Okay, so this plot maybe a little 'not original' but give me a freaking break
i like fanfics like this and i just wanted to write my own on it, just a bit different.
and Allen fan's shouldn't really read this because frankly I don't like Allen =P So ya, I'll probably get like 20000 flames ^_-
Hitomi and Van decided to take a walk.
They walked down behind Fanelia's castle and over a small bridge.
They stopped in the middle and just stared at the water below them. Not saying anything.
Finally Hitomi broke the silence, "Van.." she said sheepishly. Van looked up from the water, over at her.
"I just want you to know, I missed you." she narrowed her eyes downwards at the water again. Van did his half smile.
"I also missed you, alot, Hitomi." Van said seriously. Hitomi looked at him and smiled.
[Fanelias enterance]
Allen and some of his soldier people stood in front of the gate. "I am Allen! One of King Van's friends."
The wolfman guard nodded and opened the gate. Allen and the others went inside.
[Van and Hitomi scene]
Hitomi slowly put her hand on top of Van's. "Van, please..talk to me.."
Van looked at her hand on his and his cheeks began to blush a little.
"Hitomi.." Van looked at her, in her green ocean eyes. Hitomi looked back lovingly. The gap between there lips was about to close when Allen interupted.
"Hitomi!" he said with glee. Hitomi turned around and blushed. Van looked confused at Hitomi then at Allen and frowned.
Allen ran up and hugged Hitomi. "Hitomi! Your back!" Allen said. Hitomi slightly hugged him back, "A-allen! Nice to see you.." Van looked at Hitomi and Allen and lowered his eyes down, clentching his fists.
Hitomi, while hugging Allen, had a vision right then and there. Her eyes widened and she pushed Allen away. "Stay away!" she said with an angery tone in her voice.
Allen blinked, confused. So did Van. Hitomi started to glow a red aura around her, as her pendant did. She disappeared. Van reached out a hand to where she was. "Hitomi!"
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi found herself in a dark chamber. She looked around her surroundings with confusment. "W-where am I?" she stuttered.
She then saw the vision she had when she was hugging Allen.
iA knife sliced right through her beloved Van, and Allen was holding the sword./i
she gasped and fell to her knees, "Allen..how could you.."
[Van and Allen scene]
Van stared at where Hitomi was. "Hitomi.."he whispered. "Where did she go?" he yelled at Allen.
"What did you do?" he protested. Allen shrugged, "I didn't do anything Van." He said with an angery tone.
Van's eyebrow twitched. "Get out of my way." he pushed allen aside and ran towards the doors of his castle.
Allen looked at Van's back, "Soon..Van.." he said with a serious tone. "Soon.."
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi stood, still trying to figure out where she was. "Hitomi Kanzaki" a low, dull voice said, echoeing through Hitomi's head.
"Who are you?" Hitomi demanded. A figure came into few. It was an old, crouched over lady. She gasped and stumbled backgrounds, falling.
"Hitomi Kanzaki, stay away from Van or he will meet his doom." she said. Hitomi looked at her, "I can't! I love Van! How can I stay away from him? He needs my help!"
she argued. "You even saw it with your own eyes, Hitomi. The vision of Van's death." Hitomi gasped and thought to herself, "How did she know that.."
"I know everything, Hitomi. I am here to help you. Now please, stay away from Van for the time being.." The old lady dissappeared., "No wait!" Hitomi called, but she also disapppeared.
She reappeared back on the bridge, by herself. "Van.." she said quietly with a sad face.
Just then Van came running towards her, "Hitomi! What happened?" Hitomi gritted her teeth and looked at Van with fear, "N-nothing.." she ran away from him.
Van stood there, confused, "Hitomi..?"
[Lotisha scene]
Lotisha saw Hitomi run away and she smirked, "The old lady acutally did it."
Lotshia walked up behind Van and hugged him. Van's eyes widened and turned around, pushing Lotisha away. "Aww Van-ee its just me, your fiance! ^_^" she perked happily.
Van looked at her annoyed, "I'm busy right now, Princess Lotisha." after that he ran to look for Hitomi.
Lotisha put her hands on her hips, "I'll get you to love me King Van, even if I have to make you." she grinned and walked back into the castle.
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi ran and ran, crying. "What am I going to do?" she said in her mind.
"I can't stay away from Van..but..if it means his life..then I must.." she sighed and stopped.
"Van.."
"Hitomi!" Van yelled out. "Where are you? Whats wrong?" Hitomi turned around to see Van looking for her.
She sighed with awe, staring at him. His red vest, his dark jet black hair, his redish brown eyes.
"Come on Hitomi!" Van yelled. Hitomi couldnt take it anymore. "Van! Oh Van!" she ran towards him and hugged him, "I'm sorry!"
Van looked at her puzzled then returned the embrace. "Hitomi..what happened?" Hitomi looked up at Van, "Van..I have to stay away from you.."
Van blinked and looked at her again with shock, "Why?" Hitomi closed her eyes. "You'll die if I stay with you.." Van looked at her in awe, "No Hitomi, I won't let you leave
me again." Hitomi looked into his eyes as Van looked back. "Van.." she whispered. Van continued to look at her, very seriously.
There lips got closer as they both closed there eyes, tilting there heads. The kissed for the first time. Van wrapped his arms around her waist as Hitomi wrapped her arms around his neck.
They kissed long and passionately. They finally broke the kiss and looked at each other, Van whom was blushing furiously and Hitomi as well. "Hitomi, dont leave me.." Van pleaded.
Hitomi looked at him and started crying, she sobbed in his shoulder, "Van I have to..or you'll be killed! I saw it in a vision and a women told me to stay away from you.." Van stared at her, "Hitomi..it doesn't matter..
as long as we can be together..I dont care, we'll figure it out together."
Hitomi looked sheepishly at Van, "Oh Van.."
Yea so its a bit corney and there characters are a bit off, :P oh well deal with it.
and yes i know allen fans are going to hate me for this saga but oh well..*runs from a mob* o___o()
i like fanfics like this and i just wanted to write my own on it, just a bit different.
and Allen fan's shouldn't really read this because frankly I don't like Allen =P So ya, I'll probably get like 20000 flames ^_-
Hitomi and Van decided to take a walk.
They walked down behind Fanelia's castle and over a small bridge.
They stopped in the middle and just stared at the water below them. Not saying anything.
Finally Hitomi broke the silence, "Van.." she said sheepishly. Van looked up from the water, over at her.
"I just want you to know, I missed you." she narrowed her eyes downwards at the water again. Van did his half smile.
"I also missed you, alot, Hitomi." Van said seriously. Hitomi looked at him and smiled.
[Fanelias enterance]
Allen and some of his soldier people stood in front of the gate. "I am Allen! One of King Van's friends."
The wolfman guard nodded and opened the gate. Allen and the others went inside.
[Van and Hitomi scene]
Hitomi slowly put her hand on top of Van's. "Van, please..talk to me.."
Van looked at her hand on his and his cheeks began to blush a little.
"Hitomi.." Van looked at her, in her green ocean eyes. Hitomi looked back lovingly. The gap between there lips was about to close when Allen interupted.
"Hitomi!" he said with glee. Hitomi turned around and blushed. Van looked confused at Hitomi then at Allen and frowned.
Allen ran up and hugged Hitomi. "Hitomi! Your back!" Allen said. Hitomi slightly hugged him back, "A-allen! Nice to see you.." Van looked at Hitomi and Allen and lowered his eyes down, clentching his fists.
Hitomi, while hugging Allen, had a vision right then and there. Her eyes widened and she pushed Allen away. "Stay away!" she said with an angery tone in her voice.
Allen blinked, confused. So did Van. Hitomi started to glow a red aura around her, as her pendant did. She disappeared. Van reached out a hand to where she was. "Hitomi!"
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi found herself in a dark chamber. She looked around her surroundings with confusment. "W-where am I?" she stuttered.
She then saw the vision she had when she was hugging Allen.
iA knife sliced right through her beloved Van, and Allen was holding the sword./i
she gasped and fell to her knees, "Allen..how could you.."
[Van and Allen scene]
Van stared at where Hitomi was. "Hitomi.."he whispered. "Where did she go?" he yelled at Allen.
"What did you do?" he protested. Allen shrugged, "I didn't do anything Van." He said with an angery tone.
Van's eyebrow twitched. "Get out of my way." he pushed allen aside and ran towards the doors of his castle.
Allen looked at Van's back, "Soon..Van.." he said with a serious tone. "Soon.."
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi stood, still trying to figure out where she was. "Hitomi Kanzaki" a low, dull voice said, echoeing through Hitomi's head.
"Who are you?" Hitomi demanded. A figure came into few. It was an old, crouched over lady. She gasped and stumbled backgrounds, falling.
"Hitomi Kanzaki, stay away from Van or he will meet his doom." she said. Hitomi looked at her, "I can't! I love Van! How can I stay away from him? He needs my help!"
she argued. "You even saw it with your own eyes, Hitomi. The vision of Van's death." Hitomi gasped and thought to herself, "How did she know that.."
"I know everything, Hitomi. I am here to help you. Now please, stay away from Van for the time being.." The old lady dissappeared., "No wait!" Hitomi called, but she also disapppeared.
She reappeared back on the bridge, by herself. "Van.." she said quietly with a sad face.
Just then Van came running towards her, "Hitomi! What happened?" Hitomi gritted her teeth and looked at Van with fear, "N-nothing.." she ran away from him.
Van stood there, confused, "Hitomi..?"
[Lotisha scene]
Lotisha saw Hitomi run away and she smirked, "The old lady acutally did it."
Lotshia walked up behind Van and hugged him. Van's eyes widened and turned around, pushing Lotisha away. "Aww Van-ee its just me, your fiance! ^_^" she perked happily.
Van looked at her annoyed, "I'm busy right now, Princess Lotisha." after that he ran to look for Hitomi.
Lotisha put her hands on her hips, "I'll get you to love me King Van, even if I have to make you." she grinned and walked back into the castle.
[hitomi scene]
Hitomi ran and ran, crying. "What am I going to do?" she said in her mind.
"I can't stay away from Van..but..if it means his life..then I must.." she sighed and stopped.
"Van.."
"Hitomi!" Van yelled out. "Where are you? Whats wrong?" Hitomi turned around to see Van looking for her.
She sighed with awe, staring at him. His red vest, his dark jet black hair, his redish brown eyes.
"Come on Hitomi!" Van yelled. Hitomi couldnt take it anymore. "Van! Oh Van!" she ran towards him and hugged him, "I'm sorry!"
Van looked at her puzzled then returned the embrace. "Hitomi..what happened?" Hitomi looked up at Van, "Van..I have to stay away from you.."
Van blinked and looked at her again with shock, "Why?" Hitomi closed her eyes. "You'll die if I stay with you.." Van looked at her in awe, "No Hitomi, I won't let you leave
me again." Hitomi looked into his eyes as Van looked back. "Van.." she whispered. Van continued to look at her, very seriously.
There lips got closer as they both closed there eyes, tilting there heads. The kissed for the first time. Van wrapped his arms around her waist as Hitomi wrapped her arms around his neck.
They kissed long and passionately. They finally broke the kiss and looked at each other, Van whom was blushing furiously and Hitomi as well. "Hitomi, dont leave me.." Van pleaded.
Hitomi looked at him and started crying, she sobbed in his shoulder, "Van I have to..or you'll be killed! I saw it in a vision and a women told me to stay away from you.." Van stared at her, "Hitomi..it doesn't matter..
as long as we can be together..I dont care, we'll figure it out together."
Hitomi looked sheepishly at Van, "Oh Van.."
Yea so its a bit corney and there characters are a bit off, :P oh well deal with it.
and yes i know allen fans are going to hate me for this saga but oh well..*runs from a mob* o___o()