Perfect
Shadow Knight
Disclaimer: Show's not mine, poem is.
Well, I finally got off my butt and wrote another. This one's about Lance just so ya know. Hmm. Not much else I have to say except......
Enjoy. ^_^
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Silver lines beneath my hand,
Play a haunting melody,
And take me to another land.
This could be called a felony,
As I sing my mournful tune,
Darkness grabs me by my heart.
Silver tears fall from the moon,
All from which play a part,
In this swirl of smiles and hate,
Time's wrinkled hands will not stop.
They lead me to a sightless fate.
Spinning like a child's top,
Around, and around I will go,
Spinning back, to and fro.
Tapping off the cigarette end,
A cloud of smoke slithers from my nose.
Breathing in now, I try to mend,
All of my sad broken woes.
Blackened skies loom in my sight,
I try to evade the darkness brewing.
Yet, it seems I can't escape my frights.
All I hear is their laughter at my crooning.
Numbness strikes deep within,
For now I know what has become of me.
I know that I will never win.
With bloodshot eyes I try to see.
I pick up the pieces of my being,
Trying to solve this perfect puzzle.
Yet, imperfection is all I'm seeing,
Why do I even begin to tussle?
There seems no use in my wooing,
When I can't overcome my own defect.
Deep inside of me where my life is skewing,
To know that I will never be what she wants of me.... perfect.
~
Like it??? Hate it??? PLEASE TELL ME!!! ^_^ I _L-O-V-E _ reviews! They are my poem's inspirations and such. Anywho, if you don't completely understand the poem, read further into below.
In this poem, I'm trying to describe Lance's feelings. Yet, usually when I do these, I almost never include another person conflicting their emotions. But, in this one I decided to, because I believe that when Kitty refused to date Lance anymore or, got mad at him on one of the last new episodes, Lance felt something crack and even said, " I'll never be good (perfect?) enough for you!"
Then he got mad and stuff, but ANYWAYS, I thought that this really set Lance off and made him feel not good enough for anyone. He felt as if he were the lowest of the lows. Um...well I think that about sum it up. ^_^ Hope ya get it now.
And.... as I said... PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME WHO YOU WANT ME TO DO POEMS ABOUT!!!!!
P.S. About Amanda, she may be next, but I don't know... She's gonna be a tuffy to describe... As for Mystique, Magneto, and the other character.....hmmm.... sounds interesting indeed....^_~ Ciao.
Shadow Knight
Disclaimer: Show's not mine, poem is.
Well, I finally got off my butt and wrote another. This one's about Lance just so ya know. Hmm. Not much else I have to say except......
Enjoy. ^_^
~
Silver lines beneath my hand,
Play a haunting melody,
And take me to another land.
This could be called a felony,
As I sing my mournful tune,
Darkness grabs me by my heart.
Silver tears fall from the moon,
All from which play a part,
In this swirl of smiles and hate,
Time's wrinkled hands will not stop.
They lead me to a sightless fate.
Spinning like a child's top,
Around, and around I will go,
Spinning back, to and fro.
Tapping off the cigarette end,
A cloud of smoke slithers from my nose.
Breathing in now, I try to mend,
All of my sad broken woes.
Blackened skies loom in my sight,
I try to evade the darkness brewing.
Yet, it seems I can't escape my frights.
All I hear is their laughter at my crooning.
Numbness strikes deep within,
For now I know what has become of me.
I know that I will never win.
With bloodshot eyes I try to see.
I pick up the pieces of my being,
Trying to solve this perfect puzzle.
Yet, imperfection is all I'm seeing,
Why do I even begin to tussle?
There seems no use in my wooing,
When I can't overcome my own defect.
Deep inside of me where my life is skewing,
To know that I will never be what she wants of me.... perfect.
~
Like it??? Hate it??? PLEASE TELL ME!!! ^_^ I _L-O-V-E _ reviews! They are my poem's inspirations and such. Anywho, if you don't completely understand the poem, read further into below.
In this poem, I'm trying to describe Lance's feelings. Yet, usually when I do these, I almost never include another person conflicting their emotions. But, in this one I decided to, because I believe that when Kitty refused to date Lance anymore or, got mad at him on one of the last new episodes, Lance felt something crack and even said, " I'll never be good (perfect?) enough for you!"
Then he got mad and stuff, but ANYWAYS, I thought that this really set Lance off and made him feel not good enough for anyone. He felt as if he were the lowest of the lows. Um...well I think that about sum it up. ^_^ Hope ya get it now.
And.... as I said... PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME WHO YOU WANT ME TO DO POEMS ABOUT!!!!!
P.S. About Amanda, she may be next, but I don't know... She's gonna be a tuffy to describe... As for Mystique, Magneto, and the other character.....hmmm.... sounds interesting indeed....^_~ Ciao.