Haha, I can't believe it.my first fanfic and my first review Thankew Vega
Marsh. now I'm willing to slog to put up another chapter.
The characters all belong to JK Rowling except anything unfamiliar you see, so please don't sue, I mean no harm. The song belongs to Disney totally, Can you feel the love tonight, Giving all credit to them, don't sue.
James stole a look at Lily. God what did she do over the summers? Why is it that every time I see her she gets prettier?
"James could you sign here please on my bag.and here.and here."
"Hey I touched his hand, oh my.I think I should just go and auction my hand off."
James forced a weary smile at his fans. The girls sighed. Having a fan club is so tiring. Sirius came over and draped his arm over James' shoulder.
"Hey! My whole arm for 1000 galleons? Any takers? I touched James with it!" Sirius laughed as he nudged James.
James knocked Sirius on the forehead, " Will you just stop it, Siri darling?"
"If you say so, Jamsie-boy." Sirius teased and gave James his puppy dog eyes, earning him another sound knock on his head. Sirius and James had always been -as you know- best friends and the most popular boys in school, Remus being a close second, and Peter, well, people wanted to be with him to get near the trio.
James Potter with his wild raven black hair, chiseled features and hazel eyes, Sirius Black, with his shoulder-length hair pulled back into a short ponytail, brown eyes and a firm jaw, Remus Lupin with his sandy brown hair and light brown eyes and Peter Pettigrea with his string brown hair and blue eyes made up the Marauders.
Catching James' glances at Lily, Remus joined in the friendly banter. "Jamie, why don't you ask Evans out, huh? Everybody can see you are head over heels in lloovvee with her."
As if on cue, both Remus and Sirius broke out into the song "Can you feel the love tonight?"
Sirius and Remus
I can see what's happining (what?!)
And they don't have a clue (who?!)
They'll fall in love and here's the bottom line
Our trio's down to two (oh.)
The sweet caress of twilight
There's magic everywhere
And with all this romantic atmosphere
Disaster's in the air!
Can you feel the love tonight
The peace the evening brings
The world for onceIn perfect harmony With all its living things
-Sirius in a mock lovesick voice-
So many things to tell her
But how to make her see
The truth about my past?
Impossible!
She'd turn away from me
Remus in a high girly voice
He's holding back he's hiding
But what I can't decide
Why won't he be the king
I know he isThe king I see inside?
Chorus
Can you feel the love tonight
The peace the evening brings
The world for onceIn perfect harmony
With all its living things Can you feel the love tonight
You needn't look too far
Stealing through
The night's uncertainties
Love is where they are
-Sirius and Remus-
And if he falls in love tonight (sniff)
It can be assumed
His care-free days with us are history
In short our pal is doomed!
And ended off hugging each other and wailing, to add a dramatic flair in Sirius' words. Even James had to laugh. Well, his secret was no secret in his rowdy group of friends, they see through him like he's a piece of glass.
Right now, he was flushing a deep shade of red. "Cut it out Remy and Siri.argh.I DON'T like her, totally no feelings ok? My god, I can't even stand her!"
Little did he know, Lily heard that. She bit her bottom lip, trying her best to hold back tears. So James didn't have any feelings whatsoever. Not even in the smiles he flashed her.
-Flashback-
"Mudblood, I'll see that you get expelled! My father is the school's- "Lucius Malfoy said as he slammed Lily onto the wall and raised his hand to give her a tight slap.
"Get your hands off her, you slimeball!"
James drew out his wand and pointed it at Malfoy.
"Ha, make me, then"
" Ucalitus Violunus" A purple beam of light shot out of James' wand and landed square on Malfoy's shoulder, turning him purple with pink polka dots all over.
"MR POTTER! DETENTION FOR A WEEK!" Just then Professor Sleith appeared at the doorway.
"Mr Malfoy, you will follow me to the infirmary please," Sleith was the Slytherin Head of House. He gave James a disgusted look before walking away. James helped Lily pick her scattered books and wordlessly put them into her bag as Lily sat weeping piteously into her arms. Silently, James sat beside Lily and pulled her gently into his arms, and cocooned her in his warm embrace, while Lily sobbed into his shoulder.
"Don't cry Lily, don't let them bring you down."
"I'm so.tired of this, they are always at it." Lily said between sobs.
James looked down at the red-head and sighed, pulling her closer. Lily stirred and sat up, wiping her tears away fiercely.
"You're right I won't let them get me down.erm, James sorry for getting you into detention."
"It was worth it." James said shyly
-end flashback-
Lily sniffed, that was when her feelings developed. Well /INOT/I into love. Then why do you care so much?
The characters all belong to JK Rowling except anything unfamiliar you see, so please don't sue, I mean no harm. The song belongs to Disney totally, Can you feel the love tonight, Giving all credit to them, don't sue.
James stole a look at Lily. God what did she do over the summers? Why is it that every time I see her she gets prettier?
"James could you sign here please on my bag.and here.and here."
"Hey I touched his hand, oh my.I think I should just go and auction my hand off."
James forced a weary smile at his fans. The girls sighed. Having a fan club is so tiring. Sirius came over and draped his arm over James' shoulder.
"Hey! My whole arm for 1000 galleons? Any takers? I touched James with it!" Sirius laughed as he nudged James.
James knocked Sirius on the forehead, " Will you just stop it, Siri darling?"
"If you say so, Jamsie-boy." Sirius teased and gave James his puppy dog eyes, earning him another sound knock on his head. Sirius and James had always been -as you know- best friends and the most popular boys in school, Remus being a close second, and Peter, well, people wanted to be with him to get near the trio.
James Potter with his wild raven black hair, chiseled features and hazel eyes, Sirius Black, with his shoulder-length hair pulled back into a short ponytail, brown eyes and a firm jaw, Remus Lupin with his sandy brown hair and light brown eyes and Peter Pettigrea with his string brown hair and blue eyes made up the Marauders.
Catching James' glances at Lily, Remus joined in the friendly banter. "Jamie, why don't you ask Evans out, huh? Everybody can see you are head over heels in lloovvee with her."
As if on cue, both Remus and Sirius broke out into the song "Can you feel the love tonight?"
Sirius and Remus
I can see what's happining (what?!)
And they don't have a clue (who?!)
They'll fall in love and here's the bottom line
Our trio's down to two (oh.)
The sweet caress of twilight
There's magic everywhere
And with all this romantic atmosphere
Disaster's in the air!
Can you feel the love tonight
The peace the evening brings
The world for onceIn perfect harmony With all its living things
-Sirius in a mock lovesick voice-
So many things to tell her
But how to make her see
The truth about my past?
Impossible!
She'd turn away from me
Remus in a high girly voice
He's holding back he's hiding
But what I can't decide
Why won't he be the king
I know he isThe king I see inside?
Chorus
Can you feel the love tonight
The peace the evening brings
The world for onceIn perfect harmony
With all its living things Can you feel the love tonight
You needn't look too far
Stealing through
The night's uncertainties
Love is where they are
-Sirius and Remus-
And if he falls in love tonight (sniff)
It can be assumed
His care-free days with us are history
In short our pal is doomed!
And ended off hugging each other and wailing, to add a dramatic flair in Sirius' words. Even James had to laugh. Well, his secret was no secret in his rowdy group of friends, they see through him like he's a piece of glass.
Right now, he was flushing a deep shade of red. "Cut it out Remy and Siri.argh.I DON'T like her, totally no feelings ok? My god, I can't even stand her!"
Little did he know, Lily heard that. She bit her bottom lip, trying her best to hold back tears. So James didn't have any feelings whatsoever. Not even in the smiles he flashed her.
-Flashback-
"Mudblood, I'll see that you get expelled! My father is the school's- "Lucius Malfoy said as he slammed Lily onto the wall and raised his hand to give her a tight slap.
"Get your hands off her, you slimeball!"
James drew out his wand and pointed it at Malfoy.
"Ha, make me, then"
" Ucalitus Violunus" A purple beam of light shot out of James' wand and landed square on Malfoy's shoulder, turning him purple with pink polka dots all over.
"MR POTTER! DETENTION FOR A WEEK!" Just then Professor Sleith appeared at the doorway.
"Mr Malfoy, you will follow me to the infirmary please," Sleith was the Slytherin Head of House. He gave James a disgusted look before walking away. James helped Lily pick her scattered books and wordlessly put them into her bag as Lily sat weeping piteously into her arms. Silently, James sat beside Lily and pulled her gently into his arms, and cocooned her in his warm embrace, while Lily sobbed into his shoulder.
"Don't cry Lily, don't let them bring you down."
"I'm so.tired of this, they are always at it." Lily said between sobs.
James looked down at the red-head and sighed, pulling her closer. Lily stirred and sat up, wiping her tears away fiercely.
"You're right I won't let them get me down.erm, James sorry for getting you into detention."
"It was worth it." James said shyly
-end flashback-
Lily sniffed, that was when her feelings developed. Well /INOT/I into love. Then why do you care so much?