Okay, I SHOULD wait 'till I get more reviews on the 4th chapter, BUT, I
have about 3 or 4 more chapters to go, and 2 more days.
So, without further to-do (What's that from? I think probably Rugrats, instead of "Ado" they say, "to-do"), here is the 5th Chapter.
CHRISTMAS COUNTDOWN: TOMOROW IS CHRISTMAS EVE!!!!! ONLY 2 MORE DAYS TO GO!!!!
Okay. Short chapter. I may come back and add to it, but right now I'm feeling like I'm going to throw up.....
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Chapter 5: Mall Madness
"I still have much to show you." Xander said. Twister sighed, but trudged after Xander who was heading towards the Shore Shack.
"Man, are we goin' to get some fries, 'cause all this time traveling stuff is making me hungry." Twister proclaimed, rubbing his stomach.
Xander just smiled knowingly as they walked up to the entrence of the shack.
"A MALL? The strip is a MALL?" Twister asked, notcing that the shack and all the stores around it had been turned into an inside mall, "Who owns it?"
"Welcome to Tito Makhani's Mini-Maxi Mall! Great Christmas Sales, open 'till 1:00 A.M on Cjristmas Eve!" A large man wearing a hawiian shirt and sandals announced, standing outside of the mall.
"Tito?" Twister's eyes bulged out, "He owns this?"
"Yep, he's rich too." Xander nodded, "He owns alot of big buisnesses."
Twister thought for a few moments, "Where do you live, Sam?"
"I am NOT Sam, remember? I am Xander." He sighed, "Sam doesn't live here. He never moved here."
"He didn't?" Twister asked, "Why not?"
"He just didn't." Xander told him, leaving Twister even more confused.
"So, angel dude, where are we going next?" Twister asked, forgetting about Sam.
"To your past. When you did exist." Xander said.
Twister scrunched up his face, "Why would we want to go there?"
So, without further to-do (What's that from? I think probably Rugrats, instead of "Ado" they say, "to-do"), here is the 5th Chapter.
CHRISTMAS COUNTDOWN: TOMOROW IS CHRISTMAS EVE!!!!! ONLY 2 MORE DAYS TO GO!!!!
Okay. Short chapter. I may come back and add to it, but right now I'm feeling like I'm going to throw up.....
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Chapter 5: Mall Madness
"I still have much to show you." Xander said. Twister sighed, but trudged after Xander who was heading towards the Shore Shack.
"Man, are we goin' to get some fries, 'cause all this time traveling stuff is making me hungry." Twister proclaimed, rubbing his stomach.
Xander just smiled knowingly as they walked up to the entrence of the shack.
"A MALL? The strip is a MALL?" Twister asked, notcing that the shack and all the stores around it had been turned into an inside mall, "Who owns it?"
"Welcome to Tito Makhani's Mini-Maxi Mall! Great Christmas Sales, open 'till 1:00 A.M on Cjristmas Eve!" A large man wearing a hawiian shirt and sandals announced, standing outside of the mall.
"Tito?" Twister's eyes bulged out, "He owns this?"
"Yep, he's rich too." Xander nodded, "He owns alot of big buisnesses."
Twister thought for a few moments, "Where do you live, Sam?"
"I am NOT Sam, remember? I am Xander." He sighed, "Sam doesn't live here. He never moved here."
"He didn't?" Twister asked, "Why not?"
"He just didn't." Xander told him, leaving Twister even more confused.
"So, angel dude, where are we going next?" Twister asked, forgetting about Sam.
"To your past. When you did exist." Xander said.
Twister scrunched up his face, "Why would we want to go there?"