Title: Under the Curtain
Chapter 4: The Cell
Disclaimer: We (Jenn and Sarah) do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean story or characters, but we do however own the plot of this story and the characters Jenn and Sarah. .even though Jenn owns Will in her own way and Sarah owns Jack in her own way too lol!
Summary: Jenn and Sarah are thrown into the time where the adventures of Will Turner and Jack Sparrow take place. What will happen between these characters? No one knows.
Notes: We are both REALLY obsessed with Will (Willy and Jenn 4eva!) and *Captain* Jack Sparrow (Sarah and the cap'n 4eva!). Hehe. School being the worst torture device ever created will be holding us up in our writing this story and I (Sarah) am also writing two other stories at the moment and have to update those as well.
On with the story...
Was that a gunshot? Sarah picked up her pace to a fast run to where Will and Jack's fight should have been. When she reached the small shed she opened the door to see Jenn on the floor with Will on top of her.
Sarah looked around to see Jack standing with his hands in the air, and a pistol at his feet. But to her surprise the shot hadn't come from Jack. When she turned to the left of Jack she saw Norrington and his men standing with rifles in their hands, pointing them at Jack, Will and Jenn.
Even though Sarah had directed Norrington in the wrong direction, it only led them to a shortcut to the shed where Jack was. Norrington and his crew had snuck in through the back of the shed and found Jack pointing the rifle at Jenn. Norrington told Jack to put down the rifle and when he refused Norrington shot a bullet through the roof to show he was serious, and Jack quickly dropped his pistol to the ground. When Will heard the gunshot, he automatically assumed it came from Jack's pistol and jumped on top of Jenn to protect her, leaving all of them in the position they were in now.
"Mr. Sparrow I'm afraid you're going to have to come with us" said Norrington in a drawl. "Grab him men".
"Hold the hell up!" yelled Sarah, now looking at the awkward position Jenn and Will were in. "What happened?!"
Jenn turned crimson as did Will and they both stood up.
"Excuse me miss, but language like that is not allowed to be spoken by a lady, you'll have to accompany Mr. Sparrow to the cells." Said Norrington with a sick smile on his face. Sarah smiled as well; it couldn't be too bad sharing a jail cell with your true love, could it?
As Sarah and Jack were taken away Jenn mouthed the words "Good Luck" to Sarah, and Sarah just replied with a wink.
"So miss, what is ye name?" questioned Jack once the two of them were inside the cell.
"Sarah's my name, and I presume your Jack Sparrow? Ermm.Captain Jack Sparrow?"
"Are you-well are you one of those seer people, 'cause I'd sure like to be knowing when I'll be getting some of me rum?"
"No of course not, I just found out who your from...ummm..from my friend."
"Oh, would your friend be the one who hid behind the barrels?"
"O, yes that'd be my friend Jenn." (AN: Remember, Sarah's trying to make Jack think she's a pirate as well.why you ask? You'll see)
"Well I just hope we're not blown to bloody smithereens before you see you friend Jem again."
"Her names Jenn" said Sarah, "Wait a minute, we can't get blown to bits, well that's not how its supposed to go, Jenn'll be able to save us both before the ship gets here, won't she?
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Jenn opened the door of the shed. The warm and bright sun radiated through her whole body, 'Man was this already a long day' she thought to herself. Will grabbed her arm. "May I question you to your name" he asked.
"Oh yes, I'm Jenn, William Turner right?" Will looked at her with disbelieving eyes.
"How do you know that?"
Jenn just shrugged her shoulders in a nonchalant way "Lucky guess."
"Right."
"Oh C'mon we have to go get Jack and Sarah before the ship comes."
"What ship?"
"Um..did I say ship? I meant night. We have to get them before nightfall, they're probably starving already."
Will just gave her a suspicious glare before walking out the door.
"Well since you obviously know what you're doing I'll let you get your friends without my help."
"Fine!" and with that she walked out the door and walked forward. 'Great, the guy I've always wanted to marry hates me! Urg, could this day get any better' she thought.
"Um, Will can you hold on a second" she said using the sweetest voice she could get, and putting on one of her fakest smiles. "Which way to the cells?"
"You're quite a pathetic lady, if you don't mind me saying" as he grabbed her shoulder and pushed her in the right direction. "Come on I'll go with you."
THE END!
YAAY! How was that!? Sorry soo much about the delay and thanks soo much for all your fantastic reviews! More Reviews=Longer and More updated chapters! Once again please leave your e-mail in the review box cuz we've gotten some GREAT criticism but we have some questions!
Just one question:
Anna.ummm great cc thanks soo much, its great to get reviews that help us to improve, but when you said Mary-Sue, we're trying our hardest not to make this a Mary-Sue and so far the characters haven't even fallen for each other *yet* so we're kinda confused, please let us know what you meant so we can get this right!
And we have a new name for just this story...but we both forgot what it is...we'll let you know right away!
Thanks soo much!
Chapter 4: The Cell
Disclaimer: We (Jenn and Sarah) do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean story or characters, but we do however own the plot of this story and the characters Jenn and Sarah. .even though Jenn owns Will in her own way and Sarah owns Jack in her own way too lol!
Summary: Jenn and Sarah are thrown into the time where the adventures of Will Turner and Jack Sparrow take place. What will happen between these characters? No one knows.
Notes: We are both REALLY obsessed with Will (Willy and Jenn 4eva!) and *Captain* Jack Sparrow (Sarah and the cap'n 4eva!). Hehe. School being the worst torture device ever created will be holding us up in our writing this story and I (Sarah) am also writing two other stories at the moment and have to update those as well.
On with the story...
Was that a gunshot? Sarah picked up her pace to a fast run to where Will and Jack's fight should have been. When she reached the small shed she opened the door to see Jenn on the floor with Will on top of her.
Sarah looked around to see Jack standing with his hands in the air, and a pistol at his feet. But to her surprise the shot hadn't come from Jack. When she turned to the left of Jack she saw Norrington and his men standing with rifles in their hands, pointing them at Jack, Will and Jenn.
Even though Sarah had directed Norrington in the wrong direction, it only led them to a shortcut to the shed where Jack was. Norrington and his crew had snuck in through the back of the shed and found Jack pointing the rifle at Jenn. Norrington told Jack to put down the rifle and when he refused Norrington shot a bullet through the roof to show he was serious, and Jack quickly dropped his pistol to the ground. When Will heard the gunshot, he automatically assumed it came from Jack's pistol and jumped on top of Jenn to protect her, leaving all of them in the position they were in now.
"Mr. Sparrow I'm afraid you're going to have to come with us" said Norrington in a drawl. "Grab him men".
"Hold the hell up!" yelled Sarah, now looking at the awkward position Jenn and Will were in. "What happened?!"
Jenn turned crimson as did Will and they both stood up.
"Excuse me miss, but language like that is not allowed to be spoken by a lady, you'll have to accompany Mr. Sparrow to the cells." Said Norrington with a sick smile on his face. Sarah smiled as well; it couldn't be too bad sharing a jail cell with your true love, could it?
As Sarah and Jack were taken away Jenn mouthed the words "Good Luck" to Sarah, and Sarah just replied with a wink.
"So miss, what is ye name?" questioned Jack once the two of them were inside the cell.
"Sarah's my name, and I presume your Jack Sparrow? Ermm.Captain Jack Sparrow?"
"Are you-well are you one of those seer people, 'cause I'd sure like to be knowing when I'll be getting some of me rum?"
"No of course not, I just found out who your from...ummm..from my friend."
"Oh, would your friend be the one who hid behind the barrels?"
"O, yes that'd be my friend Jenn." (AN: Remember, Sarah's trying to make Jack think she's a pirate as well.why you ask? You'll see)
"Well I just hope we're not blown to bloody smithereens before you see you friend Jem again."
"Her names Jenn" said Sarah, "Wait a minute, we can't get blown to bits, well that's not how its supposed to go, Jenn'll be able to save us both before the ship gets here, won't she?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Jenn opened the door of the shed. The warm and bright sun radiated through her whole body, 'Man was this already a long day' she thought to herself. Will grabbed her arm. "May I question you to your name" he asked.
"Oh yes, I'm Jenn, William Turner right?" Will looked at her with disbelieving eyes.
"How do you know that?"
Jenn just shrugged her shoulders in a nonchalant way "Lucky guess."
"Right."
"Oh C'mon we have to go get Jack and Sarah before the ship comes."
"What ship?"
"Um..did I say ship? I meant night. We have to get them before nightfall, they're probably starving already."
Will just gave her a suspicious glare before walking out the door.
"Well since you obviously know what you're doing I'll let you get your friends without my help."
"Fine!" and with that she walked out the door and walked forward. 'Great, the guy I've always wanted to marry hates me! Urg, could this day get any better' she thought.
"Um, Will can you hold on a second" she said using the sweetest voice she could get, and putting on one of her fakest smiles. "Which way to the cells?"
"You're quite a pathetic lady, if you don't mind me saying" as he grabbed her shoulder and pushed her in the right direction. "Come on I'll go with you."
THE END!
YAAY! How was that!? Sorry soo much about the delay and thanks soo much for all your fantastic reviews! More Reviews=Longer and More updated chapters! Once again please leave your e-mail in the review box cuz we've gotten some GREAT criticism but we have some questions!
Just one question:
Anna.ummm great cc thanks soo much, its great to get reviews that help us to improve, but when you said Mary-Sue, we're trying our hardest not to make this a Mary-Sue and so far the characters haven't even fallen for each other *yet* so we're kinda confused, please let us know what you meant so we can get this right!
And we have a new name for just this story...but we both forgot what it is...we'll let you know right away!
Thanks soo much!