Okay. I've written myself into yet another corner. Yes, in a pretty much circular room. What i mean is I'm stuck and I need idea's. Me and my friend only went so far, and I've changed alot of it. Give me some advice on what should happen to these characters, thanx,
theladyoflorraine
Part 2
After Alanna
"After I councered The boders of Galla I..." the king was still dronning on. Did he very shut his mouth? Wondered Lasha. Making coversation is one thing..oops! The king had just asked a question.
"I'm sorry, but I've got to run. Places to be, people to meet. I'll see you tonite." She said hurridly.
"Yes, of course. Have fun."He replied.
It was now mid summer. Training for female pages had begun in March, Amythest, Vedel, Buri and Lasha had returned for most of it, but all the girls but five had left, and most of the equipment had broken. Being as old as they were, who could blame them. So Lasha and the rest of the female knights to be were back at the palace. This time they would get their rights as people of the realm of Tortall to become knights.
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"Were is she? I've heard of lateness, but three hours? Lasha's usally very promt." Said Buri furiously. They were waiting in the rebuilt Dancing Dove for Lasha, and had been for quite sometime.
"Sorry I'm late. The king wouldn't stop talking. I eventualy had to interupt and leave. I was really quite rude." Said Lasha hurrying in.
"Finally. We've only been waiting for hours." Said Vedel. Lasha shot her a pouty look and she softened. "First order of buisness. Amythest. She's alomest thrity, she has a boyfriend, and she's only holding back for us. I say we let her go get married and have little knight children in a little knight house and live happily ever after."
"I agree." said the other three in unison, knowing very well that if Amyi, sweet as she was, left they would own the school.
"Now that that's settled, next order of bisnuss." Said Lasha.
"There is no 'next order of bisnuss, idiot'" Said Vedel.
"Yes there is, silly. You. And i'm not an idiot." Lasha shot back, "Vedel has no man in her life. We need to find someone. I say we find the manilest man at the ball tonite, and grab him for Vedel.
"Agreed."
"Now for Buri. Your dating the king of Sarine. This is not a good thing, considering he's married."
"What?!" Came from Buri. "She's dead! You people thought I was a-a-MISTRESS! How could you think that of me?" She asked, angry now, she had a bit of a temper.
Sigh, thought Vedel.
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The ball was starting and he could find her no where.This was his night. Her night. "Find Lasha of madins Star." said the king. "What are you waiting for? GO!" the manservent rushed off, just as Lasha and her companions walked into sight. Jonathon stood abrubly.
"Lasha, you came. I were begining to think...but never mind that, come dance?"
"Of course." She awnsered in that silky voice.
It was nearly midnite, he would have to ask soon. They had only known eachother a couple months, but...maybe. It wasn't like a red head had never turned a king down before...but Lasha wasn't as boyish as Lady Alanna had been, being a knight while Lasha was a well bread Lady would make all the difference. He steered her to a sucluded corner.
"Lasha, would you...would you like to be my queen?"
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Lasha stared at the ring in the man she knew so little's hand. What was he thinking, they barly knew eachother, not enough to get married by far. But he was a King. He could give her everything she had ever hoped for. Ever needed. No! What was she thinking? A queen...maybe they could make it work?
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Buri looked int the eyes of a different king. A very different king. This king wasn't frightened that she was muscular. Boyish. Stroger then he. He cared for her. One thing the two kings had in commen was the ring in their hands. The Sarin king's ring was more expensive, he actually cared for the women in side the warrior. She loved him, he loved her.
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theladyoflorraine
Part 2
After Alanna
"After I councered The boders of Galla I..." the king was still dronning on. Did he very shut his mouth? Wondered Lasha. Making coversation is one thing..oops! The king had just asked a question.
"I'm sorry, but I've got to run. Places to be, people to meet. I'll see you tonite." She said hurridly.
"Yes, of course. Have fun."He replied.
It was now mid summer. Training for female pages had begun in March, Amythest, Vedel, Buri and Lasha had returned for most of it, but all the girls but five had left, and most of the equipment had broken. Being as old as they were, who could blame them. So Lasha and the rest of the female knights to be were back at the palace. This time they would get their rights as people of the realm of Tortall to become knights.
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"Were is she? I've heard of lateness, but three hours? Lasha's usally very promt." Said Buri furiously. They were waiting in the rebuilt Dancing Dove for Lasha, and had been for quite sometime.
"Sorry I'm late. The king wouldn't stop talking. I eventualy had to interupt and leave. I was really quite rude." Said Lasha hurrying in.
"Finally. We've only been waiting for hours." Said Vedel. Lasha shot her a pouty look and she softened. "First order of buisness. Amythest. She's alomest thrity, she has a boyfriend, and she's only holding back for us. I say we let her go get married and have little knight children in a little knight house and live happily ever after."
"I agree." said the other three in unison, knowing very well that if Amyi, sweet as she was, left they would own the school.
"Now that that's settled, next order of bisnuss." Said Lasha.
"There is no 'next order of bisnuss, idiot'" Said Vedel.
"Yes there is, silly. You. And i'm not an idiot." Lasha shot back, "Vedel has no man in her life. We need to find someone. I say we find the manilest man at the ball tonite, and grab him for Vedel.
"Agreed."
"Now for Buri. Your dating the king of Sarine. This is not a good thing, considering he's married."
"What?!" Came from Buri. "She's dead! You people thought I was a-a-MISTRESS! How could you think that of me?" She asked, angry now, she had a bit of a temper.
Sigh, thought Vedel.
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The ball was starting and he could find her no where.This was his night. Her night. "Find Lasha of madins Star." said the king. "What are you waiting for? GO!" the manservent rushed off, just as Lasha and her companions walked into sight. Jonathon stood abrubly.
"Lasha, you came. I were begining to think...but never mind that, come dance?"
"Of course." She awnsered in that silky voice.
It was nearly midnite, he would have to ask soon. They had only known eachother a couple months, but...maybe. It wasn't like a red head had never turned a king down before...but Lasha wasn't as boyish as Lady Alanna had been, being a knight while Lasha was a well bread Lady would make all the difference. He steered her to a sucluded corner.
"Lasha, would you...would you like to be my queen?"
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Lasha stared at the ring in the man she knew so little's hand. What was he thinking, they barly knew eachother, not enough to get married by far. But he was a King. He could give her everything she had ever hoped for. Ever needed. No! What was she thinking? A queen...maybe they could make it work?
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Buri looked int the eyes of a different king. A very different king. This king wasn't frightened that she was muscular. Boyish. Stroger then he. He cared for her. One thing the two kings had in commen was the ring in their hands. The Sarin king's ring was more expensive, he actually cared for the women in side the warrior. She loved him, he loved her.
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