Strength and Honour
Part 4
Maximus
ached. The manacles cut into his wrists, and his shoulders burnt, screaming in
protest at the unnatural position they were forced in to. His bare knees ground
into the stone floor of his cell unmercifully. His whole body screamed in utter
torment, for each small movement, a dozen muscles protested…loudly.
Maximus
hung his head, he had no doubt that he would fool the Emperor with his
appearance. The only problem was that it was no longer an act. He hoped that
once he had loosened up he would be alright.
He
waited.
Commodus
stood in the halls below the Coliseum floor. He looked out of place in his
dazzling white and gold armour. Purposefully he strode toward Maximus' cell.
Quintus and six bodyguards following closely behind.
Forcefully
he pushed open Maximus' cell door, and stared at the man he had hated for so
long with utter contempt, he cocked his head to one side, to listen to the
chanting above his head. "Maximus. Maximus. Maximus. They
call for you. The general who became a slave. The slave who became a gladiator.
The gladiator who defied an Emperor. A striking story. Now the people want to
know how the story ends. Only a famous death will do. What could be more
glorious than to challenge the emperor himself in the great arena?" Although
Maximus knew that this was coming, he had been told by Quintus that Commodus
did not know that he knew.
"You would
fight me?" Commodus
looked at Maximus with utter hatred plain on his face
"Why not?
Do you think I am afraid?" Maximus looked at the man with scorn, and managed a
rueful smile.
"I think you have been afraid all your life." Maximus leant
forward as he said this, his face almost touching the Emperors, daring him to
strike him.
Enraged Commodus
stared at the man who had dared to call him a coward, slowly he walked around
Maximus, staring at him all the while. Eventually he was directly behind his
enemy. Maximus willed himself not to turn around, not to show fear as he stood
and waited for the Emperor to kill him.
"Maximus
the invincible, he who knows no fear." Commodus mused aloud. It was all Maximus
could do not to laugh at this, but he could not refrain a small smile.
"I
have nothing to fear." Commodus scowled in silent rage. "I knew a man who once said, death smiles at us all.
All that man can do is smile back." Maximus continued.
"I wonder.
Did your friend smile at his own death?" Commodus asked, trying to remain calm.
Maximus closed his eyes, Cicero's death weighed heavily on his shoulders.
"Did your father?" Maximus asked, wanting the
Praetorians know what he knew, although Maximus believed that they had found
that out long ago. Commodus softened his tone.
"You loved my father, I know. But that seems to be
another one of his traits that I did not inherit!" Commodus screamed, as he
struck Maximus' back forcefully with both hands.
Maximus fell forwards as far as the chains allowed,
he gasped, the sudden pain blurring his vision. He grunted as Commodus struck
him again and again. He would not let this wretch have the pleasure of hearing
him scream.
Breathing heavily from his exertions, Commodus left
Maximus and stood beside Quintus. "He is ready. Unchain him." Quintus and
another of his guards stepped forward to unchain the general, who sagged in his
chains. As his hands came free, Maximus fell onto the dirt with a grunt, new
blood from opened wounds poured down his back. Wearily he struggled upright,
and stared the Emperor in the eye. Commodus, flinching under Maximus' stare
looked away. Despite the state of the general. Commodus knew that this would
not be an easy fight.
Commodus and
Maximus positioned themselves on the platform that would take them to the arena
floor. The Praetorians closed in around them, their shields locked over their
heads, in some attempt at the testudo formation. Only this time to hide
the combatants until they were ready for the crowd to see who they were.
As the formation
opened, the chanting became a roar. Here was their beloved general fighting the
Emperor the whole Empire detested. "Maximus! Maximus! Maximus" they screamed
for their champion. The Emperor raised his arms, and spun round so that he
could acknowledge the crowd. The few that noticed him spat and hissed, although
this was barely audible above the noise the crowd was making for their general.
Disgusted, Commodus retrieved his sword from Quintus, Maximus made to follow,
but Quintus threw his sword to the opposite end of the arena to Commodus.
Slowly, painfully he bent down next to his sword, and picked up a small handful
of the dirt, rubbing it between his hands, signalling his readiness to fight.
He picked up his sword, and moved to the centre of the ring the Praetorians had
formed around them.
Commodus attacked
first, hard and fast, but Maximus easily blocked his attacks, swiftly moving to
the other side of the circle. Commodus was convinced that he was winning, after
all. Maximus had not yet attacked him. It will be over soon he thought
with a smile. And with that, he moved in for the kill.
Maximus watched
Commodus. He had not yet started to fight. All he had done was to test the
speed and the skill of this man, and Maximus was pleased to find that he was
superior to the Emperor in both. Suddenly, without warning, he charged across
the arena to attack the Emperor, sword in his left hand. At the last second,
Maximus changed hands, his sword cutting into Commodus' left hip. The crowd
roared. Commodus glanced at Maximus, shock and pain in his eyes, blood already
staining his glorious white tunica. Maximus caught his eyes and smiled. And at
that moment Commodus saw his death in the man before him.
Enraged, Commodus
charged Maximus. No one killed the Emperor. No one! Especially not on the sands
of the arena floor. Commodus hit Maximus with his full weight, and Maximus fell
heavily to the floor. In unison the crowd groaned. Maximus blinked. The sudden
pain blurred his vision. He shook his head and saw Commodus above him with a
raised sword. He lashed up with his foot, and hit the Emperor on his knee,
grinding his heel into bone and cartilage. With difficulty, Maximus rose, and
watched the limping bleeding Emperor, already planning his death. Opposite him,
the Emperor did the same.
Commodus moved
first, fast, despite his injuries. He went low and to the left of Maximus,
slashing for the tendon above his ankle. He missed, and slashed his calf
instead. A superficial wound, but Commodus grinned, pleased that he had been
able to injure the invincible general.
Maximus stared at
him in utter hatred, walking slowly toward him, never taking his eyes away from
his enemy. Swiftly he struck at the Emperor, but Commodus blocked the attack.
Swords locked, the two men snarled at each other. Angrily, Maximus'; foot
crashed into Commodus' injured knee. He smiled as he saw the pain in his eyes.
Maximus backed away from the Emperor. Commodus watched him warily. He stepped
forward to follow, but his injured knee would not take his weight, and it
buckled, sending the Emperor to the Coliseum floor.
Maximus strode
forward to the prone Emperor, sword ready for the kill. But honour let the
Emperor rise. A mistake. Commodus thought, watching Maximus. He
struggled to his feet, pretending to be more injured than he really was.
Maximus watched him with disdain. He was unprepared for the strike that slashed
deep into his right arm and sent his sword across the arena. Commodus looked at
him and smiled. Say hello to your family for me. Those eyes mocked.
Suddenly Commodus spoke.
"Your wife Maximus. She was very beautiful. I remember…she had amazing skin – soft, dark…" he looked at Maximus, awaiting the reaction. Maximus remembered his first fight in Rome
They tell me your son squealed like a girl when
they nailed him to the cross...And your wife, moaned like a whore when they
ravaged her again, and again, and again.
And Maximus understood.
Furiously he dived forward, ignoring the pain in his body.
Intent only on killing this man that had murdered his family. Commodus was
prepared for the attack, but not its ferocity. He swung his sword, intending to
finish Maximus once and for all. Maximus let the blade come, felt it sink into
his arm. He grabbed Commodus' sword arm, and wrenched it away from the blade,
that fell to the arena floor. Violently he twisted Commodus arm until the bone
broke with a harsh snap that sounded all around the arena. Maximus fist made
contact with Commodus' face again and again. He felt something give under his
hand as Commodus' nose broke.
Commodus, doing the only thing he could think of to stay
alive forced his uninjured arm behind Maximus, and hit his back again and again
and again. Maximus was to intent on killing his enemy to notice the fresh wave
of blood that soaked his tunica. This failing, Commodus remembered his dagger
in his wrist guard. Wearily he thrust it forward, aiming at Maximus face, but
Maximus deflected the blade with his left hand. Great. Another wound. A
part of him though absently. Grabbing hold of Commodus' arm, he managed to turn
the blade on its owner. Commodus stood no chance against the much stronger man,
and slowly the dagger edged toward his throat. Desperately he tried to force
the blade back to Maximus, but then he gasped as he felt the blade pierce
flesh, deeper, and then it could go no further. Commodus looked up at Maximus
for one last time, before he fell to the arena sands. Dead.
Staggering, Maximus moved away from the body. Unable to
believe that he had done it, that he had killed the Emperor. He stared up at
the now silent crowds, wishing that they would make some noise – anything other
than this silence that hung in the air.
Quintus stared at his general, knew that he must make the
first move. "Caesar." He called Maximus, Maximus stared at him blankly, not
registering what Quintus had called him. "Caesar! What now?" quickly Maximus
snapped out of his day dream. "Quintus free my men. Senator Graccus is to be
reinstated. There was a dream that was Rome, it shall be realized. These are
the wishes of Marcus Aurelius." Quintus stared at him then turned to his men.
"Free the prisoners. Go!" he looked at Maximus proudly "What
we do in life…" he whispered to his friend.
"…echos in eternity." Maximus continued, hoping that he had
done the right thing for Rome.
Maximus smiled as he saw his friends enter the arena,
blinking in surprise, then understanding as they saw Commodus dead, and a
bloody Maximus standing in the arena. Dutifully, they knelt to the ground.
Embarrassed, Maximus ordered them to rise. "Rome will be a republic again. I
will rule only until the senate is ready to resume control." He told his
people.
Suddenly, the pain hit Maximus. He struggled to lift off
his armour that was shooting pain through his injured back. The crowd roared in
anger when they saw the blood on Maximus tunica. He looked up at the people,
"Commodus was not a moral man." He told them simply.
Suddenly, the pain became too much for him and he crashed heavily to the arena
floor.
"Maximus!!"
Lucillas' despairing scream could be heard all around the Coliseum. The crowds
watched as she ran to he one true love, they were confused, but nothing more could
surprise them this day. Wearily Maximus opened his eyes, grimacing at the sun
that blinded him, he looked at Lucilla.
"Lucius is safe."
He told her, struggling to stay awake. Lucilla smiled, her son was safe. All
this man had given so that she could live without fear. She bent down, and
kissed him tenderly on the lips.
Juba stepped over
to his friend, "Maximus…" he began, but Maximus quieted him.
"You have your
freedom," he said "You will see your family again soon."
Juba smiled. "My
family. I had given up hope of seeing them long ago."
Maximus reached
out a hand to Juba, signalling that he wanted to stand up. He embraced his
friend. "Never give up Juba, never give up."
Maximus staggered
as he moved across the arena to Quintus, Quintus opened his arms wide and
embraced his General. "The Gods love you!" he said, a huge smile playing across
his features, Maximus smiled back.
"The Gods have a
sense of humour." He replied, looking at the dead Emperor.
"And now you are
Caesar." Quintus told him quietly. Maximus looked sharply at him.
"The dream lives
Quintus, it is just a matter of when it will be put into practice." He told his
friend.
"You would make a
good Caesar, you would do what is best for Rome…" Quintus continued.
"I am," Maximus
replied, "by making her a republic again."
Maximus called to
Lucilla, and he headed out of the arena, a slow staggering walk, with Quintus
supporting him on one side, Juba on the other. As he made his way through the
tunnel, he could hear the crowds chanting his name, "Maximus! Maximus!
Maximus!", he remembered Commodus' words,
The general who became a slave. The slave who became a
gladiator. The gladiator who defied an Emperor. A striking story. Now the
people want to know how the story ends. Only a famous death will do.
Maximus smiled.
Commodus had had his famous death, and now they were free. He looked back into
the area at the dead emperor. "Now we are free, and I shall see you again, but
not yet, not yet…" he whispered the treat to Commodus, who lay alone and
abandoned on the arena floor.
He smiled to
himself despite his pain, the story is only just beginning he thought,
and with that he went home. To a woman, a child and the republic.
Roma Victor.
OK, that's it. I'm
kinda sad to have finished it, this story was my baby! But I gave you all the
happy ending that you asked for. And you never know dear readers; there is
always room for a sequel…
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