Disclaimer: Kim Possible is the property of the Disney Company/Organization as well as all of the characters within the show itself. The song "Call Me, Beep Me" is sung by Christina Millian and owned by either her or the Disney Company/Organization. However characters not involved in the show Kim Possible are the intellectual property of myself. If there are any discrepancies within this disclaimer (i.e. spelling) I will correct or amend it as it is brought to my attention. As a little additional note, I could not own anything pertaining to Kim Possible because I'm just too poor and any attempts to sue me would be a waste of time and money on a lawyer since you wouldn't get anything of value.
Author's Note: Well according to reviews that I've been getting I have found out that this story has been put together in huge paragraphs and should be broken up. I agree entirely since I did do it that way, but when I converted into an html file for uploading I didn't notice that it had not included the separate paragraphs and rather merged them into large ones. I am uploading new chapters one and two that have many smaller paragraphs. I'm very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very sorry and next time when I convert I'll make sure that this doesn't happen again. It's ironic when I think back to all of the stories that I've previously uploaded and this had never happened but since work has piled up in the past few months I haven't really written much so I didn't think about checking this. Thank you so much everyone that reviewed and told me this problem, I'm very grateful. Now with version 2.0 tell me if it's easier to read and tell me what you think (I could really use the ideas). Alright now that I've gotten the I'm sorry and thank you part down on with the story. Oh, and to tell you the truth I wasn't going to upload a new chapter this quickly but I figured I'd do the corrections and this all at once. Have fun reading and tell me what you think. Thanks in advance.
Fade In: Scene, Ron's bedroom as the sun comes up. Ron lays awake as he still tries to figure out what his dream meant. The alarm goes off in his room waking up Rufus.
Rufus yawns and squeaks "Breakfast yum, yum!" as he pats his belly.
"Alright Rufus let's get some chow before we head off to find Drakken." Ron says to Rufus trying not to let on about something on his mind. They walk or rather Ron walks downstairs and Rufus hitchhikes on his head. Ron gets into the kitchen and looks in the fridge.
"Alright! Pancakes!" Ron yells as he pulls out a container of cold pancake batter and purs it into a pan that he puts on the stove to heat.
"Pancakes!" Rufus squeaks as he gives a thumbs up to Ron and then licks his lips just before he wraps a tiny napkin around his neck.
Ron waits a while and then flips the pancakes over with a spatula one at a time to get the golden brown color and not to burn them. Once he has a stack for him and Rufus he pulls out a fork and knife for himself as well as some syrup for him and Rufus to pour on the pancakes. Rufus basically inhales his while Ron goes with about two at a time shoving them in his mouth. Once they were finished they headed back to Ron's room so he could grab some equipment and dress. Then they headed back downstairs where he said bye to his parents and headed off to Kim's place.
At Kim's house, Kim was heading out the door when she noticed Ron turning the corner.
"Bye Mom! Bye Dad! Gotta go off to save the world!"
"Ok Kimmie, have fun and be careful." Replied Ms. Possible
Then Mr. Possible turned to her and said "Boy, high school has really changed since my time. Globetrotting, fighting evil villains and saving the world." He chuckled a little before returning to his paper and breakfast.
Kim walked up the street to meet up with Ron. "Hey Ron."
"Hey KP."
Kim noticed he was a little less cheery than usual but didn't really think about it too much, she just figured that he was having a bad day or something. "So, only a couple more days of school left, huh?"
"Yeah. Summer vacation ought to be nice. A break from all of that school work and assignments might even give me that extra hour of sleep I long for every day."
"I hear you Ron, I hear you."
They finally get to the airport where they meet up with Fred Drum, an airline pilot that they once helped when his landing gear got stuck before a landing."
"Kim Possible, nice to see you again."
"Hi Mr. Drum, thanks for the lift." Kim replied
"After the way you helped get the landing gear unstuck on that flight last year I consider it an honor."
"No big." Kim then sat down next to Ron in the first class section of the plane. Even midway into the flight she saw Ron looking out the window in a daze. She was a little more worried now, she'd never seen him seem so preoccupied before not to mention the fact that he hadn't even really said a word to her since takeoff. He hadn't even played with Rufus that much. Ron then noticed Kim's reflection in the window looking at him. He slowly turned away from the window as to not catch her by surprise and think that he had seen her.
"So how much longer would you say, KP?"
Kim, snapping out of her own daze, replied "Maybe an hour or so."
Ron sighed and then tried to go to sleep. He awoke to the sound of Mr. Drum on the cockpit radio saying that they were just above the Amazon rainforest. Then he and Kim put on their parachutes and made their way to the rear of the plane near the cargo doors. Ron made sure Rufus was securely placed in his pocket and the three jumped from the plane.
Once they had safely glided to the ground Kim turned to grab the Kimmunicator. "Alright Wade, we're here. Now point us where to go."
"I see you. Go 20 meters to your left and then make another left for about 45 meters. You should see a cave or a mountain."
"Thanks Wade." She pushed a button to end the transmission and then they began walking in the direction Wade pointed them to go. When they were nearing the spot Wade had suggested the noticed a mountain in front of them.
"This must be it."
"So what now KP?"
"I guess we'll have to climb for it." Kim said as she pulled out her blow dryer that was really a grappling gun. Ron followed suit and the two began climbing. It seemed like they were climbing for hours as they slowly neared the top. Then out of nowhere there was a cave-like opening on one of the plateaus.
"This has to be it Ron. Stay alert." Kim said cautiously
"Right KP." Ron replied as they neared the cave and walked inside slowly. For some reason the cave seemed to be very empty as compared to other Drakken hideouts that they had been in.
"Something doesn't feel right."
"You said it Kim, but do you think it could be a trap?"
"I'm not sure but I think we'll find out very soon." She said as they stumbled onto a room where Drakken and an injured Shego, with a bandaged head, were watching a video. Kim and Ron tried to make out the screen but were unsuccessful.
Kim whispered "I think it's about time we get Drakken." She then stood up from where she and Ron were hiding and defiantly approached Dr. Drakken. "Dr. Drakken, I believe you have something that doesn't belong to you."
Drakken turned around and noticed Kim Possible, "Oh, it's you. If you've come for the weather machine you're too late."
"What? Have you already started your plan to take over the world?"
"No... I mean it's gone as in stolen. Look for yourself." He said as he motioned to the television monitor for Kim to see. She saw the whole chain of events and the weird guy who beat up Shego and grabbed the machine. Ron looked at the monitor and when he saw the masked figure his eyes opened and his jaw dropped.
Kim noticed this and asked, "What's wrong Ron?"
Ron replied, "I know that guy." In a very shocked manner
To Be Continued... How does Ron know this person? Why am I always cutting these chapters off to such a small length? Does the format look better now with more paragraphs spacing it out?
So do you think it is easier to read now? What do you think overall? I'd really love to see your reviews, they helped me last time. Still confused and this hasn't helped yet? Well good, that means I'm doing a good job. Please review and thank you in advance.