Hello again! I have much to say before this post, but to reply to what wing_zero 316 said, I dont excatly know where you could have got lost. Did you read the first two series first? I also know there are some minor errors, such as the line Aiden says "Love or Lust." That line is actually "Love over Lust." Besides the errors I didnt seem to pick up, I dont know where else you can get confused. Also, if you havent read the first two series, and need to know their names, it's CardCaptors:Alternate Universe (first series) , then CardCaptors:Temptation (second series), then this is the final series. This is more of a epilogue of the first two series though, but I'll try to make the best ending of this 3 part series as best as I can. I'll come up with something (o^.~o)
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CardCaptors: The Final Card
Memories Past Part I
By AnimeGamer
[Kero] Last time on CC: The Final Card, Sakura's father, Aiden, asked for forgiveness before Sakura and Syaoran fell spell from the lovely yet deadly Lust card.
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Sakura woke up from the couch. Li was still sleeping. She then remembered what happened last night.
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"Sakura! Are you there? This is your father, all I want to say is...im sorry, and I dont regret what I did, because you became the most important thing in my life after your mother died. I just...wanted to let you know that, I may have failed as your father, but I still love you, for as long as I live in this world and in spirit."
"Fa--Father...I...I..." Sakura couldn't withstand the trance she was about to enter. She and Syaoran were now under the spell of the Lust card.
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'Wait a minute, If im under the Lust spell, why isnt it working right now?' Sakura wondered.
Li started to wake up, and opened his eyes and looked at Sakura. They just looked at each other, the lust spell was somehow not in effect.
"Sakura, Syaoran from another dimension, welcome." Another Syaoran said, as another Sakura came out of the kitchen with breakfast.
"Another...dimension?" Sakura asked.
"Yes. Just in time too. You would have been under spell to the Lust card of your world." The other Sakura said.
(AG: Hey, this is Mr. Author, since many of you will be confused at this part, the Sakura from this other dimension will be address with astrisks, as will the other Syaoran. In short, the *Syaoran* and *Sakura* are from this other dimension that brought the two we know to that time and place.)
"Welcome also to a possible future. As you see, Sakura is pregnant, but it's because we failed. You see, we used the Dimension and Time card to bring you to this time and place. Please heed our warning and be careful." *Syaoran* said.
"Is there anyway to beat it?" Syaoran asked.
"Not that we know of, at that time. It was then father said that rumor has it that it can only be defeated by true love." *Sakura* said.
"Not only that, but we have also learned it prides itself in killing every female cardcaptor to ever hold the key of clow. So far, not one female has been able to defeat it, hopefully by bringing you here, it might still effect the outcome of the battle then." *Syaoran* said.
"Always remember, true love always defeats lust, no matter what." *Sakura* said.
After the breakfast...
"I must send you back now, you will return to your right place and time, but once you arrive there, be ready, because the spell will immediately be on you. Good luck, my past self." *Sakura* said as she sent the two back.
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The two woke up. It was a immediate feeling, but the two started to feel their hormones raging, wanting for 'it'. Things got hard fast, as the two started to lose control of their bodies.
"Fi--Fight it off Sakura!" Syaoran yelled out before the spell took his lips. Then Sakura took his lips as she kissed Syaoran and then both of them opened their eyes, their eyes glazed over.
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Nearly 2 months ago...
"I cant stand this anymore. I just cant. I cant stop thinking about him. I...cant..." Sakura said as she cried under the sheets of her bed.
'Poor kid. She feels pain, and is nearly born out of pain and sorrow. You better keep your promise Chinese brat!' Kero said to himself.
"Sakura! Get ready to go to school, you'll be late again!" Touya said.
"O...Okay..." Sakura said trying to hold her feelings back. She took her shower, and just went out the door without breakfast, as she has been doing for nearly 2 years now. She skated hard and fast. Her dad gave her aggresive inline skates and not normal skates so that it'll make her speed lower, but it didnt help at all in her speed. Just as she approached the school, everyone was going in. It was then she noticed him.
Him...Li, Syaoran Li, and he was holding 'Sakura' which is the teddy bear that Sakura gave to Li just before he left to Hong Kong. Li managed to look up and she was skating as hard as she can to him. She then jumped into his embrace, which confused everyone around them, since no one has ever saw Sakura like this before, or for at least two years anyway when she had a terrible nervous breakdown.
"I've missed you so much Li." Sakura said.
"I have to. Im sorry it took me so long, it's just that things kept holding me up." Li said.
"Yeah..." Sakura simply said.
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Present time...
Suddenly, Sakura and Syaoran snapped out of the reverie, and noticed that Li didnt have his shirt on, as did Sakura. Lucky for Sakura she still had her bra on, but two hands were pretty close to pulling them off. Her own, two hands. They both turned red immediately and got their shirts on.
"So..sorry Sakura. Maybe it help if we dont see each other until we seal this card." Syaoran said.
"Yeah, my thought excatly." Sakura said. Suddenly, the Lazen board fell off the desk, and it shone a message.
'To defeat the Lust card, you must use true love. You cannot capture it any other way.' The Lazen board said.
"Okay, I have another idea, we have to get to my closet first though." Li said as he went to his room and Sakura followed. Li then opened his closet and looked at Sakura. Almost immediately, the eyes of both of them became glazed over.
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A month ago...
Sakura was walking down the hall, various guys just looked at her in awe, the guys learned their lession if they walked and looked, for it was a trip to the school nurse. As Sakura walked out the school, Syaoran just sat cross-legged in his element:wind spell.
"Why? Why cant I do it. I came back here for you Sakura...yet...I'm so stupid!!!" Syaoran said to himself, and the spell wore off and Syaoran fell to the ground. Unknownly, Sakura had heard him, as she actually stood by the door that leads back into the 4th floor. Who Syaoran saw is Madison in disguise. And no, Sakura had nothing to do with the fact Madison looked like Sakura at that moment. Madison just did it because she knew Li was kicking himself so she told Sakura to go to the roof and she left looking like Sakura.
"Your not stupid Li. I know that." Sakura said to Syaoran, who was now just laying down on the roof and looked over to Sakura, who now stood by him.
"...you heard what I said..." Li slowly put out.
"Yeah. Li...I...you know...um...I've...missed you. Really." Sakura threw out, too nervous in trying to say it.
"You dont mean that." Syaoran said coldly.
"What? You dont believe me?" Sakura asked.
"I take back what I said. I wish I can just disappear!" Syaoran said as he cast his element:wind spell and flew off.
"What did he mean by that?" Sakura wondered to herself. Determined, she pulled out her wand and used the fly card and flew after Li. Pulling up to Li...
"Li! What do you mean you just want to disappear?" Sakura asked.
"I...miss my mother...alright, happy now?" Li said coldly and moved faster, but Sakura kept pace.
"No, it's okay to miss your mother...I wish I knew mine..." Sakura said.
"It's not as painful then. When you see your mother die in front your eyes, it's hurts. It...JUST HURTS!!!" Li yelled out and dropped the spell, and Li started to fall. Quickly, Sakura caught him with the wand. Of course, it really hurt for Li. The two went to the ground, and Li fell to his knees and was in physical pain.
"I'm so sorry Syaoran..." Sakura said, holding him. He instantly forgotten the pain he had physically and began to cry from the emotional pain.
"It's so hard..."
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Present time...
Once again, the pair got out of their reverie, stripped down to underwear. The two looked at each other in the face.
"Lets just get as many clothes on as we can before we fall back into the spell." Syaoran said as he got off Sakura quickly and they got on their clothes, ran over to Syaoran's closet, and Sakura wore as many shirts as she could, as Syaoran wore as many other clothes as he can. Just as the clothes ran out in the closet, they just looked at each other. The spell took effect again.
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Two weeks ago...
Sakura fell though the floor, and Li thought Sakura was about to vanish, and they both fell though the floor, as did Madison. They were all 14 again. They were all at different places though.
Sakura listened to her a burned CD, the song playing was from a pop group called SES. Just as she was passing by the park, the sky turned black. Sakura looked up in the sky and slowed down.
Li, also 14 and in 9th grade (AG: duh.) was on his skateboard he just got for his birthday from an exchange student friend of his from America. He finally mastered how to do a 180 shove it when he just noticed the sky turn black. Then something bumped into him and caused that thing to fall on it's back, and caused Li to lose his balance and ate the pavement face first as his skateboard was sent flying.
"Li! Are you okay?" Sakura asked as she slowly shook her head and kneeled next to him.
"Whatever." Li simply said.
"Too much Final Fantasy 8 again huh?"
"Whatever."
"Do you think we could have missed a clow card?"
"I don't think so Sakura, but you can never know."
Just then, everything around Sakura and Li turned black, including the ground which they were laying upon.
"I have a bad feeling about this Li..."
"No kidding."
Just then, the 2 of them dropped from the supposed ground and fell though.
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This time, the two snapped out and found that all the extra layers of clothes they had were all over the room and they were down to the clothes they were wearing earlier. The lust card got weaker though, and it stood next to the patio door. Sakura quickly sensed the situation, as did Li, and he immediately moved out of the way as Sakura charged.
"Oh key of Clow, power of magic, power of light, surrender the wand, the force ignite!" Sakura yelled out and pulled out her wand. She swung it over her head and toward the slowly recovering card, but the card had enough time to get away from Sakura and flip over her, then it knelt down, and Sakura looked right at Li's eyes, as did Li. Sakura dropped her wand, and both of their eyes were glazed over once again.
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[Kero] Kero here! Sakura and Syaoran were able to fend off the spell of the Lust card, and it seems the Lust card was getting weaker from the memories of the past. How long can Sakura nad Syaoran keep this up? Where's Touya when you need him???
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Well, there is part one of the only parts with the same name. I already know what im going to do in my next part, so I'm not going to say much here except R+R, or else I'll hold back! Besides that, I'll also be on FanFiction.Net reviewing people's stories. So im usually on for long periods of time, so if you guys ever want to contact me while im online, my IM for AOL/Compuserve (they use the same network) is AnimeGamer0, and my Yahoo IM is AnimeGamer, and my ICQ (not used often) is 45275407. You cant miss me, basically. Well, now to start writing the next part.
-AnimeGamer
-Silver (Ag+)
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*On a side note, I want to know if this could be really considered to be a "R" rating. Just give me your thoughts on that because I'm having doubts on putting this part in such a high rating, when it could get a PG -13.
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CardCaptors: The Final Card
Memories Past Part I
By AnimeGamer
[Kero] Last time on CC: The Final Card, Sakura's father, Aiden, asked for forgiveness before Sakura and Syaoran fell spell from the lovely yet deadly Lust card.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sakura woke up from the couch. Li was still sleeping. She then remembered what happened last night.
****************
"Sakura! Are you there? This is your father, all I want to say is...im sorry, and I dont regret what I did, because you became the most important thing in my life after your mother died. I just...wanted to let you know that, I may have failed as your father, but I still love you, for as long as I live in this world and in spirit."
"Fa--Father...I...I..." Sakura couldn't withstand the trance she was about to enter. She and Syaoran were now under the spell of the Lust card.
****************
'Wait a minute, If im under the Lust spell, why isnt it working right now?' Sakura wondered.
Li started to wake up, and opened his eyes and looked at Sakura. They just looked at each other, the lust spell was somehow not in effect.
"Sakura, Syaoran from another dimension, welcome." Another Syaoran said, as another Sakura came out of the kitchen with breakfast.
"Another...dimension?" Sakura asked.
"Yes. Just in time too. You would have been under spell to the Lust card of your world." The other Sakura said.
(AG: Hey, this is Mr. Author, since many of you will be confused at this part, the Sakura from this other dimension will be address with astrisks, as will the other Syaoran. In short, the *Syaoran* and *Sakura* are from this other dimension that brought the two we know to that time and place.)
"Welcome also to a possible future. As you see, Sakura is pregnant, but it's because we failed. You see, we used the Dimension and Time card to bring you to this time and place. Please heed our warning and be careful." *Syaoran* said.
"Is there anyway to beat it?" Syaoran asked.
"Not that we know of, at that time. It was then father said that rumor has it that it can only be defeated by true love." *Sakura* said.
"Not only that, but we have also learned it prides itself in killing every female cardcaptor to ever hold the key of clow. So far, not one female has been able to defeat it, hopefully by bringing you here, it might still effect the outcome of the battle then." *Syaoran* said.
"Always remember, true love always defeats lust, no matter what." *Sakura* said.
After the breakfast...
"I must send you back now, you will return to your right place and time, but once you arrive there, be ready, because the spell will immediately be on you. Good luck, my past self." *Sakura* said as she sent the two back.
**************
The two woke up. It was a immediate feeling, but the two started to feel their hormones raging, wanting for 'it'. Things got hard fast, as the two started to lose control of their bodies.
"Fi--Fight it off Sakura!" Syaoran yelled out before the spell took his lips. Then Sakura took his lips as she kissed Syaoran and then both of them opened their eyes, their eyes glazed over.
**************
Nearly 2 months ago...
"I cant stand this anymore. I just cant. I cant stop thinking about him. I...cant..." Sakura said as she cried under the sheets of her bed.
'Poor kid. She feels pain, and is nearly born out of pain and sorrow. You better keep your promise Chinese brat!' Kero said to himself.
"Sakura! Get ready to go to school, you'll be late again!" Touya said.
"O...Okay..." Sakura said trying to hold her feelings back. She took her shower, and just went out the door without breakfast, as she has been doing for nearly 2 years now. She skated hard and fast. Her dad gave her aggresive inline skates and not normal skates so that it'll make her speed lower, but it didnt help at all in her speed. Just as she approached the school, everyone was going in. It was then she noticed him.
Him...Li, Syaoran Li, and he was holding 'Sakura' which is the teddy bear that Sakura gave to Li just before he left to Hong Kong. Li managed to look up and she was skating as hard as she can to him. She then jumped into his embrace, which confused everyone around them, since no one has ever saw Sakura like this before, or for at least two years anyway when she had a terrible nervous breakdown.
"I've missed you so much Li." Sakura said.
"I have to. Im sorry it took me so long, it's just that things kept holding me up." Li said.
"Yeah..." Sakura simply said.
********************
Present time...
Suddenly, Sakura and Syaoran snapped out of the reverie, and noticed that Li didnt have his shirt on, as did Sakura. Lucky for Sakura she still had her bra on, but two hands were pretty close to pulling them off. Her own, two hands. They both turned red immediately and got their shirts on.
"So..sorry Sakura. Maybe it help if we dont see each other until we seal this card." Syaoran said.
"Yeah, my thought excatly." Sakura said. Suddenly, the Lazen board fell off the desk, and it shone a message.
'To defeat the Lust card, you must use true love. You cannot capture it any other way.' The Lazen board said.
"Okay, I have another idea, we have to get to my closet first though." Li said as he went to his room and Sakura followed. Li then opened his closet and looked at Sakura. Almost immediately, the eyes of both of them became glazed over.
*******************
A month ago...
Sakura was walking down the hall, various guys just looked at her in awe, the guys learned their lession if they walked and looked, for it was a trip to the school nurse. As Sakura walked out the school, Syaoran just sat cross-legged in his element:wind spell.
"Why? Why cant I do it. I came back here for you Sakura...yet...I'm so stupid!!!" Syaoran said to himself, and the spell wore off and Syaoran fell to the ground. Unknownly, Sakura had heard him, as she actually stood by the door that leads back into the 4th floor. Who Syaoran saw is Madison in disguise. And no, Sakura had nothing to do with the fact Madison looked like Sakura at that moment. Madison just did it because she knew Li was kicking himself so she told Sakura to go to the roof and she left looking like Sakura.
"Your not stupid Li. I know that." Sakura said to Syaoran, who was now just laying down on the roof and looked over to Sakura, who now stood by him.
"...you heard what I said..." Li slowly put out.
"Yeah. Li...I...you know...um...I've...missed you. Really." Sakura threw out, too nervous in trying to say it.
"You dont mean that." Syaoran said coldly.
"What? You dont believe me?" Sakura asked.
"I take back what I said. I wish I can just disappear!" Syaoran said as he cast his element:wind spell and flew off.
"What did he mean by that?" Sakura wondered to herself. Determined, she pulled out her wand and used the fly card and flew after Li. Pulling up to Li...
"Li! What do you mean you just want to disappear?" Sakura asked.
"I...miss my mother...alright, happy now?" Li said coldly and moved faster, but Sakura kept pace.
"No, it's okay to miss your mother...I wish I knew mine..." Sakura said.
"It's not as painful then. When you see your mother die in front your eyes, it's hurts. It...JUST HURTS!!!" Li yelled out and dropped the spell, and Li started to fall. Quickly, Sakura caught him with the wand. Of course, it really hurt for Li. The two went to the ground, and Li fell to his knees and was in physical pain.
"I'm so sorry Syaoran..." Sakura said, holding him. He instantly forgotten the pain he had physically and began to cry from the emotional pain.
"It's so hard..."
*******************
Present time...
Once again, the pair got out of their reverie, stripped down to underwear. The two looked at each other in the face.
"Lets just get as many clothes on as we can before we fall back into the spell." Syaoran said as he got off Sakura quickly and they got on their clothes, ran over to Syaoran's closet, and Sakura wore as many shirts as she could, as Syaoran wore as many other clothes as he can. Just as the clothes ran out in the closet, they just looked at each other. The spell took effect again.
*******************
Two weeks ago...
Sakura fell though the floor, and Li thought Sakura was about to vanish, and they both fell though the floor, as did Madison. They were all 14 again. They were all at different places though.
Sakura listened to her a burned CD, the song playing was from a pop group called SES. Just as she was passing by the park, the sky turned black. Sakura looked up in the sky and slowed down.
Li, also 14 and in 9th grade (AG: duh.) was on his skateboard he just got for his birthday from an exchange student friend of his from America. He finally mastered how to do a 180 shove it when he just noticed the sky turn black. Then something bumped into him and caused that thing to fall on it's back, and caused Li to lose his balance and ate the pavement face first as his skateboard was sent flying.
"Li! Are you okay?" Sakura asked as she slowly shook her head and kneeled next to him.
"Whatever." Li simply said.
"Too much Final Fantasy 8 again huh?"
"Whatever."
"Do you think we could have missed a clow card?"
"I don't think so Sakura, but you can never know."
Just then, everything around Sakura and Li turned black, including the ground which they were laying upon.
"I have a bad feeling about this Li..."
"No kidding."
Just then, the 2 of them dropped from the supposed ground and fell though.
***************
This time, the two snapped out and found that all the extra layers of clothes they had were all over the room and they were down to the clothes they were wearing earlier. The lust card got weaker though, and it stood next to the patio door. Sakura quickly sensed the situation, as did Li, and he immediately moved out of the way as Sakura charged.
"Oh key of Clow, power of magic, power of light, surrender the wand, the force ignite!" Sakura yelled out and pulled out her wand. She swung it over her head and toward the slowly recovering card, but the card had enough time to get away from Sakura and flip over her, then it knelt down, and Sakura looked right at Li's eyes, as did Li. Sakura dropped her wand, and both of their eyes were glazed over once again.
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[Kero] Kero here! Sakura and Syaoran were able to fend off the spell of the Lust card, and it seems the Lust card was getting weaker from the memories of the past. How long can Sakura nad Syaoran keep this up? Where's Touya when you need him???
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Well, there is part one of the only parts with the same name. I already know what im going to do in my next part, so I'm not going to say much here except R+R, or else I'll hold back! Besides that, I'll also be on FanFiction.Net reviewing people's stories. So im usually on for long periods of time, so if you guys ever want to contact me while im online, my IM for AOL/Compuserve (they use the same network) is AnimeGamer0, and my Yahoo IM is AnimeGamer, and my ICQ (not used often) is 45275407. You cant miss me, basically. Well, now to start writing the next part.
-AnimeGamer
-Silver (Ag+)
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*On a side note, I want to know if this could be really considered to be a "R" rating. Just give me your thoughts on that because I'm having doubts on putting this part in such a high rating, when it could get a PG -13.