when the announcer yelled "This has been a truly great battle, but unfortunately, if it does not end within 5 minutes, the winner will be determined by the judges, and at this rate, that will be one difficult decision!"
"Oh great, this lousy time limit is preventing us from having a good fight!" moaned Trunks
"I guess this means we should have one last go at it, huh Trunks?"
At this, they both jumped to opposite sides of the ring. Goku looked very excited, but somewhat concerned for his son, as he realized what Trunks and Goten were doing, knowing that if Trunks was anything like Vegeta, he would show no mercy if he started to gain the upper hand. -At least Goten did show he had something left with that last charge he did- thought Goku.
-I can't let my daddy down! He looks really worried, so I'll just have to beat Trunks to show my daddy that I'm really strong too!-
-Oh great, Goten is getting hyped up. My dad is going to KILL me if I don't beat him, but I just don't have anything left in me. Oh well, here goes.-
With all of his speed, Trunks charged at a waiting Goten, who managed to barely keep a step ahead of the desperate Trunks, who was now just being careless.
"What does that brat think he is doing out there?! He is being an embarrassment to himself, our family, and the whole Saiy-" At this, Gohan planted his hand over Vegeta's mouth, in order to not alert Videl to the existence of Saiyans. Of course, Vegeta was not at all happy with this, and jumped away, screaming "GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF ME YOU WORTHLESS BAKA!"
While this was going on, Goten decided to capitalize on Trunks' desperation, and kneed him in the gut when there was an opening. Trunks doubled over, and Goten continued his attack, all the while thinking -For daddy! For daddy!- Once Trunks got near the edge of the ring, he jumped out of the way of the furiously attacking Goten, who fell right off the ring. "HA Kakarot, your brat lost to a simple trick like that! That is pathetic!" taunted Vegeta, as he waited for the announcement.
Videl looked upset "Poor Goten, he almost won, too. There's always next time."
Gohan just smiled. "What are you smiling about, boy? Your precious little brother just lost!" "Oh did he?" Vegeta did not look happy at this comment, saying "just listen boy!"
The announcer started to run over to the other side of the ring where Goten fell, claiming "Trunks is the junior world champ.i.o.." His sentence drifted off, when he saw the sight before him. There was Goten, hovering millimeters off the ground, waiting impatiently. "I did not lose! I was waiting for you to come so I could show you where I stopped myself!"
*A/N Did anyone think that Goten lost right there?
"Oh my! My mistake folks! It appears that Goten is still in this, using some sort of martial arts trick to stay off the grass!" at this, the crowd started cheering madly, the fight of the century would continue!
"It's not a trick, it's flying!" pouted Goten "Can we get back to our fight now?"
"Oh, of course! But you only have 1 minute left!"
"HA!, even if your brat stayed in this time, there's no way he can finish this in one minute!" gloated Vegeta in his usually overconfident manner.
"Trunks, that was mean!"
"It's not MY fault you're such a dummy, let's fight!"
This insult was it. Goten was sick of Trunks and his daddy insult his family. Goten pushed his ki up ridiculously high for anyone, let alone a little boy, even a little demi-saiyan. He charged at a bewildered Trunks, attacking with relentless speed and precision, driving Trunks to the side of the ring. Trunks tried to run, but there would be no quick escapes this time, as Goten grabbed his leg with faster than eye speeds, and threw Trunks out of the ring. Trunks crashed into the wall, making a hole about ten feet deep. Horrified gasps came from the audience, as the announcer gravely said, "This was an incredible fight down to the end, but Goten must be disqualified for excessive force, and perhaps killing Trunks, after we pull him out of the rubble." As if on cue, Trunks crawled out of the hole, mumbling "I'm fine, I'm fine" The shocked announcer shouted, "It seems that Trunks is okay, so GOTEN IS THE NEW JUNIOR WORLD CHAMPION!" This was received by shouts and cheers, and a certain reaction from two off-colored strangers known as Shin and Kabito.
'If the children are capable of that much, we can only assume how much stronger the adults are!'
'I don't know Supreme Kai, I doubt we will find anyone capable of handling the likes of Majin Buu at this tournament, after all.'
'You might be surprised Kabito, don't underestimate them, especially the Saiyans.'
The Z-Fighters all congratulated Goten on his well-earned victory, especially Videl, who just couldn't believe what she saw. Vegeta, on the other hand, was giving Trunks and earful. "HOW COULD YOU LOSE TO THE CLOWN'S YOUNGEST BRAT?!" Vegeta was mad, to put it lightly. "YOU WERE MILLIMETERS AWAY FROM WINNING, BUT YOU PUT YOUR GUARD DOWN AND ASSUMED HE HAD FALLEN!"
"Umm Vegeta?" Gohan interjected.
"What do you want?" was his reply trying to sound as menacing as possible.
"Weren't you gloating that Trunks had won when Goten fell?"
"Shut up brat!"
"Oh well"
Once Gohan left Vegeta, Videl took this opportunity to once again drill Gohan about his family and friends. "GOHAN! How on earth did Trunks survive that? Never mind all that other stuff?"
"Umm..err...I think..I'll tell you.umm.after the tournament!" -That should be good, then she will have already seen plenty of things out of the ordinary for it not to be THAT hard to believe, including her father getting the beating he deserves.-
"You'd better, or you'll be in BIG TROUBLE Gohan"
"I know! I know!" he yelled defensively
"ATTENTION ALL QUALIFIED PARTICIPANTS, THE DRAWING WILL OCCUR IN THE SAME AREA AS THE QUALIFYING ROUND IN 15 MINUTES!"
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Oooh, Trunks lost! I'm sorry for all you Trunks fans, but Goten is just too cute! I had to have him win! And I mean, doing it to make his daddy proud of him, how could I not have him win? A second reason is that I wanted to give Vegeta's pride a punch in the gut. Oh well, review and all that stuff, and the next chapter should be out soon.
Next Chapter:: The drawing occurs, now the tournament is set up! Where will our heroes be, and most importantly, who gets the chance to beat the crap out of Hercule???