*Folds his hands in his lap and glares at the screen.* I will not allow this! One of my fics hasn't gotten any reviews at all, but that is great compared to this. I've gotten more bad reviews for this than for any of my oth... Oh... Wait... I haven't gotten any bad reviews for my other fics, have I? Well, whatever. I shall not allow this fic to die with such a bad record. I shall attempt to save it. (Crap... This is going to be the worst chapter yet, isn't it?) Anyways, I'll shut up and write now... Hehehe....
Duo stared off into the sunset. "All the pieces of the puzzle will begin to fall into place shortly. It all begins here..." He turned around and faced the buildings of the Cinq kingdom. "It isn't a good idea to mess with a guy in love... That's something that bastard will learn, very shortly." Duo walked towards one of the buildings on the edge of the beach. He pushed open the door and crossed the threshold. "Doctor Zinfaield... How is your end of it all going?" A fairly tall man stepped up behind Duo, and set a hand down on Duos shoulder. "Hello, Duo. I see you are quite talented at knocking before entering someone elses home. My end of the deal is coming along perfectly, by the way." Duo quickly looked over the man before him. The doctor was a fairly tall man, in his late twenties, with dark black hair. He wore glasses, A lab coat and gloves the darkest shade of black imaginable, and boots that matched the lab coat perfectly. "And I see you would blend in with a pitch black alley if you spray painted your face black. Good to know that you've been successful, by the way." Doctor Zinfaield smirked.
"Huh? Where am I?" Wufei awoke and looked around. "I'm... I'm in the cockpit of the Shenlong. Now I remember." Wufei got Shenlong onto its feet and he looked at his surroundings. "Well, I'm in a nice dense forest... How did I get here, though? I can't remember anything past getting into this thing..." Wufei shook his head. "Well, it doesn't matter. Right now I should worry about getting the hell out of here." Wufei flew up over the trees. An island. Well, I hope this 'Gundam' doesn't need fuel or anything..." Wufei flew away from the island, looking for some populated land.
Heero drove along the road. And he drove. And he drove. And he... Drove... Um... A car pulled alongside Heero, and the driver pointed a gun at Heero. "Pull over now, or I'll put a bullet through your brain!" Heero grinned. Perfect timing. I was getting bored. Heero opened the door next to him and jumped from the ambulence into the car driven by the man holding the gun through the window. Heero wrestled the gun from the man and put it against the mans temple. "Well, that was fun. What do you think I should do now? Normally I'd kill you, but I think I'll let you live. But if you don't want me to change my mind, I suggest you go much faster." The man pressed his foot against the gas pedal even harder, and the car sped up.
Quatre and Trowa flew in their gundams towards the forest nearby the city they had spotted a while ago. "We'll land in the forest and go into the city. Maybe we can find out where we are, and... Maybe do something else, too..." Trowa suggested. "What do you mean by 'something else,' Trowa?" Trowa grinned, and then they approached the forest and landed. Once outside of their gundams, Trowa answered the question. "Well, maybe we could go on a date or something. After all, we don't really know what we're supposed to do now, right? So we've got to do something, right?" Then Trowa led Quatre from the forest to the city, where they asked someone where they were and where the best restaurant nearby was. They found out the information they wanted, and then went to the restaurant. "I'm buying." Trowa said, as soon as they walked into the restaurant. "I'm rich." Quatre replied. "I'm still buying." The two sat at a table and they examined the menus that were placed before them. Quare opened his mouth to speak, but before he was able to, there was a loud noise, and a circle of blood appeared on Quatres shirt, growing increasingly larger.
Duo stood from the table after Doctor Valn Zinfaield had explained what he had accomplished to him. "Well, it looks like everything is going extremely well. You truly deserve your reputation. Both for being a genius, and for being a black-hearted, evil man." Valn smiled. "Yes, I've worked hard for my reputation. Well, not really. But I have indeed earned it." Dr. Zinfaield pressed several keys on the keyboard in front of him, grinning at the monitor. He stood and walked over to a rack of test tubes, grabbing one filled with a blue liquid. "Here. Take this, Duo. It's a rather interesting concoction. It's an explosive acid. Very deadly. If it doesn't completely melt the target instantly, the explosion will get rid of it. The explosion isn't very large, however. But it is large enough to make a nice little doorway to a bank vault when you're low on funds." Duo took the test tube. "If it's an acid, shouldn't it melt through this test tube?" Doctor Zinfaield shook his head. "No, that test tube is glass, which is the only thing that cannot be melted by that acid." Duo thanked the doctor and walked towards the door. "Just remember, do not ever open the lid. That's good a one use only tube. If you used a small amount of it and not the rest, there would be room in the tube, so it would explode the next time it moved. That's why I filled it up to the very top, leaving no room at all. It explodes very easily."
Heero opened the door on the passengers side of the car and exited, keeping the gun. "Now get the hell out of here. Fast." The man driving did as he said, and Heero walked off into the city. "So, let's see... I should probably eat something first, I'm getting hungry..." Heero found a restaurant and walked inside. He sat at atable and looked over the menu. "Well, I guess I'll have the..." A shot rang out, and Heero glanced in the direction of the noise. "What the?!?" He saw that someone had shot Quatre. "Quatre?!? That bastards going down!" Heero jumped up from his chair and quickly shot at the man running for the door. Heero missed, however, and so he had to chase after the retreating man. Heero exited the restaurant, but saw no sign of the man. "Where'd he go?" Then the man jumped on top of Heero from above him and tried to shoot him, but Heero knocked the gun away before he could do so, and aimed his own gun at the man. "I was feeling generous earlier, but now I don't feel like being nice. Goodbye." Heero was about to squeeze the trigger when Quatre came out the door. "Heero... Don't shoot..." Trowa ran out the door and grabbed Quatre just before he collapsed, and soon afterwards an ambulence and a police car arrived.
To be continued...
Hehehe... Hmmm... I wonder if that was quite good enough to save this fic? Hopefully it was. It was a rather short chapter, but I'm tired, and so I figured I should end it about now. At 5 AM... Well, let's see if I get criticised for this chapter. If not, I'll assume It was good, and keep writing. If nobody likes it, I'll... Well, I'll continue trying to save this fic until I succeed. Though I hope I did well enough this time. Don't forget to review it. And if you wouldn't mind, could you read and review some of my other fics as well? Some of the most notable ones being 'Standing Outside The Fire' and 'Christmas, Christmas.' The first one's quite serious, and I've gotten four good reviews for it, the second humorous, and I've gotten 7 for it. My other fics haven't gotten quite as many good reviews. Wait... One got five good reviews... Which was that? Er... I thought one got five good reviews... Can't remember though. All the reviews I've gotten for 'Standing Outside The Fire,' 'Christmas, Christmas,' 'Doctor Valn Zinfaield,' 'Gundam Babysitters,' were good. I think that's all of the ones I've written. Except 'When Cartoons Collide,' which hasn't gotten any reviews at all, and this one, which has gotten some good reviews, and some bad. I've talked enough for now, so I should probably shut up and end this chapter already. So ta-ta, ttfn, byebye, goodbye, bye, hasta la vista, so long, and I don't know how to spell all those other ones... Except ciao. I can spell that. The basic point, however, is goodbye for now, folks. ('The candle burned out long before the legend ever did...' Oops, sorry. Elton Johns 'Candle in the Wind.' Bye!)
Duo stared off into the sunset. "All the pieces of the puzzle will begin to fall into place shortly. It all begins here..." He turned around and faced the buildings of the Cinq kingdom. "It isn't a good idea to mess with a guy in love... That's something that bastard will learn, very shortly." Duo walked towards one of the buildings on the edge of the beach. He pushed open the door and crossed the threshold. "Doctor Zinfaield... How is your end of it all going?" A fairly tall man stepped up behind Duo, and set a hand down on Duos shoulder. "Hello, Duo. I see you are quite talented at knocking before entering someone elses home. My end of the deal is coming along perfectly, by the way." Duo quickly looked over the man before him. The doctor was a fairly tall man, in his late twenties, with dark black hair. He wore glasses, A lab coat and gloves the darkest shade of black imaginable, and boots that matched the lab coat perfectly. "And I see you would blend in with a pitch black alley if you spray painted your face black. Good to know that you've been successful, by the way." Doctor Zinfaield smirked.
"Huh? Where am I?" Wufei awoke and looked around. "I'm... I'm in the cockpit of the Shenlong. Now I remember." Wufei got Shenlong onto its feet and he looked at his surroundings. "Well, I'm in a nice dense forest... How did I get here, though? I can't remember anything past getting into this thing..." Wufei shook his head. "Well, it doesn't matter. Right now I should worry about getting the hell out of here." Wufei flew up over the trees. An island. Well, I hope this 'Gundam' doesn't need fuel or anything..." Wufei flew away from the island, looking for some populated land.
Heero drove along the road. And he drove. And he drove. And he... Drove... Um... A car pulled alongside Heero, and the driver pointed a gun at Heero. "Pull over now, or I'll put a bullet through your brain!" Heero grinned. Perfect timing. I was getting bored. Heero opened the door next to him and jumped from the ambulence into the car driven by the man holding the gun through the window. Heero wrestled the gun from the man and put it against the mans temple. "Well, that was fun. What do you think I should do now? Normally I'd kill you, but I think I'll let you live. But if you don't want me to change my mind, I suggest you go much faster." The man pressed his foot against the gas pedal even harder, and the car sped up.
Quatre and Trowa flew in their gundams towards the forest nearby the city they had spotted a while ago. "We'll land in the forest and go into the city. Maybe we can find out where we are, and... Maybe do something else, too..." Trowa suggested. "What do you mean by 'something else,' Trowa?" Trowa grinned, and then they approached the forest and landed. Once outside of their gundams, Trowa answered the question. "Well, maybe we could go on a date or something. After all, we don't really know what we're supposed to do now, right? So we've got to do something, right?" Then Trowa led Quatre from the forest to the city, where they asked someone where they were and where the best restaurant nearby was. They found out the information they wanted, and then went to the restaurant. "I'm buying." Trowa said, as soon as they walked into the restaurant. "I'm rich." Quatre replied. "I'm still buying." The two sat at a table and they examined the menus that were placed before them. Quare opened his mouth to speak, but before he was able to, there was a loud noise, and a circle of blood appeared on Quatres shirt, growing increasingly larger.
Duo stood from the table after Doctor Valn Zinfaield had explained what he had accomplished to him. "Well, it looks like everything is going extremely well. You truly deserve your reputation. Both for being a genius, and for being a black-hearted, evil man." Valn smiled. "Yes, I've worked hard for my reputation. Well, not really. But I have indeed earned it." Dr. Zinfaield pressed several keys on the keyboard in front of him, grinning at the monitor. He stood and walked over to a rack of test tubes, grabbing one filled with a blue liquid. "Here. Take this, Duo. It's a rather interesting concoction. It's an explosive acid. Very deadly. If it doesn't completely melt the target instantly, the explosion will get rid of it. The explosion isn't very large, however. But it is large enough to make a nice little doorway to a bank vault when you're low on funds." Duo took the test tube. "If it's an acid, shouldn't it melt through this test tube?" Doctor Zinfaield shook his head. "No, that test tube is glass, which is the only thing that cannot be melted by that acid." Duo thanked the doctor and walked towards the door. "Just remember, do not ever open the lid. That's good a one use only tube. If you used a small amount of it and not the rest, there would be room in the tube, so it would explode the next time it moved. That's why I filled it up to the very top, leaving no room at all. It explodes very easily."
Heero opened the door on the passengers side of the car and exited, keeping the gun. "Now get the hell out of here. Fast." The man driving did as he said, and Heero walked off into the city. "So, let's see... I should probably eat something first, I'm getting hungry..." Heero found a restaurant and walked inside. He sat at atable and looked over the menu. "Well, I guess I'll have the..." A shot rang out, and Heero glanced in the direction of the noise. "What the?!?" He saw that someone had shot Quatre. "Quatre?!? That bastards going down!" Heero jumped up from his chair and quickly shot at the man running for the door. Heero missed, however, and so he had to chase after the retreating man. Heero exited the restaurant, but saw no sign of the man. "Where'd he go?" Then the man jumped on top of Heero from above him and tried to shoot him, but Heero knocked the gun away before he could do so, and aimed his own gun at the man. "I was feeling generous earlier, but now I don't feel like being nice. Goodbye." Heero was about to squeeze the trigger when Quatre came out the door. "Heero... Don't shoot..." Trowa ran out the door and grabbed Quatre just before he collapsed, and soon afterwards an ambulence and a police car arrived.
To be continued...
Hehehe... Hmmm... I wonder if that was quite good enough to save this fic? Hopefully it was. It was a rather short chapter, but I'm tired, and so I figured I should end it about now. At 5 AM... Well, let's see if I get criticised for this chapter. If not, I'll assume It was good, and keep writing. If nobody likes it, I'll... Well, I'll continue trying to save this fic until I succeed. Though I hope I did well enough this time. Don't forget to review it. And if you wouldn't mind, could you read and review some of my other fics as well? Some of the most notable ones being 'Standing Outside The Fire' and 'Christmas, Christmas.' The first one's quite serious, and I've gotten four good reviews for it, the second humorous, and I've gotten 7 for it. My other fics haven't gotten quite as many good reviews. Wait... One got five good reviews... Which was that? Er... I thought one got five good reviews... Can't remember though. All the reviews I've gotten for 'Standing Outside The Fire,' 'Christmas, Christmas,' 'Doctor Valn Zinfaield,' 'Gundam Babysitters,' were good. I think that's all of the ones I've written. Except 'When Cartoons Collide,' which hasn't gotten any reviews at all, and this one, which has gotten some good reviews, and some bad. I've talked enough for now, so I should probably shut up and end this chapter already. So ta-ta, ttfn, byebye, goodbye, bye, hasta la vista, so long, and I don't know how to spell all those other ones... Except ciao. I can spell that. The basic point, however, is goodbye for now, folks. ('The candle burned out long before the legend ever did...' Oops, sorry. Elton Johns 'Candle in the Wind.' Bye!)