Hey you guys thanx for the reviews on the other one o and umm nightheart if your reading this I tried to correct all my mistakes and stuff it's just that when I start typing I'm used to like abbreviating and stuff and as for punctuation I'll try my best. Please review or even criticize so I can correct things because I don't know if my fics really are good or not and everything. So n e ways on with the story o yeah and standard disclaimers apply and if words are italicized they are thoughts
Kate woke up chained to a wall with the other pilots in a similar fate. It seemed that she was the last one to become conscious since the others were already trying to get their handcuffs off. She struggled against her bonds but to no avail. Two Oz soldiers came in and grabbed Kate. They took off her chains and dragged her out the door kicking and struggling. The other pilots glared at the soldiers and tried to get at them. The soldiers smirked and continued on.
The soldiers brought Kate to a huge doubled door room. They threw her onto the floor and saluted to the lieutenant who had captured Kate and the others before. Kate looked up and glared at the man. She knew she had met him before at a party that her father had dragged her to. He was the son of another famous Oz general. Their fathers had arranged an engagement and tried to force the two together. After one meeting with him she totally refused to be engaged to him and argued with her father for it for weeks and weeks. She had argued that the guy was arrogant, had a cruel look in his eyes, and seemed to be a person of no mercy. Finally, after she threatened to run away, her father called off the engagement. This lieutenant's name is ummm ummm o yeah Brian sonething, she thought to herself. "Lieutenant Fanel (yes I got it from escaflowne I couldn't think of n e thing) we brought the prisoner." One of the soldiers said. Yes, Brian Fanel, the son of the great General Fanel who was close to Treize. "Take off her mask" he ordered one of the men. "Yes sir" saluted a soldier and tried to take off the mask as Kate struggled violently. "What are you doing lieutenant" asked another young man coming through the door. "Colonel Cinert" exclaimed Fanel. Oniichan, thought Kate to herself.
"Let go of that girl." The colonel said. "Y-y-yes sir" Fanel said as he motioned the soldier trying to take the mask off Kate to stop. "Relinquish her to me to question her." Cinert said to Fanel and without waiting for an answer dragged Kate off. "Your lucky I saved you. Normally I wouldn't bother but you remind me of my little sister. I never thought I'd live to see someone with the same shade of red gold hair like hers." He explained. "Who are you really and why do you wear a mask?" he asked. "I'm an Oz soldier and I was taken hostage by the gundam pilots." She stated to the commanding officer. "I see." he said. He told one of his soldiers, "See that she is taken out of the cells and give her a room."
The soldier took her to a room and looking surprised told her, "Your lucky the colonel is never like this, he's always coldhearted except when he talks about his little sister. I don't know why he seems to like you though." He then left. Kate stood by her bed and was trying to devise a plan to get the gundam pilots out of the cells and help them escape. She heard footsteps behind her and on instinct whipped out a gun she had had hidden. She pointed it at the intruder, and was shocked to see Brian Fanel there. "What are you doing here lieutenant." She said coldly. "Oh I just wanted to see what the colonel was going to do to you. Though it looks like he hasn't interrogated you yet." he replied. She glared at him. "My business is none of your concern" she said "Now leave." He returned with an equally cold stare and moved forward and grabbed her arm, twisting it so it was at an awkward position. "The gundam pilots are my business and if u help them escape I will personally get u and torture you and kill you myself." And with that, he let go of her arm and left, leaving an angry Kate in his wake.
I don't care what he says. I have to free all the gundam pilots and Trowa, now where did Trowa come from, she wondered to herself. No I can't be falling in love with him, she stubbornly thought, he probably only thinks of me as a little sister. She thought back to when she was "hostage" with the gundam pilots. They hadn't treated her cruelly merely just kept her from escaping. Actually she had had an impression that they actually liked her. Enough with these thoughts she said angrily to herself I have to find a way to get them out of there. She continued to ponder about an escape plan when an idea hit her. This is perfect she thought.
She walked out her door and saw a soldier rounding the corner and grabbed him holding a gun to his temple. "Where is the ammunition room" she whispered harshly to the trembling soldier. "D-d-d-own the hall and on the left you'll see a door saying ammunition." He stuttered terrified. She knocked him unconscious with the butt of her gun and after dragging him into her room and stuffing him in one of the closets, she went off in the direction he told her.
She got to the door she was looking for and pulled out a security card. Her father had given it to her before and it was suppose to be able to bypass any Oz security system. She slipped into the room and gathered a load of bombs and guns. She tiptoed back to the door and cautiously peered out and found herself staring down the seemingly endless black hole of a gun barrel. She dropped her load and gasped.
Ok peoples I tried to correct my spellings and I don't know if my paragraphs are right but I never said I was good at English right. Just to let you know I got part of the second last sentence from together again 05 by Kristine because I love her description of the gun barrel. Please don't get mad at me. Ummm thanks again to the people who reviewed and I'll try to get part 5 up tomorrow depending on how much work I have. Please don't hate me because I always leave cliffhangers it's just I want to keep your attention. Oh and one last thing, do u guys want me to use more Japanese because I know a couple more words it's just I don't know if u guys want me to use them or not. So please r+r and give me suggestions.
Kate woke up chained to a wall with the other pilots in a similar fate. It seemed that she was the last one to become conscious since the others were already trying to get their handcuffs off. She struggled against her bonds but to no avail. Two Oz soldiers came in and grabbed Kate. They took off her chains and dragged her out the door kicking and struggling. The other pilots glared at the soldiers and tried to get at them. The soldiers smirked and continued on.
The soldiers brought Kate to a huge doubled door room. They threw her onto the floor and saluted to the lieutenant who had captured Kate and the others before. Kate looked up and glared at the man. She knew she had met him before at a party that her father had dragged her to. He was the son of another famous Oz general. Their fathers had arranged an engagement and tried to force the two together. After one meeting with him she totally refused to be engaged to him and argued with her father for it for weeks and weeks. She had argued that the guy was arrogant, had a cruel look in his eyes, and seemed to be a person of no mercy. Finally, after she threatened to run away, her father called off the engagement. This lieutenant's name is ummm ummm o yeah Brian sonething, she thought to herself. "Lieutenant Fanel (yes I got it from escaflowne I couldn't think of n e thing) we brought the prisoner." One of the soldiers said. Yes, Brian Fanel, the son of the great General Fanel who was close to Treize. "Take off her mask" he ordered one of the men. "Yes sir" saluted a soldier and tried to take off the mask as Kate struggled violently. "What are you doing lieutenant" asked another young man coming through the door. "Colonel Cinert" exclaimed Fanel. Oniichan, thought Kate to herself.
"Let go of that girl." The colonel said. "Y-y-yes sir" Fanel said as he motioned the soldier trying to take the mask off Kate to stop. "Relinquish her to me to question her." Cinert said to Fanel and without waiting for an answer dragged Kate off. "Your lucky I saved you. Normally I wouldn't bother but you remind me of my little sister. I never thought I'd live to see someone with the same shade of red gold hair like hers." He explained. "Who are you really and why do you wear a mask?" he asked. "I'm an Oz soldier and I was taken hostage by the gundam pilots." She stated to the commanding officer. "I see." he said. He told one of his soldiers, "See that she is taken out of the cells and give her a room."
The soldier took her to a room and looking surprised told her, "Your lucky the colonel is never like this, he's always coldhearted except when he talks about his little sister. I don't know why he seems to like you though." He then left. Kate stood by her bed and was trying to devise a plan to get the gundam pilots out of the cells and help them escape. She heard footsteps behind her and on instinct whipped out a gun she had had hidden. She pointed it at the intruder, and was shocked to see Brian Fanel there. "What are you doing here lieutenant." She said coldly. "Oh I just wanted to see what the colonel was going to do to you. Though it looks like he hasn't interrogated you yet." he replied. She glared at him. "My business is none of your concern" she said "Now leave." He returned with an equally cold stare and moved forward and grabbed her arm, twisting it so it was at an awkward position. "The gundam pilots are my business and if u help them escape I will personally get u and torture you and kill you myself." And with that, he let go of her arm and left, leaving an angry Kate in his wake.
I don't care what he says. I have to free all the gundam pilots and Trowa, now where did Trowa come from, she wondered to herself. No I can't be falling in love with him, she stubbornly thought, he probably only thinks of me as a little sister. She thought back to when she was "hostage" with the gundam pilots. They hadn't treated her cruelly merely just kept her from escaping. Actually she had had an impression that they actually liked her. Enough with these thoughts she said angrily to herself I have to find a way to get them out of there. She continued to ponder about an escape plan when an idea hit her. This is perfect she thought.
She walked out her door and saw a soldier rounding the corner and grabbed him holding a gun to his temple. "Where is the ammunition room" she whispered harshly to the trembling soldier. "D-d-d-own the hall and on the left you'll see a door saying ammunition." He stuttered terrified. She knocked him unconscious with the butt of her gun and after dragging him into her room and stuffing him in one of the closets, she went off in the direction he told her.
She got to the door she was looking for and pulled out a security card. Her father had given it to her before and it was suppose to be able to bypass any Oz security system. She slipped into the room and gathered a load of bombs and guns. She tiptoed back to the door and cautiously peered out and found herself staring down the seemingly endless black hole of a gun barrel. She dropped her load and gasped.
Ok peoples I tried to correct my spellings and I don't know if my paragraphs are right but I never said I was good at English right. Just to let you know I got part of the second last sentence from together again 05 by Kristine because I love her description of the gun barrel. Please don't get mad at me. Ummm thanks again to the people who reviewed and I'll try to get part 5 up tomorrow depending on how much work I have. Please don't hate me because I always leave cliffhangers it's just I want to keep your attention. Oh and one last thing, do u guys want me to use more Japanese because I know a couple more words it's just I don't know if u guys want me to use them or not. So please r+r and give me suggestions.