Hi all! Suggestions are always helpful and I am glad you are enjoying my story. I am so glad that this being my first fan fic is going so well!
Thanks a million
Faye_Valentine00@hotmail.com
Sarah
Disclaimer: I do not own DB/DBZ/DBGT or anything else. I am only a fan!
Last time on Bras emotional journey-
Goten gets punched by Vegita but when Bulma finds out, Vegita has to sleep on the couch. Then Trunks over hears the fighting between his parents and he has a talk with Bra before giving his friends a waring about treating his sister right. Now the 2 young half saiyans are ready to talk out their potential relationship... what will happen.
Bras' Emotional Journey Part 3
By: Faye_Valentine00
Bra and Goten sat in the Satan City Cafe in silence, just looking at each other. The tension that came along with the silence could be cut with a knife. Finally Goten broke the silence. "You look nice this morning."
Bra felt her face heat up and she knew that her face was bright red. "Thank you... What did you want to talk about?": Bra could have hit herself for asking such a stupid question but before she could react, Goten began to laugh. "Whats so funny?" Yet another dumb question on Bras part, since she knew exactly what was so funny. She tired her best to look confused and offened but Gotens laughter was intoxicating. (Just like he was.) In a matter of second she was laughing too and the tension between them seemed to diminish.
They both giggled for a long while. All Bra could do was just look at him. His eyes looked so honestly happy. Bra couldn't think of a time when she had ever felt so comfortable with a man before.
Goten spoke between gasps of air. "I... think you... know what to... talk about."
She composed herself as well and smiled over to him brightly. "So what do we do now?" Everything seemed so natural now. At this time yesturday, Goten would not have given Bra anything more than a friendly hug but now, everything seemed to come to light over night. It just FELT right.
"What do you want to do?" Goten looked into her eyes looking for a responce."
"Well..." She stuttered at first but then she just swallowed her pride and decided tp tell him the whole truth. "I want... I want you Goten. It just seems right. When I am with you, even before yesturday, my heart feels whole. I just... I just..." She had begun to ramble and she knew it but the words just keep flowing. It just had to be said. "I just need you to complete me Goten. I love you." Bras hands immediatly went over her mouth. She had not meant to say quite that much.
Goten looked stunned for a second but then smiled. As Bra spoke, his heart had begun to pound. It was aching in a way that he had never felt before. Maybe she was right. Maybe they did complete each other. Then those words she said - I love you. When she said it, his heart seemed to leap with joy. Nothing and no one had ever affected him like this before.
"Do you mean it?" Goten stammpered.
"Ummm... yes." She was nearly speechless at her own confession, that she had yet to come to grips with herself.
Goten reached out, taking Bras hands in his own. Both of them seemed to tremble when they touched. Before he knew it, Goten began to speak without even thinking about his words first. "I love you too, Bra."
She moved over sitting next to him on the bench. they both seemed to move in pre-choreographed movement yet they were in control the entire time. "So what do we do now?" She smiled to him, still holding his hands.
"I think maybe I should talk to your father. I judt do not think he will let me off as easily as your brother did." He smiled slightly squeezing her hand lightly.
"Okay." Their eyes were so lit up with emotion.
Finally Goten reached over, pulling Bra in close. He had been waiting all day for the chance to kiss her once again, but this time was different. As their lips touched, his heart suddenly felt differernt. It felt as though a part of his heart which he never knew was missing was suddenly filled. It was like this must have been destined forever. This must be what bonding is. The kiss lasted a long while. It was soft, yet so passionate. They both knew that the feelings in their hearts was forever and that made it even better. Bonded for life couldn't get any better than this.
"Goten?" "Bra?!" The two young half-saiyans were caught again?! Could thier luck be any worse. They both turned slowly to see Gohan and Videl standing right in front of them. Both had their jaws dropped and eyebrows raised.
There was an ackward moment of silence before Gohan looked at his brother with a semi-stern, semi-amused look. "We felt something ackward about your ki, so we came to check on you but I realize till just a moment ago what had happened. Vegita is not going to be very happy with you."
"What do you mean?" Goten tired to act confused, but Gohan saw right through it.
"You just bonded with his daughter. NOw you know if I caould feel it, little brother, That her father definetly did as well." Videl and Bra bothed looked shoked. How could they tell?
Goten froze as well. Was it that obvious what had happened? Bra went white and gripped Gotens hand tightly.
"I think that I should find Vegita then, before he finds me first," Slowly he got up from the table looking at the others.
"Goten, we will take Bra to Kami house and she can explain everything to us there." Videl smiled trying to calm him a little,
Goten swallowed hard before leaning over and giving Bra a kiss on the cheek. "See you soon."
"Be careful Goten." Bra whispered as he flew off.
If her father already knew, Goten was going to have quite a fight ahead of himself. And what was Bra going to tell the others? Especially Chi-chi! Of all the z fighters and their families, Chi-chi was definetly the most feared and she just happened to be Gotens mother! All she could do was hope that luck stayed on her side. Besides what could they say or do? They were already bonded right? So they would dare do anything... would they?!
Next time on Bras' Emotional Journey-
Goten finds Vegita. Bra has to make the family annoucment. How will they react?! Watch and see
Thanks a million
Faye_Valentine00@hotmail.com
Sarah
Disclaimer: I do not own DB/DBZ/DBGT or anything else. I am only a fan!
Last time on Bras emotional journey-
Goten gets punched by Vegita but when Bulma finds out, Vegita has to sleep on the couch. Then Trunks over hears the fighting between his parents and he has a talk with Bra before giving his friends a waring about treating his sister right. Now the 2 young half saiyans are ready to talk out their potential relationship... what will happen.
Bras' Emotional Journey Part 3
By: Faye_Valentine00
Bra and Goten sat in the Satan City Cafe in silence, just looking at each other. The tension that came along with the silence could be cut with a knife. Finally Goten broke the silence. "You look nice this morning."
Bra felt her face heat up and she knew that her face was bright red. "Thank you... What did you want to talk about?": Bra could have hit herself for asking such a stupid question but before she could react, Goten began to laugh. "Whats so funny?" Yet another dumb question on Bras part, since she knew exactly what was so funny. She tired her best to look confused and offened but Gotens laughter was intoxicating. (Just like he was.) In a matter of second she was laughing too and the tension between them seemed to diminish.
They both giggled for a long while. All Bra could do was just look at him. His eyes looked so honestly happy. Bra couldn't think of a time when she had ever felt so comfortable with a man before.
Goten spoke between gasps of air. "I... think you... know what to... talk about."
She composed herself as well and smiled over to him brightly. "So what do we do now?" Everything seemed so natural now. At this time yesturday, Goten would not have given Bra anything more than a friendly hug but now, everything seemed to come to light over night. It just FELT right.
"What do you want to do?" Goten looked into her eyes looking for a responce."
"Well..." She stuttered at first but then she just swallowed her pride and decided tp tell him the whole truth. "I want... I want you Goten. It just seems right. When I am with you, even before yesturday, my heart feels whole. I just... I just..." She had begun to ramble and she knew it but the words just keep flowing. It just had to be said. "I just need you to complete me Goten. I love you." Bras hands immediatly went over her mouth. She had not meant to say quite that much.
Goten looked stunned for a second but then smiled. As Bra spoke, his heart had begun to pound. It was aching in a way that he had never felt before. Maybe she was right. Maybe they did complete each other. Then those words she said - I love you. When she said it, his heart seemed to leap with joy. Nothing and no one had ever affected him like this before.
"Do you mean it?" Goten stammpered.
"Ummm... yes." She was nearly speechless at her own confession, that she had yet to come to grips with herself.
Goten reached out, taking Bras hands in his own. Both of them seemed to tremble when they touched. Before he knew it, Goten began to speak without even thinking about his words first. "I love you too, Bra."
She moved over sitting next to him on the bench. they both seemed to move in pre-choreographed movement yet they were in control the entire time. "So what do we do now?" She smiled to him, still holding his hands.
"I think maybe I should talk to your father. I judt do not think he will let me off as easily as your brother did." He smiled slightly squeezing her hand lightly.
"Okay." Their eyes were so lit up with emotion.
Finally Goten reached over, pulling Bra in close. He had been waiting all day for the chance to kiss her once again, but this time was different. As their lips touched, his heart suddenly felt differernt. It felt as though a part of his heart which he never knew was missing was suddenly filled. It was like this must have been destined forever. This must be what bonding is. The kiss lasted a long while. It was soft, yet so passionate. They both knew that the feelings in their hearts was forever and that made it even better. Bonded for life couldn't get any better than this.
"Goten?" "Bra?!" The two young half-saiyans were caught again?! Could thier luck be any worse. They both turned slowly to see Gohan and Videl standing right in front of them. Both had their jaws dropped and eyebrows raised.
There was an ackward moment of silence before Gohan looked at his brother with a semi-stern, semi-amused look. "We felt something ackward about your ki, so we came to check on you but I realize till just a moment ago what had happened. Vegita is not going to be very happy with you."
"What do you mean?" Goten tired to act confused, but Gohan saw right through it.
"You just bonded with his daughter. NOw you know if I caould feel it, little brother, That her father definetly did as well." Videl and Bra bothed looked shoked. How could they tell?
Goten froze as well. Was it that obvious what had happened? Bra went white and gripped Gotens hand tightly.
"I think that I should find Vegita then, before he finds me first," Slowly he got up from the table looking at the others.
"Goten, we will take Bra to Kami house and she can explain everything to us there." Videl smiled trying to calm him a little,
Goten swallowed hard before leaning over and giving Bra a kiss on the cheek. "See you soon."
"Be careful Goten." Bra whispered as he flew off.
If her father already knew, Goten was going to have quite a fight ahead of himself. And what was Bra going to tell the others? Especially Chi-chi! Of all the z fighters and their families, Chi-chi was definetly the most feared and she just happened to be Gotens mother! All she could do was hope that luck stayed on her side. Besides what could they say or do? They were already bonded right? So they would dare do anything... would they?!
Next time on Bras' Emotional Journey-
Goten finds Vegita. Bra has to make the family annoucment. How will they react?! Watch and see