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I'll just keep everything for myself :) I need to know if I should keep
writing or if I should stop or end it some how. lol I know I make really
small chapters but I'm going to work all night if it's worth it ^_^
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Lifted up his head to see Zelda glancing around nervously. "Zel..What did Darian do?" he asked concern in his caring eyes. "Nothing, Link..I don'y know..where that came from. You just have me all worked up, and I just want to sleep everything away..Ok?" she studdered as she layed down and stared at the ceiling, biting her lip. Godess I hope he believed me..please please say he believed me!
"Zelda I'm so sorry...I know I should have said something I just..Next time, if she says anything, I'll be sure to tell her I don't agree, and that if she is going to talk about you, don't talk about it to me..ok?" Link said, eyes pleading to Zelda for forgiveness. She didn't say anything, so Link crawled over her to the other side to see if she was sleeping, but to his suprise she was fighting back a smile. "What's so funny?" he asked confused. "You," she grinned back. Link pretended to have a look of anger on his face and said," I'm trying to apologize to you, all deep and stuff, and you think..it's funny?"
"Yes," she said inicently. He hugged her, squeezing her to death a broad grin on his face as he burried it into her neck, and said ," Fine, next time I won't apologize missy, then we'll see what happens, hmm?" "No Link , I'm glad you came. I've had a horrible day. What with Darian...and you ignoring me." Link sat up over her and looked down at her as she said this. "No No Link, I didn't mean it like that ." " I didn't know you cared so much. I din't mean to ignore you." " I know, I just want to know,.you know, if she'll change everything..." "Like?" Link inquired. " Link the girl looks like she will kill me if I so much as talk to you. When you hugged me today I think I saw fire coming from her ears.."
Link laughed at that. " I just wish ya'll would be friends. She really is a nice girl. And you know what?" he asked smiling at her again," I don't want to state the obvious, but she is really jealous of you." "Har har, very funny, Link. Why would she be jealous of me? For one I'm two years younger than you, and I mean, no offense, but that would be weird dating you or anything.And second, I'm hideous." "You're not hideous." Link mumbled. "Well then you're the only guy in the world besides...Darien..Who thinks so.." Link was about to burst out laughing, "Yeah, I saw him winking at you ALL throughout dinner." " Lucky me, huh."
"Yep well I'm gonna go to bed, I'll hang out with you all tomorrow ok?" He got up and started to tuck her in playfully, when she asked him, what he thought was a strange question," Link..if you hear anything in my room, or anything suspicious, or something..don't think it's me..." she stopped thinking of the right words. Link noticed she was rubbing her neck. He looked at it harder, when he caught a glimpse of a huge bruise swelling. He grabbed her hand and stared at her neck in shock."Zelda, what happened!"
Chapter 6 ***************************************************************
Lifted up his head to see Zelda glancing around nervously. "Zel..What did Darian do?" he asked concern in his caring eyes. "Nothing, Link..I don'y know..where that came from. You just have me all worked up, and I just want to sleep everything away..Ok?" she studdered as she layed down and stared at the ceiling, biting her lip. Godess I hope he believed me..please please say he believed me!
"Zelda I'm so sorry...I know I should have said something I just..Next time, if she says anything, I'll be sure to tell her I don't agree, and that if she is going to talk about you, don't talk about it to me..ok?" Link said, eyes pleading to Zelda for forgiveness. She didn't say anything, so Link crawled over her to the other side to see if she was sleeping, but to his suprise she was fighting back a smile. "What's so funny?" he asked confused. "You," she grinned back. Link pretended to have a look of anger on his face and said," I'm trying to apologize to you, all deep and stuff, and you think..it's funny?"
"Yes," she said inicently. He hugged her, squeezing her to death a broad grin on his face as he burried it into her neck, and said ," Fine, next time I won't apologize missy, then we'll see what happens, hmm?" "No Link , I'm glad you came. I've had a horrible day. What with Darian...and you ignoring me." Link sat up over her and looked down at her as she said this. "No No Link, I didn't mean it like that ." " I didn't know you cared so much. I din't mean to ignore you." " I know, I just want to know,.you know, if she'll change everything..." "Like?" Link inquired. " Link the girl looks like she will kill me if I so much as talk to you. When you hugged me today I think I saw fire coming from her ears.."
Link laughed at that. " I just wish ya'll would be friends. She really is a nice girl. And you know what?" he asked smiling at her again," I don't want to state the obvious, but she is really jealous of you." "Har har, very funny, Link. Why would she be jealous of me? For one I'm two years younger than you, and I mean, no offense, but that would be weird dating you or anything.And second, I'm hideous." "You're not hideous." Link mumbled. "Well then you're the only guy in the world besides...Darien..Who thinks so.." Link was about to burst out laughing, "Yeah, I saw him winking at you ALL throughout dinner." " Lucky me, huh."
"Yep well I'm gonna go to bed, I'll hang out with you all tomorrow ok?" He got up and started to tuck her in playfully, when she asked him, what he thought was a strange question," Link..if you hear anything in my room, or anything suspicious, or something..don't think it's me..." she stopped thinking of the right words. Link noticed she was rubbing her neck. He looked at it harder, when he caught a glimpse of a huge bruise swelling. He grabbed her hand and stared at her neck in shock."Zelda, what happened!"