Tale of a Summer Girl
A/N: Sorry, sorry, sorryyyyy!!!!! I know it's been more than a month since I have updated, but there is a reason for that!!!!! You see, here school system is different, we are now on Holidays... I wen to the beach, and well... I didn't have a computer to wright and update....... so... sorry!!!!!
And thanks to all reviewers!!!!!! I couldn't believe my eyes when I came back and saw I had more than 20 review for last chapter... wow!!!!! WOW!!! I was smiling all day long!!!! Thanks!!!!
Oh, and this chapter goes dedicated to Icy Stormz, because with her awesome fic (forced love) she inspired me to write a D/Hr fic, instead of my usual L/J.
Warning: this hasn't been betad yet, sorry for the mistakes. Disclaimer: nothing but the plot and the characters you don't recognise , are mine. The rest of the things are Rowling's.
Chapter 4
The next day....
Location: Mexico, Playa del Carmen, El Imperio Encantado, The beach.
Mya looked opened her eyes and was blinded momentarily by the sun. She put her sunglasses on and looked up at the girl who was talking to her.
"So, are you here for the surfing classes too?" asked a smiling girl. She had dirty blonde shoulder-length hair and grey eyes. She was about Hermione's height, which meant she was quite tall.
"yup, but I got a bit early to work on my tan." Hermione replied smiling. She sat up from her lying position. This allowed the new girl to have a better look at Mya.
"OMG! You're Jenny!" the girl said excitedly.
"Technically, yes, Jennifer is my second name. But I'm not the Jenny you think I am. I look like her because she is my aunt, that's all." Hermione answered.
"Oh..." The girl sounded a little disappointed, but then... "Oh! You're Jenny's niece!"
Hermione just laughed. "Right. My name is Hermione, by the way." She said.
"I'm Sofia, also known as Sofi, Poppy, Poppa, or sometimes even Chofi. Please don't call me that one!" She said.
Hermione laughed again. She had a feeling this girl would be easy to befriend. "Sofi it is, then. I go by Mione and Mya too."
"Ok. Mind if I seat there?" She said, pointing at the towel next to her.
"Sure, Jenn had some things to do, so I guess she won't be coming back..."
"So, your aunt is here? Cool!" Sofi said, sitting on the towel.
For the next half an hour the girls chatted happily. Hermione got to know that Sofi turned out to be daughter of a famous American reporter. She, like Hermione, would be spending the whole summer there. She also learnt that Sofi's room was in the same floor as her and from what Sofi had said about a blonde pale skined boy, the Malfoys were too. There where only those three rooms in the last floor.
Finally, the instructor arrived, along with more people. Everyone striped of their clothes except their bathing suits, not bothering to get into the surfing suites because of the high heat, and got their surfing board. The instructor showed them, on the sand, how to stand up when riding a wave and how to find their sweet spot. Then, everyone got into the sea and started swimming, with their boards, to the breaking point of the waves.
Hermione was a complete natural at it. In no time, she was even better than the people who had already had some surfing experience before, while she had had none. As time flew by, most people got out of the sea, too exhausted to go on. They all sat down by the shore, watching the ones left.
"I can't go on any longer, I'll be waiting you where everyone is, ok?" Sofi shouted at Hermione, trying to be heard over the waves.
"ok" Was Hermione's short reply. She was too concentrated on surfing to realise anything. She had been like this since the lesson had started, which proved to be a bad thing because she didn't realised a certain Slytherin there too. Maybe even worst now, because she didn't realise that they where the only ones left surfing.
Then, Hermione saw the chance she had been waiting for all morning, the opportunity to get into a tunnel formed by a wave. Unluckily, the boy had seen the perfect opportunity to surf inside it too. Both of them had momentarily forgotten one of the surfing golden rules, "only one surfer per wave". Both forgot to claim the wave as theirs, a catastrophically mistake.
. Mya got in first, hands touching the water wall beside her. A great amount of adrenaline was going through her veins. She discovered she loved this: the water, the speed, the clashing sounds of the breaking waves not far behind her....
Draco got inside too, only inches behind from Mya. They were both inside the tunnel now (a/n: ok, so that is a bit professional thing, but this is fiction), out of eyesight from the watching people on the beach.
Hermione heard sounds behind her and turned her head. ::Not again!!:: the girl thought grimly.
They eyes met for an entire second. Warm Hazel met cold silver. Hermione shivered, then turned around again.
But it was too late, the tunnel was closing and Hermione hadn't realised it. Malfoy, who couldn't see because of her, tried to speed up, and crashed into Mya's board. Although Draco could keep his balance, Hermione couldn't, and was sent flying up into the air by the impulse of the crash.
This was definitely not Mya's luckiest day, not even near it. Of all places, she had to land over some lonely rocks. Ouch. Blood and blackout, that's what happened.
Malfoy was stunned, this was all his fault. The cute instructor was quick and in no time, got Mya out of the water. Draco followed him, as well as Sofi, to where the nurse was. The Gryffindor's head was covered in blood. She looked awful.
:: this is all my fault, I should have tried to slow down. I've always hated her, but I've never wanted her dead. Oh, god, I'm a murderer. Father will be happy now:: Draco though. He hated mudbloods, just like his father, but hi didn't want to follow his steps as a murderer.
The nurse ordered the instructor to lay Mya on one of the beds, then she immediately started cleaning her wounds. Mya had cracked her head open, a deep gash was on her forehead.
Suddenly, an exact replica of Mya came barging through the door.
"HERMIONE!!!!!!!" she cried, looking at the passed out figure lying on the bed.
Sofia looked up, the tears in her eyes making her eyesight a bit blurry, and saw Jenny's worried face.
The singer got beside the bed and held on to her goddaughter's hand tightly.
"She'll get better, don't worry." The nurse said, in a very professional tone.
"How did this happened?" Asked Jenny, still looking at Mya.
"We were on the surfing lessons and..." Sofi trailed off, not knowing how to continue.
" Our boards crashed and she landed on some rocks." Draco said.
Jenn looked at him and remembered what Mya had said about his family.
"Everyone out." Jenn said, fury was heard in her voice. Her eyes turned stone cold and her elegant and magnificent presence was irradiating authority.
"What? Listen lady, you have no right to order me to get out of my work place." The nurse said, indignantly.
"OUT." Jenn said. Malfoy could have sworn he saw flames in her eyes.
The nurse cowered at her tone and backed out. Sofi looked at her sadly and disappeared. Malfoy was turning his back to go when he heard Jenn again.
"You will stay."
Jenn gilded to the door and closed it shut. She turned again to an almost scared Draco. Almost scared.
"Cure her." She said simply.
"what?" He answered, thinking she had gone nuts.
" I said. Cure. Her." Jenn repeated.
"Wha..?"
"Drop the innocent act Malfoy. I know what you are." Jenn said. "You better cure her, or I'll tell everyone." Jenn threatened him.
Draco was stunned. She wasn't supposed to know about him, or his family. He was confused, but like a real Malfoy, he wouldn't show it.
"Look, even if I wanted to, I couldn't be able to cure her, thats too advanced magic for me." Draco said.
"Then bring someone who can" Jenn said.
::Who the hell does she thinks she is? Huh? No one gives me orders.:: Draco thought. But then he looked at Hermione, lying on the bed unconscious, with that gash on her forehead. Deep down he knew it was his fault, and if anything happened to her, he would surely get it from Harry and Ron. That is, if he was alive after Jenn finished with him.
With a glare he turned around and went to look for his father. He was having tea in one of the restaurants. After quick explanations of the events, Lucius decided to follow Draco. What the teen didn't know was that his father's plans where far from helping Hermione. In fact, if possible he would try to make her suffer even more. She was a mudblood, it would be a pleasure to see her in pain, and besides, his Master would be happy. It would be a way to touch Harry Potter deeply and push him over the edge.
Draco missed the malicious glint in his father's eyes. He directed him to the place where the Grangers Girls (A/N: lol) where.
They found Jenny holding Hermione's hand, with her back to them.
"Now, where is that stupid, worthless, mudblood?" Lucius said. This caused Jenny to turn around.
She looked at him defiantly, arms crossed over her chest and face red with anger.
"Take. That. Back." She snarled.
Lucius was too mesmerised with her beauty to understand what she was saying. When the words finally kicked in, amazement and a bit of... admiration? Crossed his mind. No one had never, ever, dared to talked to him like that. People were usually intimidated by him. This woman was definitely an exception. He liked exceptions. That combined with beauty, an aura of authority, resoluteness, and power, plus her elegant and graceful posture, caused Lucius' mind (he doesn't have a heart) to stop and go blank. This had never happened to him....
But, just like his son, he had been taught to hide any kind of emotions, unless of course, evilness and superiority. His smirking mask was still on when he replied.
"I believe we have a more important issue to discuss." He said, ignoring her order.
At that, Jenn's eyes softened a little and looked at Mya. "Your son did that to her." She answered pointing at Hermione's gash.
"I know you're a wizard. Cure her and that can remain a secret." She said in somewhat of a threat. She wasn't a tinsy winsy bit afraid of him. She had seen evil, she had witness the devil's work on people. Oh she sure had. Where? In Hollywood, of course, it was evil at it's worst form. A land rich in jealousy and envy, ruled by Tyrants. (a/n: lol)
"All right. Step back" He said. Now he really did mean to cure Hermione. Why? Oh, maybe because Jenn was intoxicating him so much he couldn't think properly, and all he knew was he had to obey her? Maybe. Or perhaps was it the fact that, even without magic, she seemed to irradiate more power than Voldemort himself? After all, it was power the reason he followed the Dark Lord. Yeah, maybe it was that too. Whatever it was, he didn't feel like killing Hermione. Not anymore.
He drew out his wand and murmured something. He touched Hermione's forehead with his wand and it healed instantly. He then said another spell to wake Hermione up.
Very slowly, her eyelids opened. Her eyes where unfocused for a while. Then, she turned her head to one side, still a bit dizzy. She saw no one. She turned around and, in front of her stood none other than Lucius Malfoy himself.
"AAAAAAHHH!!!!!" She screamed breaking the silent atmosphere.
"Shhhh Mya. It's ok." Jenn said, walking towards her.
The Malfoys looked from behind how the two girls hugged each other tightly, showing their concern for the other one, showing how much they cared.
Lucius was proud he had done perfectly what Jenn ordered him.
:: What about Narcissa?:: a tiny voice in his head asked. :: to hell with Narcissa.:: A much stronger voice replied simply. While thinking, he had left aside his mask for a fraction of a second.
This time, Draco didn't miss the look on his father's face. Praying to the Gods above him that what he was thinking wasn't true, he looked back at Hermione. She had some tears in her eyes, oh please, was she always this sentimental?
But he couldn't deny the relieved feeling that had crossed his body when she had woken up.
A/N: ok.....please tell me what you think about it. I'm really sorry I couldn't update sooner, but look at the positive side, now I have lived some things which could be included here. I usually put a lot of myself in my stories ( .
Oh, and, I have a question for all of you... would you like me to put some more latino influence here? Like some spanish words (obviously translating them later) and stuff like that? After all, the place they are in is Mexico.... well, you tell me.
Now.... the best part!
Caroline: thanks! Me too...
Eliza: wow! Glad you liked so many things about this story! Lol ( thanks, and sorry for the delay...
SaucySam: thanks!!!! It's nice to hear once in a while that... Lol. Ok, ok, I'll continue for you! Hehe
SaucySam(again): Me too... well, I'll take into account you like clothes, there could always be more accurate descriptions of those... (
Jen: thanks!!!! Hope you like this one too...
15dramaqueen: ok, ok... thanks!
SVZ: that was the whole point!! Lol
SVZ(again): thanks for the encouragement!!!
Crazy Luvolee: thanks!
Stef: Lol. Thanks for the thanks, for the thanks!!!! Lol (. And, your spanish is improving! Really!! You'll have to wait to see Mya singing, sorry. And about the other thing... well Snape will make an appearance soon... or at least I'll try to make him appear soon...... (
MarianneLinley and SarahQuinn: thanks!!!!!!!
Smsangel4ever: THANKS!!!!! Your reviews have been some of the most encouraging and long so far!!!! Sorry about the recital though, you'll have to wait a bit for that one... oh and I know I didn't use your ideas this time, but they really do help!!! So please, please, tell me if you have any other! Lol (, well, thanks for everything...
Ash2006: thanks!!!!!
Avri: thanks!!!! Keep reading... lol (
Holly: thanks!!!! I know... thats why I chose that nickname for her. Glad you liked it!!
Texas Rio Star: okay.... thanks!
Xtremegirl:... and nice review! Lol (
Alexis Mclean: predictable??? * looks dissapointed* really? Was Lucius having a crush on Jenn predictable??? Ok, well, I should have known.. would you liked it better if I killed someone???Lol, thanks
Jowa: thanks!!! Well, I actually took surfing classes this summer, so what I have written isn't just made up, well, not everything, Lol (
GrYfF cHiK: and I'll keep writting if you keep reading what I keep writting... confusing? Lol (
CitriusBabe: As... sounds good! Thanks Abby!!!!!!! Wow, you think this is brilliant?! Jumps up and down thanks!!!
Kickedoutofthegoblet: Wow! Again, you haven't failed to review!!!!!!!! Than you so much!!!! Hehe... hope you did well in your midterms, you'll have to tell me later... if you need help, just ask me k? Send me an email or by review! That will be my thanks for reviewing every chapter and offering for being my beta!! Lol...
The witch: thanks!!!!!
Phew! Done! 17 pages in my Word. Wow!!!!!
Ahora, por favor, review!!!!! (Now pleas review!)
A/N: Sorry, sorry, sorryyyyy!!!!! I know it's been more than a month since I have updated, but there is a reason for that!!!!! You see, here school system is different, we are now on Holidays... I wen to the beach, and well... I didn't have a computer to wright and update....... so... sorry!!!!!
And thanks to all reviewers!!!!!! I couldn't believe my eyes when I came back and saw I had more than 20 review for last chapter... wow!!!!! WOW!!! I was smiling all day long!!!! Thanks!!!!
Oh, and this chapter goes dedicated to Icy Stormz, because with her awesome fic (forced love) she inspired me to write a D/Hr fic, instead of my usual L/J.
Warning: this hasn't been betad yet, sorry for the mistakes. Disclaimer: nothing but the plot and the characters you don't recognise , are mine. The rest of the things are Rowling's.
Chapter 4
The next day....
Location: Mexico, Playa del Carmen, El Imperio Encantado, The beach.
Mya looked opened her eyes and was blinded momentarily by the sun. She put her sunglasses on and looked up at the girl who was talking to her.
"So, are you here for the surfing classes too?" asked a smiling girl. She had dirty blonde shoulder-length hair and grey eyes. She was about Hermione's height, which meant she was quite tall.
"yup, but I got a bit early to work on my tan." Hermione replied smiling. She sat up from her lying position. This allowed the new girl to have a better look at Mya.
"OMG! You're Jenny!" the girl said excitedly.
"Technically, yes, Jennifer is my second name. But I'm not the Jenny you think I am. I look like her because she is my aunt, that's all." Hermione answered.
"Oh..." The girl sounded a little disappointed, but then... "Oh! You're Jenny's niece!"
Hermione just laughed. "Right. My name is Hermione, by the way." She said.
"I'm Sofia, also known as Sofi, Poppy, Poppa, or sometimes even Chofi. Please don't call me that one!" She said.
Hermione laughed again. She had a feeling this girl would be easy to befriend. "Sofi it is, then. I go by Mione and Mya too."
"Ok. Mind if I seat there?" She said, pointing at the towel next to her.
"Sure, Jenn had some things to do, so I guess she won't be coming back..."
"So, your aunt is here? Cool!" Sofi said, sitting on the towel.
For the next half an hour the girls chatted happily. Hermione got to know that Sofi turned out to be daughter of a famous American reporter. She, like Hermione, would be spending the whole summer there. She also learnt that Sofi's room was in the same floor as her and from what Sofi had said about a blonde pale skined boy, the Malfoys were too. There where only those three rooms in the last floor.
Finally, the instructor arrived, along with more people. Everyone striped of their clothes except their bathing suits, not bothering to get into the surfing suites because of the high heat, and got their surfing board. The instructor showed them, on the sand, how to stand up when riding a wave and how to find their sweet spot. Then, everyone got into the sea and started swimming, with their boards, to the breaking point of the waves.
Hermione was a complete natural at it. In no time, she was even better than the people who had already had some surfing experience before, while she had had none. As time flew by, most people got out of the sea, too exhausted to go on. They all sat down by the shore, watching the ones left.
"I can't go on any longer, I'll be waiting you where everyone is, ok?" Sofi shouted at Hermione, trying to be heard over the waves.
"ok" Was Hermione's short reply. She was too concentrated on surfing to realise anything. She had been like this since the lesson had started, which proved to be a bad thing because she didn't realised a certain Slytherin there too. Maybe even worst now, because she didn't realise that they where the only ones left surfing.
Then, Hermione saw the chance she had been waiting for all morning, the opportunity to get into a tunnel formed by a wave. Unluckily, the boy had seen the perfect opportunity to surf inside it too. Both of them had momentarily forgotten one of the surfing golden rules, "only one surfer per wave". Both forgot to claim the wave as theirs, a catastrophically mistake.
. Mya got in first, hands touching the water wall beside her. A great amount of adrenaline was going through her veins. She discovered she loved this: the water, the speed, the clashing sounds of the breaking waves not far behind her....
Draco got inside too, only inches behind from Mya. They were both inside the tunnel now (a/n: ok, so that is a bit professional thing, but this is fiction), out of eyesight from the watching people on the beach.
Hermione heard sounds behind her and turned her head. ::Not again!!:: the girl thought grimly.
They eyes met for an entire second. Warm Hazel met cold silver. Hermione shivered, then turned around again.
But it was too late, the tunnel was closing and Hermione hadn't realised it. Malfoy, who couldn't see because of her, tried to speed up, and crashed into Mya's board. Although Draco could keep his balance, Hermione couldn't, and was sent flying up into the air by the impulse of the crash.
This was definitely not Mya's luckiest day, not even near it. Of all places, she had to land over some lonely rocks. Ouch. Blood and blackout, that's what happened.
Malfoy was stunned, this was all his fault. The cute instructor was quick and in no time, got Mya out of the water. Draco followed him, as well as Sofi, to where the nurse was. The Gryffindor's head was covered in blood. She looked awful.
:: this is all my fault, I should have tried to slow down. I've always hated her, but I've never wanted her dead. Oh, god, I'm a murderer. Father will be happy now:: Draco though. He hated mudbloods, just like his father, but hi didn't want to follow his steps as a murderer.
The nurse ordered the instructor to lay Mya on one of the beds, then she immediately started cleaning her wounds. Mya had cracked her head open, a deep gash was on her forehead.
Suddenly, an exact replica of Mya came barging through the door.
"HERMIONE!!!!!!!" she cried, looking at the passed out figure lying on the bed.
Sofia looked up, the tears in her eyes making her eyesight a bit blurry, and saw Jenny's worried face.
The singer got beside the bed and held on to her goddaughter's hand tightly.
"She'll get better, don't worry." The nurse said, in a very professional tone.
"How did this happened?" Asked Jenny, still looking at Mya.
"We were on the surfing lessons and..." Sofi trailed off, not knowing how to continue.
" Our boards crashed and she landed on some rocks." Draco said.
Jenn looked at him and remembered what Mya had said about his family.
"Everyone out." Jenn said, fury was heard in her voice. Her eyes turned stone cold and her elegant and magnificent presence was irradiating authority.
"What? Listen lady, you have no right to order me to get out of my work place." The nurse said, indignantly.
"OUT." Jenn said. Malfoy could have sworn he saw flames in her eyes.
The nurse cowered at her tone and backed out. Sofi looked at her sadly and disappeared. Malfoy was turning his back to go when he heard Jenn again.
"You will stay."
Jenn gilded to the door and closed it shut. She turned again to an almost scared Draco. Almost scared.
"Cure her." She said simply.
"what?" He answered, thinking she had gone nuts.
" I said. Cure. Her." Jenn repeated.
"Wha..?"
"Drop the innocent act Malfoy. I know what you are." Jenn said. "You better cure her, or I'll tell everyone." Jenn threatened him.
Draco was stunned. She wasn't supposed to know about him, or his family. He was confused, but like a real Malfoy, he wouldn't show it.
"Look, even if I wanted to, I couldn't be able to cure her, thats too advanced magic for me." Draco said.
"Then bring someone who can" Jenn said.
::Who the hell does she thinks she is? Huh? No one gives me orders.:: Draco thought. But then he looked at Hermione, lying on the bed unconscious, with that gash on her forehead. Deep down he knew it was his fault, and if anything happened to her, he would surely get it from Harry and Ron. That is, if he was alive after Jenn finished with him.
With a glare he turned around and went to look for his father. He was having tea in one of the restaurants. After quick explanations of the events, Lucius decided to follow Draco. What the teen didn't know was that his father's plans where far from helping Hermione. In fact, if possible he would try to make her suffer even more. She was a mudblood, it would be a pleasure to see her in pain, and besides, his Master would be happy. It would be a way to touch Harry Potter deeply and push him over the edge.
Draco missed the malicious glint in his father's eyes. He directed him to the place where the Grangers Girls (A/N: lol) where.
They found Jenny holding Hermione's hand, with her back to them.
"Now, where is that stupid, worthless, mudblood?" Lucius said. This caused Jenny to turn around.
She looked at him defiantly, arms crossed over her chest and face red with anger.
"Take. That. Back." She snarled.
Lucius was too mesmerised with her beauty to understand what she was saying. When the words finally kicked in, amazement and a bit of... admiration? Crossed his mind. No one had never, ever, dared to talked to him like that. People were usually intimidated by him. This woman was definitely an exception. He liked exceptions. That combined with beauty, an aura of authority, resoluteness, and power, plus her elegant and graceful posture, caused Lucius' mind (he doesn't have a heart) to stop and go blank. This had never happened to him....
But, just like his son, he had been taught to hide any kind of emotions, unless of course, evilness and superiority. His smirking mask was still on when he replied.
"I believe we have a more important issue to discuss." He said, ignoring her order.
At that, Jenn's eyes softened a little and looked at Mya. "Your son did that to her." She answered pointing at Hermione's gash.
"I know you're a wizard. Cure her and that can remain a secret." She said in somewhat of a threat. She wasn't a tinsy winsy bit afraid of him. She had seen evil, she had witness the devil's work on people. Oh she sure had. Where? In Hollywood, of course, it was evil at it's worst form. A land rich in jealousy and envy, ruled by Tyrants. (a/n: lol)
"All right. Step back" He said. Now he really did mean to cure Hermione. Why? Oh, maybe because Jenn was intoxicating him so much he couldn't think properly, and all he knew was he had to obey her? Maybe. Or perhaps was it the fact that, even without magic, she seemed to irradiate more power than Voldemort himself? After all, it was power the reason he followed the Dark Lord. Yeah, maybe it was that too. Whatever it was, he didn't feel like killing Hermione. Not anymore.
He drew out his wand and murmured something. He touched Hermione's forehead with his wand and it healed instantly. He then said another spell to wake Hermione up.
Very slowly, her eyelids opened. Her eyes where unfocused for a while. Then, she turned her head to one side, still a bit dizzy. She saw no one. She turned around and, in front of her stood none other than Lucius Malfoy himself.
"AAAAAAHHH!!!!!" She screamed breaking the silent atmosphere.
"Shhhh Mya. It's ok." Jenn said, walking towards her.
The Malfoys looked from behind how the two girls hugged each other tightly, showing their concern for the other one, showing how much they cared.
Lucius was proud he had done perfectly what Jenn ordered him.
:: What about Narcissa?:: a tiny voice in his head asked. :: to hell with Narcissa.:: A much stronger voice replied simply. While thinking, he had left aside his mask for a fraction of a second.
This time, Draco didn't miss the look on his father's face. Praying to the Gods above him that what he was thinking wasn't true, he looked back at Hermione. She had some tears in her eyes, oh please, was she always this sentimental?
But he couldn't deny the relieved feeling that had crossed his body when she had woken up.
A/N: ok.....please tell me what you think about it. I'm really sorry I couldn't update sooner, but look at the positive side, now I have lived some things which could be included here. I usually put a lot of myself in my stories ( .
Oh, and, I have a question for all of you... would you like me to put some more latino influence here? Like some spanish words (obviously translating them later) and stuff like that? After all, the place they are in is Mexico.... well, you tell me.
Now.... the best part!
Caroline: thanks! Me too...
Eliza: wow! Glad you liked so many things about this story! Lol ( thanks, and sorry for the delay...
SaucySam: thanks!!!! It's nice to hear once in a while that... Lol. Ok, ok, I'll continue for you! Hehe
SaucySam(again): Me too... well, I'll take into account you like clothes, there could always be more accurate descriptions of those... (
Jen: thanks!!!! Hope you like this one too...
15dramaqueen: ok, ok... thanks!
SVZ: that was the whole point!! Lol
SVZ(again): thanks for the encouragement!!!
Crazy Luvolee: thanks!
Stef: Lol. Thanks for the thanks, for the thanks!!!! Lol (. And, your spanish is improving! Really!! You'll have to wait to see Mya singing, sorry. And about the other thing... well Snape will make an appearance soon... or at least I'll try to make him appear soon...... (
MarianneLinley and SarahQuinn: thanks!!!!!!!
Smsangel4ever: THANKS!!!!! Your reviews have been some of the most encouraging and long so far!!!! Sorry about the recital though, you'll have to wait a bit for that one... oh and I know I didn't use your ideas this time, but they really do help!!! So please, please, tell me if you have any other! Lol (, well, thanks for everything...
Ash2006: thanks!!!!!
Avri: thanks!!!! Keep reading... lol (
Holly: thanks!!!! I know... thats why I chose that nickname for her. Glad you liked it!!
Texas Rio Star: okay.... thanks!
Xtremegirl:... and nice review! Lol (
Alexis Mclean: predictable??? * looks dissapointed* really? Was Lucius having a crush on Jenn predictable??? Ok, well, I should have known.. would you liked it better if I killed someone???Lol, thanks
Jowa: thanks!!! Well, I actually took surfing classes this summer, so what I have written isn't just made up, well, not everything, Lol (
GrYfF cHiK: and I'll keep writting if you keep reading what I keep writting... confusing? Lol (
CitriusBabe: As... sounds good! Thanks Abby!!!!!!! Wow, you think this is brilliant?! Jumps up and down thanks!!!
Kickedoutofthegoblet: Wow! Again, you haven't failed to review!!!!!!!! Than you so much!!!! Hehe... hope you did well in your midterms, you'll have to tell me later... if you need help, just ask me k? Send me an email or by review! That will be my thanks for reviewing every chapter and offering for being my beta!! Lol...
The witch: thanks!!!!!
Phew! Done! 17 pages in my Word. Wow!!!!!
Ahora, por favor, review!!!!! (Now pleas review!)