An Unrevealed Secret, A Hidden Past
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Reviews*~*~*~*~*~*~*
First I wanna put up some of the reviews to show my appreciation(
pink twilight: very very very very good and cute please update as soon as
you can! Jaz(me): Thanks a lot! I'm gonna update today, maybe even two chapters!
Leeann: UPDATE NOW NOW NOW! I really like your story and I want more
please try and update soon! Thanks. Jaz: I'm grateful. I promise to update a lot, though my story is not going
to be very long, sorry!
Kagome98: hey I loved the story you r very good at this stuff I am trying to get the story I wrote up there but stupidly I have to upload a document and if you can help my email address is Kagoma89@yahoo.com and if you can
help please email me and if you can not thank u any way
sincerly sarah
Jaz: Thanks. First things first. Each chapter has to be a separate
document. Then go to document manager, label your chapter, then browse
through your documents and pull up the first chapter. Now that's over, click create story and follow the directions. Then go to edit story/add chapters, select your story and click edit. You can now name your chapter.
If you have more than one chapter, keep typing chapters on Word as separate documents, upload them at Document Manager and go to the upload
chapter under Texts and follow to directions there, it's pretty self
explanatory. And if that doesn't make any sense, e-mail me, OK?
An Anti-Sheep Cheese Muffin: that was like the best fic ever you have got
to update puh-leese! this is so good UPDATE NOW!!
Jaz: Wow! I promise to try and update almost everyday.
Now onto the next chapter!
Chapter Three:
Memories? Not A Chance!
There were gunshots, yelps, lots of blood. The smell was pungent to her nostrils. She was bound, harshly. Someone was reassuring her about something. A pain ran through her body like she was lit on fire. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. A gun was put up to her face, the trigger was pulled.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Raven woke up, tears still running, bathed in sweat, trembled from head to toe. Two reassuring hands squeezed her shoulders. She looked up into the one good eye of Kaede.
"What's wrong with you Raven?" [Oh just a reminder, I dropped the old English accent cause it is annoying!]
"I think it was a memory. Pain, blood." Kaede looked at the teen before her. She was so sweet, her past wouldn't be filled with such things.
"It was probably just a dream."
"Yeah, OK, I guess you're right!" ~Memories? No way!~She snapped at herself. Raven glanced out of the window. Still dark, she could sleep a bit more.
The ropes were cutting through her flesh, limiting her circulation. The stench of blood was heightening she felt woozy. The encouraging voice was still there. Who was it? Where was she? Why was there so much death? She almost choked on the last thoughts. Rays of light filtered through the window. There was a lot of confusion. She was in a small, room, with a tile floor that was splattered with blood. But whose? She had made her puddle of blood underneath her, from what, she didn't know. More pounding footsteps raced by. More gunshots. Suddenly her binding ropes were cut. Someone told her to run free, but to where?
Raven woke up again, her heart pounding. Her dreams. They made sense, unlike many others. Though, sensible dreams weren't rare. She could have blamed it on TV, but there ~was~ no TV on these islands. Raven decided she couldn't sleep anymore, at least not for tonight. She rose, taking a towel with her.
* * *
She bathed in a hot spring, letting the warmth wash away her fears. Probably just some retarded dream. Raven had amnesia after all, whether it was permanent or not, she didn't know. For some reason she wanted it to stay like that. Her past might be scary. Sighing, she got of the spring and put her clothes on.
An idea came to mind. Raven wandered aimlessly around, calling out a name[take three guesses whose], and just as she predicted, the very person she wanted to see landed before her.
"Good boy!" she giggled. Inuyasha looked so cute when he pouted like that. He sat on a log arms crossed over his chest.
"What do you want, wench?" he grumbled. It didn't look as if she woke him from her sleep. His eyes were as bright and alluring as ever and his hair wasn't mussed. She sat right next him on the log.
"Why do you hate me so much?" Inuyasha didn't really have a good answer for that. True he liked her company. True liked her scent. And also true that he liked her appearance, but he wasn't going to admit that.
"Oy, wench, what's your problem?" he growled. "You're always prying into my life, I don't need a friend. I never did."
"You mean you spent your entire life alone?" Raven bit her lip and slid even closer to him. Now he could practically feel the heat radiating from her body.
"What's it to you?"
* * *
It seemed like only minutes she sat there talking to him.
"OH NO!" she cried. "I'm going to be late for work!" Making a rash decision, he crotched down.
"Get on." Raven bit her lip. Was he crazy? But she got on anyway. Before she could take another breath, they were off. Speeding through the forest. She laid on his hair again, and closed her eyes, the wind whipping against her eyes was harsh, making them tear. Everything was a blur. In a few minutes time, they were at the edge of the village.
"This is as far as I dare to take you," he explained, remembering how the village still thought he was responsible for the thefts.
"It's OK." Quickly, she put her hand on his ears and rubbed them lightly. "Thanks." With that, she sped down the streets to the Bakery. Inuyasha stared after her, Raven's scent still lingered about him. Sighing, he turned heel, and hopped up in the nearest tree, awaiting her return.
~*Yeah, Yeah, I know, short chapter. But who gives a crap? LoL. Remember to review, review, review. Since I am in a good mood, I'll give you a little preview for the next chapter. It's called Breaking Through the Barrier and Seeing Through His Eyes. Inuyasha opens up a bit more to Raven and she sees how tough his life really is. See you soon!*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Reviews*~*~*~*~*~*~*
First I wanna put up some of the reviews to show my appreciation(
pink twilight: very very very very good and cute please update as soon as
you can! Jaz(me): Thanks a lot! I'm gonna update today, maybe even two chapters!
Leeann: UPDATE NOW NOW NOW! I really like your story and I want more
please try and update soon! Thanks. Jaz: I'm grateful. I promise to update a lot, though my story is not going
to be very long, sorry!
Kagome98: hey I loved the story you r very good at this stuff I am trying to get the story I wrote up there but stupidly I have to upload a document and if you can help my email address is Kagoma89@yahoo.com and if you can
help please email me and if you can not thank u any way
sincerly sarah
Jaz: Thanks. First things first. Each chapter has to be a separate
document. Then go to document manager, label your chapter, then browse
through your documents and pull up the first chapter. Now that's over, click create story and follow the directions. Then go to edit story/add chapters, select your story and click edit. You can now name your chapter.
If you have more than one chapter, keep typing chapters on Word as separate documents, upload them at Document Manager and go to the upload
chapter under Texts and follow to directions there, it's pretty self
explanatory. And if that doesn't make any sense, e-mail me, OK?
An Anti-Sheep Cheese Muffin: that was like the best fic ever you have got
to update puh-leese! this is so good UPDATE NOW!!
Jaz: Wow! I promise to try and update almost everyday.
Now onto the next chapter!
Chapter Three:
Memories? Not A Chance!
There were gunshots, yelps, lots of blood. The smell was pungent to her nostrils. She was bound, harshly. Someone was reassuring her about something. A pain ran through her body like she was lit on fire. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. A gun was put up to her face, the trigger was pulled.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Raven woke up, tears still running, bathed in sweat, trembled from head to toe. Two reassuring hands squeezed her shoulders. She looked up into the one good eye of Kaede.
"What's wrong with you Raven?" [Oh just a reminder, I dropped the old English accent cause it is annoying!]
"I think it was a memory. Pain, blood." Kaede looked at the teen before her. She was so sweet, her past wouldn't be filled with such things.
"It was probably just a dream."
"Yeah, OK, I guess you're right!" ~Memories? No way!~She snapped at herself. Raven glanced out of the window. Still dark, she could sleep a bit more.
The ropes were cutting through her flesh, limiting her circulation. The stench of blood was heightening she felt woozy. The encouraging voice was still there. Who was it? Where was she? Why was there so much death? She almost choked on the last thoughts. Rays of light filtered through the window. There was a lot of confusion. She was in a small, room, with a tile floor that was splattered with blood. But whose? She had made her puddle of blood underneath her, from what, she didn't know. More pounding footsteps raced by. More gunshots. Suddenly her binding ropes were cut. Someone told her to run free, but to where?
Raven woke up again, her heart pounding. Her dreams. They made sense, unlike many others. Though, sensible dreams weren't rare. She could have blamed it on TV, but there ~was~ no TV on these islands. Raven decided she couldn't sleep anymore, at least not for tonight. She rose, taking a towel with her.
* * *
She bathed in a hot spring, letting the warmth wash away her fears. Probably just some retarded dream. Raven had amnesia after all, whether it was permanent or not, she didn't know. For some reason she wanted it to stay like that. Her past might be scary. Sighing, she got of the spring and put her clothes on.
An idea came to mind. Raven wandered aimlessly around, calling out a name[take three guesses whose], and just as she predicted, the very person she wanted to see landed before her.
"Good boy!" she giggled. Inuyasha looked so cute when he pouted like that. He sat on a log arms crossed over his chest.
"What do you want, wench?" he grumbled. It didn't look as if she woke him from her sleep. His eyes were as bright and alluring as ever and his hair wasn't mussed. She sat right next him on the log.
"Why do you hate me so much?" Inuyasha didn't really have a good answer for that. True he liked her company. True liked her scent. And also true that he liked her appearance, but he wasn't going to admit that.
"Oy, wench, what's your problem?" he growled. "You're always prying into my life, I don't need a friend. I never did."
"You mean you spent your entire life alone?" Raven bit her lip and slid even closer to him. Now he could practically feel the heat radiating from her body.
"What's it to you?"
* * *
It seemed like only minutes she sat there talking to him.
"OH NO!" she cried. "I'm going to be late for work!" Making a rash decision, he crotched down.
"Get on." Raven bit her lip. Was he crazy? But she got on anyway. Before she could take another breath, they were off. Speeding through the forest. She laid on his hair again, and closed her eyes, the wind whipping against her eyes was harsh, making them tear. Everything was a blur. In a few minutes time, they were at the edge of the village.
"This is as far as I dare to take you," he explained, remembering how the village still thought he was responsible for the thefts.
"It's OK." Quickly, she put her hand on his ears and rubbed them lightly. "Thanks." With that, she sped down the streets to the Bakery. Inuyasha stared after her, Raven's scent still lingered about him. Sighing, he turned heel, and hopped up in the nearest tree, awaiting her return.
~*Yeah, Yeah, I know, short chapter. But who gives a crap? LoL. Remember to review, review, review. Since I am in a good mood, I'll give you a little preview for the next chapter. It's called Breaking Through the Barrier and Seeing Through His Eyes. Inuyasha opens up a bit more to Raven and she sees how tough his life really is. See you soon!*~