Hey guys, I dunno if I'm going to finish this story, my writers block is becoming chronic I fear. * sigh * also, its not getting the best reviews. I don't really feel I have to explain myself but here it goes, I honestly haven't seen a story with this plot before, maybe I've been living under a rock for 16 years * shrugs* anyways I DID NOT steal this idea. Whoever said I did (and you know who you are) please send me the site and title and I'll decide for myself how close it is to my own story line. I'd like to note this, how many stories are there that goes like this?
1. Pan and Trunks go on a date
2. Gohan gets mad
3. They keep seeing each other behind his back
4. Gohan forgives them and welcomes Trunks to the family.
I love those stories don't get me wrong but no one accuses them of plagiarism. Sorry, I'm ranting against some coward who wouldn't leave their name. Anyways, thanx everyone who did give me ideas (or at least tried ^_^) By the way, I got a lot of questions about the shoe names. Bota is Spanish for boot, I happened to like the sound of the word and I thought it would be clever if I named all the crew after shoes… I guess it wasn't that funny * shrugs*oh well
Disclaimer: I don't own Dragon Ball, people with big expensive lawyers do, I also don't own Gilligan's Island. But, I do own my Spork of Justice! *grins *
On with the story!! (finally)
A Three Hour Tour
By: Kawaii Panchan
Trunks was flying as fast as he could, his destination the spa where his parents were. He sensed his mother's ki and ran through the lobby to the sauna where his mother was at the moment.
" MOM!!" Trunks yelled practically breaking down the door.
"Ack! Trunks! What in Dende's name are you doing here?" Bulma yelled jumping down from her perch on Vegeta's lap. Trunks quickly covered his eyes realizing that both of his parents were only in towels.
"Mom,Pangotabductedbyaliensandhe'sgonnamarryherifwedon'tsaveher!" Trunks said in one breath. (sorry that's hard to read)
" I told you kids to be careful! Oh Gohan's gonna kill you for losing his little girl." Bulma said as Trunks turned pale at the mention of Gohan's name. "Cmon Vegeta, you're going to have to fly me home, its faster than a plane."
"Of course I'm faster than one of your human toys, but I don't want to carry your ass all the way home." Vegeta said crossing his arms across his chest.
"Are you saying I'm fat?" Bulma said giving Vegeta a death glare.
"Well if you would have stayed away from those Doritos…"
"Dammit Vegeta! I brought two little hybrids into the world, you ungrateful little monkey! It's couch duty for you…"
"Mom! Dad!" Trunks said coming in between his arguing mother and father.
"Shut up brat this isn't your buissness." Vegeta said sneering.
" Dammit dad! Can't you cooperate for once? Pan is in trouble and every second counts!" Trunks yelled getting in his father's face. Vegeta complied, his face not able to mask his shock that his son had yelled at him. (Seeing as that's usually Bulma's job) Vegeta smirked as his mate and offspring left the room to gather Bulma's belongings.
"Boy." Vegeta addressed his son after he had changed into his spandex shorts and Day-Glo Hawaiian shirt. (Ha ha it's baaaaaaaaaack)
" Listen dad, I'm sorry I yelled at you, its just…"
"Finally you acted like a true saiyan prince."
"What?"
" After a saiyan prince has found his mate, he is very irritable towards his father and tries to overthrow him." Vegeta said matter of factly. Trunks gave Vegeta a look like he had been speaking Namekian.
"Mate? Overthrow? What are you talking about dad?" Trunks said with a blank look on his face.
" Ugg, that spawn of Kakoratto's stupidity is rubbing off on you boy. How could you have not been able to tell? You've had a bond with Kakorrato's grand-brat even before she could walk." Vegeta said with a smirk.
"What? How did you know I love Pan?" (AWWW he loves her! Isn't dat cuuute??)
" Its impossible not to know, only Kakorrato and his moronic brats haven't figured it out."
" What about the overthrowing you?"
" It's the natural sucession of saiyan kings, the Prince kills the King." Vegeta said curtly and Trunks lost all color to his face. Vegeta laughed, " But you are too human to ever do that, until you mate Kakoratto's grand-brat, you are going to be a little bastard towards me." Trunks' ki rose at this statement.
" Who are you calling a bastard?" He yelled. Vegeta just laughed and said,
" I rest my case brat." He left the room to go find Bulma.
Pan gazed outside her window, watching the blue-green orb of Earth, almost expecting Trunks, her dad, uncle, and grandpa to magically appear and save her from this damned place.
"I hate being the baka damsel in distress!" Pan yelled throwing a vase that was sitting on her dresser against the far wall, making the vase smash into a million pieces and the wall to aquire a lovely large dent. Etnies came running into the room breathless,
" What's wrong m'lady?"
" What's wrong? What's wrong! I've been abducted by some psycho who wants to marry me! I hate him with a fiery passion and I hope someone poisens his baka food!" Pan screamed in Etnies face making the girl pale. (Wow this is a loud chapter no?)
" You need to calm down lady, if you attract the guards they'll tranqilize you."
" And that would finish off my peachy day just wonderfully wouldn't it?" Pan yelled knocking over a sculture off of her dresser. The guards finally clueing in after the second crash, came rushing into the room.
" Miss Etnies, Princess, is everything ok?" The guard asked.
" What does it look like numbskull? There's broken glass all over the floor, your princess has gone hysterical, yeah everything is just fine!" Etnies said sarcastically.
" well good, I was afraid something was wrong here." The guard said as he left the young nursemaid and the princess. Etnies smacked her forehead at his stupidity.
" Princess, you must calm down." Etnies pleaded with Pan. Pan choked back a sob and said to Etnies,
" Listen girl, I'm tired, depressed, I miss my mother and father, I'm never going to see my boy friend again, and you are trying to tell me to calm down." Pan said letting out nervous laughter. Her laughter was subdued at the memory of her family and sobs racked through her body once again as she sat on the edge of her bed.
" Listen your cry-babyness, I do have the right to tell you to calm down, how do you think I got on this blasted ship in the first place?"
" You were born on it?" Pan guessed, attempting to wipe the tears from her eyes.
" Wrong, I was sold to it. Don't you think I miss my family? I do, I miss them all, except for my father."
" Why don't you miss your father?" Pan asked, not being able to imagine a life of hating her own father.
" It was because of him that I was sold. He was one of the Bota king's accountants, but he was also a heavy gambler. He went into debt and used some of the Treasury's money to pay people back. The king found out and killed my father."
" Wait, what does his crime have to do with you?" Pan said kind of confused.
" Part of his punishment was his family being sold into slavery." Etnies said, tears running down her face. "I'm sorry your majesty, I shouldn't be bothering you with my petty problems."
"Etnies, where's your mother?" Pan asked
" Earth m'lady, she escaped there with my baby sister." Etnies replied, no longer able to hold back her tears. Pan opened her arms to the young girl and she ran into Pan's embrace. Pan hushed the girl, patting the back of her head reassuringly.
" Don't worry Etnies, we're going to both get back to Earth, I promise you that." Etnies held back her tears and kissed Pan on the cheek,
" Thank you Miss Pan, I promise I'll find a way to get off the ship." She said.
" Etnies, you are the bravest twelve year old I know, and I wish you luck, both of our freedom's depends on it."
BAH! Sorry for the filler chapter, I'll try to get more out, I NEED SUGGESTIONS!!!!!!!
1. Pan and Trunks go on a date
2. Gohan gets mad
3. They keep seeing each other behind his back
4. Gohan forgives them and welcomes Trunks to the family.
I love those stories don't get me wrong but no one accuses them of plagiarism. Sorry, I'm ranting against some coward who wouldn't leave their name. Anyways, thanx everyone who did give me ideas (or at least tried ^_^) By the way, I got a lot of questions about the shoe names. Bota is Spanish for boot, I happened to like the sound of the word and I thought it would be clever if I named all the crew after shoes… I guess it wasn't that funny * shrugs*oh well
Disclaimer: I don't own Dragon Ball, people with big expensive lawyers do, I also don't own Gilligan's Island. But, I do own my Spork of Justice! *grins *
On with the story!! (finally)
A Three Hour Tour
By: Kawaii Panchan
Trunks was flying as fast as he could, his destination the spa where his parents were. He sensed his mother's ki and ran through the lobby to the sauna where his mother was at the moment.
" MOM!!" Trunks yelled practically breaking down the door.
"Ack! Trunks! What in Dende's name are you doing here?" Bulma yelled jumping down from her perch on Vegeta's lap. Trunks quickly covered his eyes realizing that both of his parents were only in towels.
"Mom,Pangotabductedbyaliensandhe'sgonnamarryherifwedon'tsaveher!" Trunks said in one breath. (sorry that's hard to read)
" I told you kids to be careful! Oh Gohan's gonna kill you for losing his little girl." Bulma said as Trunks turned pale at the mention of Gohan's name. "Cmon Vegeta, you're going to have to fly me home, its faster than a plane."
"Of course I'm faster than one of your human toys, but I don't want to carry your ass all the way home." Vegeta said crossing his arms across his chest.
"Are you saying I'm fat?" Bulma said giving Vegeta a death glare.
"Well if you would have stayed away from those Doritos…"
"Dammit Vegeta! I brought two little hybrids into the world, you ungrateful little monkey! It's couch duty for you…"
"Mom! Dad!" Trunks said coming in between his arguing mother and father.
"Shut up brat this isn't your buissness." Vegeta said sneering.
" Dammit dad! Can't you cooperate for once? Pan is in trouble and every second counts!" Trunks yelled getting in his father's face. Vegeta complied, his face not able to mask his shock that his son had yelled at him. (Seeing as that's usually Bulma's job) Vegeta smirked as his mate and offspring left the room to gather Bulma's belongings.
"Boy." Vegeta addressed his son after he had changed into his spandex shorts and Day-Glo Hawaiian shirt. (Ha ha it's baaaaaaaaaack)
" Listen dad, I'm sorry I yelled at you, its just…"
"Finally you acted like a true saiyan prince."
"What?"
" After a saiyan prince has found his mate, he is very irritable towards his father and tries to overthrow him." Vegeta said matter of factly. Trunks gave Vegeta a look like he had been speaking Namekian.
"Mate? Overthrow? What are you talking about dad?" Trunks said with a blank look on his face.
" Ugg, that spawn of Kakoratto's stupidity is rubbing off on you boy. How could you have not been able to tell? You've had a bond with Kakorrato's grand-brat even before she could walk." Vegeta said with a smirk.
"What? How did you know I love Pan?" (AWWW he loves her! Isn't dat cuuute??)
" Its impossible not to know, only Kakorrato and his moronic brats haven't figured it out."
" What about the overthrowing you?"
" It's the natural sucession of saiyan kings, the Prince kills the King." Vegeta said curtly and Trunks lost all color to his face. Vegeta laughed, " But you are too human to ever do that, until you mate Kakoratto's grand-brat, you are going to be a little bastard towards me." Trunks' ki rose at this statement.
" Who are you calling a bastard?" He yelled. Vegeta just laughed and said,
" I rest my case brat." He left the room to go find Bulma.
Pan gazed outside her window, watching the blue-green orb of Earth, almost expecting Trunks, her dad, uncle, and grandpa to magically appear and save her from this damned place.
"I hate being the baka damsel in distress!" Pan yelled throwing a vase that was sitting on her dresser against the far wall, making the vase smash into a million pieces and the wall to aquire a lovely large dent. Etnies came running into the room breathless,
" What's wrong m'lady?"
" What's wrong? What's wrong! I've been abducted by some psycho who wants to marry me! I hate him with a fiery passion and I hope someone poisens his baka food!" Pan screamed in Etnies face making the girl pale. (Wow this is a loud chapter no?)
" You need to calm down lady, if you attract the guards they'll tranqilize you."
" And that would finish off my peachy day just wonderfully wouldn't it?" Pan yelled knocking over a sculture off of her dresser. The guards finally clueing in after the second crash, came rushing into the room.
" Miss Etnies, Princess, is everything ok?" The guard asked.
" What does it look like numbskull? There's broken glass all over the floor, your princess has gone hysterical, yeah everything is just fine!" Etnies said sarcastically.
" well good, I was afraid something was wrong here." The guard said as he left the young nursemaid and the princess. Etnies smacked her forehead at his stupidity.
" Princess, you must calm down." Etnies pleaded with Pan. Pan choked back a sob and said to Etnies,
" Listen girl, I'm tired, depressed, I miss my mother and father, I'm never going to see my boy friend again, and you are trying to tell me to calm down." Pan said letting out nervous laughter. Her laughter was subdued at the memory of her family and sobs racked through her body once again as she sat on the edge of her bed.
" Listen your cry-babyness, I do have the right to tell you to calm down, how do you think I got on this blasted ship in the first place?"
" You were born on it?" Pan guessed, attempting to wipe the tears from her eyes.
" Wrong, I was sold to it. Don't you think I miss my family? I do, I miss them all, except for my father."
" Why don't you miss your father?" Pan asked, not being able to imagine a life of hating her own father.
" It was because of him that I was sold. He was one of the Bota king's accountants, but he was also a heavy gambler. He went into debt and used some of the Treasury's money to pay people back. The king found out and killed my father."
" Wait, what does his crime have to do with you?" Pan said kind of confused.
" Part of his punishment was his family being sold into slavery." Etnies said, tears running down her face. "I'm sorry your majesty, I shouldn't be bothering you with my petty problems."
"Etnies, where's your mother?" Pan asked
" Earth m'lady, she escaped there with my baby sister." Etnies replied, no longer able to hold back her tears. Pan opened her arms to the young girl and she ran into Pan's embrace. Pan hushed the girl, patting the back of her head reassuringly.
" Don't worry Etnies, we're going to both get back to Earth, I promise you that." Etnies held back her tears and kissed Pan on the cheek,
" Thank you Miss Pan, I promise I'll find a way to get off the ship." She said.
" Etnies, you are the bravest twelve year old I know, and I wish you luck, both of our freedom's depends on it."
BAH! Sorry for the filler chapter, I'll try to get more out, I NEED SUGGESTIONS!!!!!!!