Good fanfic, although a little brutal. One thing I'm really confused about, is WHEN does this happen? China is Supreme Mage, so it's between Ressurection and Season of War, and Valkyrie is dating Militsa, so it's in between Bedlam and Season of War. But RAVEL is alive for some reason, so I'm very confused. Don't take this as a bad sign in any way, I really like it and it's well written, forgive a few typos.
Hey! I'm going to start off by saying this fic is mostly self-indulgent. There is no specific book that this story's timeline follows. Because of that, I kept Ravel alive and non traitorous. I also kept some other dead characters alive. Sorry for making it confusing. I probably should've warned about the lack of canon compliance.
Next, thank you for reading my story! Now that I am a full-fledged sophomore who considers her writing skills to have improved dramatically, I am in the middle of rewriting it. Except this rewrite is longer, and I am actually going to finish it.