One child's narration of the Passover.

David expresses his deep love for Cora, but she just keeps walking. What's up with that?

revised version of the poem about depression and hope. please review!

I truly do not expect anyone to read this, you can if you want, but I just had to get a post-argument thought off my chest.

a poem about depression and hope. please review!

The plagues through a child's eyes

a song i made up for jc. please read and review!

its about giving everything to God

Basically about some abusive Christians I know who hide behind self-righteous masks. Touches on hypocrisy, depression- a wondering into who these Christians really are, and why they're fighting me. Again, a hardcore Christian might find this offensive.

the story of Jesus' birth written in poem form. please review!

A religious sonnet written for my final in English

This is a poem that I wrote last night - it's not my best work, but conveys my feelings well. Please R&R! :)

[Short story] The retelling of Abraham's sacrifice, and his forgiveness. Edited 02.13.03.

The story of Samson, the Strong Man. You know how it goes. But some stuff was missing in it. R&R.

A Dialogue between Gideon and God

This is a poem about how God can feel so far away sometimes.... R/R PLEASE!

Some people put their prayers in here. I put here my anger and frustration.

What would it be like to descover that we are all just mindless robots, run by a computer program?

The Antichirst did not rise from Hell, but from an ordinary person. It is the persons (Antichrists) view..of all that has happened.

Lighthearted theological slash.

I wrote this when I was really fed up with the Bible and Christians assuming that everyone else was wrong. You might find this offensive if you're a hard-core Christian. I expect flames!

euh... très dur à expliquer... si vous arrivez à lire tout jusqu'aux derniers vers, traduisez-les moi! thanks!

This is a poem about how someone can be surrounded by "friends" and be so popular and stilll feel empty inside. R/R Please!

This is kind of a poetic tract. It's what all Christians think at times. R/R Please!

This story is all true about me and how I became a Chrisitan. It's a very sad story, I grew up with so much hurt and pain and it's not fun believe me. Please review! No flames please.