Hellos I forgot to clear things up earlier and I got a flame or two so I
wanted to do it now...
This is placed after they fully defeat mercurymon and all that Jazz. Kouji can't find Duskmon so when he knows that one of his teammates is in danger he goes to help them. Would you people rather that he would walk around aimlessly screaming "DUSKMON YOU IDIOT GET OUT HERE!!" I mean seriously.
And the reason I deleted that one flame is because I said no flames... didn't I? DOOT! ::slaps forehead with hand:: ... I knew I forgot something!
In this story BTW it's pink b/c Lavender is to too long a word to keep repeating so everything involving Zoe ( except for her evolving color which REALLY IS PINK!)
Plot: is a secret I left it out on purpose so that I could drag you along until the very end.
Cliffhanger? : No, that wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, I just couldn't figure out what I wanted to happen next in the story yet.
OTHER REVIEW RESPONSES:
Hiei's girl: hehe you really think it's good?
Issa - Elven Maid: LMAO would you really review THAT MANY TIMES?!?!?! Well err... here is your
Dragons Star: No don't apologize it was amusing. It made me want to clear it up before you killed someone XD!!!
S.Sting: You think this one is best? Sadly no it's not; personally I think that Shadow Prophecy by Darkness Promise is the best.
Cloaked Fox: read above that is basically, partly for you.
Peace: hehe this soon?
Laura-chan: you like it? YAY!! ::jumps for joy, hits head on ceiling passes out large lump coming out of head.
Tigermoon: I E-mailed ya hope ya like this chapter.
Analei: tell me what ya think of this okie?
KEY:
(s)=song
* Thinking *
~ Memories ~
(Kouji)= Kouji's POV ya dumb dumb
(Zoe)= well if the last one was Kouji's POV guess what this one is. Zoe's POV
(Tommie)= do I even have to say it?
(JP)= Guess
(Takuya)= for cryin' out loud ya know what this means if your not an idiot!!!
(DM)= this one might be little difficult, but it's Duskmon's POV, hint hint!!
(%*%)= Note from me!
~*~*~ FB ~*~*~ = flashback
Question of the Chapter:
This is something new I'm trying out. You see if you answer this question correctly then I update two chapters instead of one. Well NEwayz onto the question:
What is the Italian word for beautiful?
DISCLAIMER:
You know the drill I know own you no sue me keep writing like caveman! ^_^
DEDICATIONS AND FINAL CLEAR UPS:
WHOLE STORY TAKES PLACE AFTER PHANTASMAGORIC SAKKAKUMON
&
CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO DRAGONS STAR!!
**********************************************************
I'm With You
Dangerous Conclusions
(Tommie)
"KOUJI WHERE ARE YOU?!" I had been screaming for awhile now, in the mean time it seemed that the raindrops had comet o keep me company for they were raining down on me and clinging to my skin. I sighed giving up; it was time to meet the others now. I froze, it sounded like someone was screaming for me, from a LONG way away. I waited to see if it happened again or if it was my imagination. When it didn't happen I shrugged and walked to the cave where I was supposed to meet the others.
(%*%)
I wanted to put these in there so that you didn't think that the others died and fell off the pages of my fan fiction...
(DM)
I looked at the forest before me, the fat one's body in my hand... what did they call him? JP yes... that was it. I smirk the ran pelting down onto him his D-Tector in my hand, he didn't even see me soon enough to evolve... hmm what a pity.
(Takuya)
I heard a muffled noise awhile back and figured it was Bokomon or Neemon so I walked closer only to see two other familiar figures. A round plump one that could only be JP in the hands of... " DUSKMON!"
(Zoe)
I get an idea when the Goblimon is just a few paces away. I stood up the best I could using the rope on the side of the bridge for support and then I pulled keeping my hold on the rope so I wouldn't fall, biting my lip in pain trying not to scream. I heard wood cracking and a relieved look crossed my face. With a final hard jerk my leg was free. I turned around and as fast as I could with my now broken foot & ankle I hobbled across the bridge with the Goblimon going after me. I was almost there when the bridge lurched and I was thrown over the side holding onto the now slowly breaking rope as the Goblimon came up to me looking over the side at me.
(S)
Won't you, take me by the hand?
Take me somewhere new
(S)
It grabbed my wrist and pulled me up the side and ran off the last few steps to the land before setting me on the soft grass. It looked at me and took a few steps forward as I scrambled back taking in sharp breaths from the pain.
(S)
I don't know who you are but I
I'm with you
(S)
"Wha... What do you want with me?" I looked at it eyes wide as it held out it's hand to me.
(Kouji)
I came to a fork in the path (%*%: is that cheesy?) so I stopped looking around for some sign of anything that even looked like Zoe had been there. I held back a scream of frustration and tried to think calmly. * Okay Kouji don't panic, if you were a ditzy blonde girl who isn't afraid of anything where would you go?* I look at the path to the left and wince. A knocked over danger sign is on the side of the path along with many broken twigs and a set of footprints. * oh... hehe... that's where... *
(S)
I'm looking for a place
I'm searching for a face
(S)
**************************************************
Don't you hate these things?
::evil laughter::
MUWHAHAH-
::hacking coughs interrupt
the laughter::
::pats own back and tries to stop::
need ::cough:: a glass ::cough, cough::
of water. ::cough, cough, cough::
While I search for water you answer that Question Of The Chapter, or just review... I'm getting to the point where I dun care about flames so flame away, just uhh... don't get TOO harsh.
Buh-bye
~*~ Cara ~*~
This is placed after they fully defeat mercurymon and all that Jazz. Kouji can't find Duskmon so when he knows that one of his teammates is in danger he goes to help them. Would you people rather that he would walk around aimlessly screaming "DUSKMON YOU IDIOT GET OUT HERE!!" I mean seriously.
And the reason I deleted that one flame is because I said no flames... didn't I? DOOT! ::slaps forehead with hand:: ... I knew I forgot something!
In this story BTW it's pink b/c Lavender is to too long a word to keep repeating so everything involving Zoe ( except for her evolving color which REALLY IS PINK!)
Plot: is a secret I left it out on purpose so that I could drag you along until the very end.
Cliffhanger? : No, that wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, I just couldn't figure out what I wanted to happen next in the story yet.
OTHER REVIEW RESPONSES:
Hiei's girl: hehe you really think it's good?
Issa - Elven Maid: LMAO would you really review THAT MANY TIMES?!?!?! Well err... here is your
Dragons Star: No don't apologize it was amusing. It made me want to clear it up before you killed someone XD!!!
S.Sting: You think this one is best? Sadly no it's not; personally I think that Shadow Prophecy by Darkness Promise is the best.
Cloaked Fox: read above that is basically, partly for you.
Peace: hehe this soon?
Laura-chan: you like it? YAY!! ::jumps for joy, hits head on ceiling passes out large lump coming out of head.
Tigermoon: I E-mailed ya hope ya like this chapter.
Analei: tell me what ya think of this okie?
KEY:
(s)=song
* Thinking *
~ Memories ~
(Kouji)= Kouji's POV ya dumb dumb
(Zoe)= well if the last one was Kouji's POV guess what this one is. Zoe's POV
(Tommie)= do I even have to say it?
(JP)= Guess
(Takuya)= for cryin' out loud ya know what this means if your not an idiot!!!
(DM)= this one might be little difficult, but it's Duskmon's POV, hint hint!!
(%*%)= Note from me!
~*~*~ FB ~*~*~ = flashback
Question of the Chapter:
This is something new I'm trying out. You see if you answer this question correctly then I update two chapters instead of one. Well NEwayz onto the question:
What is the Italian word for beautiful?
DISCLAIMER:
You know the drill I know own you no sue me keep writing like caveman! ^_^
DEDICATIONS AND FINAL CLEAR UPS:
WHOLE STORY TAKES PLACE AFTER PHANTASMAGORIC SAKKAKUMON
&
CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO DRAGONS STAR!!
**********************************************************
I'm With You
Dangerous Conclusions
(Tommie)
"KOUJI WHERE ARE YOU?!" I had been screaming for awhile now, in the mean time it seemed that the raindrops had comet o keep me company for they were raining down on me and clinging to my skin. I sighed giving up; it was time to meet the others now. I froze, it sounded like someone was screaming for me, from a LONG way away. I waited to see if it happened again or if it was my imagination. When it didn't happen I shrugged and walked to the cave where I was supposed to meet the others.
(%*%)
I wanted to put these in there so that you didn't think that the others died and fell off the pages of my fan fiction...
(DM)
I looked at the forest before me, the fat one's body in my hand... what did they call him? JP yes... that was it. I smirk the ran pelting down onto him his D-Tector in my hand, he didn't even see me soon enough to evolve... hmm what a pity.
(Takuya)
I heard a muffled noise awhile back and figured it was Bokomon or Neemon so I walked closer only to see two other familiar figures. A round plump one that could only be JP in the hands of... " DUSKMON!"
(Zoe)
I get an idea when the Goblimon is just a few paces away. I stood up the best I could using the rope on the side of the bridge for support and then I pulled keeping my hold on the rope so I wouldn't fall, biting my lip in pain trying not to scream. I heard wood cracking and a relieved look crossed my face. With a final hard jerk my leg was free. I turned around and as fast as I could with my now broken foot & ankle I hobbled across the bridge with the Goblimon going after me. I was almost there when the bridge lurched and I was thrown over the side holding onto the now slowly breaking rope as the Goblimon came up to me looking over the side at me.
(S)
Won't you, take me by the hand?
Take me somewhere new
(S)
It grabbed my wrist and pulled me up the side and ran off the last few steps to the land before setting me on the soft grass. It looked at me and took a few steps forward as I scrambled back taking in sharp breaths from the pain.
(S)
I don't know who you are but I
I'm with you
(S)
"Wha... What do you want with me?" I looked at it eyes wide as it held out it's hand to me.
(Kouji)
I came to a fork in the path (%*%: is that cheesy?) so I stopped looking around for some sign of anything that even looked like Zoe had been there. I held back a scream of frustration and tried to think calmly. * Okay Kouji don't panic, if you were a ditzy blonde girl who isn't afraid of anything where would you go?* I look at the path to the left and wince. A knocked over danger sign is on the side of the path along with many broken twigs and a set of footprints. * oh... hehe... that's where... *
(S)
I'm looking for a place
I'm searching for a face
(S)
**************************************************
Don't you hate these things?
::evil laughter::
MUWHAHAH-
::hacking coughs interrupt
the laughter::
::pats own back and tries to stop::
need ::cough:: a glass ::cough, cough::
of water. ::cough, cough, cough::
While I search for water you answer that Question Of The Chapter, or just review... I'm getting to the point where I dun care about flames so flame away, just uhh... don't get TOO harsh.
Buh-bye
~*~ Cara ~*~