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Chapter 4- I Ray dead?
Ray's breathing was shallow, and he was as pale as a ghost.
-Damn you Voltaire and Boris, but especially damn you Canex- Ray was tossing and turning slightly, but stopped quickly and lay as still as a plank of wood.
"Hey kid? You really did well. If it weren't for you, your little friend would be dead about now. How old did you say you were? 16? And what's your name?" The doctor on Ray's other side asked, trying to make conversation.
"Yeah, I'm 16. Oh, and my name's Max. Max Tate. My friend, Ray Kon, has already tried this before. Luckily, we saved him just in time then as well." Max turned to Ray and his face fell. "What did he just say? I wasn't really listening."
"Sorry mate. I don't speak Russian; I did pick up something about Voltaire or something. By the way, My name's 'arry." The doctor apologised then introduced himself.
"Voltaire?" Max was thinking once again. //So he's thinking of Kai again, or something about him anyway, but what?// Pondering over this question, Max didn't realise that the steady beeping of the heart monitor stopped completely.
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Ray climbed the translucent stairs that appeared mysteriously in front of him. He was surrounded by a scenery of white clouds floating in a pink sky. Looking around, Ray realised that the scenery was moving. Nothing was holding up the stairs that Ray was climbing, and they stopped a little way farther up. Suddenly a white platform suspended in mid-air appeared at the last step.
Ray hesitantly climbed to the top. On the platform, just lazing about, was a large white tiger.
"Driger" Ray whispered. The great white tiger turned his attention to Ray and nodded to him. His eyes shinning.
"Yes I am Driger, Do you realise that at the moment you are dead?"
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"RAY" Max screamed. Tears were now running freely down his face. "RAY, YOU BATARD! AFTER ALL WE'VE DONE FOR YOU, AND YOU DIE!" Max sobbed into the still and silent form of Ray.
The body jumped slightly as the doctors used the dephibulator (1) to try and jolt Ray's heart back into working again. Another doctor was injecting medicines into Ray's left arm. The nurse was now comforting the crying Max.
"We will get him back, I promise you we will." Max smiled weakly. He buried his head in her shoulder as she whispered reassurances and patting his side comfortingly, while he watched the scene before him play out.
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"Well, at the very least something has gone right." Ray sighed, while Driger growled at him.
"You have put all your friends into depression as well you know." Ray looked blankly at his best friend.
"Do you realise that Kai is still alive?" A new smooth flowing voice sounded behind them.
Ray gasped and turned around, while Driger smiled (As much as a cat can smile!) a welcome.
"Hello Dranzer, glad you could make it"
"So am I Drig, so am I. I see Ray hasn't realised what pain ALL his team mates are in." The giant red phoenix turned to Ray. "You see Ray, Kai is alive. He is being beaten up, but he is alive. At the moment, he has the company of a bit-beast, and is barley living."
I tried to help him. It doesn't help when you're hated by Kai you know." A large white wolf surrounded by blue flames spoke up. "Just because I was created by Boivolt, doesn't give him the right to think I'm like Black Dranzer. At night I snuggle up to him, to keep him warm, so I think he's getting to like me. Here's what he's doing right now Ray." She howled, and a screen appeared in front of the giant wolf.
A small-blooded body was curled up in a corner of a cell that had blood spattered up the walls. The lump that was Kai was shivering severely. He was clutching a black beyblade that Canex lived in. The screen disappeared, leaving bit-beasts (not Canex) and human alike, stunned at the sight that had just played before them.
Tears were flowing down Ray's face; Dranzer had her head in her wing in a vain attempt to block everything out. Driger slunk over to Ray while Canex padded over to the distressed bird. Both bit-beasts tried to comfort the lost boy and phoenix.
Realisation dawned on Ray.
"I have to go back, to save Kai. To help my team, I never realised how much they looked up to me; I just took it all for granted. Now I know! Is it too late? Drig, can I go back, Or am I gone?" It was Canex who answered with,
"You're lucky there's no time in this place. What seems like an eternity here, is nothing at all down there. The quicker you get back, the better. All you have to do is walk down those stairs and wish." All bit- beasts turned to watch Ray, who was dashing down the stairs at an all out run, in order to get there faster.
"Good luck." The beasts chorused to the retreating figure.
Before Ray knew it, he was surrounded by blackness.
Will Ray make it, or will he really die? Read the next chappie to find out. Meanwhile.
The votes are: Suicide- Killed- Escape- Thanx to all those who've voted or reviewed, to those who haven't DO SO!!!
Chapter 4- I Ray dead?
Ray's breathing was shallow, and he was as pale as a ghost.
-Damn you Voltaire and Boris, but especially damn you Canex- Ray was tossing and turning slightly, but stopped quickly and lay as still as a plank of wood.
"Hey kid? You really did well. If it weren't for you, your little friend would be dead about now. How old did you say you were? 16? And what's your name?" The doctor on Ray's other side asked, trying to make conversation.
"Yeah, I'm 16. Oh, and my name's Max. Max Tate. My friend, Ray Kon, has already tried this before. Luckily, we saved him just in time then as well." Max turned to Ray and his face fell. "What did he just say? I wasn't really listening."
"Sorry mate. I don't speak Russian; I did pick up something about Voltaire or something. By the way, My name's 'arry." The doctor apologised then introduced himself.
"Voltaire?" Max was thinking once again. //So he's thinking of Kai again, or something about him anyway, but what?// Pondering over this question, Max didn't realise that the steady beeping of the heart monitor stopped completely.
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Ray climbed the translucent stairs that appeared mysteriously in front of him. He was surrounded by a scenery of white clouds floating in a pink sky. Looking around, Ray realised that the scenery was moving. Nothing was holding up the stairs that Ray was climbing, and they stopped a little way farther up. Suddenly a white platform suspended in mid-air appeared at the last step.
Ray hesitantly climbed to the top. On the platform, just lazing about, was a large white tiger.
"Driger" Ray whispered. The great white tiger turned his attention to Ray and nodded to him. His eyes shinning.
"Yes I am Driger, Do you realise that at the moment you are dead?"
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"RAY" Max screamed. Tears were now running freely down his face. "RAY, YOU BATARD! AFTER ALL WE'VE DONE FOR YOU, AND YOU DIE!" Max sobbed into the still and silent form of Ray.
The body jumped slightly as the doctors used the dephibulator (1) to try and jolt Ray's heart back into working again. Another doctor was injecting medicines into Ray's left arm. The nurse was now comforting the crying Max.
"We will get him back, I promise you we will." Max smiled weakly. He buried his head in her shoulder as she whispered reassurances and patting his side comfortingly, while he watched the scene before him play out.
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"Well, at the very least something has gone right." Ray sighed, while Driger growled at him.
"You have put all your friends into depression as well you know." Ray looked blankly at his best friend.
"Do you realise that Kai is still alive?" A new smooth flowing voice sounded behind them.
Ray gasped and turned around, while Driger smiled (As much as a cat can smile!) a welcome.
"Hello Dranzer, glad you could make it"
"So am I Drig, so am I. I see Ray hasn't realised what pain ALL his team mates are in." The giant red phoenix turned to Ray. "You see Ray, Kai is alive. He is being beaten up, but he is alive. At the moment, he has the company of a bit-beast, and is barley living."
I tried to help him. It doesn't help when you're hated by Kai you know." A large white wolf surrounded by blue flames spoke up. "Just because I was created by Boivolt, doesn't give him the right to think I'm like Black Dranzer. At night I snuggle up to him, to keep him warm, so I think he's getting to like me. Here's what he's doing right now Ray." She howled, and a screen appeared in front of the giant wolf.
A small-blooded body was curled up in a corner of a cell that had blood spattered up the walls. The lump that was Kai was shivering severely. He was clutching a black beyblade that Canex lived in. The screen disappeared, leaving bit-beasts (not Canex) and human alike, stunned at the sight that had just played before them.
Tears were flowing down Ray's face; Dranzer had her head in her wing in a vain attempt to block everything out. Driger slunk over to Ray while Canex padded over to the distressed bird. Both bit-beasts tried to comfort the lost boy and phoenix.
Realisation dawned on Ray.
"I have to go back, to save Kai. To help my team, I never realised how much they looked up to me; I just took it all for granted. Now I know! Is it too late? Drig, can I go back, Or am I gone?" It was Canex who answered with,
"You're lucky there's no time in this place. What seems like an eternity here, is nothing at all down there. The quicker you get back, the better. All you have to do is walk down those stairs and wish." All bit- beasts turned to watch Ray, who was dashing down the stairs at an all out run, in order to get there faster.
"Good luck." The beasts chorused to the retreating figure.
Before Ray knew it, he was surrounded by blackness.
Will Ray make it, or will he really die? Read the next chappie to find out. Meanwhile.
The votes are: Suicide- Killed- Escape- Thanx to all those who've voted or reviewed, to those who haven't DO SO!!!