A Dream In The Night

Dear Sirius ,

I really worried I've been having this recurring dream and it won't go away . It has Cedric , Frank Bryce , Bortha Jorkins , Mr. and Mrs. Longbottom , my mum and dad , Snape , and Quirrell . It's a really freaky dream , I mean more than weird . House elf weird , more than that weird Snape being nice weird ! They are all giving advice and my mum says in the dream " prove you are a
Potter , and not a Riddle . " What does this mean , was my mum Riddle's daughter ? Sirius I'm really worried I have no one else to confide in . Ron and Hermione would start having fits and my scar is starting to hurt when I wake . And at the end of every dream Quirrell is there laughing saying that I won't live long .Is this a death omen , if so what should I do ?

Love ,

Extremely confused Harry Potter , who eagerly awaits your answer

Now that was done , I was going to go downstairs and have myself a early breakfast . Maybe for once I could eat to my hearts content without anyone stealing my food . I dug into the fridge , there was nothing really good so I grabbed out a apple . And started to eat it , I went back up to my room and gave Hedwig
the core . She loves them oddly enough , I found this out at the Weasley's . I sat there wondering what was the dream truly about , I had learned in the past five years all dreams have a reason . At least that is common belief , I threw on my cloths which were five sizes too big . After Hedwig finished off her apple core , I
attached my letter to Sirius on her leg and sent her off . I relaxed a bit before Aunt Petunia came rapping on my door . She had a very annoying habit of rapping on my door , so loud that I nearly jumped out of my skins . I made up my bed , and opened up my potions book . It was actually quite interesting when Snape wasn't droning on and on and on about his beautiful potions . Sometimes I wish I could stab him with my quill , then I realize
he would probably get me first . Then came the rapping " get up now , Harry I want everything perfect for my sweetpeas birthday ! " I sighed and put my book back in the trunk , I got up and went over to the wall and marked off another day till school . I went downstairs the entire floor was covered with rather large presents . I sat down at my seat and started to wolf down my meal
. I then felt a sharp pain in my shins , Dudley had kicked me hard . Uncle Vernon came downstairs then whistling , he looked to happy . Something was up that I probably wouldn't like , and I was right . " Aunt Marge is coming for a vist , an all summer vist she is also bringing someone special . She has a daughter apparently , her name is Demetria . " I stared at Uncle Vernon ,
he couldn't be serious that old cow has a kid . That would be very surprising , a female Dudley how charming . " She arrives today , so your going to have to wait to open your presents up . She wants to see your happy face , plus I want you to show your cousin what a little gentlemen you are . And Harry none of your monkey business , or you are seriously going to be six feet under . Shes coming this afternoon , so you two should go fix yourselves up . And Harry please do something with your hair , I don't care if it grows a foot long fix it so it isn't sticking up everywhere . " After breakfast I praticully ran up the stairs ,my hair did end up a foot long . It was really weird , I really
really wanted it short but yet it was long . I went into Aunt Petunia's room and took one of her ponytail holders and put it up . At least it wasn't sticking up and I did in fact looked like a bad guy . I sorta liked the effect , in a strange weird way . Half past one , Uncle Vernon left to go pick them up at the station . When he came back , the house was spotless and it was half past three . It was now raining cats and dogs , so I had to go out there and bring in the luggage . Without a raincoat , I
ran outdoors . I grabbed the luggage and opened the door for Aunt Marge and Demetria . When we got back in the house , I noticed that Demetria was incredibly thin for her blood . She started to take off her raincoat but she was tangled up in it . I rushed forward and helped her untangle herself , finally she managed to get off . She hung it up on the post , I still couldn't see her face or any of her features . Because she had a scarf on , she started to unwind her head from it . A great waterfall of ebony fell down her back all the way down to her knees . Her face uttermost beautiful , her lips crimson . Her eyes bluer than the darkest blue . She was the most beautiful girl I ever saw . She smiled at me and said " Thanks . " She had a rather thick French
accent , but her voice was like silver but it was soft and shy . " I'm Harry ," " I'm Demetria . "

Well how was it , was it stupid or not ? I need at least 14 reviews saying that you think the ideas good and not sucks . Believe me , I think it sucks . If you're going to flame me please tell me what I did wrong so I can change it . I need your help , so I can write the way people like it to be wrote . I really wish I could write like Rowling can , but I cannot . Well
I need 14 reviews to continue , because I'm really nervous that this series sucks . I hate it when I disappoint people ( I do that quite often , at least it seems like that . ) Well Irish Archer if you read this I'm sorry I can't take you up on your offer to help me , I'm not allowed to e-mail anyone I don't really know . If I get caught I might get possibly banned from
the computer , and that would be bad really bad . But if you became an author , and submitted a story we could talk that way . And thank you for reviewing my story . Well I need to say thank you for all the people who were nice and said it wasn't completely stupid . I'm sorta insecure right now and everything , you know paranoid . Thanks again , because it made me feel so much better that I didn't completely emberess myself on the
internet .