Vegeta's Journey:4:Madness in Space
Hi again peeps! Thank you so much for all the support and nice
comments. I noticed there was this guy who kept criticizing DBZ
fanfics. Now don't get me wrong I love Evangelion too, but save
those comments for when I write one about Evangelion.
Disclaimer: The Usual drill I don't own DBZ or DBGT.
Last time Goten got everyone lost -_- … and Vegeta just got
his hidden power released! What will the team do now?
I write these chapters too fast don't I? I wake up to early.
The pain in Vegeta's body had gone to a soft ache as he groaned
every now and then. He had been laying there for ten minutes
though it seemed like an eternity. He was starting to wonder what
had happened to him when the door opened…
"Goten!!! 'slap' Why did you go and do that for now we are f*%king
lost!" "Ow!! Sorry Bra! 'gees' Can't a guy make a mistake?" "No!
Not when it comes to my dad you got that!" Bra looked very scary
at that moment. "Bra its ok I'm sure Goten did'nt mean it. Hehe"
She glared at Goku, "What do you know!? He walked over to the panel,
pressed buttons! WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE DID'NT MEAN IT!?"
Goku felt 12 inches tall. "Poor Grandpa…" Giru made a comment
wondering 'How are we gonna find our way?' "Hmm Giru's right, I
think we should ask inhabitants on that planet. If there are any…" Gohan
looked out the window. "That place looks pretty dry. Like a desert you
know." "Well in that case we should get on some 'You know you're
walking in a pretty hot desert clothes'."
They landed and have been walking for 5minutes…
"Pant' 'pant' Holy crap its hot out here." Goku commented. He was'nt
wearing the t-shirt part of his gi. Bra had on a bikini with a sombrero like
hat (you know a mexican hat thingy?). Pan was wearing a bathing suit and
put her bandana on her head. Trunks and Gohan had on no t-shirt either
and had on sunglasses too. Goten was in his well…underwear (I like
torturing Goten its fun fun fun! ^_^), while Giru was just floating along.
"LOOK CIVILIZATION YES!" Bra jumped up and down. "Let just hope
their not head hunters or something…" They all looked at each other.
"Right Trunks… 'gulp'." When they found there way in it looked like
one of those desert towns in Star Wars. "Uh hi everyone I'm Goku and
…uh we're looking for the leader of this town!" He said that loudly in
order to get attention. Everyone or everything…pointed at a little hut-like
place in the middle of town.
Back at the Palace Excaliber…
When the door opened it revealed Ali. She had on a devious smirk
which spelt trouble for Vegeta. "Well hi there Prince Vegeta. How do
you feel?" "Grr…go away! I don't need this!" "Wow frankly I'm surprised
you can talk. Do you need a little help getting up?" "What do you people
what with me goddamnit!" "Oh…they what your power,I personally want
you…" she purred at Vegeta with a slight smirk. "I said go away I already
have a mate!" Vegeta's body was still numb and he could barely move.
"Oh yes, forgot…my name is Ali, I'm the best female bounty hunter in the
universe! Then there is Shadow, he's a demon. Blade is a inhabitant of this
planet. I'm sure you've met him. And of course theres Xaiver, you
probably don't remember him do you?" "Wha?" "Figures, they must have
erased your memory when they took that power away." Vegeta had a
puzzled look on his face. She came closer picked him up by his shirt and
kissed him. Her cold lips showed that she was indeed evil. A shiver went
down his spine as her lips made contact with his for three seconds. "That
was nice…your so warm." All the sudden he took this opportunity to kick
her in the stomach and make a run for it. "ugh!….Why…YOU BASTARD!"
That kiss woke up his system a bit. He did'nt bother to look back. Vegeta
ran into a room and locked it he hid in a secluded corner and started to
send telepathic messages to Goku while he could. Inside the cell he tried
doing it but that was impossible. They made it telepathic proof. (* * means
they are talking telepathically) *Kakkarot please respond if you hear this*
Back in the desert town…
"Huh?" Every Saiya-jin said as the message came through to them. "Vegeta?"
"Dad…hurry talk to him!" "Ok ok…*Vegeta are you there?*" *Kakkarot…
thank goodness you heard me… let me give you my cordnits in the universe.
I don't have much time they're coming to get me.* *Who Vegeta?* *Never-
mind that Kakkarot* The people around Goku looked at him confusingly.
*My quarnets are 54683fg and 65893wd !* *I did'nt get that Vegeta* *No
but I did!* *TRUNKS!* They both spoke. *Ok that's good…Tell my
family I miss them and I…hey get away woman!…AGGHH..* Silence
was heard. *Vegeta? VEGETA!!!* "Vegeta got cut off…"Goku said
with a sad expression on his face. "Oh no…" "I'm sorry Bra…I felt
the same way when I thought I lost my Grandpa all those times. I'm sure he's
fine." Pan said trying to cheer her friend up. "Ok then lets go back to the ship
then! But first lets get some supplies, food, and WATER!" Gohan exclaimed.
"Yeah we have the quardnets!" (cordits…quardnits…someone please tell
me which!?) Soon they actually managed to get back on their ship…but before
that they almost got killed by a band of headhunters… very weird. And so
they're off…
Yay Ch.4 is fin! Ok in the next chapter the battle upon Excaliber is going
to begin! Let the fighting commence!!! Is Vegeta finally going to be free?
I'll let that be my lil secret! ^_^ That's in…
Vegeta's Journey:5:Battle on Excaliber!
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