Hey guys, gals and pals! Here's the next chapter in this story...
Thank you dewyfanfictions for the review!
One thing though, I've decided to make this less of a troll fix and more of a story with a plot, but it will still be a weird interesting story! ;)
Shinykit was mad. She was super SUPER mad.
I wasn't fair that Rainbowkit was now Rainbowpaw. She thought that they would be apprenticed together! Now Rainbowpaw left her alone in the nursery with Prettyface.
Shinykit shifted her shiny golden paws and flicked her shiny tail. She sighed. OH WELL. She would probably have to SIT HERE until she was an ELDER. That was JUST FINE. If her mother liked Rainbowpaw better then whatever.
Just because Rainbowpaw had a SUPER great idea doesn't mean I'm useless, Shinykit thought. She blinked her shiny silver eyes. Oh no, she would not stand being useless.
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Rainbowpaw bounced around the training area. "I am LiKE SO EXCITED!!!!" She exclaimed. Her mentor, Dabfoot sighed then dabbed. "I know," he said coolly, "Me too." He dabbled again. "I CANNOT WAIT!" Rainbowpaw yowled. Her multi-colored eyes flashed. "What will we do first?" She asked happily.
"Well," said Dabfoot, as he dabbed, "First lessen is how to be cool."
"Ooooooo," squealed Rainbowpaw. Dabfoot padded to the middle of the clearing. "Watch and learn how it's done. It's very tricky to get just right," he said. "Ooooooo," Rainbowpaw squealed again.
Rainbowpaw watched as he stood there, and all of a sudden Dabfoot stared to glow. He glowed a super neon cyan color, the exact color of his eyes. Rainbowpaw was in awe. The got huger and huger and huger. It grew so ginormous that it nearly blinded Rainbowpaw. (She covered her eyes with her paws, but would later boast she stared right into the blinding light.)
Finally the light faded and with it the feeling of Coolness the had radiated from Dabfoot. When the light was gone Dabfoot dabbed. "That" he said as he dabbed again, "Is how you be Cool." "Oh wow." Said Rainbowpaw.