I have a lot to say so if you're willing to read it, then go ahead.
1) I just saw the episode where Enrique was first introduced (I missed that episode the first time) and was very surprised. I thought Enrique was a GOOD player, not just someone who had to bribe their way (though I did expect the girls to like him cuz he's rich). I was wondering for a while why girls thought he was cute (no offence to those people who do think he's cute).
2) The first time I uploaded this chapter was just to test something out so it didn't work just to let you know so I got rid of it.
3) Sorry for the long wait, I was just taking my time with this fic. That and I have no idea what's gonna happen but I'm sure some ideas will come.
4) Again, sorry if the writing looks weird cuz I was spell checking it but I went too fast and accidentally replaced a word I didn't want to replace and I can't find it. That and it made a new paragraph for every line so I had to fix it (and it such a pain to do).
5) The girls' name in this chapter aren't the name of the girls in the beyblade episode where Enrique is first introduced. Remember, I only saw the second episode since he's been introduced so I assumed that he was -go back to number 1-
6) Let's see, what else? Oh! I'm sorry for saying that this is crappy.
Anyways, on to the next chapter!!
~other self~
"speak"
'thoughts'
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I stared at her for as long as time could be. Or until the waiter was blocking my way. Damn waiter. When he left, I could see her drinking the glass of water. She was really cute though there was this something about her that didn't seem that feminine. But, that something is just a small something. And all women have that. Maybe more. What a disturbing thought. Anyways, I walked over to her while the green-haired girl continued to drink her water. Still gulping it down, I sat down next to her and said hi to her. Then she nearly choked on her water.
Whoops.
First thing she did when she stopped was glare at me. All I did was say hi which surprised her and made her choke and, that's not the point.
"So......." I began.
~Say something clever! Don't screw it up, remember that or else I'll haunt you for the rest of your life! Either that or I'll just bother you about this for the rest of your life. Either one's fine~
Oh good, now I'm talking to myself, and to make it worse, I'm arguing with myself.
~But you have to say something smart. Just say anything! You're making a long pause.~
"I love shoes."
~When I said to say something, I meant something smart.~
"I mean how was that water?"
~A little better, but couldn't you ask a better question, for instances, her name?~
"Would've been a lot better if I didn't choke on it," she replied.
Hmm... playing hard to get. I like those kinds. They make everything a challenge, which means you have to win at their own games if you want to get them.
"I'm sorry, I'll buy you another glass."
"The water's free."
"Oh, whaddya know? You learn something new everyday! Heh heh....."
Her expression didn't change.
"It's not working, is it?" I asked.
Before she could reply, two strangely familiar feminine voices called up, shouting my name.
"Enrique-poo!!!"
Their voices are so familiar, I can't remember where I heard it before.
"We're coming!!"
Is it mom? No, she hates public places. Is it Sherry? No, it can't be. Wait...... who's Sherry? Think Enrique, think!!
"Because we love you!!!"
Argh, I can't seem to put my tongue on it.
"That and we ran out of money!!!"
Oh, it's them. They ran out of money? That was my money! What did they buy? I had over three thousand dollars in there!!
They came over to the table we were, carrying what looked like 5 boxes of clothes for each of them.
"Were you sad that you couldn't see my face while I was gone?"asked Millery, "well, don't fret, cuz we're back!"
"Oh joy," I muttered under my breath. Unfortunally, one of them heard me, just not completely.
"What's that? You missed me?" Joy suddenly flung her arms out open, dropping the things she was holding and hugged me around the neck. "Awww..."
Someone help, please.
~What's the matter? I thought you liked getting attention.~
You stay out of this.
"Uh, excuse me but who are you and what are you doing here?"
What the? That was her (A/N: her as in referring to Oliver) voice. Thank you!!
The blonde's grip on me became tighter. "We're here to get girls like you away from him!"
Uhh, on second thought, I take back the thanks.
"Girls, girls," I said, my neck free from Joy's arms, "you don't need to fight over me, there's enough of me to go around."
"There certainly is," said the goddess, eyeing my mid-section.
For a hard-to-get girl, she sure is rude.
~Of course. If they're hard to get, then they have to be rude.~
I thought I told you to stay out of this.
~Just pointing out the obvious.~
Let's change the subject.
"That's not the point." I turned to the two girls, "What exactly did you spent my money on? Don't tell me you spent all of it on clothes."
"What? Oh no, we didn't." Millery said.
"We only spent nine hundred dollars on clothes. Plus, we bought this for you!" Joy bought out a bundle of clothing out of the bag and dumped it on the table. I stared at it weirdly. They bought me things like mini skirts and dresses???
"You bought all this for me?"
"No," the redhead said. She reached her hand in the bundle and brought out something that gonna give me nightmares for weeks. "We bought this for you."
It was a lacey shirt with poofy sleeves. I took it out of her hands and buried it in the pile of clothing.
"So what the hell did you spend the rest on?"
"Clothes shopping is a lot exhausting than you think. So we got thirsty."
"Yeah, and we went over to that restaurant where the water cost like, $20 per glass."
What? What kind of restaurant actually puts a price on their water?!
Joy saw the look on my face. "It was mineral water."
That kinda make sense but $20 just for a glass of MINERAL water?
"Then we got hungry and bought I think 5 steak dinners but then realized that steaks have a lot of fat in it so we dumped it and ordered something else but then realized that we weren't actually hungry."
"So what was the something else you ordered?" I said, trying to maintain my left eye from twitching.
"Uhhh, let's see," Millery said, "7 salads, 8 hamburgers, 5 different kinds of jello treats-"
"Plus we met up with some friends so we bought something for them too."
"Well," I said, sounding relief (and no, I'm not relieved that they spent all my money!!) "at least I still have my credit card."
"Oh, we maxed that out."
Someone tell me again why am I hanging out with them.
~I tried to stop you but would you listen, no!~
You're starting to sound like my mom.
"But," Joy said, "the important thing is that we're here with you!"
"Hey look!" Millery said, pointing elsewhere, "Better people!"
They ecstatically picked up the clothes, including the shirt they bought for me, and left.
Great (A/N: no sarcasm), I'm all alone with her now. Hey, were did she go? There she is! She's by the doorway and is about to leave.
"Hey wait!" I called out to her. That caught her attention. She turned her head and faced me. Uhh... what to say now?
~Good going Mr. Good-Player. Why don't you just say the first thing that's coming to your mind?~
"Uhh.....Do you love ice-cream cuz I do!"
Why did I listen to you?
"Funny, I thought you loved shoes," she said to me.
"But you never answered my question!" I replied to her, "Do you love ice-cream!"
"Yeah, ice-cream's good. But I don't see why-"
I interrupted her by saying, "Great, it's official!"
"What's official?" the green-headed girl asked me.
"That we're going on a date!"
Enrique: 1
Girl: 0
~Actually, it's more like girl: 2, you: ½~
Ehh, it's a start.
"But I never agreed to-"
Again, I interrupted her. "We'll go right now!"
She looked like she was about to say something but then sighed in defeat.
Now I found myself walking outside besides her. This is gonna be a good day.
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1) I just saw the episode where Enrique was first introduced (I missed that episode the first time) and was very surprised. I thought Enrique was a GOOD player, not just someone who had to bribe their way (though I did expect the girls to like him cuz he's rich). I was wondering for a while why girls thought he was cute (no offence to those people who do think he's cute).
2) The first time I uploaded this chapter was just to test something out so it didn't work just to let you know so I got rid of it.
3) Sorry for the long wait, I was just taking my time with this fic. That and I have no idea what's gonna happen but I'm sure some ideas will come.
4) Again, sorry if the writing looks weird cuz I was spell checking it but I went too fast and accidentally replaced a word I didn't want to replace and I can't find it. That and it made a new paragraph for every line so I had to fix it (and it such a pain to do).
5) The girls' name in this chapter aren't the name of the girls in the beyblade episode where Enrique is first introduced. Remember, I only saw the second episode since he's been introduced so I assumed that he was -go back to number 1-
6) Let's see, what else? Oh! I'm sorry for saying that this is crappy.
Anyways, on to the next chapter!!
~other self~
"speak"
'thoughts'
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I stared at her for as long as time could be. Or until the waiter was blocking my way. Damn waiter. When he left, I could see her drinking the glass of water. She was really cute though there was this something about her that didn't seem that feminine. But, that something is just a small something. And all women have that. Maybe more. What a disturbing thought. Anyways, I walked over to her while the green-haired girl continued to drink her water. Still gulping it down, I sat down next to her and said hi to her. Then she nearly choked on her water.
Whoops.
First thing she did when she stopped was glare at me. All I did was say hi which surprised her and made her choke and, that's not the point.
"So......." I began.
~Say something clever! Don't screw it up, remember that or else I'll haunt you for the rest of your life! Either that or I'll just bother you about this for the rest of your life. Either one's fine~
Oh good, now I'm talking to myself, and to make it worse, I'm arguing with myself.
~But you have to say something smart. Just say anything! You're making a long pause.~
"I love shoes."
~When I said to say something, I meant something smart.~
"I mean how was that water?"
~A little better, but couldn't you ask a better question, for instances, her name?~
"Would've been a lot better if I didn't choke on it," she replied.
Hmm... playing hard to get. I like those kinds. They make everything a challenge, which means you have to win at their own games if you want to get them.
"I'm sorry, I'll buy you another glass."
"The water's free."
"Oh, whaddya know? You learn something new everyday! Heh heh....."
Her expression didn't change.
"It's not working, is it?" I asked.
Before she could reply, two strangely familiar feminine voices called up, shouting my name.
"Enrique-poo!!!"
Their voices are so familiar, I can't remember where I heard it before.
"We're coming!!"
Is it mom? No, she hates public places. Is it Sherry? No, it can't be. Wait...... who's Sherry? Think Enrique, think!!
"Because we love you!!!"
Argh, I can't seem to put my tongue on it.
"That and we ran out of money!!!"
Oh, it's them. They ran out of money? That was my money! What did they buy? I had over three thousand dollars in there!!
They came over to the table we were, carrying what looked like 5 boxes of clothes for each of them.
"Were you sad that you couldn't see my face while I was gone?"asked Millery, "well, don't fret, cuz we're back!"
"Oh joy," I muttered under my breath. Unfortunally, one of them heard me, just not completely.
"What's that? You missed me?" Joy suddenly flung her arms out open, dropping the things she was holding and hugged me around the neck. "Awww..."
Someone help, please.
~What's the matter? I thought you liked getting attention.~
You stay out of this.
"Uh, excuse me but who are you and what are you doing here?"
What the? That was her (A/N: her as in referring to Oliver) voice. Thank you!!
The blonde's grip on me became tighter. "We're here to get girls like you away from him!"
Uhh, on second thought, I take back the thanks.
"Girls, girls," I said, my neck free from Joy's arms, "you don't need to fight over me, there's enough of me to go around."
"There certainly is," said the goddess, eyeing my mid-section.
For a hard-to-get girl, she sure is rude.
~Of course. If they're hard to get, then they have to be rude.~
I thought I told you to stay out of this.
~Just pointing out the obvious.~
Let's change the subject.
"That's not the point." I turned to the two girls, "What exactly did you spent my money on? Don't tell me you spent all of it on clothes."
"What? Oh no, we didn't." Millery said.
"We only spent nine hundred dollars on clothes. Plus, we bought this for you!" Joy bought out a bundle of clothing out of the bag and dumped it on the table. I stared at it weirdly. They bought me things like mini skirts and dresses???
"You bought all this for me?"
"No," the redhead said. She reached her hand in the bundle and brought out something that gonna give me nightmares for weeks. "We bought this for you."
It was a lacey shirt with poofy sleeves. I took it out of her hands and buried it in the pile of clothing.
"So what the hell did you spend the rest on?"
"Clothes shopping is a lot exhausting than you think. So we got thirsty."
"Yeah, and we went over to that restaurant where the water cost like, $20 per glass."
What? What kind of restaurant actually puts a price on their water?!
Joy saw the look on my face. "It was mineral water."
That kinda make sense but $20 just for a glass of MINERAL water?
"Then we got hungry and bought I think 5 steak dinners but then realized that steaks have a lot of fat in it so we dumped it and ordered something else but then realized that we weren't actually hungry."
"So what was the something else you ordered?" I said, trying to maintain my left eye from twitching.
"Uhhh, let's see," Millery said, "7 salads, 8 hamburgers, 5 different kinds of jello treats-"
"Plus we met up with some friends so we bought something for them too."
"Well," I said, sounding relief (and no, I'm not relieved that they spent all my money!!) "at least I still have my credit card."
"Oh, we maxed that out."
Someone tell me again why am I hanging out with them.
~I tried to stop you but would you listen, no!~
You're starting to sound like my mom.
"But," Joy said, "the important thing is that we're here with you!"
"Hey look!" Millery said, pointing elsewhere, "Better people!"
They ecstatically picked up the clothes, including the shirt they bought for me, and left.
Great (A/N: no sarcasm), I'm all alone with her now. Hey, were did she go? There she is! She's by the doorway and is about to leave.
"Hey wait!" I called out to her. That caught her attention. She turned her head and faced me. Uhh... what to say now?
~Good going Mr. Good-Player. Why don't you just say the first thing that's coming to your mind?~
"Uhh.....Do you love ice-cream cuz I do!"
Why did I listen to you?
"Funny, I thought you loved shoes," she said to me.
"But you never answered my question!" I replied to her, "Do you love ice-cream!"
"Yeah, ice-cream's good. But I don't see why-"
I interrupted her by saying, "Great, it's official!"
"What's official?" the green-headed girl asked me.
"That we're going on a date!"
Enrique: 1
Girl: 0
~Actually, it's more like girl: 2, you: ½~
Ehh, it's a start.
"But I never agreed to-"
Again, I interrupted her. "We'll go right now!"
She looked like she was about to say something but then sighed in defeat.
Now I found myself walking outside besides her. This is gonna be a good day.
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