Note: Thanx for the reviews. Here's the second part of the story. If you like, review. If you have comments, review. I believe that I get better from suggestions.
Discoveries Part 2
Scene seven: 213 Cambridge
Max got off her bike. She loosened her helmet and took it off. She ran her fingers through her long hair as she grabbed the package. She began to walk to the front door.
Meanwhile, Vince McBryde paced around his apartment. He was becoming inpatient because an important fax had not been delivered, and he was also waiting for a fax from his boss. Suddenly the doorbell rang.
Max waited for the door to open. It opened to a tall man who looked very nervous.
"Uh.." Max said pretending to look at the name on the box. "Mr. McByrde?"
"Yeah, Yeah. Thanks." Vince said as he slammed the door in Max's face.
"What? No tip?" Max said to the door. "Jerk." Max would have left, but to get paid minimum wage, she had to have a paper signed by Vince.
Back inside, Vince opened the package, which held a small bottle of white powder and some other things. Just then his fax machine beeped. "Great!"
He picked up the paper, looked at the picture, and smiled contently. "What a stroke of luck." Just then there was a pounding at the door. Vince quickly hid the fax under some other papers, and went to the door.
"You forgot to sign," Max said jamming the clipboard into Vince's face. Vince signed, and went through his pockets.
"I don't have any small bills."
"A fifty'll do." Max said shrugging.
Vince laughed, "No, but... would you care for some coffee?" Max looked around, " Real coffee?"
Max seriously debated this a while. A good cup of jo, and a look around? Fine with me, she thought. "Okay, just one though, I have to get to work."
Vince let her in. He motioned her to the couch. "I'll be back."
Max nodded as Vince slipped into the kitchen. Max got up as soon as he was out of sight, and walked around. She circled his desk, eyeing the scattered papers, " Drug orders everywhere. Logan was right. But any connections with Lydecker?" She moved some papers over; uncovering what seemed to be a fax under some papers. She began to move those papers when Vince interrupted her.
"It's ready!" Vince chimed as he backed up through the door. He looked at Max, "What are you doing?!"
Max walked over to him, smiled, and replied "Looking at your computer, very nice." Vince nodded, and handed Max a mug. She sat down in a wooden chair, took a few sips and sighed.
Little do you know my dear, Vince thought, that the package you delivered to me had a bit of poison in it. Poison that you were not trained to be immune to. Vince watched with a witty smile as Max's eyes shrunk, then closed.
Scene eight: 213 Cambridge (three hours later)
Max awoke to a sharp pain in the hands and feet. She looked to find her hand shackled behind her, and her ankles shackled to the legs of the uncomfortable chair she sat in. She looked around for Vince.
"Ah, I see we're awake?" Vince said walking to Max.
Max spit at him, "Iron shackles? What a joke!" Vince watched as Max fought with all her strength to get them off.
"My dear Max. That little bow you delivered gave me all the things needed to capture you. If you had not escaped, you may have been trained to avoid this moment."
"So you do work for Lydecker?" Max said. Vince nodded, and Max spit at him once again.
"We can't have any of that, can we now?" Vince said taping her mouth shut. He picked up his phone, "Hello, yeah it's Vince. The girl? Yeah, Mr. Lydecker, I have her."
For an hour Max tried to get lose, without any luck. Vince sat on the couch and watched T.V. The doorbell rang. Vince got up, but the door slammed down to the ground in front of Vince. Max watched as a girl whose long black hair shook wildly as she kicked Vince into the wall with such strength Max hadn't even seen.
Okay, I know Max would not really fall for that, but maybe she would. She's part human. Well, what did ya'll think?
Discoveries Part 2
Scene seven: 213 Cambridge
Max got off her bike. She loosened her helmet and took it off. She ran her fingers through her long hair as she grabbed the package. She began to walk to the front door.
Meanwhile, Vince McBryde paced around his apartment. He was becoming inpatient because an important fax had not been delivered, and he was also waiting for a fax from his boss. Suddenly the doorbell rang.
Max waited for the door to open. It opened to a tall man who looked very nervous.
"Uh.." Max said pretending to look at the name on the box. "Mr. McByrde?"
"Yeah, Yeah. Thanks." Vince said as he slammed the door in Max's face.
"What? No tip?" Max said to the door. "Jerk." Max would have left, but to get paid minimum wage, she had to have a paper signed by Vince.
Back inside, Vince opened the package, which held a small bottle of white powder and some other things. Just then his fax machine beeped. "Great!"
He picked up the paper, looked at the picture, and smiled contently. "What a stroke of luck." Just then there was a pounding at the door. Vince quickly hid the fax under some other papers, and went to the door.
"You forgot to sign," Max said jamming the clipboard into Vince's face. Vince signed, and went through his pockets.
"I don't have any small bills."
"A fifty'll do." Max said shrugging.
Vince laughed, "No, but... would you care for some coffee?" Max looked around, " Real coffee?"
Max seriously debated this a while. A good cup of jo, and a look around? Fine with me, she thought. "Okay, just one though, I have to get to work."
Vince let her in. He motioned her to the couch. "I'll be back."
Max nodded as Vince slipped into the kitchen. Max got up as soon as he was out of sight, and walked around. She circled his desk, eyeing the scattered papers, " Drug orders everywhere. Logan was right. But any connections with Lydecker?" She moved some papers over; uncovering what seemed to be a fax under some papers. She began to move those papers when Vince interrupted her.
"It's ready!" Vince chimed as he backed up through the door. He looked at Max, "What are you doing?!"
Max walked over to him, smiled, and replied "Looking at your computer, very nice." Vince nodded, and handed Max a mug. She sat down in a wooden chair, took a few sips and sighed.
Little do you know my dear, Vince thought, that the package you delivered to me had a bit of poison in it. Poison that you were not trained to be immune to. Vince watched with a witty smile as Max's eyes shrunk, then closed.
Scene eight: 213 Cambridge (three hours later)
Max awoke to a sharp pain in the hands and feet. She looked to find her hand shackled behind her, and her ankles shackled to the legs of the uncomfortable chair she sat in. She looked around for Vince.
"Ah, I see we're awake?" Vince said walking to Max.
Max spit at him, "Iron shackles? What a joke!" Vince watched as Max fought with all her strength to get them off.
"My dear Max. That little bow you delivered gave me all the things needed to capture you. If you had not escaped, you may have been trained to avoid this moment."
"So you do work for Lydecker?" Max said. Vince nodded, and Max spit at him once again.
"We can't have any of that, can we now?" Vince said taping her mouth shut. He picked up his phone, "Hello, yeah it's Vince. The girl? Yeah, Mr. Lydecker, I have her."
For an hour Max tried to get lose, without any luck. Vince sat on the couch and watched T.V. The doorbell rang. Vince got up, but the door slammed down to the ground in front of Vince. Max watched as a girl whose long black hair shook wildly as she kicked Vince into the wall with such strength Max hadn't even seen.
Okay, I know Max would not really fall for that, but maybe she would. She's part human. Well, what did ya'll think?