first off, i am stating here and now that i am not continuing this story, it is on Hiatus, the reason why is i have lost most of the thread of what i was going to do with it, i started this when i was first getting into writing so there was many faults, spelling errors and i didnt note down what i was planing for later chapters, we have all been there when starting out.

HOWEVER, not only has so much time passed where i have improved my writing skills but i have read all your heartfelt reviews on how much you loved this story, so i have decided to put down what i had written so far for the 10th chapter so long ago along with what ideas i remember i was going to use for later chapters, basically this is not an official chapter but me putting down what i was going to had i not lost the plot of the story so long ago, i hope you all like it and that it appeases you all, but im afraid that unless i get the spark to continue this story as a whole then you must all know this story is on Hiatus until further notice.

hope you all enjoy.


Chapter 10

Normal pov

The morning sun began to rise over the vast desert of Nevada; its rays of light slowly shining over the Autobot base were our newfound couple are resting in each other's arms.

Slowly our young technorganic, known as Jack Darby, began to stir and awake. He slowly opened his eye/optic to come to the beautiful face of his new girlfriend and long-time love, Arcee.

Arcee had him in her hands close to her chest plat were her spark resides. He could feel the warm pulsing of her spark beating intone with his own spark and heart beats. His face was close to hers and he took in every beautiful angle and shape of it.

He let out a sigh of content as he closed his eye/optic and lent his forehead against hers just enjoying the peaceful moment, just them and no one else.

Soon, after a couple of minutes, Arcee began to stir. Jack opened his eye/optic to see her slowly open her stunning optics, when her optics where open and they fell upon him she smiled and nuzzled closer to him, and he returned the favour. They stayed like that for a few more minutes until Jack broke the comfortable silence.

"As much as I want to stay within your loving hold Arcee, we will have to get up to meet the others" Jack stated with a soft voice as he looked into his girlfriend's optics. She let out a little moan of irritation at the thought of getting up, but knew her boyfriend was right "fine" she huffed in a sigh "but that doesn't mean I like it, I was sooooo comfy" she moaned as she let go of him and began to get off their berth.

'Wait…THEIR berth' Arcee thought as she froze and looked towards Jack as he stretch facing away from her. Last night wasn't some sweet, cruel, dream…it was real, and Jack is…her…BOYFRIEND!

She then suddenly, but gently, grabbed Jack into her servos. "w-what the-" Jack blurted out but was silenced when his lips met Arcee's in a deep, passionate kiss. Jack was surprise by the sudden kiss, but instantly returned it. Arcee filled the kiss with the love and happiness she had kept hidden for so long in her spark, which was now pulsing with joy from the kiss.

After a minute Arcee released Jack from her passionate lip-lock and leaving Jack panting slightly. "Mind telling me whatever it was I did to deserve that so I can do it more often?" he said with a slight smile.


plan 1:

i was going to reveal that Jack did not escape by himself, he was in fact helped by a surprising individual. team Prime gets an emergency signal from a forest that Jack knows about which he and they go to and find a human female figure in a cloak running from Con's, they save her and get her back to base where she reveals she is now a humanoid Airachnid, of course all but Jack is shocked and said two go on to explain that she had helped jack escape by injecting him with cleanser to help clear his head from the chemicals Knockout had used on him, she tells him that she wanted to start a new but couldn't just yet and needed his help to do so.

he agreed leading to his escape and her gaining the items needed in the events to complete her preparations, of becoming a cybernetic human (think Ghost in the Shell and Cyberpunk) by use of the nanobots that where used on jack, it worked but she was discovered in her little hide away and attacked by the con's which lead to them rescuing her.

the bot's aren't too trusting at first due to her history, but Optimus and surprisingly Arcee are willing to give her a chance, Arcee saying that even though she cant forgive her for her past partners death she is willing to give her a chance due to helping jack. Agent Fowler is made Airachnide's guardian and over time that get close, with her telling of her hunting skills and planets she's been to and him of his time as a ranger to go between with the government and the bots, later becoming a couple.


plan 2:

this one was of an event with the unlocking of a big power for jack.

the idea was that something happened in two locations, one some bots went to while jack went to the other but the ground bridge was malfunctioning, jack finds cons with a large deep cave of energon, when he beats them all he calls in but soon finds out that the other bots where under attack at their location, Arcee having been divided from the others and was being overwhelmed, badly.

jack wants to get there right away but with the ground bridge out it would take too long to fix it and longer to fly there himself under his full power. that's when he looks to the energon mine and starts sucking up all of the energon into himself, causing the reading at base to go wild from what he's doing, ratchet warning him that it could destroy him, with him reply "as long as i can save them, i DONT CARE!" soon all the energon is inside him and he is set alight with burning blue flames (think Black Rock Shooter) before he bursts at speeds so fast he causes several sonic booms in his wake.

i cant remember what happens next but he of course gets there in moments, fights them all, saves Arcee, and while he does fall unconscious from too much energon he does survive.


that is all i can remember, i hope you all have enjoyed what i had planed so long ago before loosing the plot, i leave this with you all to come up with your own ideas of how it all could have gone.

but i must say goodnight as i have said before this story is on Hiatus until otherwise, thank you all for being greate readers and fans with so much support, i only wish i could have finished it as you all have wished so much so.

good day.