I already had the last chapter written, but I went and checked my reviews
and I've decide to make the story longer for two reasons.
So many of you sweet people asked me nicely, and someone pointed out how short it is.
Right after I read the reviews I started coming up with ideas to make it longer. Sorry about trying to KO this story, but I've got like six other little ideas for stories bobbling around my head and I want to get them out.
(TOO MANY IDEAS! AAAAARRRRRGGHHH!!!) She jumps out the window I don't own Inu Yasha, no matter how much my art may look like Rumiko's.
Chapter 6: Dirty Dancing
The dance contest went on for a looooong time. Shippou danced the whole time. He shook his head to shake the sweat off. Someone dressed like the DJ was walking around saying something to the other dancers. He went over to Shippou, "Excuse me, kid, what's your name?"
"I'm Shippou!" he said.
The guy looked over the top of his tinted glasses at him. "Shippou? That's your name??"
"Yep!" Shippou said. The guy sighed and scribbled the name, "Shorty" on his clipboard. "Well congratulations, Shorty, because you're one of the finalists!"
"YEAH!" Shippou said, "What's that?"
The guy walked away and Shippou continued his dancing.
"The dancer's may be hot, but my music is hot-ter" the DJ said to himself. He saw the other DJ coming over, "Hey, Snuggles! Did you get their names?" (An: Don't laugh, in my old science class, there actually was a kid everyone called Snuggles.)
Kagome walked by the DJs. Snuggles read off his clipboard, "The couples are group one, Sangyo and Sata; group two, Koji and Paipu; and group 3, Osore and Nenza. The free-stylers are Sara, Spike, Butterball, Miraji and Shorty.
'Well those names are funny.' Kagome thought. She glanced at the dance floor and gasped. Shippou was dancing in a cross between the backstreet boys, and a street dancer. It was actually kind of interesting to watch.
Shippou watched as other dancers were called off the stage suddenly he realized he was the only one left. "Did I win?" he asked.
"Not yet!" he heard someone say behind him. Then he saw the girl who he asked to teach him how to dance. She and he were the last ones left. "Sorry, Cutiepie," she said. "But I win all of the dance contests I enter."
She did these moves that made her look like Britney Spears +.
Then Shippou did moves like Britney Spears+Aaron Carter.
Then she did something like Britney Spears+Aaron Carter+Kylie Monogue.
Then Shippou did a Aaron Carter+Nick Cannon+street dancing.
But the girl with the tight pants really wanted to win, so she did this Britany Spears+Kylie Monogue+Celine Dione+ J Lo-then she fell on her ass. Then the song ended and the DJ said, "Get up here Shorty!"
Shippou jumped up onto the DJ table and the guy gave him his prize a portable CD player, the new CapricornQueen CD, and rockband Calcium's new CD. He jumped off the turntable and Kagome went up to him. He held up his prizes and said, "Look what I won, Kagome!"
"Cool, Shippou!" she said as he unfolded the instructions and held them upside down.
"How do you turn it on?" he asked.
She switched the instructions around and said, "Push the play button."
"Oh, okay!" he said. He put the ear phones on and turned on. It was so loud Kagome could hear the introduction music to 'What's Your Sign?'
"Shippou, I have to find the others, meet me at the snack table, okay?" she said and left.
Shippou watched her walk off into the crowd. He lifted one of the earphones and said, "Huh?"
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Sorry it took so long to get out. The next one is about what Miroku is up to.
So many of you sweet people asked me nicely, and someone pointed out how short it is.
Right after I read the reviews I started coming up with ideas to make it longer. Sorry about trying to KO this story, but I've got like six other little ideas for stories bobbling around my head and I want to get them out.
(TOO MANY IDEAS! AAAAARRRRRGGHHH!!!) She jumps out the window I don't own Inu Yasha, no matter how much my art may look like Rumiko's.
Chapter 6: Dirty Dancing
The dance contest went on for a looooong time. Shippou danced the whole time. He shook his head to shake the sweat off. Someone dressed like the DJ was walking around saying something to the other dancers. He went over to Shippou, "Excuse me, kid, what's your name?"
"I'm Shippou!" he said.
The guy looked over the top of his tinted glasses at him. "Shippou? That's your name??"
"Yep!" Shippou said. The guy sighed and scribbled the name, "Shorty" on his clipboard. "Well congratulations, Shorty, because you're one of the finalists!"
"YEAH!" Shippou said, "What's that?"
The guy walked away and Shippou continued his dancing.
"The dancer's may be hot, but my music is hot-ter" the DJ said to himself. He saw the other DJ coming over, "Hey, Snuggles! Did you get their names?" (An: Don't laugh, in my old science class, there actually was a kid everyone called Snuggles.)
Kagome walked by the DJs. Snuggles read off his clipboard, "The couples are group one, Sangyo and Sata; group two, Koji and Paipu; and group 3, Osore and Nenza. The free-stylers are Sara, Spike, Butterball, Miraji and Shorty.
'Well those names are funny.' Kagome thought. She glanced at the dance floor and gasped. Shippou was dancing in a cross between the backstreet boys, and a street dancer. It was actually kind of interesting to watch.
Shippou watched as other dancers were called off the stage suddenly he realized he was the only one left. "Did I win?" he asked.
"Not yet!" he heard someone say behind him. Then he saw the girl who he asked to teach him how to dance. She and he were the last ones left. "Sorry, Cutiepie," she said. "But I win all of the dance contests I enter."
She did these moves that made her look like Britney Spears +.
Then Shippou did moves like Britney Spears+Aaron Carter.
Then she did something like Britney Spears+Aaron Carter+Kylie Monogue.
Then Shippou did a Aaron Carter+Nick Cannon+street dancing.
But the girl with the tight pants really wanted to win, so she did this Britany Spears+Kylie Monogue+Celine Dione+ J Lo-then she fell on her ass. Then the song ended and the DJ said, "Get up here Shorty!"
Shippou jumped up onto the DJ table and the guy gave him his prize a portable CD player, the new CapricornQueen CD, and rockband Calcium's new CD. He jumped off the turntable and Kagome went up to him. He held up his prizes and said, "Look what I won, Kagome!"
"Cool, Shippou!" she said as he unfolded the instructions and held them upside down.
"How do you turn it on?" he asked.
She switched the instructions around and said, "Push the play button."
"Oh, okay!" he said. He put the ear phones on and turned on. It was so loud Kagome could hear the introduction music to 'What's Your Sign?'
"Shippou, I have to find the others, meet me at the snack table, okay?" she said and left.
Shippou watched her walk off into the crowd. He lifted one of the earphones and said, "Huh?"
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Sorry it took so long to get out. The next one is about what Miroku is up to.