A very old and dangerous person part 13
Disclaimer- I don't own anything related to DBZ.
Note- oh, this took a very long time to post! sorry! I got wrapped up in some other stories I am
currently writing, but I'd like to thank barbo-chan for reminding me of my top priority! the
last part was posted may 30th!!! I am sooo behind.... but I'll make up for it. I here by
promise to finish everything I start before starting something new. (gee, wonder how long that'll
last) And it just so happens that this story comes first! So on with it already! Ah, one more
thing. The time line doesn't really work out. According to 'life story' Freiza teleported Ian
to earth when they were little kids. Then in A very old and dangerous person, I said Ian had
been betrayed by his comrades and trapped in suspended animation for whoi knows how long.
Technically, Freiza should be much older, or even dead, or not born, or something. I don't know.
Do me a favor and just pretend it works out!
We left off with a big 'ol fight blossoming. Ian was fighting Freiza, Vegeta was fighting Koola
and Goku was fighting Kold. Ice simply hovered above waiting to strike...
Ian let all the rage that had been bottled up loose against Freiza who in turn allowed
his hatred for his long-lost cousin spring forth. They seemed evenly matched- Ian had not been
training much with his plans for world dominance, but Freiza had. He was in his final form, which
he stayed in always these days. His defeat at the hands of a Saiyen had wounded him deeply and
now he was always on his gaurd in case a strong opponent should emerge. He seemed to have abandoned
the idea that he was the strongest. Fists flew and arms were brought up for hasty blocks. Freiza
didn't allow one break in the action for fear that Ian might use his burning star attack.
(note- both Ian and Ice have other attacks that I haven't mentioned.) Ian was starting to slow.
It had been years since He had faught and never had he faught this intense of a battle with out
stopping. He needed a break, and soon, otherwise he'd be dead.
"Flare of Death!" Ian yelled, getting an idea. The white-hot fire swelled around him as
it had many years ago. This time, however, it was much stronger, and *much* larger. Freiza dodged
out of the way just in time, along with Goku, Kold, Vegeta, Ice, and Koola. The flames covered a
fifty mile radius (100 miles in diameter) and rose 100 feet in the air, completely scorching the
battle field- not to mention a few people's eyebrows. Ian could keep this up all day if necessary.
It didn't even take any energy to keep up. so he sat down in the middle of it and began to regain
his energy. The other warriors just looked at the towering pillar of fire.
Kold hadn't known his nephew had that kind of power. Yes, he must now most certainly be eliminated.
He resloved that he would take care of Ian himself if Freiza didn't manage, just as soon as he
was finished with this stubborn monkey. Kold glanced at Goku who was in Super Saiyen mode. Who
knew that a Saiyen would give him this much trouble? Goku had been fighting very well, but so had
Kold. They both got hits in and both managed a sufficient number of blocks.
"In fact," Kold convinced himself "Had Char not done this little attack and given my
opponent time to rest, I would have beaten him by now." He glanced at Goku again. He looked
totally off-gaurd. Kold flew at him, but Goku phased out and reappeared behind him. The fight
was back on. It was during this half of the fight that Goku realized that Kold was not even
powered up yet...
Koola and Vegeta had barely stopped fighting at all. Vegeta had surprised Koola by going
Super Saiyen, forcing Koola to power up to be superior. The Icicle Attack had worn off of Vegeta
back at the beginning. Vegeta was more skilled at fighting than Koola, but Koola was stronger.
Still, Vegeta was able to hold his own against him.
Ice came as close to the blze as he dared. It was just as he had suspected. It wasn't fire
at all! It had all the same properties of fire except that it could be controlled as Ki. And Ice
knew how to battle Ki. He turned his Eye lasers on the tower. They made a tiny hole which closed
up immeadiatly. Ice flew over to Freiza to report this find. Freiza grinned. He had taught this boy
well. Freiza began powering up a beam and ordered Ice to do the same from the other side. He
obeyed natrually and began powering up his own beam. Freiza let his fly. He was on the side where
all the fighting was taking place. Ice was on the other side where he couldn't see the fighters
and the fighters couldn't see him. Freiza's beam was making a decent sized hole, but Ice's was
hardly doing anything.
"A kamehameha would probobly work better." Said a deep voice from behind Ice. Ice turned
around and saw _______
ok, that just seemed like an excellent place to stop, yes? Just kidding! I wouldn't do that to you....
Ice turned around and saw Piccolo hovering there slightly above him.(now I have no idea
whether or not Piccolo knows how to do a kamehameha, but hey, thats why they call it fan *fiction*)
"What are you talking about?" Ice asked. He had no knowledge of any kamehameha. Who
was this strange green man anyway? Piccolo grinned showing his fangs. He didn't seem at all
surprised or hurt that his student didn't remeber him. He floated down so that he was level with
Ice.
"The kamehameha is a pretty powerful Ki attack. Stronger than the one you're using now,"
Piccolo said galncing at Ice's weak beam. "I can show you how to use it, if you like." Ice
looked him in the eye. This Piccolo guy didn't seem like the kind who would help someone, but he
trusted him. Something deep down told him to...
In his black oblivion, Gohan suddenly saw a glimmer of hope. Piccolo had reached the
battle. If anyone could help him, Piccolo could.
Piccolo showed Ice how to cup his hands and draw the energy forward, and just when it was
ready to be released, yell 'Kamehameha' and let 'er rip. Ice tried it, and the first time he did it,
a Huge blue beam emitted from his hands. It was larger than any Kamehameha Goku had ever done,
but it didn't feel right to Ice- It felt like it had wrenched something loose from deep down
inside of him, and when the smoke from the beam cleared, a small boy was hovering there who looked
exactly like Ice, except his hair was black and his aura red. Piccolo flew to his side.
"Gohan, you have to fight Ice and make him part of you again." Gohan looked at his mentor
doubtfully. "Trust me. He has no goodness in him now that you are free and you have to have
control over him now." Gohan nodded. It was like the story of how Kami had tried to rid himself
of evil and ended up creating Piccolo (or Piccolo's father. Either way...) Gohan moved to a fighting
stance. Ice was stronger than him, but somehow, he would prevail.
Piccolo went to help with the main fight on the other side Ian's sheild. Freiza saw him
and immediately knew he had done something to Ice. At that moment Ian's sheild went down and
the fight on the other side became visible. Goku and Vegeta suddenly stopped fighting because
they had just sensed the prescence of two strangely familiar Kis. Koola and Kold knocked them
back against eachother with such force that they fell out of Super Saiyen. Both looked pretty
beaten as Kold and Koola had powered up. Then all the fighters noticed the peculiar fight going
on in front of them. Two seeming twins were battling away, one with black hair and one with blue.
Everyone knew these to be Gohan and Ice.
Goku was about to go help his son when Piccolo stopped him. He explained what had happened to
all present to let them know that if they helped one of them, the other would triumph. Goku,
Vegeta and Piccolo hovered watching the fight while Freiza, Koola, and Kold stood behind them.
Freiza had beaten up Ian who now lay mangled in a crater. Ian had said something which made
Freiza angry and he finished Ian off right there, but before he died, told him that he himself
had killed Fire and Flame, his parents. Ian just smiled and thanked Freiza for brightening his
last hour. Freiza flew away in disgust.
Now the three Z fighters were engrossed in a very interesting fight. Each member of the
Kold family grinned wickedly. The Saiyens were out of their transformed stage and the namekian
was immersed in the fight. What better time to attack? Kold grabbed Goku by the arms (the way
Goku got Radditz before Piccolo killed them) Koola got Vegeta in a headlock, and Freiza wrapped
his tail around Piccolo's neck. Each struggled with his assailent all the while cursing themselves
for being caught off gaurd. Freiza shouted at Ice to grab Gohan. It seemed as though the Earth would
finally be rid of the Saiyens.
Gohan heard Frieza order Ice to grab him. He moved to a fighting position to be ready when
his counterpart tried. Ice powered up a Ki blast and threw it at Gohan after yelling Icicle attack.
Gohan could sense its power and felt he could block it. It was almost upon him when Goku shouted
"Don't try to block it Gohan!" This earned him a knee in the back from Kold. Gohan had
heard his father and *just* managed to dodge it. He watched the ball fly into oblivion. Ice
came up behind him but Gohan sensed him and blocked every punch. Eventually, Gohan jumped back
and powered up a beam. Ice did the same.
"Kamehameha!" They screamed simultaneously. Gohan hadn't expected Ice to do the same
attack as he did, but that didn't stop him from putting his full power into it. Ice meanwhile
only put half of his power into it and the beams were still even. While Gohan was concentrating
on his beam The Kold family snuck back to their ship with their captives in tow. None of them
even yelled- they couldn't- they were each unconcious. while the two demi-saiyens battled it out,
the Kold family ruthlessly beat up the helples Saiyens and Namekian.
Ice saw all of this because it didn't take his full power or concentration to maintain the beam.
Suddenly he poured everything into it and Ice's beam over took Gohan's and knocked the boy back s
everal feet. Gohan fell to the ground and Ice landed beside him and picked him up and started to
fly toward the ship. Gohan struglled as best he could all the while yelling at Ice.
"Think about it Ice! You can't kidnap me! You *are* me! We're the same person! You belong
inside of me! I know you were kidnapped and brainwashed, you just have to realize it! let go of
me so I can help my friends! they're your friends too, you just have to listen!" But Ice didn't
listen. Instead he stopped and held Gohan out in front of him.
"You think you're right, don't you? Well what makes you so sure? how do you know your
'father' is really your father? you could have been brainwashed to, you know. Freiza did wonders
for me. Look how strong I am. Just come on, Gohan. You don't know me, and I am not you. If I was,
would I be doing this? Now lets go. Freiza can only help you."
Gohan still struggled, but he also thought about what Ice had said. He *knew* that he had been
kidnapped and brainwashed thus creating Ice,but Ice didn't seem so evil now. Gohan looked at the
cold face of his captor. He knew a part of him was still in there. It scared him to think about
it, but he was still partly inside Ice. Sure he was out here, but he was also in there. Gohan
struggled harder. But Ice, the moment of kindness passed, simply formed a Ki blast and brought
it down upon Gohan, who then fell unconcious.
Back on the battle field, citizens were just beginning to crowd around the large crater
with Ian's body in it. The authorities went into it to see if the tyrant truly *was* dead. Boy,
did they get a surprise! Ian hovered out of the crater, his arm hanging limply at his side. The
people scattered like so many mice before a large cat. (ok, so my analogys need work...) Ian
ignored them he was very close to death, and he needed to get back to his lab. He hadn't seen
what had happened, nor did he care. He was lucky Freiza was stupid enough to believe he was dead.
Minutes later, what looked like a smaller version of a Saiyen space pod took off to space. In
it was Ian. He no longer was the alien who had wrought terror on the world. Now he looked like
a helpless old man in suspended animation, waiting for the right temperatures to wake him up.
Thats all for now! I hope you liked it...I've got BIG plans for this story, so this DEFINATELY
was NOT the last part- Even I wouldn't leave anyone in the clutches of Frieza like that!
Though I do think that this is the largest kidnapping I've managed yet.... any way, until
next time, comment!!!! Toodles!
~mysticGohan33~
Disclaimer- I don't own anything related to DBZ.
Note- oh, this took a very long time to post! sorry! I got wrapped up in some other stories I am
currently writing, but I'd like to thank barbo-chan for reminding me of my top priority! the
last part was posted may 30th!!! I am sooo behind.... but I'll make up for it. I here by
promise to finish everything I start before starting something new. (gee, wonder how long that'll
last) And it just so happens that this story comes first! So on with it already! Ah, one more
thing. The time line doesn't really work out. According to 'life story' Freiza teleported Ian
to earth when they were little kids. Then in A very old and dangerous person, I said Ian had
been betrayed by his comrades and trapped in suspended animation for whoi knows how long.
Technically, Freiza should be much older, or even dead, or not born, or something. I don't know.
Do me a favor and just pretend it works out!
We left off with a big 'ol fight blossoming. Ian was fighting Freiza, Vegeta was fighting Koola
and Goku was fighting Kold. Ice simply hovered above waiting to strike...
Ian let all the rage that had been bottled up loose against Freiza who in turn allowed
his hatred for his long-lost cousin spring forth. They seemed evenly matched- Ian had not been
training much with his plans for world dominance, but Freiza had. He was in his final form, which
he stayed in always these days. His defeat at the hands of a Saiyen had wounded him deeply and
now he was always on his gaurd in case a strong opponent should emerge. He seemed to have abandoned
the idea that he was the strongest. Fists flew and arms were brought up for hasty blocks. Freiza
didn't allow one break in the action for fear that Ian might use his burning star attack.
(note- both Ian and Ice have other attacks that I haven't mentioned.) Ian was starting to slow.
It had been years since He had faught and never had he faught this intense of a battle with out
stopping. He needed a break, and soon, otherwise he'd be dead.
"Flare of Death!" Ian yelled, getting an idea. The white-hot fire swelled around him as
it had many years ago. This time, however, it was much stronger, and *much* larger. Freiza dodged
out of the way just in time, along with Goku, Kold, Vegeta, Ice, and Koola. The flames covered a
fifty mile radius (100 miles in diameter) and rose 100 feet in the air, completely scorching the
battle field- not to mention a few people's eyebrows. Ian could keep this up all day if necessary.
It didn't even take any energy to keep up. so he sat down in the middle of it and began to regain
his energy. The other warriors just looked at the towering pillar of fire.
Kold hadn't known his nephew had that kind of power. Yes, he must now most certainly be eliminated.
He resloved that he would take care of Ian himself if Freiza didn't manage, just as soon as he
was finished with this stubborn monkey. Kold glanced at Goku who was in Super Saiyen mode. Who
knew that a Saiyen would give him this much trouble? Goku had been fighting very well, but so had
Kold. They both got hits in and both managed a sufficient number of blocks.
"In fact," Kold convinced himself "Had Char not done this little attack and given my
opponent time to rest, I would have beaten him by now." He glanced at Goku again. He looked
totally off-gaurd. Kold flew at him, but Goku phased out and reappeared behind him. The fight
was back on. It was during this half of the fight that Goku realized that Kold was not even
powered up yet...
Koola and Vegeta had barely stopped fighting at all. Vegeta had surprised Koola by going
Super Saiyen, forcing Koola to power up to be superior. The Icicle Attack had worn off of Vegeta
back at the beginning. Vegeta was more skilled at fighting than Koola, but Koola was stronger.
Still, Vegeta was able to hold his own against him.
Ice came as close to the blze as he dared. It was just as he had suspected. It wasn't fire
at all! It had all the same properties of fire except that it could be controlled as Ki. And Ice
knew how to battle Ki. He turned his Eye lasers on the tower. They made a tiny hole which closed
up immeadiatly. Ice flew over to Freiza to report this find. Freiza grinned. He had taught this boy
well. Freiza began powering up a beam and ordered Ice to do the same from the other side. He
obeyed natrually and began powering up his own beam. Freiza let his fly. He was on the side where
all the fighting was taking place. Ice was on the other side where he couldn't see the fighters
and the fighters couldn't see him. Freiza's beam was making a decent sized hole, but Ice's was
hardly doing anything.
"A kamehameha would probobly work better." Said a deep voice from behind Ice. Ice turned
around and saw _______
ok, that just seemed like an excellent place to stop, yes? Just kidding! I wouldn't do that to you....
Ice turned around and saw Piccolo hovering there slightly above him.(now I have no idea
whether or not Piccolo knows how to do a kamehameha, but hey, thats why they call it fan *fiction*)
"What are you talking about?" Ice asked. He had no knowledge of any kamehameha. Who
was this strange green man anyway? Piccolo grinned showing his fangs. He didn't seem at all
surprised or hurt that his student didn't remeber him. He floated down so that he was level with
Ice.
"The kamehameha is a pretty powerful Ki attack. Stronger than the one you're using now,"
Piccolo said galncing at Ice's weak beam. "I can show you how to use it, if you like." Ice
looked him in the eye. This Piccolo guy didn't seem like the kind who would help someone, but he
trusted him. Something deep down told him to...
In his black oblivion, Gohan suddenly saw a glimmer of hope. Piccolo had reached the
battle. If anyone could help him, Piccolo could.
Piccolo showed Ice how to cup his hands and draw the energy forward, and just when it was
ready to be released, yell 'Kamehameha' and let 'er rip. Ice tried it, and the first time he did it,
a Huge blue beam emitted from his hands. It was larger than any Kamehameha Goku had ever done,
but it didn't feel right to Ice- It felt like it had wrenched something loose from deep down
inside of him, and when the smoke from the beam cleared, a small boy was hovering there who looked
exactly like Ice, except his hair was black and his aura red. Piccolo flew to his side.
"Gohan, you have to fight Ice and make him part of you again." Gohan looked at his mentor
doubtfully. "Trust me. He has no goodness in him now that you are free and you have to have
control over him now." Gohan nodded. It was like the story of how Kami had tried to rid himself
of evil and ended up creating Piccolo (or Piccolo's father. Either way...) Gohan moved to a fighting
stance. Ice was stronger than him, but somehow, he would prevail.
Piccolo went to help with the main fight on the other side Ian's sheild. Freiza saw him
and immediately knew he had done something to Ice. At that moment Ian's sheild went down and
the fight on the other side became visible. Goku and Vegeta suddenly stopped fighting because
they had just sensed the prescence of two strangely familiar Kis. Koola and Kold knocked them
back against eachother with such force that they fell out of Super Saiyen. Both looked pretty
beaten as Kold and Koola had powered up. Then all the fighters noticed the peculiar fight going
on in front of them. Two seeming twins were battling away, one with black hair and one with blue.
Everyone knew these to be Gohan and Ice.
Goku was about to go help his son when Piccolo stopped him. He explained what had happened to
all present to let them know that if they helped one of them, the other would triumph. Goku,
Vegeta and Piccolo hovered watching the fight while Freiza, Koola, and Kold stood behind them.
Freiza had beaten up Ian who now lay mangled in a crater. Ian had said something which made
Freiza angry and he finished Ian off right there, but before he died, told him that he himself
had killed Fire and Flame, his parents. Ian just smiled and thanked Freiza for brightening his
last hour. Freiza flew away in disgust.
Now the three Z fighters were engrossed in a very interesting fight. Each member of the
Kold family grinned wickedly. The Saiyens were out of their transformed stage and the namekian
was immersed in the fight. What better time to attack? Kold grabbed Goku by the arms (the way
Goku got Radditz before Piccolo killed them) Koola got Vegeta in a headlock, and Freiza wrapped
his tail around Piccolo's neck. Each struggled with his assailent all the while cursing themselves
for being caught off gaurd. Freiza shouted at Ice to grab Gohan. It seemed as though the Earth would
finally be rid of the Saiyens.
Gohan heard Frieza order Ice to grab him. He moved to a fighting position to be ready when
his counterpart tried. Ice powered up a Ki blast and threw it at Gohan after yelling Icicle attack.
Gohan could sense its power and felt he could block it. It was almost upon him when Goku shouted
"Don't try to block it Gohan!" This earned him a knee in the back from Kold. Gohan had
heard his father and *just* managed to dodge it. He watched the ball fly into oblivion. Ice
came up behind him but Gohan sensed him and blocked every punch. Eventually, Gohan jumped back
and powered up a beam. Ice did the same.
"Kamehameha!" They screamed simultaneously. Gohan hadn't expected Ice to do the same
attack as he did, but that didn't stop him from putting his full power into it. Ice meanwhile
only put half of his power into it and the beams were still even. While Gohan was concentrating
on his beam The Kold family snuck back to their ship with their captives in tow. None of them
even yelled- they couldn't- they were each unconcious. while the two demi-saiyens battled it out,
the Kold family ruthlessly beat up the helples Saiyens and Namekian.
Ice saw all of this because it didn't take his full power or concentration to maintain the beam.
Suddenly he poured everything into it and Ice's beam over took Gohan's and knocked the boy back s
everal feet. Gohan fell to the ground and Ice landed beside him and picked him up and started to
fly toward the ship. Gohan struglled as best he could all the while yelling at Ice.
"Think about it Ice! You can't kidnap me! You *are* me! We're the same person! You belong
inside of me! I know you were kidnapped and brainwashed, you just have to realize it! let go of
me so I can help my friends! they're your friends too, you just have to listen!" But Ice didn't
listen. Instead he stopped and held Gohan out in front of him.
"You think you're right, don't you? Well what makes you so sure? how do you know your
'father' is really your father? you could have been brainwashed to, you know. Freiza did wonders
for me. Look how strong I am. Just come on, Gohan. You don't know me, and I am not you. If I was,
would I be doing this? Now lets go. Freiza can only help you."
Gohan still struggled, but he also thought about what Ice had said. He *knew* that he had been
kidnapped and brainwashed thus creating Ice,but Ice didn't seem so evil now. Gohan looked at the
cold face of his captor. He knew a part of him was still in there. It scared him to think about
it, but he was still partly inside Ice. Sure he was out here, but he was also in there. Gohan
struggled harder. But Ice, the moment of kindness passed, simply formed a Ki blast and brought
it down upon Gohan, who then fell unconcious.
Back on the battle field, citizens were just beginning to crowd around the large crater
with Ian's body in it. The authorities went into it to see if the tyrant truly *was* dead. Boy,
did they get a surprise! Ian hovered out of the crater, his arm hanging limply at his side. The
people scattered like so many mice before a large cat. (ok, so my analogys need work...) Ian
ignored them he was very close to death, and he needed to get back to his lab. He hadn't seen
what had happened, nor did he care. He was lucky Freiza was stupid enough to believe he was dead.
Minutes later, what looked like a smaller version of a Saiyen space pod took off to space. In
it was Ian. He no longer was the alien who had wrought terror on the world. Now he looked like
a helpless old man in suspended animation, waiting for the right temperatures to wake him up.
Thats all for now! I hope you liked it...I've got BIG plans for this story, so this DEFINATELY
was NOT the last part- Even I wouldn't leave anyone in the clutches of Frieza like that!
Though I do think that this is the largest kidnapping I've managed yet.... any way, until
next time, comment!!!! Toodles!
~mysticGohan33~