Erika, Sarah Jackie's Story Chapters: Eleven-Twelve
Author's Note Number One: Hi everybody! Thanx for the great reviews you've all given me! They make me just wanna work harder on this. Oh, and I must tell you this – I just can't hold it in any longer – I have an idea on how Snape gets the bump in his nose! ::no, it wasn't like that in the beginning:: And it will be included in this story; in the chapter called 'A Quidditch Match'! Smiles from Jaxx.
And Phil, you better read this! I tried my best to make Val seem like you! Tell me if I did a good job! J
And I'd like to say that the next chapter is the one where things start to heat up. Yes, that is the start of the action! In this one you get kinda an idea of what's gonna happen, a little clue! But you wanna know somethin'? Well, the main plot came to me in a dream. Yep. The first two flashbacks ::in my other chapters:: are NOT dreams though, WeaslyTwinsFan!
And Moxie, when you read this story everything is supposed to be real. Even the fake stuff. And Sunrise, you did great on that one plot – see how it's gonna be carried out in these chapters. Anyway try to figure out the other two plots. ::Hey, this is gonna be a LONG story, if you couldn't tell already::. I've already mentioned one of them – it just hasn't been carried out.
~Chapter Eleven: A hint for help~
"Hiya everybody! I'm back!" I said, flinging open the door to my dorm.
"Where were you, Chlo? We're giving makeovers in here," Cassie told me.
"I was with Nat," I said, simply.
"Ooohooo, Chloe's got a boyfriend!" Loly shouted, as she jumped up from where Val was putting on her eye shadow.
"Well, maybe I do," I said, mysteriously.
"Oh, and how is that?" Lily asked.
"Well, Nat asked me to go with him for a butterbeer tomorrow," I said, happily.
"That's great, girl! Now we really, really have a reason to do makeovers!" Lily said.
"And Chloe, guess what? Sirius asked me for a butterbeer too!" Cassie said.
"That's great!" I relpied.
"And James asked me," Lily said.
"Well duh!" Val said.
"Remus didn't ask me though," Loly said sadly.
"Well, I've known Remus for a long time and I know that he's kinda shy. Maybe you should ask him to go for a butterbeer." Lily said, giving Loly an idea.
"I think that I will! Thanks Lil," Loly said.
"This is all great for you guys, but I'm not gonna have anybody to hang out with tomorrow. Nobody asked me out and all of you guys are gonna have dates. I was hoping that Tod would've asked me, but he didn't, so…" Val said sadly.
"Don't worry, I'm sure someone'll ask you sooner or later. C'mon, hon, lighten up. Life is good," I proclaimed.
And with that, we went back to the makeovers.
Later that night, after Val had gone to bed, the rest of us stayed up and talked.
"You know, I really think that we should get Val and Tod back together," Loly said.
"Uh-huh, but the question isn't should we it's how we should," Lily said.
"Well, I have a plan!" Cassie said.
"What?" I asked.
"What, what?" She asked back.
"She means what's the plan," Loly explained.
"Oh, that. Well, we tell Tod that he has a secret admirer and that she'll meet him at the Halloween Dance. Then we tell Val that she has a secret admirer and that he'll meet her at the Halloween Dance. It's as easy as that, amigos," Cassie said.
"Good idea," I said.
"Yep," Loly said.
"Sure is," said Lily.
"Good night," Loly said.
"Night," I said.
"See ya in the morning," Lily said.
"Sleep tight, and don't let the bed bugs bite," Cassie said.
"Uh, yeah. Whatev', Cass," Loly said.
And with that, we all went to sleep. Only we didn't know that we'd never make it to the Halloween Dance. But, you my friends, shall know why later.
~Chapter Twelve: Something Special~
Brrrrrrring! My alarm clock sounded. ::Do ya see a pattern here, or what?::
YAY! Today's the Hogsmead trip! Hurrah! I thought, happily.
"Dudes! Wake up! Today's Hogsmead! And don't forget, Loly, you have to ask Rem for a butterbeer!" I yelled, waking everyone in our dorm up.
"God, Chloe. Did you really have to wake eveyone in the country up at… OMG! It's 8:00! We only have an hour to get ready! What's Sirius gonna think if I show up with a head full a screwed up hair?" Cassie worried.
"I don't know. But I get the shower first!" Loly said.
"Nu-uh! I do! Loly! Loletta Marcez! I get the shower first!" But Loly kept walking. "Erika Banardo! Yes, Airy! I've said your real name now! Erika Kristen Banardo! I get the shower first!" I screeched.
"Fine… Jaxx! Ha ha! Or should I say Jackie Travil! Yes, you heard me, Jaclyn Samatha Travil!" Loly yelled back, laughing like crazy.
"Jackie, I mean, Chloe, take your shower. And Erika, er, Letta, be quiet so's I can write here," Cassie said writing a letter to her parents.
"Whatev' Sar, whoops! Sorry - Sarah Alexandra Eliani!" I said, falling into a fit of giggles that was only stopped by my getting into the shower.
"Oy, yoy yoy. What's gonna happen if somebody besides our little group finds out? I shudder to think," Cassie said, fake slapping her forhead.
Soon we were all showered and dressed. Then we met the boys in the Great Hall.
"Chloe, I'll meet you at Honeydukes at eleven thirty. K?" Nat asked.
"Sure, Val and I can hang out until then. Right, Val?" I asked.
"Yeah," was Val's reply.
"Oh, yeah, and Rem?" I asked calling over to Remus; Loly still hadn't asked Remus and I decided to get the ball rolling.
"What, Chlo?" He asked back.
"Well… Loly wanted to ask you something," I said sweetly, looking over to Loly, who was glaring at me.
"What, Letta?" He asked.
"Um… well… can we go somewhere else?" She asked, getting up. "Yeah, come on, Remus!"
"Fine," Remus said getting up and walking out of the Great Hall with Loly.
They came back in a few minutes, both smiling happily.
"So?" Cassie, whispering, asked Loly.
"What do you think, Cass, really?" Loly asked.
"Great!" I squealed.
"Well, we're finished so we'll be back soon," I told the boys ::Lily and Val were coming with us to get ready::.
We all walked back to the dorm and we all got ready to go to Hogsmead.
When we were finally ready, we went to the front hall where Professors Lark, White and Deliano were counting students. Students had to have partners in Hogsmead.
"Chloe, do you want to be partners?" Nat asked.
"Sure." I replied.
Cassie went with Sirius and Loly went with Remus. Tod went with Peter and Val went with her friend Candy ::Dilan!::.
We walked out and the ten of us shared a carriage ::it was the invisible horse carriage, spooky huh?::
When we got out of the carriage it was about 10:30 ::am, people, am!::. We split off into groups; the boys and the girls. They all decided to do what Nat and I had decided – meet at Honeydukes at eleven thirty.
"See ya, girls. We're have to go, uh, somewhere. Bye," Sirius said.
"Yeah, whatev'. We'll meet ya like we planned. Bye," Cassie shouted after his retreating form.
For the next hour Cassie, Loly, Val, Lily, Candy and I visited Dervish and Bangs, Zonko's ::where we stocked up on plenty Filbuster Fireworks::, and finaly Honeydukes.
"There you are! We just got here. C'mon, Chloe, let's go to the Three Broomsticks for a butterbeer," Nat proclaimed.
"Sure. Lead the way," I said, reaching for the hand he stretched out to me.
As we left, I noticed Cassie and Sirus heading towards the Shrieking Shack, and Remus, Loly, Lily, and James coming behind us to the Three Bromsticks. I then looked back once more and saw a sight that brought my heart joy, Tod and Val were coming too! Then a very reluctant Candy was seen walking with Peter Pettigrew until she was rescued by Dean Chang.
We walked inside and sat down at a both near the back. Then a lady with dark, dark, almost black hair, and brown eyes came to wait on us.
"Hi, Madame Anistasia. We'd like two butterbeers if you don't mind," Nat said to Madame Anistasia.
"Sure, hon. Who's the girl, though. I've never seen her before," Madame Anisatasia asked, suspiciously.
"I'm Chloe Hunter. Nice to meet you," I supplied.
"Well, I'll get you those drinks, dears." And with that she walked off.
"So…" I said.
"Uh, yeah…"
"Um…"
"Well, you must think that this is boring, huh, Chlo?" Nat asked.
"Well, not really. I like being with you - " I was cut off because… He kissed me!
When the kiss broke off, Nat was beet red. Not just red but beet red. I suppose I was too, but how was I to know anyway?
"Sorry—" Nat started.
"Um, no, it's okay. Come here," I said.
"For what?" He asked.
"This," and then I kissed him. ::Hey, I know your all goin' "WHAT THE HECK IS GOIN' ON HERE?!?!" but I had to put in a kiss scene. It'll help the ending! And no, you can't know what that'll be! But here's a hint - it'll be around the holidays!::
"Thanks," he said, obviously surprised.
"Here you go kids," Madame Anistasia said, handing us our butterbeers.
"Thanks," we said.
We drank the butterbeers and then re-visited all the shops that the girls and I had already visited.
When we finally stopped, it was time to go home. The carriagaes were waiting. We climbed into them and left for Hogwarts.
Once we got back we decided that we'd just go to bed, it had been a tiring day.
Author's Note Number Two: And I thought that my first two chapters were long! OMG! That took a while! Phew! I'd also like to say to everyone who knows him: I've sent Bryan ::I modeled the character Tod after him:: the story! He's read the first 10 chapters! Oh and everyone, I know that the beginning is really, really slow but in the next two chapters it really heats up! Eeps! I better go work on it! See ya in 'Erika, Sarah and Jackie's Story Chapters: Thirteen-Fourteen'! Bye!