Moonie: Okay, now in this chapter her friends shows up and now we'll go on with the story, but there is still space for another friend or any other character you want to be.
Hiei: Why do you continue to torture me?
Moonie: One word Hiei "reviewers"... they control everything.
Hiei: I thought you did.
Moonie: Right now I control you but they control whether or not I continue.
Hiei: to hell with all of you
Moonie: I been there once, its quite lovely...but I was banned from enjoying myself too much....and they was afraid that my friend Rea and I was going to take over and rule it.
Hiei: o_O
Kiami went three days straight thinking about Hiei. She never felt this way, I guess its a crush that her friends always speak of. Kiami never had a crush before and this would be her first. At the fact that it had happened fast has amazed her. All he did was say a few words to her and sat with her for little time. In the Makai it was windy and the sky looked stormy. Kiami was so deep in thought to realize that she needed to find shelter. The rain soon started to take fall onto the grounds of the Makai. Kiami was now stuck in a rain storm. Now thinking about how much she needs to find a dry area, Kiami rushed herself until she found a cave nearby. The cave was dark and gloomy but all she cared for was shelter for the night or until the rain stops. The way things were going it didn't seem like it was going to stop at all anytime soon.
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Hiei sat on the window sill at Kurama's gazing at the rain tinkling down the window pane. As usual, he was in no good mood. At the sight of his little sister and that big ogre, Kuwabara made him sick to his stomach. He had no idea what she sees in the pathetic ningen but whatever it was, it was making her happy. Hiei liked seeing his sister happy but the fact that she's happy with the big idiot gave him blood sheding thoughts. He rather make it seem like an accident but it would make his sister sad. Yukina was one of the most important people in his life and making her sad wasn't a plan of Hiei's. Then out of no where his thoughts turn towards the girl in the lake, Kiami. 'Kiami Kishimito,' he pronouned in his mind. 'Pretty girl... no... what am I thinking? There's no way I could be interested in her in that way. I could never have those feelings ningens have.' Hiei closed his eyes and banged his fist on the chair sitting on in frustration, 'I repeat, I could never have those feelings ningens have.' Kurama looked up from his homework to see Hiei looking troubled. He automatically asumed it was about Yukina and Kuwabara since Hiei hated Kuwabara. Not ready to mention it right away, Kurama continued on with his homework. Hiei left in a blur not saying anything.
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Kiami woke up from her nap. The soothing sounds of the rain made her doze off. The rain had slowed down some to the point that it is drizzling. She of course didn't mind water but for once she wanted to stay dry (A/N: Kiami is a water demon. Just from a different planet that's all). Kiami decided that she wasn't going to spend all night in a dark eerie cave over some little water so she got herself up and went out.
To her surprise, on the way out she runs into her friends, Kitasha Mourki, Khelen, and Darkness. Kit-short for Kitasha is tall with long red hair and amythest eyes, she's the hyper active friend of Kiami. She wore sn orange komoto with red, yellow, white, and pink roses printed all over it. Khelen is short and has black hair with streaks. Her hair length goes down to her knees in one big braid. She wore a dark blue komoto with a light blue waist wrap. Last but not least, Darkness, she has curly shoulder length hair with the colors of blonde and brown and bluish-green eyes. She wears small green glasses and a short-skirt green komoto with no design. All of Kiami's friends are demons too. Kit-fire, Khelen-ice apparation/shapeshifter, and Darkness-light. They all came to greet her, "Hey, Ki-ki," Kit said as she waved. Ki-ki was short for Kiami Kishimito and only her friends and those close to her called her that. "Hey, its been a while. Been into anything? You can't say you haven't," Kiami simply replied with a smile. "Well, I been to alot of places and never met so many prevs in my life! We stopped by one bar to get something to drink and all the men there acted like animals," said Khelen with a sigh. As she was about to say more, Darkness interupted, "you didn't say that about the guy down the end who was trying to buy us drinks.... so you couldn't say 'all' of the men." "Oh, hush. That wasn't a man that was a woman in disguse!" They all laughed. They were having so much of a good time talking and joking around they didn't know that Hiei was watching from a distance.
Moonie: Ta da! That's it for third chapter. I may write little chapters but dag...its alot of work considering I don't have much time on it, but believe me I'll try to make a chapter a day. To me, this was the longest chapter.
Hiei: curse you onna (A/N: for those who doesn't know, onna means woman in Japanese)
Moonie: Don't be mad get glad!
Hiei: o_o you watch too much tv.
Moonie: I know. People my offer is still up! If you want to be in the story as a thief, Kiami's killer (I already have her friends but I may make one more acception), or even a crazy person they'll meet off the streets you let me know. You can even be a crack head on the street for all I care, any part you want to be in then let me know!
Hiei: Why do you continue to torture me?
Moonie: One word Hiei "reviewers"... they control everything.
Hiei: I thought you did.
Moonie: Right now I control you but they control whether or not I continue.
Hiei: to hell with all of you
Moonie: I been there once, its quite lovely...but I was banned from enjoying myself too much....and they was afraid that my friend Rea and I was going to take over and rule it.
Hiei: o_O
Kiami went three days straight thinking about Hiei. She never felt this way, I guess its a crush that her friends always speak of. Kiami never had a crush before and this would be her first. At the fact that it had happened fast has amazed her. All he did was say a few words to her and sat with her for little time. In the Makai it was windy and the sky looked stormy. Kiami was so deep in thought to realize that she needed to find shelter. The rain soon started to take fall onto the grounds of the Makai. Kiami was now stuck in a rain storm. Now thinking about how much she needs to find a dry area, Kiami rushed herself until she found a cave nearby. The cave was dark and gloomy but all she cared for was shelter for the night or until the rain stops. The way things were going it didn't seem like it was going to stop at all anytime soon.
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Hiei sat on the window sill at Kurama's gazing at the rain tinkling down the window pane. As usual, he was in no good mood. At the sight of his little sister and that big ogre, Kuwabara made him sick to his stomach. He had no idea what she sees in the pathetic ningen but whatever it was, it was making her happy. Hiei liked seeing his sister happy but the fact that she's happy with the big idiot gave him blood sheding thoughts. He rather make it seem like an accident but it would make his sister sad. Yukina was one of the most important people in his life and making her sad wasn't a plan of Hiei's. Then out of no where his thoughts turn towards the girl in the lake, Kiami. 'Kiami Kishimito,' he pronouned in his mind. 'Pretty girl... no... what am I thinking? There's no way I could be interested in her in that way. I could never have those feelings ningens have.' Hiei closed his eyes and banged his fist on the chair sitting on in frustration, 'I repeat, I could never have those feelings ningens have.' Kurama looked up from his homework to see Hiei looking troubled. He automatically asumed it was about Yukina and Kuwabara since Hiei hated Kuwabara. Not ready to mention it right away, Kurama continued on with his homework. Hiei left in a blur not saying anything.
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Kiami woke up from her nap. The soothing sounds of the rain made her doze off. The rain had slowed down some to the point that it is drizzling. She of course didn't mind water but for once she wanted to stay dry (A/N: Kiami is a water demon. Just from a different planet that's all). Kiami decided that she wasn't going to spend all night in a dark eerie cave over some little water so she got herself up and went out.
To her surprise, on the way out she runs into her friends, Kitasha Mourki, Khelen, and Darkness. Kit-short for Kitasha is tall with long red hair and amythest eyes, she's the hyper active friend of Kiami. She wore sn orange komoto with red, yellow, white, and pink roses printed all over it. Khelen is short and has black hair with streaks. Her hair length goes down to her knees in one big braid. She wore a dark blue komoto with a light blue waist wrap. Last but not least, Darkness, she has curly shoulder length hair with the colors of blonde and brown and bluish-green eyes. She wears small green glasses and a short-skirt green komoto with no design. All of Kiami's friends are demons too. Kit-fire, Khelen-ice apparation/shapeshifter, and Darkness-light. They all came to greet her, "Hey, Ki-ki," Kit said as she waved. Ki-ki was short for Kiami Kishimito and only her friends and those close to her called her that. "Hey, its been a while. Been into anything? You can't say you haven't," Kiami simply replied with a smile. "Well, I been to alot of places and never met so many prevs in my life! We stopped by one bar to get something to drink and all the men there acted like animals," said Khelen with a sigh. As she was about to say more, Darkness interupted, "you didn't say that about the guy down the end who was trying to buy us drinks.... so you couldn't say 'all' of the men." "Oh, hush. That wasn't a man that was a woman in disguse!" They all laughed. They were having so much of a good time talking and joking around they didn't know that Hiei was watching from a distance.
Moonie: Ta da! That's it for third chapter. I may write little chapters but dag...its alot of work considering I don't have much time on it, but believe me I'll try to make a chapter a day. To me, this was the longest chapter.
Hiei: curse you onna (A/N: for those who doesn't know, onna means woman in Japanese)
Moonie: Don't be mad get glad!
Hiei: o_o you watch too much tv.
Moonie: I know. People my offer is still up! If you want to be in the story as a thief, Kiami's killer (I already have her friends but I may make one more acception), or even a crazy person they'll meet off the streets you let me know. You can even be a crack head on the street for all I care, any part you want to be in then let me know!