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theladyoflorraine
Laylia's Veiwpoints
Part Four
Laylia watched his face change. At first he didn't belive her. Then he did. Then something lit on his face, like he had figured something out. When she stoped talking, stoped telling the story that hurt so much, he began to speak.
"Laylia do you know why 'the man' is after you?" he asked.
"No. If I did I would have told you." she answered.
"Have you ever heard of an Entratress?"
"No" now she was really confused.
"An Enchantress is a women who can enchant those around her to do her will. She dosen't even have to know she's doing it. It just happens. There have been four known in the entire world." He said.
"Thom, I just poured my heart into your lap, and now your teaching me magic?" She knew where this conversation was heading, and she didn't like it.
"Laylia, I think your an Enchantress, and i know just the way to prove it."
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"Laylia. I need you to tell me about your mother." Said the young Sorrcer before her.
"She died when I was eight. She and I were very close, perhaps more so then anyone else."
"Did you want to be close to her?"
"Of course! She was my idel, my mother. She was beautiful, in a nice way. Not like me."
"What do you mean when you say, 'not like me'" he asked.
"Everyone says I'm beautiful. I'm really not. I'm perfect. My mother had too long a nose, but she was still beautiful. I'm too much, that's why he want's me, the man. I just know it."
"The man wants you for your power as an Enchantress. At least, if you are one. Do you know any sorrecers that are close, really close to you? Close enough to study you with magic?"
"Anyone at the school. I do eat dinner in the dinning hall."
"This will take some thinking."
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The man watched her walk into the room. Quickly he sent his magic into her. cloaking her. She gave a frightened scream, weather people heard it outside in the real world, he would never know, all he knew was he had her. And this time he wasen't letting go.
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What do you think?
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theladyoflorraine
Laylia's Veiwpoints
Part Four
Laylia watched his face change. At first he didn't belive her. Then he did. Then something lit on his face, like he had figured something out. When she stoped talking, stoped telling the story that hurt so much, he began to speak.
"Laylia do you know why 'the man' is after you?" he asked.
"No. If I did I would have told you." she answered.
"Have you ever heard of an Entratress?"
"No" now she was really confused.
"An Enchantress is a women who can enchant those around her to do her will. She dosen't even have to know she's doing it. It just happens. There have been four known in the entire world." He said.
"Thom, I just poured my heart into your lap, and now your teaching me magic?" She knew where this conversation was heading, and she didn't like it.
"Laylia, I think your an Enchantress, and i know just the way to prove it."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
"Laylia. I need you to tell me about your mother." Said the young Sorrcer before her.
"She died when I was eight. She and I were very close, perhaps more so then anyone else."
"Did you want to be close to her?"
"Of course! She was my idel, my mother. She was beautiful, in a nice way. Not like me."
"What do you mean when you say, 'not like me'" he asked.
"Everyone says I'm beautiful. I'm really not. I'm perfect. My mother had too long a nose, but she was still beautiful. I'm too much, that's why he want's me, the man. I just know it."
"The man wants you for your power as an Enchantress. At least, if you are one. Do you know any sorrecers that are close, really close to you? Close enough to study you with magic?"
"Anyone at the school. I do eat dinner in the dinning hall."
"This will take some thinking."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
The man watched her walk into the room. Quickly he sent his magic into her. cloaking her. She gave a frightened scream, weather people heard it outside in the real world, he would never know, all he knew was he had her. And this time he wasen't letting go.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
What do you think?
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