My Mistake
A/N : I know some of you are pretty mad because I made Logan a transgenic? Why? It doesn't change anything between Max and Him? They aren't related. And someone, just because my quotation marks look like « this » they're not reading it? Thats a silly reason not to read it. I don't know how my quotation marks got like that, and I have no idea how to change them, so if you don't want to read it because it looks like that, don't. And since Logan is an X5, he can heal (when he gets his tattoo removed, thats why it doesn't turn red). And its good that Ames is out of the picture.. Or is it? Anywhoo, thanks for the critisism, it makes me become better as a writer. Also, sorry for mis-spelling and, and also I missed a space between andcontinued, it should have been and continued.
Disclaimer : All character's belong to James Cameron and Charles Eglee.
Where we left off..
Clemente sat there by himself. He didn't know what to do. These.. 'Freaks' as people called them, maybe they really did have feelings? That girl had risked her life for him, she had saved his life. And now they have to kill them. He thought back to when those three people came out. They were crying. One of them was trying to go back in. She kept saying « Please don't kill them, please don't kill them. » As if she really cared for them. And the proprietor of the company Jam Pony, Normal, I think his name was, he said they weren't monsters. Maybe if we just gave them a chance.
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It had been 2 days since the 'Freaks' had been in the building, and Clemente had been sent home after White had tried to kill him. After What was dead, they took him to the morgue and had examined his blood closely. He didn't have a blood type. His blood was like no blood they had ever seen. It had every type of chemical in it you could imagine. Like, hydrogene, Lithium, Neon, and so on. Every single chemical known to man, and many unidentified ones too. But now he is frozen while the scientist's try to figure out what is up with him. Hmmmm, they also said something about him being..
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« Allright y'all listen up! » Max screamed. She was starting to get worried, everyone was starting to get hungry. She wasn't though, but still everyone else needed food.
For the last two days she had gone into withdrawl. She had sworn that after her sister had been shot, she would never touch a gun. But just as a spurr of the moment, she had grabbed Clemente's gun and started shooting at White. Logan had told her it was ok, it was either her or him, and better him. But still, she would have rather killed him some other way. 'But better stop worrying about him now,' Max though, 'I have better things to worry about, besides dead people.'
Max got up from being in a room on the floor. It was a mess. This room looked like it used to ba an office. There was hundreds of old floppy disc's all over the floor. Max picked some up. 'L'addressé du presidente, Monsieur A.W.' It read. «What kinda whacko language is that? » Max said to herself. Just then, Logan came in. Max still had mixed feelings about him. Besides, he had lied to her, he didn't have a reason to. But when-ever she looked into his eyes, she got lost and all dreamy feeling. She sighed. 'Get out of it Maxie,' she thought to herself. She didn't know why, but wheneve she got around Logan, she got all teenager feeling, like it was some petty crush. But she knew it wasn't, it was true love.(Max goes off into a dreamy state) « Max, » Logan said. « I love you, Marry me. » Max took in a deep breath! This can't be true, because its my dream come true! « Yes Logan, yes, I love you, I love you, and I will forever! »
« Max, » Logan said, « Max, Max, Max, Max, » She suddenly snapped awake.
« Um, yeah yeah. » She said. 'Man, not again! Stupid, stupid, stupid.'
« What were you doing? » he questioned her, also he was lookign at her funny, as if she was crazy.
« Looking at these disc's. Whats does 'L'addressé du presidente, Monsieur A.W.' mean? I think its in some kinda language. You probably know though. » Max had no idea how she sounded after just coming out of a dreamy state, but she thought pretty stupid.
« Well, it looks like french. And if it is, it would mean 'The address of the President, Mister A.W.' I don't know who that would be. Anyways, the reason I'm here to talk to you, besides just to talk, is that there's a lady out there saying she can get food for us. » Max couldn't believe her ears. « Food? » She repeated.
« Yeah, and she wants to talk to you about getting it, she's also crying too, I don't know why though. » And he took her hand, looked her in the eyes, and smiled, and led her to the woman.
Max's first glance at the woman told her everything she needed to know about her. She was about 5'5, skinny, but had muscles, with short black hair, pouty lips, brown eyes, and was dressed in all blue colors. « You can get us food? » Max said cooly.
« Yes I can. » Replied the woman.
« Wait, lemme see your barcode first. » Max said and walked over to the woman and looked. She had no barcode. 'Just as I thought' Max said to herself. « No barcode, » She said aloud.
« I have no barcode because I'm not a 'Freak' as you would call yourselves.» The woman said steadily, « But I am on your side of the battle. I grew up at Manticore with my father, helping him in his research. But enough about me, do you want food or not? »
« Yes, » Max said.
A/N : So, how did you like it? I hope you liked it better than the other one? Lol, anywhoo, tell me what you think!
A/N : I know some of you are pretty mad because I made Logan a transgenic? Why? It doesn't change anything between Max and Him? They aren't related. And someone, just because my quotation marks look like « this » they're not reading it? Thats a silly reason not to read it. I don't know how my quotation marks got like that, and I have no idea how to change them, so if you don't want to read it because it looks like that, don't. And since Logan is an X5, he can heal (when he gets his tattoo removed, thats why it doesn't turn red). And its good that Ames is out of the picture.. Or is it? Anywhoo, thanks for the critisism, it makes me become better as a writer. Also, sorry for mis-spelling and, and also I missed a space between andcontinued, it should have been and continued.
Disclaimer : All character's belong to James Cameron and Charles Eglee.
Where we left off..
Clemente sat there by himself. He didn't know what to do. These.. 'Freaks' as people called them, maybe they really did have feelings? That girl had risked her life for him, she had saved his life. And now they have to kill them. He thought back to when those three people came out. They were crying. One of them was trying to go back in. She kept saying « Please don't kill them, please don't kill them. » As if she really cared for them. And the proprietor of the company Jam Pony, Normal, I think his name was, he said they weren't monsters. Maybe if we just gave them a chance.
*******************************************
It had been 2 days since the 'Freaks' had been in the building, and Clemente had been sent home after White had tried to kill him. After What was dead, they took him to the morgue and had examined his blood closely. He didn't have a blood type. His blood was like no blood they had ever seen. It had every type of chemical in it you could imagine. Like, hydrogene, Lithium, Neon, and so on. Every single chemical known to man, and many unidentified ones too. But now he is frozen while the scientist's try to figure out what is up with him. Hmmmm, they also said something about him being..
********* ************
« Allright y'all listen up! » Max screamed. She was starting to get worried, everyone was starting to get hungry. She wasn't though, but still everyone else needed food.
For the last two days she had gone into withdrawl. She had sworn that after her sister had been shot, she would never touch a gun. But just as a spurr of the moment, she had grabbed Clemente's gun and started shooting at White. Logan had told her it was ok, it was either her or him, and better him. But still, she would have rather killed him some other way. 'But better stop worrying about him now,' Max though, 'I have better things to worry about, besides dead people.'
Max got up from being in a room on the floor. It was a mess. This room looked like it used to ba an office. There was hundreds of old floppy disc's all over the floor. Max picked some up. 'L'addressé du presidente, Monsieur A.W.' It read. «What kinda whacko language is that? » Max said to herself. Just then, Logan came in. Max still had mixed feelings about him. Besides, he had lied to her, he didn't have a reason to. But when-ever she looked into his eyes, she got lost and all dreamy feeling. She sighed. 'Get out of it Maxie,' she thought to herself. She didn't know why, but wheneve she got around Logan, she got all teenager feeling, like it was some petty crush. But she knew it wasn't, it was true love.(Max goes off into a dreamy state) « Max, » Logan said. « I love you, Marry me. » Max took in a deep breath! This can't be true, because its my dream come true! « Yes Logan, yes, I love you, I love you, and I will forever! »
« Max, » Logan said, « Max, Max, Max, Max, » She suddenly snapped awake.
« Um, yeah yeah. » She said. 'Man, not again! Stupid, stupid, stupid.'
« What were you doing? » he questioned her, also he was lookign at her funny, as if she was crazy.
« Looking at these disc's. Whats does 'L'addressé du presidente, Monsieur A.W.' mean? I think its in some kinda language. You probably know though. » Max had no idea how she sounded after just coming out of a dreamy state, but she thought pretty stupid.
« Well, it looks like french. And if it is, it would mean 'The address of the President, Mister A.W.' I don't know who that would be. Anyways, the reason I'm here to talk to you, besides just to talk, is that there's a lady out there saying she can get food for us. » Max couldn't believe her ears. « Food? » She repeated.
« Yeah, and she wants to talk to you about getting it, she's also crying too, I don't know why though. » And he took her hand, looked her in the eyes, and smiled, and led her to the woman.
Max's first glance at the woman told her everything she needed to know about her. She was about 5'5, skinny, but had muscles, with short black hair, pouty lips, brown eyes, and was dressed in all blue colors. « You can get us food? » Max said cooly.
« Yes I can. » Replied the woman.
« Wait, lemme see your barcode first. » Max said and walked over to the woman and looked. She had no barcode. 'Just as I thought' Max said to herself. « No barcode, » She said aloud.
« I have no barcode because I'm not a 'Freak' as you would call yourselves.» The woman said steadily, « But I am on your side of the battle. I grew up at Manticore with my father, helping him in his research. But enough about me, do you want food or not? »
« Yes, » Max said.
A/N : So, how did you like it? I hope you liked it better than the other one? Lol, anywhoo, tell me what you think!