So a quick update on my situation. I still plan to have my next chapter out by Christmas and i'm still going over the story with a fine toothed comb but a lot of the rewrites aren't gonna happen on this pass…namely due to a family member passing. With their passing i have to worry about finding a new place to live and a few other things so while i settle down i`m gonna focus on extending the story instead of expanding on what's already written. I wanna see this story finished and that's my goal first and foremost before I go back and fix certain chapters until I get settled again and can focus on rewrites.