Return of the Forsaken
Don''t Own Naruto
#3
The traing area was quiet. Raze was sitting calmly as everyone looked at the letter.
Raze stood up as Hinata got the letter.
"Who's Temari?" Hinata asked.
"Gaara's older sister. She'll kill me if I told you how older she was. She's a kind girl
if you get beyond her sometimes arrogant, and prideful nature" Raze said as he stretched his
msucles.
"How did you get this letter?" Neji asked.
"Naruto lived in the Sand about 6 years ago. He was here for a while then he left the
village to train under different teachers," Raze explained as he started to hit a target that they
had set up.
"Why hasn't he tried to contact us beside this letter?" Neji asked.
"You think I know?" Raze asked, "The kid was a hyperactive, unpredictable and a
loud mouthed kid,"
"Sounds like him," Neji said as he crossed his arms.
"Ready to train" Raze asked as he turned to them. He back fisted the
target, and the tree that held it shattered. It was a display of raw
strength.
"Ok. Let's see if this is worthwhile. If it isn't....," Neji let his sentence hang.
"Let's see, Lee uses the Leaf Spinning Style. Neji and Hinata uses the Hyuga Ryu
Jyuuken style. Kiba uses the beast Human Taijutsu style," Raze said to himself, slightly
surprising everyone.
"I can show Lee the Razor Wind style, Neji, and Hinata the Kage Jyuuken, and Kiba
the Leo Pride arts," Raze said, "Alright. Let's go," He cracked his knuckles and grinned under
his mask.
******************************************************************************
Sakura walked into the ramen stand and collapsed onto the counter.
"I would make your normal order, but I'm afraid that you can't handle anything,"The
owner said. Sakura groaned.
"Whaty's up big forehead?" Ino asked as she sat down with her bowl of Ramen.
"Raze was training Hinata's team, and I had to take care of them after they got hurt,
which was often," Sakura said, "Whoever that Raze guy is, He's powerful,"
"Raze Kazemirage. I heard he's the most sought after guy in the Sand and
any other villages that he has been to," Ino said, "That's what I've heard. I haven't seen him yet,"
"If I rmemeber correctly, it is this is the place," Raze said to himself as he walked in.
Ino, and Sakura stared at him. Until now Sakura had never actually gotten a good look at him.
He looked great! His hair was a golden blonde, and seemed naturally spiky. His eyes were a dark
blue, or was it because of the tan? Sakura couldn't tell.
"Hello," Raze said as he greeted the two. He sat down, and ordered some food. Ino had
the same look on her face as she did when she sees Sasuke. Stars in her eyes. She had yet to get a
steady boyfriend.
"Thanks," Raze said as he took the take out order.
"You're not staying?" Ino asked as she inched near him.
"Eh. Got to go," Raze wisely said as he got out of there. Sakura chuckled a
bit as Ino turned and fiercely stared at her.
"What?" Sakura asked innocently.
"Hey Sakura," Sasuke said as he hug her from behind, and then sat down.
Sasuke would show some emotion like hugs and kisses, but only at certain times. Sasuke ordered
his food.
"Raze has been here." Sasuke stated
"How did you know?" Sakura asked.
"I saw him leave here," Sasuke replied.
"He came in here, and had his order to go," Sakura said.
"Hey Sasuke!" Ino said as she pushed Sakura out of his sight, "Here's anidea. Why not
dump Miss. Big forehead and go out on a date with me?" Sasuke growled as he changed his
order to go. Sakura finished her meal and attachedherself to Sasuke as he left. She turned, and
struck out her tongue at Ino.
***************************************************************************
"Are you sure that he will be there?" A female voice asked.
"It's was his training spot when he was still part of the Leaf," Tsunade
replyed.
"Thank you," The voice said as the person left.
***************************************************************************
Sasuke was walking through the forest with Sakura beside him.
"Why are we here Sasuke?" Sakura asked.
"He will be here," Sasuke simply told her as they came to their old
training spot. The Cursed land as the villagers now called it. Raze was standing there with his
arms crossed looking up at the sky.
"You're finally here," Raze said.
"I been a while....," Sasuke started, "Naruto," Raze chuckled as he pulled down his
mask. It look Sakura a second to see it was. He had tanned, and had darkened his eye color, and
had grown in height and muscle.
"Naurto!!" Sakura yelled. Naruto grinned as he cleaned out his ear with his
pinky.
"I don't think Tsunade could hear. Try it again," Naruto joked, then turned serious. "It
has been a while,"
"You're more powerful than before," Sasuke said.
"I have been taught by 10 000 years of experience," Naruto said as he pointed at his
head, so that the two would understand what he meant.
"So the legend of Raze having unlimited Chakra wasn't a lie," Sasuke said.
"A lot of rumors about me are true," Naruto said.
"Rumors say you're married," Sakura said.
"Eh....," Naruto muttered as he scratched the back of his head. Suddenly someone
jumped onto Naruto's back, nearly pulling him towards the ground. Sasuke grabbed a kunai
ready to strike.
"Hey Temari!" Naruto yelled with a smile as the 'attacker' was revealed herself to
be Temari. She had grown into a beautiful young woman.
"Hey guys, This is Temari. Temari, This is Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura Haruno."
Naruto said as he pointed at each of them. Temari hopped off his back, and suddenly pulled out
her fan and hit him on the back of his head.
"What was that for!?" Naruto yelled as he rubbed the three bumps that were stacked
on top of each other.
"You were hesitant to tell them," Temari said.
"What?" Sakura asked.
"We're married," Naruto said as rubbed the growing bumps with his right hand, and
held up his left hand to show a gold ring. Temari smiled as she showed her ring too. Sakura
simply fainted.
**************************************************************************
"So the dead last finally Isn't dead last in something," Sasuke said. Temari was sitting
on Naruto's lap as he sat against a tree. Sakura was between them with a wet cloth on her
forehead.
"Found. I'll show you dead last," Naruto said about to attack then Temari slapped on
the arm slighty.
"You're not moving an inch got it?" Temari said.
"I was just joking," Naruto said as he smiled. Temari rolled her eyes a bit then she
smiled aswell. She planted a kiss on him, then they heard something hit the ground. It Seems
like Sakura had woken up, seen them kiss, and then decided to faint again.
"One question. What are you doing here anyways?" Naruto asked, "Not that I'm
complaining or anything."
"The Sand Devils are just resting here for the day. We have a mission, and no you're
not need for it." Temari said, "Gaara and Kankuro are resting at the inn right now,"
"Why don't we go there now?" Naruto asked.
"What!? I'm just as comfortable as I am now," Temari complained. Naruto whispered
something, and blushed slightly as Temari started to develop one as well. Sasuke had an idea
what Naruto said, but focused on Sakura instead.
"Hey Sasuke! We have to go, k?" Naruto said. Sasuke nodded, and The two
disappeared.
**********************************************************************
"So you two know," Kakashi said as he laid down on the couch in the lounge. In front
of him was Sasuke and Sakura.
"You knew a long!" Sakura yelled as she stood up. She looked around. Thankful that
there was no one there.
"I was the one who led the team that took him out of the village. Of course I knew,"
Kakashi said while Sakura resisted the urge to hit him.
"So he's not part of the Leaf anymore?" Sasuke asked.
"Nope. He's now part of the Sand," Kakashi said as he read his book. The ;atest one in
the Come Come Paradise series.
"Would he have grown as strong as he is now even if he was still in the Leaf?" Sasuke
asked.
"That, I don't know. He wouldn't know all of the sand jutsus that he does now, That's
for sure," Kakashi said, "Although he would have been about the same in Chakra."
"What do you think will happene if people find out?" Sakura asked.
"A lot of dead people of course," Another voice said. Everyone turned to find Gai
there.
"From what I heard Naruto, or Raze is more than capable, or willing to attack people
of the Leaf if provoked," Gai said, "Not that I blamed him."
"What else have you heard?" Kakashi asked.
"Raze is finally the leader of the Sand Anbu which is also called the Sand Devils.
Normally an Anbu team isn't that well known. They prefer to work in secert," Gai said, "He has
superior ninjustu, and taijutsu to even our Anbu due to well, you know,"
"I thought it was only the Chakra that was absorbed," Sakura said.
"It is the entire being that would be asborbed," Kakashi said, "So the
memories would come on... 10 000 years of figthing,"
"He's teaching Neji, and Hinata Kage Jyuuken, Lee the Razor Wind style and
Kiba the Leo Pride arts," Sakura said. Then she saw Kakashi and Gai freeze.
"The Kage Jyuuken is a forbidden arts, the Razor Wind is a lost art, and
the Leo Pride is another lost art." Gai said being the Taijutsu expert.
"Seems like the Hyuga tournament will be a sight to be seen," Kakashi said, "He's
fighting in it right?"
"Of course, you baka! Why else would he be helping them!" Sakura yelled.
***************************************************************************
"So you're going there?" Naruto asked.
"Yes, It's to make sure of the information that we have. Be ready to fight," Gaara told
Naruto.
"Of course. I'm always ready for a fight," Naruto said, "You just watch yourselves,"
"I think that we can survive without the great Raze with us," Kankuro said as he
snotted. Naruto looked at him for second, and shook his head as he grinned.
"Just watch yourselves," Naruto said.
"Of course!" Temari yelled smiling as they headed out. Naruto smiled as he
headed back.
Author's Note
There's the third chapter of this story. I'm guessing about half way finish I'm guessing.
Can't be sure. I start work on the next chapter as fast as I can which is pretty fast.
Don''t Own Naruto
#3
The traing area was quiet. Raze was sitting calmly as everyone looked at the letter.
Raze stood up as Hinata got the letter.
"Who's Temari?" Hinata asked.
"Gaara's older sister. She'll kill me if I told you how older she was. She's a kind girl
if you get beyond her sometimes arrogant, and prideful nature" Raze said as he stretched his
msucles.
"How did you get this letter?" Neji asked.
"Naruto lived in the Sand about 6 years ago. He was here for a while then he left the
village to train under different teachers," Raze explained as he started to hit a target that they
had set up.
"Why hasn't he tried to contact us beside this letter?" Neji asked.
"You think I know?" Raze asked, "The kid was a hyperactive, unpredictable and a
loud mouthed kid,"
"Sounds like him," Neji said as he crossed his arms.
"Ready to train" Raze asked as he turned to them. He back fisted the
target, and the tree that held it shattered. It was a display of raw
strength.
"Ok. Let's see if this is worthwhile. If it isn't....," Neji let his sentence hang.
"Let's see, Lee uses the Leaf Spinning Style. Neji and Hinata uses the Hyuga Ryu
Jyuuken style. Kiba uses the beast Human Taijutsu style," Raze said to himself, slightly
surprising everyone.
"I can show Lee the Razor Wind style, Neji, and Hinata the Kage Jyuuken, and Kiba
the Leo Pride arts," Raze said, "Alright. Let's go," He cracked his knuckles and grinned under
his mask.
******************************************************************************
Sakura walked into the ramen stand and collapsed onto the counter.
"I would make your normal order, but I'm afraid that you can't handle anything,"The
owner said. Sakura groaned.
"Whaty's up big forehead?" Ino asked as she sat down with her bowl of Ramen.
"Raze was training Hinata's team, and I had to take care of them after they got hurt,
which was often," Sakura said, "Whoever that Raze guy is, He's powerful,"
"Raze Kazemirage. I heard he's the most sought after guy in the Sand and
any other villages that he has been to," Ino said, "That's what I've heard. I haven't seen him yet,"
"If I rmemeber correctly, it is this is the place," Raze said to himself as he walked in.
Ino, and Sakura stared at him. Until now Sakura had never actually gotten a good look at him.
He looked great! His hair was a golden blonde, and seemed naturally spiky. His eyes were a dark
blue, or was it because of the tan? Sakura couldn't tell.
"Hello," Raze said as he greeted the two. He sat down, and ordered some food. Ino had
the same look on her face as she did when she sees Sasuke. Stars in her eyes. She had yet to get a
steady boyfriend.
"Thanks," Raze said as he took the take out order.
"You're not staying?" Ino asked as she inched near him.
"Eh. Got to go," Raze wisely said as he got out of there. Sakura chuckled a
bit as Ino turned and fiercely stared at her.
"What?" Sakura asked innocently.
"Hey Sakura," Sasuke said as he hug her from behind, and then sat down.
Sasuke would show some emotion like hugs and kisses, but only at certain times. Sasuke ordered
his food.
"Raze has been here." Sasuke stated
"How did you know?" Sakura asked.
"I saw him leave here," Sasuke replied.
"He came in here, and had his order to go," Sakura said.
"Hey Sasuke!" Ino said as she pushed Sakura out of his sight, "Here's anidea. Why not
dump Miss. Big forehead and go out on a date with me?" Sasuke growled as he changed his
order to go. Sakura finished her meal and attachedherself to Sasuke as he left. She turned, and
struck out her tongue at Ino.
***************************************************************************
"Are you sure that he will be there?" A female voice asked.
"It's was his training spot when he was still part of the Leaf," Tsunade
replyed.
"Thank you," The voice said as the person left.
***************************************************************************
Sasuke was walking through the forest with Sakura beside him.
"Why are we here Sasuke?" Sakura asked.
"He will be here," Sasuke simply told her as they came to their old
training spot. The Cursed land as the villagers now called it. Raze was standing there with his
arms crossed looking up at the sky.
"You're finally here," Raze said.
"I been a while....," Sasuke started, "Naruto," Raze chuckled as he pulled down his
mask. It look Sakura a second to see it was. He had tanned, and had darkened his eye color, and
had grown in height and muscle.
"Naurto!!" Sakura yelled. Naruto grinned as he cleaned out his ear with his
pinky.
"I don't think Tsunade could hear. Try it again," Naruto joked, then turned serious. "It
has been a while,"
"You're more powerful than before," Sasuke said.
"I have been taught by 10 000 years of experience," Naruto said as he pointed at his
head, so that the two would understand what he meant.
"So the legend of Raze having unlimited Chakra wasn't a lie," Sasuke said.
"A lot of rumors about me are true," Naruto said.
"Rumors say you're married," Sakura said.
"Eh....," Naruto muttered as he scratched the back of his head. Suddenly someone
jumped onto Naruto's back, nearly pulling him towards the ground. Sasuke grabbed a kunai
ready to strike.
"Hey Temari!" Naruto yelled with a smile as the 'attacker' was revealed herself to
be Temari. She had grown into a beautiful young woman.
"Hey guys, This is Temari. Temari, This is Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura Haruno."
Naruto said as he pointed at each of them. Temari hopped off his back, and suddenly pulled out
her fan and hit him on the back of his head.
"What was that for!?" Naruto yelled as he rubbed the three bumps that were stacked
on top of each other.
"You were hesitant to tell them," Temari said.
"What?" Sakura asked.
"We're married," Naruto said as rubbed the growing bumps with his right hand, and
held up his left hand to show a gold ring. Temari smiled as she showed her ring too. Sakura
simply fainted.
**************************************************************************
"So the dead last finally Isn't dead last in something," Sasuke said. Temari was sitting
on Naruto's lap as he sat against a tree. Sakura was between them with a wet cloth on her
forehead.
"Found. I'll show you dead last," Naruto said about to attack then Temari slapped on
the arm slighty.
"You're not moving an inch got it?" Temari said.
"I was just joking," Naruto said as he smiled. Temari rolled her eyes a bit then she
smiled aswell. She planted a kiss on him, then they heard something hit the ground. It Seems
like Sakura had woken up, seen them kiss, and then decided to faint again.
"One question. What are you doing here anyways?" Naruto asked, "Not that I'm
complaining or anything."
"The Sand Devils are just resting here for the day. We have a mission, and no you're
not need for it." Temari said, "Gaara and Kankuro are resting at the inn right now,"
"Why don't we go there now?" Naruto asked.
"What!? I'm just as comfortable as I am now," Temari complained. Naruto whispered
something, and blushed slightly as Temari started to develop one as well. Sasuke had an idea
what Naruto said, but focused on Sakura instead.
"Hey Sasuke! We have to go, k?" Naruto said. Sasuke nodded, and The two
disappeared.
**********************************************************************
"So you two know," Kakashi said as he laid down on the couch in the lounge. In front
of him was Sasuke and Sakura.
"You knew a long!" Sakura yelled as she stood up. She looked around. Thankful that
there was no one there.
"I was the one who led the team that took him out of the village. Of course I knew,"
Kakashi said while Sakura resisted the urge to hit him.
"So he's not part of the Leaf anymore?" Sasuke asked.
"Nope. He's now part of the Sand," Kakashi said as he read his book. The ;atest one in
the Come Come Paradise series.
"Would he have grown as strong as he is now even if he was still in the Leaf?" Sasuke
asked.
"That, I don't know. He wouldn't know all of the sand jutsus that he does now, That's
for sure," Kakashi said, "Although he would have been about the same in Chakra."
"What do you think will happene if people find out?" Sakura asked.
"A lot of dead people of course," Another voice said. Everyone turned to find Gai
there.
"From what I heard Naruto, or Raze is more than capable, or willing to attack people
of the Leaf if provoked," Gai said, "Not that I blamed him."
"What else have you heard?" Kakashi asked.
"Raze is finally the leader of the Sand Anbu which is also called the Sand Devils.
Normally an Anbu team isn't that well known. They prefer to work in secert," Gai said, "He has
superior ninjustu, and taijutsu to even our Anbu due to well, you know,"
"I thought it was only the Chakra that was absorbed," Sakura said.
"It is the entire being that would be asborbed," Kakashi said, "So the
memories would come on... 10 000 years of figthing,"
"He's teaching Neji, and Hinata Kage Jyuuken, Lee the Razor Wind style and
Kiba the Leo Pride arts," Sakura said. Then she saw Kakashi and Gai freeze.
"The Kage Jyuuken is a forbidden arts, the Razor Wind is a lost art, and
the Leo Pride is another lost art." Gai said being the Taijutsu expert.
"Seems like the Hyuga tournament will be a sight to be seen," Kakashi said, "He's
fighting in it right?"
"Of course, you baka! Why else would he be helping them!" Sakura yelled.
***************************************************************************
"So you're going there?" Naruto asked.
"Yes, It's to make sure of the information that we have. Be ready to fight," Gaara told
Naruto.
"Of course. I'm always ready for a fight," Naruto said, "You just watch yourselves,"
"I think that we can survive without the great Raze with us," Kankuro said as he
snotted. Naruto looked at him for second, and shook his head as he grinned.
"Just watch yourselves," Naruto said.
"Of course!" Temari yelled smiling as they headed out. Naruto smiled as he
headed back.
Author's Note
There's the third chapter of this story. I'm guessing about half way finish I'm guessing.
Can't be sure. I start work on the next chapter as fast as I can which is pretty fast.