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Destiny: Part 2
Author's Notes: You guys (and girls), sniff...sniff...I've never been called a good author, thanks a lot, it really got my self-esteem up, and when I got high self esteem, I get good ideas, unfortunately, those ideas haven't really kicked in yet, so I'm going to go with the storyline I planned so far, I was hoping for something better, but I don't know, I think it'll be a little more than satisfactory!
Also, I would like to thank:
Midnight Lilly, Blank space (Didn't give a name but a good review instead), MoonDreamer, Fatesmon, BoB O'Monkey, C-tha, Rachel, Grevin5, Hyperactive Cat-boy, Jodan, Gundam M, Dante, Matt Carnevale, Sakura and anybody else I missed by accident. As of now, I have got 180 hits, thank you all for reviewing!
Anyway, on the subject of my story, I won't really make that much of a romance between them, I mean, they're both minors, that's illegal in all 50 states ya know, but I might lay the seeds of romance in this fic, and might decide to do another one with them as the starring couple, maybe...probably...yes...no...maybe? Hilda could look pretty old if she wanted to be too ya know. Anyway, I'm rambling again, so I'll try to post this fic as soon as I can. Please read the author's note on the bottom after you finish reading. Ja Ne!
"WHAT" Yelled the bewildered captain of the OS.
Click, Gene quickly shut the computer.
`Gene, you will wake everybody up if you don't be quiet, the crew needs to get some sleep for optimum efficiency in the mor...`
"Gillium, do me a favor and shut down for now, please, this is kinda important!" Said an annoyed Gene.
`As you wish Gene, shutting down.`
SIGH
'Did I hear right, could Melfina really be...Hilda's daughter?'
"Nah...Let me check again" Said Gene to himself.
Click, the computer was opened again and the thumbnail dated Year 139 was clicked on again.
"This is my daughter, Melfina!" Said the young voice of Hilda.
Sigh
Click, the computer was shut off completely.
'No doubt about it now, this was the real deal, it was genuine. I always thought Melfina looked a lot like Hilda!' He thought to himself (She really does ya know, that's where I got my story idea)
Then, a sly smile came across Gene's face. Not the usual grin, but a real smile that said he was pretty happy about something.
'I can finally give Melfina a decent explanation about her past!'
Gene got out of his seat and made his way to Melfina's room, he was just about to knock on her door when he stopped midway.
"Hmm" Gene got a thoughtful look on his face. He sighed again and leaned against Melfina's door.
'What if the truth hurts her, what if she feels bad that Hilda's dead and I can't do anything about it.' Gene got a pained look on his face as he thought of this.
'It tears me up inside when I see her cry, but this is proof that she's a real human, not just a bio-android.'
Bang. Gene punched the wall in frustration.
"Damn it, I don't know what to do" Gene almost yelled in frustration.
"Gene..." came the gentle voice of Melfina from behind the wall
"Oh shit" Gene made a quick run for his own room.
"Gene...was that you?" Melfina was peering out of her room's door; she looked a split second after Gene ran into his own room.
She looked around for a few more seconds, then satisfied that it was her own imagination, went back into her own room.
"Phew, I'm sorry Melfina!" Said Gene, who was peering out of the crack of his room's door.
He plopped onto his bed without changing. He got the thoughtful look on his face again.
'Damn it, what do I do? Do I tell her and risk hurting her feelings, or don't I tell her and leave her to think she's worthless for the rest of her life" Again, the picture of Melfina crying filled his mind, and Gene got a pained look on his face again.
'No, I have to tell her, besides, there were more entries, I'll watch them with her and comfort her. I can't let her cry ever again. I'll just tell her in the morning, Yeah that's what I'll do.' Satisfied with his plan, Gene drifted off into sleep. Just before he fell asleep, he muttered
"I'll never let you cry again Melfina"
Several light-years away, on a small Fighter/Grappler ship, sat the man formally know as the skilled assassin who went by the name of Shimi, He was asleep currently. He had short hair and a thin goatee (I think he had a Goatee). In the corner of his ship lay an enormous backpack, inscribed in very small letters on the side was written LAYLONG!
In Laylong's hand was clutched a piece of paper, it was torn and beige in color. On the paper are written indescribable words and a picture of an unknown face.
The man that was asleep was not in a peaceful one. His face shown great pain and suffering, hardened by years of killing and loneliness, this man learned to be merciless at a young age.
The man turned over in his sleep and the slip of crunched up paper slipped out of his hand; it turned out to be two things. Both papers slowly made their way to the floor; they landed each a foot away from eachother. One was the Gray paper, it had a picture of Gene and written under it in bold letters:
GENE STARWIND
DEAD OR ALIVE
DEAD: 1,000,000 WONG
ALIVE: 7,000,000 WONG
Then there was a picture of Melfina right next to the picture of Gene, in the same font under the picture, it said
MELFINA
ALIVE AT ALL COSTS
BOUNTY: 12,500,000 WONG
UPON FINDING SUSPECTS, CONTACT 17-85-MARK-27045.
Next lay the picture, which was a foot away. It was an old picture, torn and crunched up from overuse. It was a picture of what looked like a younger Laylong; he had a different expression however. He had on a big smile, he was sitting in a rocking chair and in his hands lay a bundle of light pink sheets.
Traveling at top speed near the Hiegh Fong system was the dreaded Yellow ship known as the "El Derado". In its infirmary lie a bloody table, on the floor lay devices stained red from recent use.
Clink...clink...clink...
Somebody was moving in the darkness, a lone figure muttering to himself.
Clink...clink...clink...
The figure had a walking stick; he seemed to be in a hurry. He was still muttering to himself.
Clink...clink...clink...
"Why did you wake me up Harry? What was so important, I'm tired after the operation." The man seemed to be talking to his own hand, or more accurately, his wrist.
"He's waking up!" The wrist answered back.
"Hmm"
Clink...clink...clink...
The pace increased again, this time with determination. The unknown man finally reached a door; he pulled out a card and ran it through a slot.
Bing, came the sound of the lock acknowledging the card, the door quickly slipped open.
Once the unknown man entered the room, he noticed a shadowed figure in the corner.
"Feeling better?
The strong silent type, eh!" Spoke the unknown figure.
"Let me talk to him," spoke the wrist of the unknown man
"Alright" came the unknown person
"How are you feeling? What's wrong, why aren't you answering me?"
Out of the shadows stepped out a half Cyborg, half-human man. He was bald and had fresh scratches all over his head; he had Yellow eyes and a dark red scar across his lip.
"I feel fine Harry!" Answered the voice of non other than Ronald MacDougal.
"And you should, I created that body you know!" Came the voice of the still unknown stranger.
"Yes, thank you Dr. Osenbein," Said the older of the MacDougal brothers
The unknown man finally stepped out of the shadows. He wasn't a very tall man, and he was quite old, he was leaning on a metal walking stick. He had a Grey bushy mustache, and he was bald on the top of his head, but the back of his head and sideburns were very long, and reached past his rear. He had a wrinkled face and cruel baby blue eyes. (If you can't picture him in your mind, just think of Dr. Gero from DBZ without the brain implant thingy, with a walking stick and in a lab coat)
"Just call me Oz, Dr. Oz is fine" answered the old man (Ever see "The Whole Nine Yards)
Ronald MacDougal stepped forward even more; his whole artificial body was now illuminated by two large cylinder shaped containers both filled with illuminating green fluid. In each container floated a scrunched up form of a newborn baby. Each one had tubes and wires sticking to them.
"Is this them?" Asked Ronald MacDougal
"Yes, Yes, beautiful, aren't they? My crowning achievements really."
"How long will it take them to mature?" Again asked Ronald.
"About 2 weeks, when would you like me to start the...you know...process?" Asked the crooked man excitedly.
"We'll contact you when we need you. For the meantime, you will be handsomely paid; in your ship lies 17,000,000 Wong as requested. Now leave us!" Said Ronald.
"Yes, Yes, you know where to contact me, Good Bye!" The Dr. gave a short bow, than slipped off a large wristwatch off the hand he was talking too earlier, and quickly left.
Five minutes later, a distant rumbling was heard as the Dr.'s ship took off.
Beep...beep...beep, came the sound from the wristwatch, after the third beep, it lighted up and a life size hologram of Harry MacDougal stood in front of his brother.
"Think about it Ron, these are the keys to our Revenge and Melfina. The doctor is truly a master of his work. He wasn't bluffing when he said he was a genius." Said Harry excitedly.
"Hmm, where did you find him anyway?" Asked Ron.
"It's much easier to hack when you're in the computer." Answered Harry.
"Has the bounty been posted yet?"
"Yes, every pirate and outlaw in the Galaxy will be on their tail within the next 2 days. Then, once we find them, we will finally get our Revenge on Gene Starwind and his crew, and I'll get Melfina!" Said Harry with a crazed look on his face.
"I need to rest Harry, you pilot the ship." Said Ron, finally moving from his position and heading toward the door.
"Sure thing Ron" Called Harry as Ron left the room.
Ronald MacDougal slowly slipped into his luxuriant room. He poured himself a small glass of wine, and sat on a couch opposite a wall. On the wall were pictures of Gene Starwind, and his friends. Ronald slowly sipped his wine for a second, before
PFFTT.
Ron crushed the wineglass in his hand and threw it with a violent animalistic (O.O) growl.
"WHAT'S THE POINT IF I CAN'T EVEN TASTE IT?" Screamed the enraged MacDougal.
"You shouldn't have messed with my family Starwind, but most importantly, you shouldn't have messed with me."
Suddenly, Ron's new cyborg arm rose like lightning and fired at the wall.
BANG, BANG...BANG (Just like the skit before commercials)
All three shots hit the head of the life-size picture of Gene Starwind.
"I'm coming for you Gene Starwind!" Came the Cruel voice of Ron MacDougal.
To be continued...
Author's Notes: Weelll, how was that? I tried my best, I know it's not as long as my first one, but I tried my best. Unfortunately, I won't be able to post for the next week. I haven't done my vacation homework, so I'll have to write a thesis on Japan (The teacher wouldn't let us do it on Anime) and a paper on a genetic disease in two days, no picnic I can tell you. I probably won't even be able to write till next weekend, so for all those who like my stories, Gomen Nasie (I think I spelled that wrong).
Next Part: Gene tells Melfina about the blackbox! How will she react? You'll just have to read, and I'll only write it if you guys will review, and I'll need 10-15 more reviews (at least) for this part alone to write this fic and also to further inflate my ego. And Remember, the more reviews, the better the quality of my writing!
Ja Ne! V_V_V
The Daydreamer
Destiny: Part 2
Author's Notes: You guys (and girls), sniff...sniff...I've never been called a good author, thanks a lot, it really got my self-esteem up, and when I got high self esteem, I get good ideas, unfortunately, those ideas haven't really kicked in yet, so I'm going to go with the storyline I planned so far, I was hoping for something better, but I don't know, I think it'll be a little more than satisfactory!
Also, I would like to thank:
Midnight Lilly, Blank space (Didn't give a name but a good review instead), MoonDreamer, Fatesmon, BoB O'Monkey, C-tha, Rachel, Grevin5, Hyperactive Cat-boy, Jodan, Gundam M, Dante, Matt Carnevale, Sakura and anybody else I missed by accident. As of now, I have got 180 hits, thank you all for reviewing!
Anyway, on the subject of my story, I won't really make that much of a romance between them, I mean, they're both minors, that's illegal in all 50 states ya know, but I might lay the seeds of romance in this fic, and might decide to do another one with them as the starring couple, maybe...probably...yes...no...maybe? Hilda could look pretty old if she wanted to be too ya know. Anyway, I'm rambling again, so I'll try to post this fic as soon as I can. Please read the author's note on the bottom after you finish reading. Ja Ne!
"WHAT" Yelled the bewildered captain of the OS.
Click, Gene quickly shut the computer.
`Gene, you will wake everybody up if you don't be quiet, the crew needs to get some sleep for optimum efficiency in the mor...`
"Gillium, do me a favor and shut down for now, please, this is kinda important!" Said an annoyed Gene.
`As you wish Gene, shutting down.`
SIGH
'Did I hear right, could Melfina really be...Hilda's daughter?'
"Nah...Let me check again" Said Gene to himself.
Click, the computer was opened again and the thumbnail dated Year 139 was clicked on again.
"This is my daughter, Melfina!" Said the young voice of Hilda.
Sigh
Click, the computer was shut off completely.
'No doubt about it now, this was the real deal, it was genuine. I always thought Melfina looked a lot like Hilda!' He thought to himself (She really does ya know, that's where I got my story idea)
Then, a sly smile came across Gene's face. Not the usual grin, but a real smile that said he was pretty happy about something.
'I can finally give Melfina a decent explanation about her past!'
Gene got out of his seat and made his way to Melfina's room, he was just about to knock on her door when he stopped midway.
"Hmm" Gene got a thoughtful look on his face. He sighed again and leaned against Melfina's door.
'What if the truth hurts her, what if she feels bad that Hilda's dead and I can't do anything about it.' Gene got a pained look on his face as he thought of this.
'It tears me up inside when I see her cry, but this is proof that she's a real human, not just a bio-android.'
Bang. Gene punched the wall in frustration.
"Damn it, I don't know what to do" Gene almost yelled in frustration.
"Gene..." came the gentle voice of Melfina from behind the wall
"Oh shit" Gene made a quick run for his own room.
"Gene...was that you?" Melfina was peering out of her room's door; she looked a split second after Gene ran into his own room.
She looked around for a few more seconds, then satisfied that it was her own imagination, went back into her own room.
"Phew, I'm sorry Melfina!" Said Gene, who was peering out of the crack of his room's door.
He plopped onto his bed without changing. He got the thoughtful look on his face again.
'Damn it, what do I do? Do I tell her and risk hurting her feelings, or don't I tell her and leave her to think she's worthless for the rest of her life" Again, the picture of Melfina crying filled his mind, and Gene got a pained look on his face again.
'No, I have to tell her, besides, there were more entries, I'll watch them with her and comfort her. I can't let her cry ever again. I'll just tell her in the morning, Yeah that's what I'll do.' Satisfied with his plan, Gene drifted off into sleep. Just before he fell asleep, he muttered
"I'll never let you cry again Melfina"
Several light-years away, on a small Fighter/Grappler ship, sat the man formally know as the skilled assassin who went by the name of Shimi, He was asleep currently. He had short hair and a thin goatee (I think he had a Goatee). In the corner of his ship lay an enormous backpack, inscribed in very small letters on the side was written LAYLONG!
In Laylong's hand was clutched a piece of paper, it was torn and beige in color. On the paper are written indescribable words and a picture of an unknown face.
The man that was asleep was not in a peaceful one. His face shown great pain and suffering, hardened by years of killing and loneliness, this man learned to be merciless at a young age.
The man turned over in his sleep and the slip of crunched up paper slipped out of his hand; it turned out to be two things. Both papers slowly made their way to the floor; they landed each a foot away from eachother. One was the Gray paper, it had a picture of Gene and written under it in bold letters:
GENE STARWIND
DEAD OR ALIVE
DEAD: 1,000,000 WONG
ALIVE: 7,000,000 WONG
Then there was a picture of Melfina right next to the picture of Gene, in the same font under the picture, it said
MELFINA
ALIVE AT ALL COSTS
BOUNTY: 12,500,000 WONG
UPON FINDING SUSPECTS, CONTACT 17-85-MARK-27045.
Next lay the picture, which was a foot away. It was an old picture, torn and crunched up from overuse. It was a picture of what looked like a younger Laylong; he had a different expression however. He had on a big smile, he was sitting in a rocking chair and in his hands lay a bundle of light pink sheets.
Traveling at top speed near the Hiegh Fong system was the dreaded Yellow ship known as the "El Derado". In its infirmary lie a bloody table, on the floor lay devices stained red from recent use.
Clink...clink...clink...
Somebody was moving in the darkness, a lone figure muttering to himself.
Clink...clink...clink...
The figure had a walking stick; he seemed to be in a hurry. He was still muttering to himself.
Clink...clink...clink...
"Why did you wake me up Harry? What was so important, I'm tired after the operation." The man seemed to be talking to his own hand, or more accurately, his wrist.
"He's waking up!" The wrist answered back.
"Hmm"
Clink...clink...clink...
The pace increased again, this time with determination. The unknown man finally reached a door; he pulled out a card and ran it through a slot.
Bing, came the sound of the lock acknowledging the card, the door quickly slipped open.
Once the unknown man entered the room, he noticed a shadowed figure in the corner.
"Feeling better?
The strong silent type, eh!" Spoke the unknown figure.
"Let me talk to him," spoke the wrist of the unknown man
"Alright" came the unknown person
"How are you feeling? What's wrong, why aren't you answering me?"
Out of the shadows stepped out a half Cyborg, half-human man. He was bald and had fresh scratches all over his head; he had Yellow eyes and a dark red scar across his lip.
"I feel fine Harry!" Answered the voice of non other than Ronald MacDougal.
"And you should, I created that body you know!" Came the voice of the still unknown stranger.
"Yes, thank you Dr. Osenbein," Said the older of the MacDougal brothers
The unknown man finally stepped out of the shadows. He wasn't a very tall man, and he was quite old, he was leaning on a metal walking stick. He had a Grey bushy mustache, and he was bald on the top of his head, but the back of his head and sideburns were very long, and reached past his rear. He had a wrinkled face and cruel baby blue eyes. (If you can't picture him in your mind, just think of Dr. Gero from DBZ without the brain implant thingy, with a walking stick and in a lab coat)
"Just call me Oz, Dr. Oz is fine" answered the old man (Ever see "The Whole Nine Yards)
Ronald MacDougal stepped forward even more; his whole artificial body was now illuminated by two large cylinder shaped containers both filled with illuminating green fluid. In each container floated a scrunched up form of a newborn baby. Each one had tubes and wires sticking to them.
"Is this them?" Asked Ronald MacDougal
"Yes, Yes, beautiful, aren't they? My crowning achievements really."
"How long will it take them to mature?" Again asked Ronald.
"About 2 weeks, when would you like me to start the...you know...process?" Asked the crooked man excitedly.
"We'll contact you when we need you. For the meantime, you will be handsomely paid; in your ship lies 17,000,000 Wong as requested. Now leave us!" Said Ronald.
"Yes, Yes, you know where to contact me, Good Bye!" The Dr. gave a short bow, than slipped off a large wristwatch off the hand he was talking too earlier, and quickly left.
Five minutes later, a distant rumbling was heard as the Dr.'s ship took off.
Beep...beep...beep, came the sound from the wristwatch, after the third beep, it lighted up and a life size hologram of Harry MacDougal stood in front of his brother.
"Think about it Ron, these are the keys to our Revenge and Melfina. The doctor is truly a master of his work. He wasn't bluffing when he said he was a genius." Said Harry excitedly.
"Hmm, where did you find him anyway?" Asked Ron.
"It's much easier to hack when you're in the computer." Answered Harry.
"Has the bounty been posted yet?"
"Yes, every pirate and outlaw in the Galaxy will be on their tail within the next 2 days. Then, once we find them, we will finally get our Revenge on Gene Starwind and his crew, and I'll get Melfina!" Said Harry with a crazed look on his face.
"I need to rest Harry, you pilot the ship." Said Ron, finally moving from his position and heading toward the door.
"Sure thing Ron" Called Harry as Ron left the room.
Ronald MacDougal slowly slipped into his luxuriant room. He poured himself a small glass of wine, and sat on a couch opposite a wall. On the wall were pictures of Gene Starwind, and his friends. Ronald slowly sipped his wine for a second, before
PFFTT.
Ron crushed the wineglass in his hand and threw it with a violent animalistic (O.O) growl.
"WHAT'S THE POINT IF I CAN'T EVEN TASTE IT?" Screamed the enraged MacDougal.
"You shouldn't have messed with my family Starwind, but most importantly, you shouldn't have messed with me."
Suddenly, Ron's new cyborg arm rose like lightning and fired at the wall.
BANG, BANG...BANG (Just like the skit before commercials)
All three shots hit the head of the life-size picture of Gene Starwind.
"I'm coming for you Gene Starwind!" Came the Cruel voice of Ron MacDougal.
To be continued...
Author's Notes: Weelll, how was that? I tried my best, I know it's not as long as my first one, but I tried my best. Unfortunately, I won't be able to post for the next week. I haven't done my vacation homework, so I'll have to write a thesis on Japan (The teacher wouldn't let us do it on Anime) and a paper on a genetic disease in two days, no picnic I can tell you. I probably won't even be able to write till next weekend, so for all those who like my stories, Gomen Nasie (I think I spelled that wrong).
Next Part: Gene tells Melfina about the blackbox! How will she react? You'll just have to read, and I'll only write it if you guys will review, and I'll need 10-15 more reviews (at least) for this part alone to write this fic and also to further inflate my ego. And Remember, the more reviews, the better the quality of my writing!
Ja Ne! V_V_V
The Daydreamer