Well I've finally updated my story, and thanks for the reviews so far.
I've sorted out chapter 2 (at least I hope I have), and my chapters are
slightly longer, though not yet 1500 words (hopefully I start writing
chapters that long soon). There may be some Resident Evil influences, but
apart from the undead, I am not trying to rewrite the story.
Chapter 3
Kim Possible pushed her red hair out of her eyes and looked into her suitcase. She was quickly checking to make sure that everything she needed was there before she left. When she was happy she zipped the suitcase closed and moved across the room to look at her backpack. She had been told that soon after arriving they would be going into the forest to carry out some work, so it was best she bought a small bag which contained everything that was needed for the day.
She put in another bottle of water and then zipped up the bag.
"That's that done" said Kim.
"Kim, Ron's here" shouted up Kim's mother.
"Ok" shouted down Kim.
Kim picked up her backpack and put it over her shoulders and then picked up her suitcase and walked out of her room. She closed the door and walked down the stairs. She reached the bottom of the stairs and saw Ron waiting there.
"Hi Ron".
"Hi KP, hey we better be going, the transport will be leaving soon" said Ron.
"Oh ok. I'm going now" shouted Kim into the house.
"Ok, see you in a few days time Kimmie" said Mrs. Possible.
Kim stepped out of the house and closed the door. She and Ron began to walk down the street.
"So Ron, how are we getting there?"
"What?"
"I didn't pay much attention at the meeting. You did didn't you?"
"Your lucky KP, for once I did".
"And?"
"We are supposed to walk to Middleton High, where we join up with the rest of the group. We will then be taken by two cars to the house. There probably won't be any stops, and the trip will probably last about three and a half hours".
"When are we supposed to be at Middleton High?" asked Kim.
Ron looked down at his watch. "About five minutes ago".
"We better hurry up then" said Kim walking faster. Ron nodded in agreement.
Kim and Ron arrived at Middleton High ten minutes late.
"Possible, Stoppable, good to see you were gracious enough to keep us waiting for only ten minutes" said Steve Barkin.
"Sorry Mr. Barkin" said Kim. Ron turned to face Kim.
"Great, Barkin moaning at us throughout the whole trip" said Ron.
"You think that's bad, we have to put up with Bonnie as well" said Kim.
"What?"
Kim pointed over by the cars "See look, Bonnie and Josh".
Bonnie looked up at the two standing next to one of the cars and having finished her conversation with Josh, Kim thought she heard Bonnie say "Like finally".
Well, she could come up with a lot worse then that for this sitch, thought Kim, so maybe Bonnie won't be so bad on this trip. It would be hard for Bonnie to be any worse then she was on the skiing trip. Kim didn't go any further, she didn't want to bring up the embarrassment of that trip again, even if it was only for herself. She heard Ron say something.
"What?"
"This trip is sounding better by the minute" groaned Ron.
One of the drivers walked over to Barkin.
"Hey Steve?"
"Yeah Andre?"
"Is everyone now here?" Barkin took a quick look around and said "yeah everyone is here".
"Thanks Steve". Andre turned around and shouted "Hey, CJ we can start loading up the cars now".
"Ok" came the reply from CJ.
CJ walked over to Kim and Ron and told them how they could start loading their stuff. Kim and Ron told him ok and began to put their bags in one of the cars. Kim and Ron decided that Barkin could go with Josh and Bonnie in Andre's car. Kim wanted at least some time away from them. Bonnie and Josh didn't have any arguments about not being with either Kim or Ron, not that they would thought Kim, and Ron and Kim walked over to the car.
"Alright, we are moving!" shouted Barkin, "get in a car, we are leaving now, we are already behind schedule". Kim and Ron climbed into CJ's car.
"Ok, put your seatbelts on, we're going now" said CJ. Kim closed the door and put on her seatbelt at the same time as Ron. Looking out of the window she took one last look at Middleton before leaving the town for a few days. The cars pulled out of Middleton High and onto the road, and then the cars drove off. No going back.
Chapter 3
Kim Possible pushed her red hair out of her eyes and looked into her suitcase. She was quickly checking to make sure that everything she needed was there before she left. When she was happy she zipped the suitcase closed and moved across the room to look at her backpack. She had been told that soon after arriving they would be going into the forest to carry out some work, so it was best she bought a small bag which contained everything that was needed for the day.
She put in another bottle of water and then zipped up the bag.
"That's that done" said Kim.
"Kim, Ron's here" shouted up Kim's mother.
"Ok" shouted down Kim.
Kim picked up her backpack and put it over her shoulders and then picked up her suitcase and walked out of her room. She closed the door and walked down the stairs. She reached the bottom of the stairs and saw Ron waiting there.
"Hi Ron".
"Hi KP, hey we better be going, the transport will be leaving soon" said Ron.
"Oh ok. I'm going now" shouted Kim into the house.
"Ok, see you in a few days time Kimmie" said Mrs. Possible.
Kim stepped out of the house and closed the door. She and Ron began to walk down the street.
"So Ron, how are we getting there?"
"What?"
"I didn't pay much attention at the meeting. You did didn't you?"
"Your lucky KP, for once I did".
"And?"
"We are supposed to walk to Middleton High, where we join up with the rest of the group. We will then be taken by two cars to the house. There probably won't be any stops, and the trip will probably last about three and a half hours".
"When are we supposed to be at Middleton High?" asked Kim.
Ron looked down at his watch. "About five minutes ago".
"We better hurry up then" said Kim walking faster. Ron nodded in agreement.
Kim and Ron arrived at Middleton High ten minutes late.
"Possible, Stoppable, good to see you were gracious enough to keep us waiting for only ten minutes" said Steve Barkin.
"Sorry Mr. Barkin" said Kim. Ron turned to face Kim.
"Great, Barkin moaning at us throughout the whole trip" said Ron.
"You think that's bad, we have to put up with Bonnie as well" said Kim.
"What?"
Kim pointed over by the cars "See look, Bonnie and Josh".
Bonnie looked up at the two standing next to one of the cars and having finished her conversation with Josh, Kim thought she heard Bonnie say "Like finally".
Well, she could come up with a lot worse then that for this sitch, thought Kim, so maybe Bonnie won't be so bad on this trip. It would be hard for Bonnie to be any worse then she was on the skiing trip. Kim didn't go any further, she didn't want to bring up the embarrassment of that trip again, even if it was only for herself. She heard Ron say something.
"What?"
"This trip is sounding better by the minute" groaned Ron.
One of the drivers walked over to Barkin.
"Hey Steve?"
"Yeah Andre?"
"Is everyone now here?" Barkin took a quick look around and said "yeah everyone is here".
"Thanks Steve". Andre turned around and shouted "Hey, CJ we can start loading up the cars now".
"Ok" came the reply from CJ.
CJ walked over to Kim and Ron and told them how they could start loading their stuff. Kim and Ron told him ok and began to put their bags in one of the cars. Kim and Ron decided that Barkin could go with Josh and Bonnie in Andre's car. Kim wanted at least some time away from them. Bonnie and Josh didn't have any arguments about not being with either Kim or Ron, not that they would thought Kim, and Ron and Kim walked over to the car.
"Alright, we are moving!" shouted Barkin, "get in a car, we are leaving now, we are already behind schedule". Kim and Ron climbed into CJ's car.
"Ok, put your seatbelts on, we're going now" said CJ. Kim closed the door and put on her seatbelt at the same time as Ron. Looking out of the window she took one last look at Middleton before leaving the town for a few days. The cars pulled out of Middleton High and onto the road, and then the cars drove off. No going back.