Author's Notes- Thanks for reviewing, Moon Minamino and weirdo-loser-freak.
Well
here's the third chapter.
Explanations and Confusion
(3rd chapter)
"Well," Kurama started, "um, you see" He didn't quite know how to tell
them.
"Here." He handed the girls the two pictures of the demons. "These are two demons who
are destroying the Spirit World. Do you see a resemblance?" As soon as they saw the
pictures, the girls were speechless. "How did you. . . when did you. . . where did you get
these pictures?" Suki stuttered. "Koenma gave them to us. These were taken a few days
ago, at a massacre. We have heard that about 150 demons were killed that one night by
these two. They're feared by many." Kurama replied. Maeko and Suki just stared at the
pictures.
"These look like us." Suki stated. Everyone sweat-dropped. "Thank you for
stating the obvious, Genius." Maeko snapped. "Well he asked if we saw the
resemblance!" she retorted. "It wasn't a question that you answer!" The two girls yelled
at each other for a few minutes, before all you could hear were them hitting and kicking
the other, and their screams. Suki's three brothers ran into the room. "Shuichi! What
happened?!" Daichi yelled, trying to be heard over the commotion. "They got mad." he
replied. "Right. . ."
"LET GO OF MY HAIR, BITCH!!!!!!!" Maeko yelled. "THEN YOU LET GO
OF MY NECK!!!!!!!!!" Suki replied. "I SAID LET GO!!!!!!" "MAKE ME!!!!!"
"FINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "OWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! MAE-CHAN, THAT
HURT!!!!!!! DON'T STRANGLE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "WELL YOU SAID TO MAKE
YOU LET GO OF MY HAIR!!!!!!!!" "THAT DIDN'T MEAN STRANGLE ME,
IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?!"
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?!" "WHO ARE YOU
CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?" "HEY, MAE-CHAN, DON'T CALL ME AN
IDIOT JUST BECAUSE I CALLED YOU AN IDIOT BECAUSE YOU CALLED ME
AN IDIOT BECAUSE I CALLED YOU AN IDIOT BECAUSE YOU TRIED TO
STRANGLE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The girls stopped trying to kill each other and
looked at the other for a minute, before bursting into laughter.
"You look so stupid!!!" Suki managed to say in-between laughs. "So do you,
baka!" All the boys were sweat-dropping in the background. "Why were we fighting,
anyway?" Suki asked. Maeko thought for a moment. "To tell the truth, I don't
remember." "Me either." They looked at each other a minute before standing up and
sitting back on the couch. "So, what were you saying?" Suki asked, seriously. ""Well, we
were telling you about the massacre and the two demons." Kurama said. (Just FYI Suki's
brothers left the room, after Suki & Maeko stopped fighting) "Oh, yes, about that...WHY
DO THEY LOOK LIKE US?!?!?!?!?!" Suki questioned. "Well, now that we found out
you two are not the demons, I'm not exactly sure." The fox youkai replied. Suki looked at
him for a moment before glancing at her watch. Seeing that it was already 10:59 p.m., she
thought it would be best if the boys got going. "Um...Kurama, Hiei, it's getting late, and
I'm getting tired, do you think maybe we could meet tomorrow or something, to further
discuss this?" she asked. "Hai." Kurama said, "How about we meet at the café around 2.
Is that okay?" Suki glanced at Maeko, who just nodded. "Great! I'll see you tomorrow!"
They all got up and walked to the door. 'Good-byes' were said and the two boys left.
As soon as they left Maeko and Suki ran back over to the couch and plopped
down. "That was weird. Ne, Mae-chan?" Suki asked, while glancing over at her friend.
"Hai. It was." Maeko replied, looking away.
"Wanna watch a movie?" Maeko asked. "I guess." The two, popped a dvd into the
player and started to watch it. After 2 hours, Maeko looked down at Suki, whose was
currently on the floor. 'Baka' she thought. She picked the girl up and placed her on
the couch. She placed a blanket over her, and left.
Maeko walked down the steps, and found someone waiting for her, Hiei. "What
do you want?" she asked, annoyed that there was someone blocking her way. But at the
same time, she was happy to see the fire demon, whom she had actually started to like. "I
need to talk to you." he replied. "Of course, why else would you be here?" she snapped
back. "Why did you lie about the fact that you are a demon?" Maeko stared at him. "Who
says I was lying?" she asks. "Don't lie, girl. You and I both know that you're a demon. I
can sense your energy. I know that Kurama felt it too. But it's not only you, is it?" Hiei
asked, smirking. "It's that other girl, too. Am I right?" Maeko glared at him. "Fine, since
you apparently know so much about me, yes, I'm a demon." she said. "Hn." "I don't
know, or care, what the hell you do to me, but you leave Suki out of this. She didn't do
anything. She doesn't even know that she's a demon yet!!!" Hiei stared at Maeko for a
minute. "She doesn't know that she's a demon?" "No!!! One of the only reasons that I
hang around her, is that her demon mother, is also mine!!!" "She's related to you?" Hiei
asked, in disbelief. "Yes!!! And she still doesn't know about her powers, or her biological
family, or being a demon, at all!!! So don't talk to her about it!!!" Maeko yelled,
apparently getting mad. "But we've already talked to her about it. And we're meeting her
tomorrow to further discuss it." Hiei reminded her. "Yes, but I was, and will be, there to
make sure you don't get too far into the conversation. She's not ready to know yet. Don't
make her more confused than she already is." The two stared at each other for a few
minutes, in stony silence. "I need to go now." Maeko said, before disappearing into the
night.
Author's Notes- Sorry this chapter is so short, I'll make the next one longer. I kinda have
writer's block right now though. Oh, and you know how I described Suki's outfit in the
first chapter, well on 12/4/03 I had almost the same outfit on. I had on a black coat
(except in ended a few inches below my butt, unlike Suki's), red scarf, black hat, and
black gloves. Under all my "winter wear" I had on a white sweater (except it wasn't lace-
up) and jean pants (not a jean skirt, but close enough). It was really weird. . .
here's the third chapter.
Explanations and Confusion
(3rd chapter)
"Well," Kurama started, "um, you see" He didn't quite know how to tell
them.
"Here." He handed the girls the two pictures of the demons. "These are two demons who
are destroying the Spirit World. Do you see a resemblance?" As soon as they saw the
pictures, the girls were speechless. "How did you. . . when did you. . . where did you get
these pictures?" Suki stuttered. "Koenma gave them to us. These were taken a few days
ago, at a massacre. We have heard that about 150 demons were killed that one night by
these two. They're feared by many." Kurama replied. Maeko and Suki just stared at the
pictures.
"These look like us." Suki stated. Everyone sweat-dropped. "Thank you for
stating the obvious, Genius." Maeko snapped. "Well he asked if we saw the
resemblance!" she retorted. "It wasn't a question that you answer!" The two girls yelled
at each other for a few minutes, before all you could hear were them hitting and kicking
the other, and their screams. Suki's three brothers ran into the room. "Shuichi! What
happened?!" Daichi yelled, trying to be heard over the commotion. "They got mad." he
replied. "Right. . ."
"LET GO OF MY HAIR, BITCH!!!!!!!" Maeko yelled. "THEN YOU LET GO
OF MY NECK!!!!!!!!!" Suki replied. "I SAID LET GO!!!!!!" "MAKE ME!!!!!"
"FINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "OWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! MAE-CHAN, THAT
HURT!!!!!!! DON'T STRANGLE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "WELL YOU SAID TO MAKE
YOU LET GO OF MY HAIR!!!!!!!!" "THAT DIDN'T MEAN STRANGLE ME,
IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?!"
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?!" "WHO ARE YOU
CALLING AN IDIOT, IDIOT?!?!?!?!?!?" "HEY, MAE-CHAN, DON'T CALL ME AN
IDIOT JUST BECAUSE I CALLED YOU AN IDIOT BECAUSE YOU CALLED ME
AN IDIOT BECAUSE I CALLED YOU AN IDIOT BECAUSE YOU TRIED TO
STRANGLE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The girls stopped trying to kill each other and
looked at the other for a minute, before bursting into laughter.
"You look so stupid!!!" Suki managed to say in-between laughs. "So do you,
baka!" All the boys were sweat-dropping in the background. "Why were we fighting,
anyway?" Suki asked. Maeko thought for a moment. "To tell the truth, I don't
remember." "Me either." They looked at each other a minute before standing up and
sitting back on the couch. "So, what were you saying?" Suki asked, seriously. ""Well, we
were telling you about the massacre and the two demons." Kurama said. (Just FYI Suki's
brothers left the room, after Suki & Maeko stopped fighting) "Oh, yes, about that...WHY
DO THEY LOOK LIKE US?!?!?!?!?!" Suki questioned. "Well, now that we found out
you two are not the demons, I'm not exactly sure." The fox youkai replied. Suki looked at
him for a moment before glancing at her watch. Seeing that it was already 10:59 p.m., she
thought it would be best if the boys got going. "Um...Kurama, Hiei, it's getting late, and
I'm getting tired, do you think maybe we could meet tomorrow or something, to further
discuss this?" she asked. "Hai." Kurama said, "How about we meet at the café around 2.
Is that okay?" Suki glanced at Maeko, who just nodded. "Great! I'll see you tomorrow!"
They all got up and walked to the door. 'Good-byes' were said and the two boys left.
As soon as they left Maeko and Suki ran back over to the couch and plopped
down. "That was weird. Ne, Mae-chan?" Suki asked, while glancing over at her friend.
"Hai. It was." Maeko replied, looking away.
"Wanna watch a movie?" Maeko asked. "I guess." The two, popped a dvd into the
player and started to watch it. After 2 hours, Maeko looked down at Suki, whose was
currently on the floor. 'Baka' she thought. She picked the girl up and placed her on
the couch. She placed a blanket over her, and left.
Maeko walked down the steps, and found someone waiting for her, Hiei. "What
do you want?" she asked, annoyed that there was someone blocking her way. But at the
same time, she was happy to see the fire demon, whom she had actually started to like. "I
need to talk to you." he replied. "Of course, why else would you be here?" she snapped
back. "Why did you lie about the fact that you are a demon?" Maeko stared at him. "Who
says I was lying?" she asks. "Don't lie, girl. You and I both know that you're a demon. I
can sense your energy. I know that Kurama felt it too. But it's not only you, is it?" Hiei
asked, smirking. "It's that other girl, too. Am I right?" Maeko glared at him. "Fine, since
you apparently know so much about me, yes, I'm a demon." she said. "Hn." "I don't
know, or care, what the hell you do to me, but you leave Suki out of this. She didn't do
anything. She doesn't even know that she's a demon yet!!!" Hiei stared at Maeko for a
minute. "She doesn't know that she's a demon?" "No!!! One of the only reasons that I
hang around her, is that her demon mother, is also mine!!!" "She's related to you?" Hiei
asked, in disbelief. "Yes!!! And she still doesn't know about her powers, or her biological
family, or being a demon, at all!!! So don't talk to her about it!!!" Maeko yelled,
apparently getting mad. "But we've already talked to her about it. And we're meeting her
tomorrow to further discuss it." Hiei reminded her. "Yes, but I was, and will be, there to
make sure you don't get too far into the conversation. She's not ready to know yet. Don't
make her more confused than she already is." The two stared at each other for a few
minutes, in stony silence. "I need to go now." Maeko said, before disappearing into the
night.
Author's Notes- Sorry this chapter is so short, I'll make the next one longer. I kinda have
writer's block right now though. Oh, and you know how I described Suki's outfit in the
first chapter, well on 12/4/03 I had almost the same outfit on. I had on a black coat
(except in ended a few inches below my butt, unlike Suki's), red scarf, black hat, and
black gloves. Under all my "winter wear" I had on a white sweater (except it wasn't lace-
up) and jean pants (not a jean skirt, but close enough). It was really weird. . .