Haha, well he's chapter 4…I'm still working on another chapter, I'll update
soon!!!!Enjoy!!!This is from Raie's Point of View
Chapter 4-As it all comes together
((Raie))
Something was different. Why was the dorm so cold? Had Ginny left the window open again? And why was my bed so hard? And was it just me, or was this blanket ichy? I woke, but kept my eyes closed, trying to continue a dream I had had about Snape. I head a distant tapping.
"Someone get that," I mumbled. I heard someone stir. The tapping stopped.
I didn't know what time it was, and I automatically turned to look at my bedside table. It wasn't there. I shrugged and rolled over. Wait a second.I sat up so abruptly that I threw the blanket half way across the room.
"You're awake?" said a voice. I turned around to see Snape, sitting at his desk, stirring tea.
If it would have been another teacher, I would have panicked, but this was Snape, and I stayed calm.
I positioned myself on the couch, so I could face him.
"Sir, not to be rude, but what exactly am I doing here?" I asked, staring at his handsome face.
"You fell asleep in the hall, and I could not leave you there for Peeves to pick on," he said, sipping at his tea.
I half wanted to kiss him, and half wanted to slap him. He could have woke me up, but I am extremely happy he didn't.
"Should I go to breakfast?" I asked.
"It's only 6:30, breakfast doesn't start for another hour," he said, absentmindedly knocking papers off his desk.
I got up, and helped him pick them up.
The first one I picked up was Neville's. He had received a 29/50.
"I am in no position to ask," I started. He immediately looked up, "but what is it you have against Neville?" I finished, shoving the paper under his nose.
"He is a daft, and thick-headed," he said, not looking up at me.
"You sound absolutely childish," I answered him, annoyed with his response. No matter how much I was intrigued my him, I thought his answer was pathetic.
"What's that?"he said sharply, looking up at me, and staring into my eyes.
"He would do better if you didn't give him such a hard time," I said, crossing my arms.
"You think I give Mr. Longbottom a hard time?"he sneered at me, and it was so mean, it actually scared me.
"Absolutely, you give all the students a hard time, but especially Gryffindors," I said, narrowing my eyes. And he actually looked surprised.
" I don't give you a hard time, do I?he asked, quickly looking down at his stack of papers…and then, I know I saw it, but a tinge of crimson passed over is cheek…and I smiled.
"What are you smirking at?" he asked.
"Nothing…" I said, and turned toward the dungeon door.
"Neville's still a daft though…" he snickered.
"Ugh!!!"I yelled, throwing up my hands. I immediately opened the door, but Snape stoped me.
"Wait," he started,"I'm sorry," and he sincerely looked it. I melted and caved in. I stayed.
I made my way over to the chair infront of his desk.
"You're staying?" he asked.
"I'll forgive you," I said, not looking at him, all though I wanted to.
"But honestly, sir, what do you have against Neville, or Ron, or Hermione?" I asked, finally looking at him.
"Nothing,"he said.
"Yes you…" I stopped, I felt something, that made the hair on the back of my neck stand up.
"Is it just me, or is it suddenly colder in here."I whispered. It was kind of creepy.
"Go to your dorm," Snape said, suddenly, grasping his left arm.
"Why?"I started.
"Just go Miss. Black," I saw the fear in his eyes. I immediately fled the dungeons and made my way up to the Gryffindor Tower.
Haha, this was a bad chapter, I tried…I will update chapter 5 soon ,I hope!!!!!
Chapter 4-As it all comes together
((Raie))
Something was different. Why was the dorm so cold? Had Ginny left the window open again? And why was my bed so hard? And was it just me, or was this blanket ichy? I woke, but kept my eyes closed, trying to continue a dream I had had about Snape. I head a distant tapping.
"Someone get that," I mumbled. I heard someone stir. The tapping stopped.
I didn't know what time it was, and I automatically turned to look at my bedside table. It wasn't there. I shrugged and rolled over. Wait a second.I sat up so abruptly that I threw the blanket half way across the room.
"You're awake?" said a voice. I turned around to see Snape, sitting at his desk, stirring tea.
If it would have been another teacher, I would have panicked, but this was Snape, and I stayed calm.
I positioned myself on the couch, so I could face him.
"Sir, not to be rude, but what exactly am I doing here?" I asked, staring at his handsome face.
"You fell asleep in the hall, and I could not leave you there for Peeves to pick on," he said, sipping at his tea.
I half wanted to kiss him, and half wanted to slap him. He could have woke me up, but I am extremely happy he didn't.
"Should I go to breakfast?" I asked.
"It's only 6:30, breakfast doesn't start for another hour," he said, absentmindedly knocking papers off his desk.
I got up, and helped him pick them up.
The first one I picked up was Neville's. He had received a 29/50.
"I am in no position to ask," I started. He immediately looked up, "but what is it you have against Neville?" I finished, shoving the paper under his nose.
"He is a daft, and thick-headed," he said, not looking up at me.
"You sound absolutely childish," I answered him, annoyed with his response. No matter how much I was intrigued my him, I thought his answer was pathetic.
"What's that?"he said sharply, looking up at me, and staring into my eyes.
"He would do better if you didn't give him such a hard time," I said, crossing my arms.
"You think I give Mr. Longbottom a hard time?"he sneered at me, and it was so mean, it actually scared me.
"Absolutely, you give all the students a hard time, but especially Gryffindors," I said, narrowing my eyes. And he actually looked surprised.
" I don't give you a hard time, do I?he asked, quickly looking down at his stack of papers…and then, I know I saw it, but a tinge of crimson passed over is cheek…and I smiled.
"What are you smirking at?" he asked.
"Nothing…" I said, and turned toward the dungeon door.
"Neville's still a daft though…" he snickered.
"Ugh!!!"I yelled, throwing up my hands. I immediately opened the door, but Snape stoped me.
"Wait," he started,"I'm sorry," and he sincerely looked it. I melted and caved in. I stayed.
I made my way over to the chair infront of his desk.
"You're staying?" he asked.
"I'll forgive you," I said, not looking at him, all though I wanted to.
"But honestly, sir, what do you have against Neville, or Ron, or Hermione?" I asked, finally looking at him.
"Nothing,"he said.
"Yes you…" I stopped, I felt something, that made the hair on the back of my neck stand up.
"Is it just me, or is it suddenly colder in here."I whispered. It was kind of creepy.
"Go to your dorm," Snape said, suddenly, grasping his left arm.
"Why?"I started.
"Just go Miss. Black," I saw the fear in his eyes. I immediately fled the dungeons and made my way up to the Gryffindor Tower.
Haha, this was a bad chapter, I tried…I will update chapter 5 soon ,I hope!!!!!