These are a bunch of poems I wrote. Please read and review them. I would really appricate to hear your thoughts

A poem I came up with last night. Um, my home group type people thought it was good so I decided to put it up here. It is about giving God your all.

Humourous allegory of a beloved Bible story.

More of journal entry, but I'm really fond of it. Feels really natural to read.

Written on a plane ride to Brazil this past summer.

How long will our world remain in this sorry state?

Who doesn't desire a new beginning?

Another one of my favorites. We are all haunted.

Nothing to do with the Bible in any direct sense, though I believe everything has some connection it. This is just one of my many laments for innocence (but my favorite), a yearning to reclaim what is forever taken and forever remembered.

A short story based off the Biblical story of ‘Jesus and the Children’ (Luke 18:15). The tale is told through the playful, sweet, and innocent eyes of five-year-old Benjamin who is venturing into the city for the first time to meet Jesus.

What I want to be for God

A seven-year-old girl living during the Great Depression asks if she can be a princess, and gets a better explanation than anyone expected. One-shot; complete.

Not your average bible story. WARNING: I was extremely bored when I wrote this! Personally I think it is funny but I am insane so that might play a part. Plz R&R!

This is a rather stupid poem, but it's supposed to be funny, so see if you understand. R and R plz! (better summary inside.)

This is a poem written from a humans view about being before God

And Iwatani said, “Let us make packind in pizza’s image, according to pizza’s likeness and let them have dominion over all the ghost of red, the ghost of yellow, the ghost of periwinkle, and the ghost of pink and over all other enemies of the maze.

A little something I put together. Prayer poetry of a sort.

This is another song that i wrote about 4 years ago. It's short so please read and review! Thankyou to all who reviewed my other pieces! You are wonderful!

{One Shot} A spoof version of The Lost Son. Contains pokie use...lol, i know it's random, but i actually did it for a Religious Education assesment at school! R & R!

In the book of Numbers in the Bible, the Hebrews keep displeasing God, who threatens repeatedly to destroy them all. However, Moses intercedes successfully on their behalf.

This is a poem I wrote and it just talks about what I really feel and what I want to do with my life. It is short so please read and review!

I wrote this poem in January when i'd drifted from God and was trying to find my way back.It's written from the view of someone who's wandered away from God and has realised that their lost in sin, and they are just calling out to God.

This is another poem God put on my heart to write.It's from the perspective of him talking to us.

A Sugar Ray song made into a Christain song.

This is actually a song that I wrote. One day God just put this on my heart so I wrote it down. Hope you guys like it.