Return of the Forsaken
Don't own Naruto
#4
"Aah!" Kiba yelled as he was thrown back. The other Kiba transformed
back to Akamaru.
"I'm just getting you back. You ripped my gauntlet," Raze said as he held up
a ripped leather gauntlet. Kiba growled. After three days of training
Kiba could barely even touch him let alone hurt him.
"Calm down Kiba-Kun," Hinata said as she held up some medicine. Kiba
calmed down, and took the medicine. It was now Neji's turn to fight. Raze was
showing his true power as he fought them. He pulled no punches back, or
kickes in some cases.
"Come on," Raze said. They were sparring to see how they adapted to the
styles that he had shown them. Neji disappeared and reppeared behind Raze.
Kage Jyuuken works on the basic of high speed and attack. Hyuga Ryu works on
straight up fighting, and the Kaiten deals with all other attacks. Raze
showed that the Kaiten has a weakness. It Burns up chakra to emit chakra
from your body. It is rare to see a Hyuga reach that limit.
"Kaiten!" Neji yelled as he spun as he emited chakra from his body.
Raze shifted his weigh and moved away as Neji suddenly stopped and lunged at
him in mid-air. Raze grinned as he disappeared in a cloud of smoke, and Neji saw
he had only hit a rock.
"On me!?" Neji said surprised. No one had ever pulled Kawarimi on him.
'He's gone to an even higher level,' Neji thought as he looked around, and
a bullet speed Raze came out of the forest. Neji ducked quickly, but Raze
spun around in mid air and kicked Neji back on the back of his head. Neji
hit the ground, hard.
"Ouch," Sakura said as she imagined how much that must have hurt.
"That was iron fist," Neji said as he pushed himself up.
"You didn't see it coming. I train people to fight, and Not just against
one thing." Raze said as he stood up, and looked at the pieces of rock, "Not
bad through. I put some Chakra into that rock just to see what you could
do,"
"I have had enough of this! Show us your true powers. Stop slowly revealing
them!" Neji said.
"Ok," Raze said as he tighten his mucsles, "I suggest that you run away,"
Sakura
turned, and simply ran as fast as she could.
"What's with her?" Kiba asked.
"Aaaah!" Raze screamed as the ground started to shake.
*****************************************************************************
"Then I pulled Sakura into this...," Kakashi stopped when he felt a high
level of chakra.
"That much chakra?" Kakashi asked.
*****************************************************************************
Tsunade picked up her cup of sake. She was sitting at a bar waiting for her
meal. She felt the chakra then she dropped the cup.
"That much!?" Tsunade asked as she turned around.
*******************************************************************************
Kbia scrambled backwards in surprise. At his feet was a crater, and in the
middle was Raze. Looking at them with his blue eyes. Around him was a golden
blaze of chakra.
"Come on," Raze said as he held out his hand and flicked his fingers at
Neji. Neji charged him.
"Aaah!" Raze yelled as he sent some chakra at Neji. Neji was blown back by
the powerful force.
'Like Naruto-kun,' Hinata thought to herself as she looked at Raze. An
image from 6 years ago of Naruto, who was surrounded by red chakra played in
her head.
"Oh shit!" Kiba yelled.
'So much power.' Neji said as he got up.
******************************************************************************
"What was with the chakra shockwave?" Kakashi asked.
"I don't know but I have an idea. Sakura?" Sasuke asked as he looked at
Sakura.
"Raze unleashed all of his power," Sakura said as she put a bag of ice of
her forehead because a chunk of rock had hit her. "It wasn't his normal
chakra from before, or the red chakra. It was like a mix of the two."
"I could feel it aswell, and I was outside the village," Sasuke said.
"The Hokage explained it was a battle of summoning creatures that had
caused the chakra shockwave," Kakashi said, "Sakura. Can you tell Raze not
to do it again?"
"He said he wouldn't unless he was forced to," Sakura said.
"Even now he's still growing," Kakashi said.
"What!?" The two yelled.
****************************************************************************
Naruto spun around, and landed on his feet. Before him was a copy of
himself.
Naruto chuckled as he ran in, and the two Narutos fought each other.
'Come on,' Naruto said as he jumped back, 'Dammit these weights are nothing
now,' He made the clone disappear.
"These weighs are nothing now," Naruto said as he pulled off his vest
revealing the weights attached to it.
"I see that you are using my training methods," Gai said as he appeared.
"So you know too?" Naruto asked.
"I overheard your old team talking," Gai said, "So how much weight are you
packing?"
"Double Lee's," Naruto said as he threw it away. He punched the air a bit.
His strikes were simple blurs.
"Impressive. Why not show me what you've got?" Gai asked. Naruto looked at
Gai
then smirked.
***************************************************************************
Raze headed for his room. He couldn't help but overhear the new rumor of
how Gai was found knocked out cold in front of the hospital. Gai told
everyone that he been training with someone.
*************************************************************************
FLASHBACK
Naruto flew back, and he crashed into the wall. The wall itself caved in
with
Naruto leaning into it. He started to cough, and blood came out of his
mouth.
"A kid thinks he can fight the Raikage of the Cloud?" the Raikage asked,
"Stupid brat. I'll show you what happens when you fight a losing battle," He
raised his hand. Chakra was gathering around him.
"Naruto! Get the hell out of here!" Tsunade yelled, but she was batted
away.
"So long brat!" Raikage yelled as he swung down his arm. Naruto's head shot
up and looked at the Raikage with red eyes.
************************************************************************
Raze shook his head as he opened the door to his room and headed in to find
that there was a hawk on his window sill that had something wrapped around
it's talon. Raze walked up to it and pulled it off, and the hawk flew away.
He looked at the blank card, and then focused his chakra into his fingers
then into the card.
Information came into sight.
"So it's almost time" Raze said as he threw it away. The card bursted into
flames,
and then into ashes.
************************************************************************
"I still say that Naruto got the easier part of this mission," Kankuro
said.
"Shut up. You couldn't do half the stuff that Naruto has done. He saves you
ass
dozens of times during missions," Temari said as she defended her husband
and argued with her brother.
"Shut up you two. I felt something. They're already here," Gaara said.
"Damn it. They're early," Kankuro said as he unwrapped his puppet.
"Might as well get this over with already," Temari said, "Being in these
trees are getting to be a pain in the back," She pulled out her fans. The
plug came out from Gaara's groud. Farther up the road was an official
surrounded by four ninjas. On either side traveling in the trees were two
more ninjas.
"Desert coffin," Gaara mouthed. The group couldn't see the two as sand
engulfed them in Gaara's desert coffin and suffocated them to death.
"Stop," The lead ninja said. In the middle of the road was a cloaked
figure. It started to cackle as it pulled out a knife. In an instance a
kunai flew into the figure's chest. The figure dropped backwards.
"Stay here sir," the lead said as he walked to see the attackers. He held a
sword ready to strike as he walked towards the figure. Suddenly it jumped
up.
The ninja stabbed it with his sword, but had no effect as it ripped open and
wrapped itself around the ninia.
"A puppet!" He yelled. The three ninjas threw weapons to free their leader,
but a blast of wind had the various weapons fly back. The minister they were
guarding was struck by the weapons. He fell towards the ground. Kankuro
grinned as Karasu crushed the ninja's bones to dust. A second gust of wind
came through, but with it was tons of sands that wrapped around the ninjas.
"Desert graveyard," Gaara said as the sand scattered with blood of
theunfortunate ninjas. Temari walked
through the blood and sand as it went back into Gaara's groud. She shifted
through the minister's clothes then came up with a letter. She opened it,
and read it.
"We need to get back now!" Temari said, "It's happening at the
tournament!"
**************************************************************************
Raze looked around at the Leaf's stadium. It was early morning, and the sky
was filled many different colors from the rising sun.
"Almost time," Raze muttered.
Author's Note
Next up is the tournament. Sorry but I wouldn't post it up for a short while. I still need to
figure out the fights go. I already had who wins and loses what just how they fight is what's
needed. I might add some ideas of your if you tell me. Until next time.
Don't own Naruto
#4
"Aah!" Kiba yelled as he was thrown back. The other Kiba transformed
back to Akamaru.
"I'm just getting you back. You ripped my gauntlet," Raze said as he held up
a ripped leather gauntlet. Kiba growled. After three days of training
Kiba could barely even touch him let alone hurt him.
"Calm down Kiba-Kun," Hinata said as she held up some medicine. Kiba
calmed down, and took the medicine. It was now Neji's turn to fight. Raze was
showing his true power as he fought them. He pulled no punches back, or
kickes in some cases.
"Come on," Raze said. They were sparring to see how they adapted to the
styles that he had shown them. Neji disappeared and reppeared behind Raze.
Kage Jyuuken works on the basic of high speed and attack. Hyuga Ryu works on
straight up fighting, and the Kaiten deals with all other attacks. Raze
showed that the Kaiten has a weakness. It Burns up chakra to emit chakra
from your body. It is rare to see a Hyuga reach that limit.
"Kaiten!" Neji yelled as he spun as he emited chakra from his body.
Raze shifted his weigh and moved away as Neji suddenly stopped and lunged at
him in mid-air. Raze grinned as he disappeared in a cloud of smoke, and Neji saw
he had only hit a rock.
"On me!?" Neji said surprised. No one had ever pulled Kawarimi on him.
'He's gone to an even higher level,' Neji thought as he looked around, and
a bullet speed Raze came out of the forest. Neji ducked quickly, but Raze
spun around in mid air and kicked Neji back on the back of his head. Neji
hit the ground, hard.
"Ouch," Sakura said as she imagined how much that must have hurt.
"That was iron fist," Neji said as he pushed himself up.
"You didn't see it coming. I train people to fight, and Not just against
one thing." Raze said as he stood up, and looked at the pieces of rock, "Not
bad through. I put some Chakra into that rock just to see what you could
do,"
"I have had enough of this! Show us your true powers. Stop slowly revealing
them!" Neji said.
"Ok," Raze said as he tighten his mucsles, "I suggest that you run away,"
Sakura
turned, and simply ran as fast as she could.
"What's with her?" Kiba asked.
"Aaaah!" Raze screamed as the ground started to shake.
*****************************************************************************
"Then I pulled Sakura into this...," Kakashi stopped when he felt a high
level of chakra.
"That much chakra?" Kakashi asked.
*****************************************************************************
Tsunade picked up her cup of sake. She was sitting at a bar waiting for her
meal. She felt the chakra then she dropped the cup.
"That much!?" Tsunade asked as she turned around.
*******************************************************************************
Kbia scrambled backwards in surprise. At his feet was a crater, and in the
middle was Raze. Looking at them with his blue eyes. Around him was a golden
blaze of chakra.
"Come on," Raze said as he held out his hand and flicked his fingers at
Neji. Neji charged him.
"Aaah!" Raze yelled as he sent some chakra at Neji. Neji was blown back by
the powerful force.
'Like Naruto-kun,' Hinata thought to herself as she looked at Raze. An
image from 6 years ago of Naruto, who was surrounded by red chakra played in
her head.
"Oh shit!" Kiba yelled.
'So much power.' Neji said as he got up.
******************************************************************************
"What was with the chakra shockwave?" Kakashi asked.
"I don't know but I have an idea. Sakura?" Sasuke asked as he looked at
Sakura.
"Raze unleashed all of his power," Sakura said as she put a bag of ice of
her forehead because a chunk of rock had hit her. "It wasn't his normal
chakra from before, or the red chakra. It was like a mix of the two."
"I could feel it aswell, and I was outside the village," Sasuke said.
"The Hokage explained it was a battle of summoning creatures that had
caused the chakra shockwave," Kakashi said, "Sakura. Can you tell Raze not
to do it again?"
"He said he wouldn't unless he was forced to," Sakura said.
"Even now he's still growing," Kakashi said.
"What!?" The two yelled.
****************************************************************************
Naruto spun around, and landed on his feet. Before him was a copy of
himself.
Naruto chuckled as he ran in, and the two Narutos fought each other.
'Come on,' Naruto said as he jumped back, 'Dammit these weights are nothing
now,' He made the clone disappear.
"These weighs are nothing now," Naruto said as he pulled off his vest
revealing the weights attached to it.
"I see that you are using my training methods," Gai said as he appeared.
"So you know too?" Naruto asked.
"I overheard your old team talking," Gai said, "So how much weight are you
packing?"
"Double Lee's," Naruto said as he threw it away. He punched the air a bit.
His strikes were simple blurs.
"Impressive. Why not show me what you've got?" Gai asked. Naruto looked at
Gai
then smirked.
***************************************************************************
Raze headed for his room. He couldn't help but overhear the new rumor of
how Gai was found knocked out cold in front of the hospital. Gai told
everyone that he been training with someone.
*************************************************************************
FLASHBACK
Naruto flew back, and he crashed into the wall. The wall itself caved in
with
Naruto leaning into it. He started to cough, and blood came out of his
mouth.
"A kid thinks he can fight the Raikage of the Cloud?" the Raikage asked,
"Stupid brat. I'll show you what happens when you fight a losing battle," He
raised his hand. Chakra was gathering around him.
"Naruto! Get the hell out of here!" Tsunade yelled, but she was batted
away.
"So long brat!" Raikage yelled as he swung down his arm. Naruto's head shot
up and looked at the Raikage with red eyes.
************************************************************************
Raze shook his head as he opened the door to his room and headed in to find
that there was a hawk on his window sill that had something wrapped around
it's talon. Raze walked up to it and pulled it off, and the hawk flew away.
He looked at the blank card, and then focused his chakra into his fingers
then into the card.
Information came into sight.
"So it's almost time" Raze said as he threw it away. The card bursted into
flames,
and then into ashes.
************************************************************************
"I still say that Naruto got the easier part of this mission," Kankuro
said.
"Shut up. You couldn't do half the stuff that Naruto has done. He saves you
ass
dozens of times during missions," Temari said as she defended her husband
and argued with her brother.
"Shut up you two. I felt something. They're already here," Gaara said.
"Damn it. They're early," Kankuro said as he unwrapped his puppet.
"Might as well get this over with already," Temari said, "Being in these
trees are getting to be a pain in the back," She pulled out her fans. The
plug came out from Gaara's groud. Farther up the road was an official
surrounded by four ninjas. On either side traveling in the trees were two
more ninjas.
"Desert coffin," Gaara mouthed. The group couldn't see the two as sand
engulfed them in Gaara's desert coffin and suffocated them to death.
"Stop," The lead ninja said. In the middle of the road was a cloaked
figure. It started to cackle as it pulled out a knife. In an instance a
kunai flew into the figure's chest. The figure dropped backwards.
"Stay here sir," the lead said as he walked to see the attackers. He held a
sword ready to strike as he walked towards the figure. Suddenly it jumped
up.
The ninja stabbed it with his sword, but had no effect as it ripped open and
wrapped itself around the ninia.
"A puppet!" He yelled. The three ninjas threw weapons to free their leader,
but a blast of wind had the various weapons fly back. The minister they were
guarding was struck by the weapons. He fell towards the ground. Kankuro
grinned as Karasu crushed the ninja's bones to dust. A second gust of wind
came through, but with it was tons of sands that wrapped around the ninjas.
"Desert graveyard," Gaara said as the sand scattered with blood of
theunfortunate ninjas. Temari walked
through the blood and sand as it went back into Gaara's groud. She shifted
through the minister's clothes then came up with a letter. She opened it,
and read it.
"We need to get back now!" Temari said, "It's happening at the
tournament!"
**************************************************************************
Raze looked around at the Leaf's stadium. It was early morning, and the sky
was filled many different colors from the rising sun.
"Almost time," Raze muttered.
Author's Note
Next up is the tournament. Sorry but I wouldn't post it up for a short while. I still need to
figure out the fights go. I already had who wins and loses what just how they fight is what's
needed. I might add some ideas of your if you tell me. Until next time.